Soul's Destiny(Arsh, RM , AA nDmg FF)please read..

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Hello friends!!I am new to this forum but decided to write an FF , plz do read..

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Episode 2 - page 1

Episode 3- page 1

Episode 4-page 1

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Characterss
gupta family..

Dr.shashank gupta:he iz not de head of sanjivani anymore but visitz it often..

Dr.anjali gupta:yes she haznt married yet and she iz as she waz before.. 27 year old

mallik family

dr.armaan mallik:head of sanjivani.. 27 year old
dr.shilpa armaan maliik:wife of armaan..26 year old
ayesha mallik: Daughter of armaan n shilpa 5 year old
dr.rahul garrewaal ..26 year old
dr.atul joshi..27 year old
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dr.arima..21 year old
dr.raj..22 year old
dr.muskaan mehra..21 year old
dr.makul ..22 year old
dr.tunji..21 year old



i am strtin it wid a cute ar scene

morning time

shilpa dressin up and armaan enters de room and stares at her for 2 minz wid nayghty nazron se and strts singin a song
armaan:ho soni kitte soni aaj tu lagti we(goin near her)
bus mere saath ye jodi teri sajthi we(holdin her hand n dancing)
roop aisa suhana tera(pointin to her face)
chand bhi hain diwani tera(pointin 2 de sky)

and he iz sayin more but shilpa interrupts
shilpa:shhhhh.....shhhhh(keepin hand on her lips)tum dekh nahin rahe ayesha sorahi hain..agar uth gayi tu..
Armaan:tu kya??
Shilpa: Dr.armaan hamari bethi uth jaayegi tu kya sochengi hamare bhaare mein..
Armaan:arrey yehi sochegi ke uske dad uski mumi se kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pyaar karte hain..
shilpa:armaan(laughs)tum na kabhi nahin suthroge....abhi bhi wohi hoon.
Armaan:haan mein abhi bhi wahi hoon..cool,handsome,smart,stylish..
shilpa: (angrily)bus bus itna hawa mein urhne ki zaroorath nahin hain..
Now shilpa iz really angry at armaan and when armaan notices her anger he stops all dis bakwaas and says
armaan:sorry(keepin head down and sayin sorry in a veree cute voice)acha sorry na baba..mein zameen pe agaya ab tu maaf kardo..
shilpa:theek hain(still angry)
armaan:ek smile tu kardona ??
Shilpa takes her shoes and says:tum yahan se jaate ho ya mein..
Before she cud say armaan interrupted
armaan:nahin nahin mein jaata hoon..
And he goes and after dat shilpa smiles..
Shilpa 2 herself: pagal kahi ka..
Armaan iz going 2 sanjivani and he remembers sumthin and turns bak
armaan:Shilpa arima kaha hain??
SHilpa:aap ke behen abhi tak sorahi hain..
Armaan:arrey tu phir ussey uthao .. Tumhe pata hain na aaj uske internship ka pehla din hain..
SHilpa:acha theek hain..utha thi hoon..
And shilpa went to arima's room and pulled blanket 4rm her but still arima pushed it towardz her shilpa again pulled but again arima pushed towardz her..
Shilpa:ye larki na aisi nahin uthegi..
And shilpa opened de curtain and and sunshine came on her face and her face strted glowin(arima)she woke up stretchin her arm and hand..
Her warm ,gentle,appealin and expressive blue eyes were shown and her hair shiny,lusturous golden brown on her face den da hair moves away bcuz of wind and her face white as snow and pick also wid cute dimple and smile on the face iz shown..

Scence shifts 2 rahul
rahul took his mobile and dialed no. And was collin sum1
tring..tring..tring..tring
no1 picked up
rahul:ye saala kaha hain..phone kyun nahin utharaha hain..
Another coll..tring..tring..tring..tring..tring
rahul:makul plz phone utha..kaha hain tu..
On de other side
makul: ( while becumin ready):yaar ye bhaiya kyun baar baar phone karahe hain..
And atlast he picks up
but..but he instead of sayin hello he strts wid
makul:the mobile phone u r dialin is currently switched off or unavailable..plz try later..
Rahul: oyye..plz try later ke bache sun..
Makul: Ughhhh......arrey bhaiya kya hain .. Kyun aap mujhe baar baar disturbe karahe hoon..
Rahul:lsn u r going 2 be late tujhe ye bhi pata hain..
Makul:bhaiya , going to be late na late tu abhi tak nahin hua..mein bus abhi araha hoon..

Scene shifts to muskaan mehra
she iz not dat muskaan chadda .. She iz a intern and she iz a ditto copy of muskaan(in drama)and she iz chaterbox lyk muskaan only..u can imagine her as muskaan only if yeh want..
Muskaan 2 herself:muskaan na .. Tu na aaj bohut late hone wali hain..jaldi chal jaldi..

Precap:arima and raj accident each other;zz car..
Arima:ughhhhhh.....tumne mera ghaari ka stayanash kardia..how dare u??
Raj : oh excuse me madam meine aapke ghaare ka nahin balke aapne meri ghaari ka satyanash kardia..
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EPISODE 2

SUDDENLY SHILPA REMEMBERS SUMTHIN AND COLLS ARMAAN..

TRING..TRING..
ARMAAN:HULLO!!
SHILPA:HELLO ARMAAN .. TUMHE PATA HAIN NA AAJ RAJ ARAHA HAIN LONDON SE..
ARMAAN TO HIMSELF:US MANHOUS KA CHEHRA PHIR SE DEKH NA PARHEGA..
SHILPA:KYA BOLA??
ARMAAN:KUCH NAHIN..TUM BATAO..
SHILPA:BUS TUMHE BATA NA THA MEIN KITNI KHUSH HOONN..POORE 4 SAAL BAAD USSE DEKHOONGI..
ARMAAN:ACHA THEEK HAIN SHILPA MEIN PHONE RAKHTA HOON(IGNORIN DE TOPIC)..
AND HE CUTS DE PHONE..
IN CAR
ARMAAN 2 HIMSELF:UF..RAJ PHIR SE ARAHA HAIN..PATA NAHIN MEIN USSE ITNA NAFRAT KYUN KARTA HOON..

MAKUL AND MUSKAAN REACHES SANJIVANI BUT WAIT ARIMA AND RAJ R NOT DERE


RAJ CUMS AND DROPS HIS LUGGAGE IN HIZ HOME


ARIMA:OH MY GOD MEIN JARAHI HOON MEIN BOHUT LATE HOGAYI..

SHE GOES OFF
THERE
RAJ:SHIT I HVE TO LEAVE NOW..

BOTH TAKE THEIR CAR'S KEY AND ON DA CAR AND R ON DA WAY TO SANJIVANI WHERE SUDDENLY HAVE A ACCIDENT WID EACH OTHER..

RAJ:OH SHIT
ARIMA:OH NO
BOTH COMES OUT FRM DA CAR..RAJ WID SUNGLASSES AND JEANS AND BLUE COLOUR SHIRT WORN AND ARIMA IN PINK COLOUR SHALWAR KAMEES..

ARIMA:TUMNE MERI GAARI TOK DI..

RAJ:EXCUSE ME MEINE NAHIN TUMNE..
ARIMA:LSN MISTER YE TUMHAARI GHALTI THI..
RAJ:OH MADAM YE TUMHAARI THI..
ARIMA:TUMHAARI THI
RAJ:TUMHAARI THI
ARIMA:TUMHAARI THI
RAJ:TUMHAARI THI
ARIMA:LSN MERE PAAS ITNA TIME NAHIN HAIN MUJHE BOHUT JALDI KAHIN POHECHNA HAIN SO IM GOIN WAISE BHI MERI GAARI KA INSURANCE HAIN ..
RAJ:MUJHE BHI KAHI JAANA HAIN AND MERA DOUBLE INSURANCE HAIN..
BOTH SITS IN DA CAR N R GOIN ON DA SAME WAY TO SANJIVANI..

RAJ IN CAR

RAJ:SAMJHTI KYA HAIN

ARIMA IN CAR

ARIMA:APNE AAP KO,MERA HAR BAAT REPEAT KARTHA THA..ANYWAYS FOCUS JALDI

RAJ IN CAR

RAJ:POHECHNA HAIN.

SCENE SHIFTS TO MUSKAAN..

MUSKAAN JUS ENTERD SANJIVANI AND SHE ACCIDENTS SUM GUY AND DE CAKE DAT GUY IZ HOLDIN CUMS ON HER NEW SHIRT..
MUSKAAN:UGHHHHH.....MERI NEW SHIRRT KHARAAB KARDI..
RAHUL:OH I AM SO SORRY MEINE SRSLY DEKHA NAHIN..I AM SO SORRY..
MUSKAAN:ABHI SORRY KE BACHE .. TERI SORRY SE MERI NEW SHIRT SAAF TU NAHIN HOGI..SALE IDIOT TUM DEKHE NAHIN CHAL SAKTE THE..
RAHUL HEARIN DIS BECUMZ REALLY ANGRY: DEKHIYE MISS.WHOEVER U ARE IT WAS UR FAULT OR HAR BAAT KI HADH HOTI HAIN..
MUSKAAN:HAAN HOTI HAIN NA
AND SHE TAKES DE CAKE AND PUTS ON RAHUL'S FACE..
MUSKAAN:HAR BAAT KI HADH HOTI HAIN JO MERI SIDE SE POORI HOGAYI .. BYE BYE TATA..
AND SHE GOES..
RAHUL LUKIN LYK A JOKER:ABHEY YE APNI AAP KO SAMAJHTI KYA HAIN..
AND IN DAT MAKUL ENTERZZ AND WHEN HE SEES RAHUL HE STRTS LAUGHIN..
MAKUL:WOO BHAIYA .. YE KISNE KIYA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
RAHUL:CHUP KARON .. ARMAAN TUMHAARA INTIZAR KARAHA HAIN AGAR LATE HOGAYE TU WO TUMHE CHOREGA NAHIN..
AND MAKUL GOES AND RAHUL GOES TO WASH HIS FACE..
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EPISODE 3

IN SANJIVANI:

ARMAAN:YE INTERNS KYUNN NAHIN ARAHE HAIN
ATUL:AAJAYENGE CHILL YAAR..
ARMAAN:EXACTLY PICHLE HALF AN HOUR SE WAIT KARAHE HAIN DR.ARIMA OR DR.RAJ KE LIYE ABHI TAK KYUN NAHIN AAYE..

BOTH CAME AT SAME TIME AND JUST AS ARMAAN STOPPED SAYIN THIS THEY BOTH SPOKE TOGETHER COINCIDENTLY

RAJ:IM SORRY SIR
ARIMA:IM SORRY SIR

EVRY1 EYES GOES ON DA DOOR WHERE DEY R STANDIN

AND THEY SEE EACH OTHER..
ARIMA:TUMMMMMMMMM?????
RAJ:TUMMMMMMM
ARMAAN:DOCTORS AAP LATE KYUN AAYE....YAHA PAR LATE AANA SAKHT MANA HAIN SHAYED AAP YAHA KE RULES NAHIN JANTHE....
RAJ:HUM JANTHE HAIN SIR..
ARIMA:AGLI BAAR AISA NAHIN HOGA , SORRY SIR..
RAJ:SORRY SIR..
ARMAAN:WAISE MEIN KISI KO UNKI INTERNSHIP KE PEHLE DIN NAHIN SAZA DETHa , ISLIYE AAP LOG BACH GAYE ....MEIN IS MAMLE MEIN BOHUT STRICT HOON TU AGLE BAAR SE DEHAAN RAKHIYEN..
WELCOME TO SANJIVANI INTERNS....MEIN JAANTHA HOON AAJ AAPKE LIYE AAPKI LIFE KA SABSE IMPORTANT DIN HAIN AUR AAP SAB BOHUT DARRE HAIN PLZ MATH DARIYE....WELCME AGAIN TO SANJIVANI....WELL
SANJIVANI MEIN AAPKO HOLIDAYS AASANI SE NAHIN MILEGI AUR AAPKE DIN MEIN 2 SHIFTS HONGE 1 SHIFT 5 HR AND ANOTHER SHIFT 5 HRS TOTAL DIN ME 10 HRS AUR KOI PRANKS YAHA PAR ALLOWED
NAHIN HONGE NO MASTI NO MAZAAK AGAR MEINE AAPKO DEKHA KUCH AISA KARTE HUVE USSI WAQT AAPKO SAZA MILIGI YA WO EXTRA HRS DUTY HONGE YA SUSPENSION YA RCTAL EXAMZ....DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?

ALL
REALLY SCARED):YESS SIR.....
ARMAAN:GOOD ANYWAYS MEIN HOON DR.ARMAAN MALIK YAHA KA DEAN YE HAIN , YE HAIN DR.RAHUL GAREWAAL HEAD OF CARDIOLOGIST , YE HAIN DR.ANJALI GUPTA NEURO SURGEON , YE HAIN DR.ATUL JOSHI HEAD OF AIDS WARD AND LAST BUT
NOT DA LEAST DR.SHILPA GYNOCOLOGIST WO AAJ YAHA PAR NAHIN HAIN BUT SOON SHE WILL JOIN U GUYZ.....HUM AAKE SENIOR DOCTORS HAIN AUR AAPKO DR.RAHUL AUR DR.ATUL DUTIES DENGE AUR AAPKO UNKO REPORT KARENGE AUR DR.ANJALI AAPKO MUJHSE PEHLE ROUNDS PE JAANA PARHEGA TAAKE YE LOG APNA KAAM SAHI TAREEKE SE KARAHE HAIN YA NAHIN
AUR MEIN KHUD PERSONALLY ROUND LAGAONGA AUR ISKA KOI TIME NAHIN HAIN AUR MEINE KISIKO USKI DUTIES PE NAHIN DEKHA TU USSI WAQT AAPKO SAZA MILEGI....UNDERSTAND?

RAJ TO ARIMA:SAALA YE INSAAN HAIN YA MACHINE

ARIMA:CHUP KARON..

ARMAAN:U ALL R SUPPOSE TO SAY YES

ALL:IN FEAR:YES SIR..
ARMAAN:THEEK HAIN DR.RAHUL KE CABIN MEIN IN 5 MINS WO AAPKO WAHA DUTY DENGE..U ALL MAY GO NOW..
AND EVRY1 JUS RAN YAAR EVRY1 WAZ SCARED OF HIM..

MUSKAAN DINT HEAR ANYTHIN AS SHE WAS SLEEPIN CUZ OF ARMAAN'S LONG LECTURE..


IN LOCKER ROOM

MUSKAAN:YAAR MAKUL MEINE ITNA STRICT AADMI ZINDAGI MEIN NAHIN DEKHA..
ARIMA:HAAN AJEEB BAAT HAIN BHAIYA ITNE STRICT KAISE HOSAKTE HAIN REALLY WEIRD YAAR....MEINE BHAIYA KO EK BAAR BHI STRICT NAHIN DEKHA INFACT WO TU MERE SAATH ITNE FREE
HAIN KE POOCHO HII MATH PHIR YAHA ITNE STRICT..
RAJ AND MUSKAAN:"BHAIYA"??(CONFUSED)
MAKUL:HAAN WO ARIMA KE BHAIYA HAIN AND HE EXPLAINED DA WHOLE REALTIONS WHO IZ HE HIS SISTER HIS BROTHER
RAJ:ACHA WO SAALA HITLER TUMHAARA BHAIYA THA...ISLIYE MEIN SOCHON KE YE TUM MEIN ITNI AKAD KAHAN SE AAYI APNE BHAIYA SE HI AAYI..
ARIMA:REALLY BECOMIN ANGRY:HOW DARE YOU TUM MERE .. MERE BHAI KE BAARE MEIN AISA KAISE KEHSAKTE HOON....
AND EVRY1 GETS PAGE FROM RAHULS THEY R LATE..
RAJ:OH SHIT AGAIN LATE AB MAKUL TERE BHAI SE BHI DAANT(ANGER)SUNNI PARHEGI.
ALL REACH THERE..
ALL COME INSIDE.
RAJ:SIR WO...IM SORRY SIR MEIN PHIR SE LATE HOON(PUTTIN HIS HEAD DOWN)
RAHULUN WORRY MEIN ARMAAN KI TARAH NAHIN HOON KE AAP SAB LOGON KO BIG LECTURE SUNAO....I'D LYK TO INTRODUCE MYSELF
DR.RAHUL GAREWAAL HEAD OF CARDIOLOGIST AND
ATUL: MEIN HO DR.ATUL JOSHI HEAD OF AIDS WARD AUR MEIN , RAHUL ,ARMAAN,SHILPA INERNS THE
AUR WAHA SE HUM BEST FRNDZ BAN GAYE OR ABHI TAK HAIN..MUJE ARMAAN KI TARAH STRICT HONA NAHIN AATA ISLIYE MEIN PEHLE SE KEHRAHA HOON I WOULD LYK TO BE GOOD WID U GUYZ LYK AS UR FRNDZ AND
GUYZ
RAHUL:AND HUME APNE DOST KI TARAH SAMJHO....DUN WORRY
I THINK AAJ KE LIYE YE INTRO KAAFI HAIN HUM AAP SAB KO JANTHE HAIN
SO INTRO DENE KI ZAROORAT NAHIN HAIN HAAN BUT MEIN DUTIES KE MAMLE MEIN STRICT HOON SAB LOG APNE DUTIES COMPLETE KARKE JAAYENGE THEEK HAIN
STRTIN DUTIES
DR.MAKUL AND DR.MUSKAAN O.P.D
AND DR.RAJ AND DR.ARIMA GENERAL WARD
ARIMA:WHAT??
RAJ:WHAT??
ARIMA:SIR , SIR WO KYA DUTIES CHANGE NAHIN HOSAKTI
RAHUL:KYUN DR.ARIMA?
NO ANSWER FROM BOTH OF DEM
RAHUL:PHIR SORRY MEIN DUTIES NAHIN BADAL SAKTA..
THEY ALL GO FOR DUTIES..


MUSKAAN IZ SLEEPIN AND AND AS SHE HEARZ HER NAME SHE PUTZ HER HEAD UP AND SEES RAHUL..

MUSKAAN POV
OH SHIT..YE YAHA KYA KARAHA HAIN..YE MERA SENIOR DOCTOR HAIN..ARREY MUSKAAN
YE TUNE KISSE PANGA LE LIYA APNE SENIOR DOCTOR SE .. USSE GAALI DI AUR OOPER SE USKE FACE PE CAKE LAGAYA..TERI TU AAJ BAND BAJNE WALI HAIN..
AND MUSKAAN IZ DE 1ST 1 TO GO BUT RAHUL STOPS HER..
NOW EVRY1 IZ GONE..
RAHUL:WAIT I THINK MEINE AAPKO KAHIN DEKHA HAIN..
MUSKAAN:NAHIN SIR AAPNE MUJHE KAHIN NAHIN DEKHA HAIN..INFACT HUM LOG PEHLI BAAR MIL RAHE HAIN..
RAHUL:ARREY LEKIN APNA CHEHRA TU DIKHAO..
MUSKAAN WAS HIDIN HER FACE BY DE FILE..
RAHUL:ARREY DIKHADO NA..
AND HE PULLS DE FILE AND SEES MUSKAAN..
RAHUL:TUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM??????????????????
MUSKAAN IZ REALLY EMBARASSED N SCARED..
MUSKAAN:YES SIR..I AM SO SORRY..MEIN..MEIN JANTHI NAHIN THI KE WO AAP HOON..
RAHUL:OH MA'AM AAP MUJHE SIR KYUN BULARAHI HAIN MEIN TU AAP KE LIYE SAALA HOON IDIOT HOON PAGAL HOON..
MUSKAAN:NAHIN SIR AAP MERE LIYE ACHE HAIN ,BOHUT ACHE HAIN , GR8 HAIN ..
RAHUL:BAKWAAS BAND KIJIYE..
MUSKAAN:OKAY..
RAHUL:ISKI SAZA AAPKO ZAROOR MILEGI..
REACTAL EXAMINATION
URINE TESTS AND SAMPLES
STOOL TESTS AND SAMPLES
AND EXTRA HOURS..
MUSKAAN:KYA??RECTAL EXAMINATION,URINE TESTS,STOOL TESTS OR OOPER SE EXTRA HOURS..
AND SHE STRTS FAINTIN BUT RAHUL CATCHES HER..
RAHUL:BEHAVE DR.WHOEVER U ARE.
AND HE STRTS GOIN OUT OF HIZ CABIN AND IN DAT MUSKAAN KNEELS DOWN AND CATCHES RAHUL'S LEG AND HE TURNZ TO C HE SEES MUSKAAN CATCHIN HIS LEG..
RAHUL:ARREY YE TUM KYA KARAHI HOON??
MUSKAAN:PLZ SIR , PLZ MUJHE ITNI BARHI SAZA MATH DIJIYE AAKHIR MEINE AISA KIYA HI KYA HAIN .. MEIN MARJAONGI LEKIN YE PUNISHMENT ACCEPT NAHIN KARONGI..
RAHUL:TU MAR JANA..
MUSKAAN 2 HERSELF:SAALA IDIOT..
MUSKAAN:SIR PLZ SIR..
RAHUL:PEHLE LEAVE MA LEG..
MUSKAAN:NAHIN PEHLE AAP BATAYEIN..
RAHUL:I SAID LEAVE MA LEG..LEAVE MA LEG MISS.WHOEVER U ARE..
MUSKAAN: ARREY TUM BATAO NA..
RAHUL GIVES A ANGRY EXPRESSION..
MUSKAAN CORRECTIN HERSELF:MERA MATHLAB AAP PLZ BATAYEINA
RAHUL: ACHA THEEK HAIN..NOW LEAVE..
AND SHE LEAVES..
MUSKAAN:OYYE,TUSSI BARHE GR8 HO JI BYE BYE TATA..
AND SHE GOES..
RAHULLAUGHS):MISS.CHATTERBOX

SCENE SHIFTS TO RAJ AND ARIMA..

RAJ 2 HIMSELF:MERI PHOOTI KISMATH KE MUJHE ISKE SAATH DUTY MILGAYI..

ARIMA 2 HERSELF:OH GOD !! MEINE AAPKE SAATH KYA BURAH KIYA THA KE AAPNE MUJHE IZ SADU KE SAATH DUTY DEDI..


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episode 4

general ward


both r workin and arima iz not interested to tok also and raj speaks

raj: dr.empty headed ye bp machine pass karon..
Raj: dr.empty headed ye bp machine pass karon
arima: excuse me who did u call tht empty-headed
raj: tumhe..aur kisko
arima: you.....(becomin so angry )mein tumhe empty-headed lagthi hoon ??
Raj: haan
arima: youuuuuuu .. You r so sick..


After de first shift muskaan meets raj..

Muskaan: hey raj..
Raj: hey muskaan full 4 years ke baad dekha hain tujhe..
And hugs her..
Raj: i missed yeh so much..
Muskaan: haan jhooth bhol aur jhooth bol..
Raj: nahin kasam se yaar .. Jhooth nahin bol raha .. Arrey aisa hosakta hain .. Ke mein apne best frnd ko miss na karon..
Muskaan: acha theek hain mujhe cafeteria jaana hain tu phir aajana..
Raj: acha ok buh bye tc..mein bus thori deir mein aata hoon..

Time

in cafeteria..muskaan iz sittin..there..
Muski: hey arima....how waz da 1st shift....kaisa gaya
arima: aur kesa jaata ....arima: Uss idiot ke saath koi ek minute bhi nahin guzar
sakta ..
Muski: kya yaar jab se meine tum dono ko dekha hain tum dono jagra karahe hoon
ye mamla kya hain..
Makul: hey arima..
Arima: (makin her mood good):hey kaise hoon..
Makul: theek..hey wo dekho armaan sir bhaiya aur atul sir....i think
wo hume bhula rahe hain
arima: chalo jaate hain..
They go there
armaan: hey doctors mein aapko hii bhula raha tha..how waz
ur first day..
(Armaan atul and rahul wer sttin there as they had break also)..
Evryy1: good sir..
Rahul: wo dr.raj kaha hain..
Raj: mein yaha hoon sir....wo bus bohut zyada kaam tha..
Armaan: ok ye aap ki break hain enjoy kijiye , dun waste it here..bye have a good day..
Evry1 strts goin..
Then armaan again speaks:mujhe dr.raj aap se baat karni hain..
Raj:sure sir.. (evry1 goes)boliye sir ..
Armaan: Dr.Raj mein kisiko unke pehle din lecture nahin sunata par mein
kya karoon aap aise kaam karahe hain ke mujhe karna parhega..
Raj:mein kuch samjha nahin sir..
Armaan: pehle aap late aaye aur ooper se meine aapko dekha phone pe baat karte huve,,
its ur first day dats why i'm
(before he cud say anything raj's phone rang but raj thought its armaan's)
raj: sir aapka phone bajh raha hain
armaan: dr.raj ye mere nahin aapka bajh raha hain
(raj was puttin his head down,and as he heard armaan sayin this to him only he took his mobile
he was findin it in his all pockets(while armaan got really irritated)
atlast he found it and he ended da call)
raj: sorry sir , wo....
Armaan: its ok(but irritated)tu mein kya kehraha tha , haan aaj ke baad aisa nahin(but da phone rings again)
raj becums so scared as armaan really becums irritated ..raj cuts da phone n switches of and meanwhile sayin to himself:yaha meri band bajrahi hain aur tujhi bhi iss time bajna tha(atul hears it strts..chucklin to himself..
Armaan:aap mera mazaak bana rahe hain..
Raj:nahin sir aap ghalath samajh rahe hain mujhe..mera yaqeen kijiye..
Armaan:shut up parso aap lonavla jaayenge wahe ke hospital mein .. Unko malairia ka vaccination dena hain
raj: but sir
armaan:now bak 2 ur duty..
Raj:but sir.
Armaan:bola na..go on ur duty..
Raj:jee sir(puttin his head down) and he goes..
Arima cums n says to herself:abhi aapko pata chalega dr.raj mujhse panga lena ka nateeja..first day tu kharaab chala gaya bechara raj
and then da past shows remember armaan sees raj talkin on phone
she remember:she call raj n toks to him
arima:hi..
Raj:strangely:hi aap kaun?
Arima:tum mujhe nahin jante lekin mein tumhe jaanthi hoon..
Rajh really babes..
And she makes him buzy by tokin to him as armaan is seein him and as armaan goes she also stops tokin when armaan goes....
And now from ouside she was seein armaan n raj tokin and she was only da 1 who was callin rimaan all da time..)and she laughs to herself bechara raj..
And she goes n raj cums
rajh well not bad dr.arima but aap mujhe nahin janthi,, ab tumhe pata chalega dr.raj se panga lena ka nateeja kya hota hain..bechari arima..( evil laugh)




the scene end there..


Evry1 duties r finished n they r called to rahul cabin..

Rahul:wow interns aaj aap sab ne bohut acha kaam kiya and dr.raj aap ne apni duty bohut achi tareeki se nibhaen but
armaan comes:but performance aap ka acha nahin tha..ap jaanthe hain na?
Raj:yes sir
armaan:aap janthe hain performance se intern of da month choose kiye jaathe hain
raj:yes sir
armaan:sirf aapki duty per nahin aapki behavior par,discipline par
raj:yes sir
armaan:tu kal aisa kuch aap karenge?(in whole scene raj iz puttin iz head down)
raj:yes sir(lol..hehe evry1 srtrts chuckiln even rahul) and then raj realizes wht he said
n then says.raj:no sir ....never sir n sorry sir wo ghalti se mun(mouth)se nikal gaya ..
Armaankay..haan dr.muskaan and dr.makul wonderful aap dono bohut acha team banathe hoon..gr8 goin guyz..
Both:thank you sir.
Armaan:and sabse acha kaam aaj dr.arima ne kiya well done gr8 job
arima:thank you sir..
And they go out of rahul"s cabin
and raj:in his mind):aur kal sabse burah kaam dr.arima ka hoga jus wait n watch sir.
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NOW HOSPITAL OVER AND NOW IN DA HOMEZ..

ARMAAN:WELL DONE ARIMA....AAJ BOHUT ACHA KAAM KIYA TUMNE WELL DONE HA....

ARIMA:THANK YOU SIR..HEHE I MEAN BHAIYA..BHAIYA AAP ITNE STRICT HOON I SWEAR AAP APNE SAARE GANG KE SAATH COOL REHTE HOON AUR YAHA TAK MERE SAATH BHI LEKIN HOSPITAL MEIN
OH MY GOD SAB AAPSE DARR GAYE THE EVEN MEIN BHI..
ARMAAN:ARREY YE TU HAIN MERA KAMAAL..
ARIMA:AUR BHAIYA SABSE ZYADA TU WO RAJ....HE IS SO SCARED OF U..
ARMAAN:I KNO MEINE DEKHA THA AAJ CHUP CHAAP MERA SAAMNE KARA(STAND) HOJATHA THA YES , YES SIR , SORRY SIR BOLRAHA THA AUR WO BHI SAR(HEAD)JHUKA KAR KEHTA THA....US BECHARI KI TU MEIN NE BAND BAJA DI..HEHEHEHE..
Shilpa:OH BHAIYA BHABHI ....MUJHE BHOOL GAYE KYA..
ARMAAN:ARREY NAHIN DHANNO MEIN TUMHE KESE BHOOL SAKTA HOON TUM TU MERI JAAN SE BHI ZYADA PYAARI HOON
ARIMA STRTS CHUCKLIN QUIETLY..
SHILPA:ARMAAN KYA KARAHE HOON ARIMA DEKH RAHI HAIN..
AND THEN HE REALIZES KE ARIMA IZ THERE N LEAVES HER HAND..
ARIMA:AHEM....AHEM....
ARMAAN:KYA AHEM AHEM EK THAPPAR MAROONGA PATHA CHAL JAAYEGA..
SHILPA:TUM MERI PYAARI NAND KAM OR DOST ZYADA US KO THAPPAR MAROGE
ARMAAN:HAAN
SHILPA:MEIN ABHI TUMHE MAZA CHAKA THI HOON AND SHE STANDS TO BEAT HIM AND FALL ON HIM ONLY
ARMAAN DOWN AND SHILPA UP....
Arima:cough cough.. ..
AND AS REALIZES SO SHILPA STAND UP AND ARMAAN ALSO AND TO CHANGE DA TOPIC SHE SAYS..
SHILPA:ACHA CHALO KAL KE LIYE UTNA NAHIN HAIN ARIMA ..
ARMAAN:HAAN AAJ LATE HOGAYI MAGAR KAL NAHIN WARNA KAL 12 HR DUTY KARNA PARHEGA..
ARIMA:OKAY,BHAIYA PLZ I DUN WANT UR STRICTNESS HERE..

SCENE SHIFTS TO RAHUL N MAKUL

RAHUL:AAJ TERA DIN KESA THA..
MAKUL:COOL BHAIYA..
RAHUL:ACHA TERI DUTY USS DR.WHOEVER KE SAATH THI..
MAKUL:ACHA U MEAN WO BAKBAK ITEM..
RAHUL:HAAN WAHI WAHI MISS.CHATTERBOX..
MAKUL:BHAIYA MEIN BATA NAHIN SAKTA KE WO KITNA BOLTHI HAIN..
RAHUL:ACHA THEEK HAIN ABHI KHAANA KA..
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HEHE i noe such a long post but u guyz wud enjoy actually i had strted writin 4rm before only dats why im posting long long partzz....anywayz guyz plz do read n comment (comment honestly).....and me wud be waitin for yer commentz and yeah nowadayzz i am readin FF's which r fully written in english but i wanted to make a urdu/hindi 1 so datz why i made .. but anywayz do comment cuz only wid ur commentzz i will be postin further or elze not..

Thankz..
Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyy Beautifull FF just loved it keep updating its brilliant.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anisha_91

Heyyy Beautifull FF just loved it keep updating its brilliant.



thank you , i wull also add u in the pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome ff
love all the partz
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome ff
love all the partz
plz add me to ur pm list




thanks sis , I have added u to the pm list..
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Originally posted by: KaSh-Rox

Nice.. i loved it .. great job😊 add me in the pm

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