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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys so i had this thought for a new love scene between Maan and Geet ....

Here goes...

It's after Maan brings food for Geet....


Its night time and Geet finished doing all her work for the day, and was about to hit the hay when she thought of watching a movie... She turns on the TV (which is upstairs) and some Horror movie
is on...Geet gets interested in the movie, she settles on the couch and is watching the movie...Geet gets very into the movie... she's scared but interested at the same time

On the other hand Maan is doing some more late night work in his room.... then he figures out that the file he needs is in the outhouse... he goes towards the outhouse but then hesitates thinking that she might be sleeping but then thinks that he'll just quietly take the file and leave.


Maan slowly opens the door
, which makes a squeaky noise..... Geet gets scared, she was about to go check but then brushes off the idea thinking that she must be imagining it.... Maan quickly gets the file however notices a light coming from upstairs ... He starts walking up the stairs; sees Geet watching a horror film, and decides to scare her ..... Maan slowly walks towards her from the back; his shadow grows , Geet sees this and gets super scared .... Maan comes closer, goes around the couch (Geet doesnt look at the shadow because she'll get scared and is thinking that its all her imagination) and places his arm very slowly on her shoulder and Says Boo .... Geet jumps up and gives out a scream ... and somehow they both fall on the couch with Geet under Maan ...


Then they will have their usual stare
session, after i dont know how long of eye lock they come back to reality ...
Maan is about to leave when Geet stops him and tells him not to leave me alone here, i want to watch this movie and what if i get scared .... Maan will tell her its just a movie, and if she's scared then shouldnt watch the movie ... Geet will force him to stay until the movie finishes (which is another 2 hour) ... Geet will focus completely on the movie .... when she gets scared she holds onto maans arm and doesnt let go ... Maan will have his eyes fixed on geet ..... Once the movie is over Maan looks at Geet who has fallen asleep.... Maan picks her (tries not to wake her up) takes her to the bedroom and places her on the bed, covers her with a blanket .
Looks at her for a long time and when he is about to leave he feels a pull on his hand. He sees that Geet has held onto his hand, Maan tries to remove the hand but she has held it really tight.... eventually Maan gives up. He sits down on the floor, places his head on the bed (beside Geet ofcourse, not too close though) and falls asleep.

WHAT DO U GUYS THINK?


Do comment guys they mean a lot



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mehreen. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey,
Awesome post.👍🏼.....you've got a really good imagination...i so wish somthing like this happens...Maan putting geet to sleep😍
tanya_vi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very good!! All lovey-dovey scenes between Maaneet are welcome..do write more😳
CSSK thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its really good please continue...
Bul3 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome and the next day Maan can tease her more by showing her nail marks on his hands!
deejagi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Superb love story. Geet is capable of asking him to stay there and Maan the love stricken kid will oblige all too willingly as he wanted to do that very much. Sit next to her cajole her as when she fears.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A very sweet scene! The creatives should really do a scene like this later on in the drama. Maybe after Geet & Maan have confessed their feelings...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i luved it...hope it happens in the show..i can imagine geet and maan's expression..lol..geet full time praying babaji and maan rolling his eyes..hehehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome!!!! it wud be nyc to see such scene 😊 😊


Heyybabyydolll thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was truly amazing!
I wish the creatives would read this and think of doing a scene like that! OMG I would love that scene!!
You have a great imagination. 👏 Do write more!
😊

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