Keyama bc to normal... More update ck her thred

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hay this is keyamas FF pls thank her :D xx


Hi this is my first FF.... welll big thanks to jenny who helped me to write this....
hop u lot like it... xx and pls do press the like button if you do like it... it will boost my confidence :D

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part 1:

Eyes

He looked at her across the glass window. She looked beautiful. her black long hair moved smoothly from one side to another. he looked again and again she Doesn't have the violent look on her face anymore instead a sweet innocent look took over her face. Just the way he wanted to imagine it. Maan relaxed.

Dev: "you still love her... Don't you?"
Maan: "yes... Yes! I do"
Dev: "does she know?"
Maan:"no she doesn't... She doesn't know anything. I dough she can even feel this heart beat, which only beating for her. My existence doesn't make any difference in her life...." He laughed... "Ironic ha!" his eyes filled up with water. But he didn't cry. His voice... Deep pains were hiding beneath those few words. He loved her.

Dev: "are you sure this will work."
Maan: no... No it wont... But I can try. He closed his eyes in pain...

He was searching for her face... The face... The face... The person he fell in love with... It was there. After few minutes it became all visible in front of his eyes.....

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Geet: "how could you di? How could you?" she was screaming in pain. Her voice... No mater how hard she screamed... Nothing could she do. She was trapped. Trapped emotionally... psychically and mentally.

NT: you have no choice Geet? You are trapped! I can't help u... " her voice was strong but symppthetatic she felt sorry.

Geet was sobbing. Couldn't stop. H-how can I marry someone... Whom I have never met. I don't know what he looks like. They can't just tell me- to get ready it's your wedding today!... She couldn't stop. The anger made her blood boil. The torment... She couldn't bare anymore. She screamed in pain... "MY LIFE IS NOT A GAME" she screamed over and over again.

Barji walked in her room. Geet couldn't Handel her pain anymore. And ran across the room and hugged his older brother. "barji Ab me ka karu? How could mum do this to me?" tears rolling downs barjis eyes. "if I knew I would never let you come here." geet holding him tight. "you still can..." she suggested. she looked up. "yes you still can... Get my passport from dad... I will- i will leave for London straight way." certain hope came in geets eyes... But barji knew no use. He couldn't. Get looked at him with hope but he also let her down....


Geet and NT sitting in front Of there mum... In her ding bed... She had a mini hurt attack... Due to this geet forced her self from London. Geet just arrived tirade. Whole house was decorated... Bothe geet and NT sat in front her mum... All ready. Ready to get married.


Outside of the room:

Geets dad: beta... Pls do something... I can't see geets life to end like this.
Barji: nether can I. Why mum doing this?
Dad: she is faking! She is worried that geet won't listen to her later on her life... But I have trust on my daughter.
Barji: what? She is faking?
Dad: yes... Idk what to do... She threaten me if I say a single word she will break NTs wedding.
Barji: is she insane! Omg! We maybe born brought up in England but we still have respect for are parents. For god sake she is only 17! Still a child.
Dad: I know.(his yes filled in pain and tears) Go to my room... Here is the key. And grab geets passport and the ticket... She will leave tonight. Give the car to her.
Barji listen to him carefully. He was happy. Happy that his dad understood his children.

Meantime both daughter took there mum and sat in the big hall.... There wedding hall.

Geet still refused to see his new husbands face...
Both girl sat opposite of there upcoming husband with big glittery rug between them. Act as a wall.
Geet wasn't listening... Her ears were long left her body. She sat there like a dead ghost.


Imam: MRS GEET HANDA DO YOU ACCEPT MAAN SING KURANA AS YOUR HUSBAND... Geet sat there still... Not listening to any word... She sat there like statue. Geets mum slowly murmured.... Beta... Say your answer... Only word geet hard wAs answer... She knew exactly what to say.... After all her mums last wish... She had to...

GEet: I DO....
Maan: I DO, I ACCEP GEET HANDA as my WIFE.
He finished the sentence... Geet still not looking at her husband... On the other side her sister just married dev...
Geet was in shock... Her heart was about to stop. The thought she just became someones wife killed her. Tears was rolling down her face. She is only 17. Haven't even seen the world properly. She was crying... The weeding is over. She is someones wife. A person that she do not know. Not even his name even though it's been constantly repeated over and over again. Suddenly barji enters the hall... GEET..... he was shocked....

Every thing went silent... She noticed the passport and ticket along with key in his hand. He was too late. To late to stop the weeding. Geet was now MRS GEET MAAN SING KURANA. Tears rolled down barjis eyes. Geet stood up from the wedding stage. It was in the middle of the hall. She slowly walked towards him and took her passport along with others.
Barji: "I am sorry geet... Mum was faking..." he whispered.

Geet was shocked... She was forced trapped... Tears rolled down her eyes. "I was forced." only word she could say... "i was forced"...

Mum: "geet... COME HERE! Right now.

Geet turned around.... Took the gun of barji... And screaming. screaming in pain OWO... One more word...one more word mum... I will shoot my self. Maan stood up straight way. He was absents of everything in tell now. "I will mum". Barji along with others were socked. Maans eyes was filled with tears. He loved her. From the first look.

Geet slowly walked towards the door with gun pointing her head...

Mum: stop it geet please... You are married now. You are someones wife. At least think about him." she said with pleading voice.

Geet: What Wife?... Whose wife? I don't accept this marriage. How could I? I don't even know his name. And you talking about my wedding! ( shame and disgust face at her mum). Maan who stood right behind her was heart. His heart broke in to thousand pieces. It stared like a broken mirror. "I never even seen him properly... Actually to be honest I have dough I ever seen his face." Maan stood behind her silently. Shocked. He couldn't say a single word. After few minutes he managed to pack him self to the real world again. He couldn't bare the thought... Geet hates his mere present... He was lost. Suddenly geet turned around and ran against past him... Barley noticing him. Her Love... Her husband. She didn't even bothered to look at him. He was nothing.... Nothing at all to her... His present made no different to her....



He opens his eyes in pain... He had no clue how many time he imagined her in that memory... Bcs that was the only memory she ever gave him. He was forced to remember his best and wars day of his life... Just to remember geet. all



pre cap:
do you know what! One thing I love my wife for to choose you for my daughter.


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pls pls do comment.... xxxxxx


He opens his eyes in pain... He had no clue how many time he imagined her in that memory

part 2:


Dev: "bro! Are you alright."
Maan: yea...
Dev: she do not know... You are her husband.
Maan: yes I know... his voice was cold... He became angry, stubborn... since geet left him. He blocked his heart for everyone. He forgot how to love. He was hurt that day. Very.

Dev: I should go... NT waiting for me.

Dev left and dadi rang maan...

Dadi: happy 2nd anniversary beta...
Maan: thanks dadi. When she woill say that to me dadi?
Dadi: it's her first day... Give her time. (Maan laughed at her word.)
Maan: like she know I am her husband.
Dadi: she will in time. I know she will. Bcs no one can ignore you.
Maan: she did already.
Dadi: because she never knew that you are a gold.
Maan smiles and Ganges up.

Knoock! Knock! It's geet

Geet: may I come in sir...
Maan stops at his place... He knew that voice straight way. It's her. That's the first time he hard her voice in two years. His ears were dying to here her sweet innocent voice. He stood there for few second admiring her voice. Then quickly went to his sit and sat on his big boss chair. "Come in" in cold voice.
Geet walked in... She looked beautiful. Maan tried to ignore any eye contact with her. He didn't want to show his love towards her. How much he adore her beauty. How much he loves her.
Geet: thanks sir.
Maan: "yes" still looking at his folder.
Geet: I am your new Arctic secretary sir. I am in my 2nd year. I just transferred from London to deli. Your company appoint me as your secretary. She finished. Her voice was shaking. He could sense she was worried.
Maan: "yes I know." he closed his folder and looked up. He couldn't remove his gaze. Seeing his wife after two long years. But he had to control him self. He need to win his wife heart. He had long plan for this. Took him year an half to convince geets dad to help him to bring geet to deli. Maan knew well... she hated her mum specially what he done to her. She is 19 today. Her birthday and there anniversary. There 2nd anniversary.
For the first time in 2years maan was happy. Happy that he is spending some time, at least from his prospective. He loved every second of it.

Maan stood up and told her to flow him avoiding her gaze. He took her to her new office. Which was just next to his, separated by a massive glass window and curtain. "here is your new office." he was still in his cold voice.with no smile. Geet flowed right behind him like a puppet.
Maan: I want you in here sharp at 9:00 am. No late. No early.
Geet: "hmmm! Why not early?" She asked him. Her voice irritated him. He wanted her to be exact like others in the office after all he is one of the most handsome hank in deli. Everyone called him under the name of DD/MK... Every girl would die for his one look. Which he expected the same from geet.
Maan remembers what dadi told him again..."bcs she never looked at you properly that's why she never felt anything for you." but here it was completely different. She looked at him... But in different way, which again irritated maan. "what's wrong with her?" he said to him self.
Maan: "bcs I hate later. And I hate show off." his voice was cold.

Geet: "ok!" Under her breath "weirdo."
Maan: "what" he was furious. Angry. "I won't tolerate any types of rude behavior.
Geet: frritetend.... "Sorry sir." Her terrifying face made maan realize what he was doing. He calmed him self down and faced his back at her. He took deep breath and started again.
Maan: I want you to attend every meeting and analyze them with me.
Geet: yes sir. She started to write them down quickly on her notepad.
Maan: you are free to suggest any idea.
Geet: yes sir.
Maan: attend all my calls.
Geet: "hu..." Maan looked at her with and angry surprise face... "Yes sir."
Maan: for now... Any call from my home tell them I am not here.
Geet: "yes sir."
Maan: good. I hope you understood those well.
Geet: "yes sir."
He left the office straight way. Dev was waiting outside for him.

Dev: "how was it."
Maan: "ok... Let's go."

They all sat in maans car. Dev next to him and NT at the back.

Nt: "how was it."
Maan: "ok"
Nt: "explain"
Maan: "I don't have to."
Dev: he laughed. "I guss bro didn't had a good start."
Maan: "shut up."
Nt: "anyway holding a party for geet... It's her birthday after all.
Dev: "and anniversary."
NT looked at maan. Knew he was hurt. "Dev shut up."
Dev: sox borro. No afend.
Maan: "nun taken." He was cold. Drove to the mention.

Dadi was waiting for them along with everyone. Geets family. It's devs and nts wedding anniversary as well. Maan stood there at the corner while he seen everyone enjoying them self. Geets dad walks towards him.
Maan: "hi dad."
Dad: "was geet ok."
Maan: "yea... She is good."
Dad: "did she recognize you."
Maan: "no." Maan was man of few words. Yes/no was the most he answers back if someone questions him. He was cold. Without heart.
Dad: "I hop everything eases out." He about to walk way. Maan stops him.
Maan: "dad thanks."
Dad: "what for?"
Maan: "for listening to me. Transferring geet from London to here."
Dad: "what's the different? She still use to work at the same company. khurana industry. I just convinced her to transfer here. You did all the others."
Maan: "but it was you who convinced her. I have been tying for past 2 years. She kept refusing the letters from the company. What did you tell her that made her change mind." he was curious. His voice soften now.
Dad: "nothing special. Told her mum is moving back with her in London. That's all. "He smiled.
Maan didn't like that idea. But what the heck at least geet will be with him now.
Dad: "I hop it's alright."
Maan: "no it's good. I have to go to the office now. Geet is alone. Her first day. And her birthday and are ani." He stopped. "I should leve."
Dad understood. He wasn't enjoying the party. He was missing geet. The geet that never loved him... The geet who left him at there wedding night... The geet who hated him. Hated him so much who refused to even see his face. But he loved her as much as she hated him. More then her hate maybe.
Dad: do you know what! One thing I love my wife for to choose you for my daughter.
Maan was touched by the word. But he knew that very well. He could se the regret on his eyes... to help his daughter escape. And he forgave him for that... Even he would do the same. He would never force geet in there relationship. Never. He loved her too much for that.

Maan: hugged him... "I should leve now."


pre cap:
"happy birthday babe. I miss you lot. Maybe we aren't to gather but I still love you. Love you more then this world.... More then me... More then anyone... I love you." xxxx



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