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Posted: 14 years ago
Intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki...

Quietly, patiently I wait recalling how Vrushali said she will update faster than we can read....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 49
Everyone was shocked to hear Nupur say Arjun, but the most shocked seemed Nupur herself. She got up and went to the bathroom to get herself back in control. Nargis had followed her. Nargis knocked on the door and said, "Nupur, what is wrong? Come on, open the door and tell me." Faz came behind Nargis and asked in sign if everything was alright, Nargis whispered to Faz to go handle the party and keep the merriment going, she will take care of Nupur. Faz left and Nargis resumed her knocks, "Nupur, I am not going away till to open the damn door," she hissed. Nupur opened it a bit and pulled Nargis in. She hugged her and cried. "I donno wass happenin to me," she hiccupped between sobs. "I donno, whaddoi do?" Nargis hugged her and ran her hand on her back to calm her down. Once the sobs died out, she wet a napkin and wiped her tears and said, "Darling, you like the guy right. Go after him. You were always spunky, why have you withdrawn? That's no my Nups. You know, go kiss the frog, may be he is the Prince, if not have a bit of fun." Nargis winked. Nupur smile wryly, cheering up at the thought of Arjun as a toad. Now she knew she will have fun with him. They cleaned up and went back to the party. The rest of them were playing and they joined them smoothly without anyone commenting on Nupur's hasty departure earlier.
They all had dinner together and shared gifts after they finished playing games. Faz announced that the gifts will be opened at Nargis's place and everyone will show what they received and Abs will parade the good she has received especially the one in the "naughty" category. Abs shook her head valiantly but no one paid heed.
They all packed up after dinner and went over to Nargis's place. Nargis and Nupur looked at each other as if confirming the thought that the apartment looked a bit different. There were some vases filled with flowers and candles ready to be lit in the living room. Nargis ventured in to her bedroom to find a similar scene and same was the case in Nupur's bedroom. Nargis realized, it must be Vicky's doing for he was the only one who had the key to her place. She mentally thanked god that the cousins and other invitees were not there for the slumber party. This was just the four of them, going to have a heart to heart. She knew Vicky was up to something.
Nargis made cocoa for everyone while they changed into their PJs. She lit the candles and switched off all the lights, letting the glow of candle cast interesting shadows. They all sat around the coffee table in the living room. She got the manicure set out and each one started helping the other with nails, shaping and polishing while talking away. Abs admitted to being nervous about the coming first night. Faz giggled and Nupur chuckled merrily having her perky temperament restored earlier. Nargis gave a knowing smile. All three of them caught it and Faz asked, "Please tell na, I know you and Vicky kiss each other Bhabhi jaan, tell us how it feels." Nupur looked at Nargis as if she had missed the bus. "Oh ho! when had this happened she asked Faz." And Faz said, "Jab aap Arjun ke saath naach rahi thi." Nupur colored, and said, "Mere radar fail ho gaye. I shall have to be more vigilant." Giving an Inspector Clouseau, of Pink Panther fame, look. Everyone laughed and Abs said, "Nahi Nargis, batao, sachchi, I don't know what to do. Maan has said things that I am so scared now, of what will happen. All I know about love making is what I have seen on TV and films. What am I going to do? Will it hurt?" she opened up to these friends who had started meaning more to her day by day. Nargis and Faz were family that she was going to gain with her marriage to Maan.
Nargis put on her teacher hat and explained to Abs of how to just relax and let Maan take the lead and follow him. She felt a bit weird thinking of her Jeth and Jethani in that context, but for now she was not going to think about them and just a friend who needed some help. Faz and Nupur were listening in avidly and she could not resist a jibe, "tum dono itni curiosity se kya sunn rahe ho? Are you two planning to get yourselves hooked as well?" Both of them jumped and said in unison, "NO NO…" and laughed as they were caught.
Nupur then asked, "So how many times has JD kissed you?" Faz and Abs looked puzzled and said, "JD, ye kaun hai?" Nupur said, "oh that's my name for Vicky, I call him jeejudude and that's JD in short," feeling proud at her invention. Nargis was glad of the distraction and thought the question was averted, when Nupur nudged and said, "you can't get away from answering. Now give."
Nargis smiled and said modestly, "uh, a few, I have not counted," phasing out to what all she and Vicky had done. Nupur caught that and said, "nags, come on, we are here to share, do tell."
Just then, there was a sound from inside the bedroom. Alarmed, Nargis went into the bedroom, leaving the girls behind to check on the sound. Just as she opened the bathroom door, after checking in the bedroom where everything looked okay to her, she heard a sound from the cupboard. She went to slide it open when Vicky stepped out and grabbed her and closed her mouth with his hand, pulling her in. He whispered, "Zeno! Its me!" She hissed back as he took his hand away when she nodded, "I know its you, who else calls me Zeno, you dimwit. What are you doing here? I knew something was up the minute I saw the flowers and candles. How romantic but I think it was not for that is it. What are you up to? Where are others? They are here as well right?"
He laughed, "Oh darling! I knew you would not say anything but I was cramped in this space and opened the door and you heard, you dog ears. I have Maan, Arjun and Adi in the attic in the kitchen. We want to join your slumber party. Please take me darling, I want to sleep with you, hold you, oh lord I am getting hard at the thought of it," he breathed in her ear and licked it and pushed into her, making her feel his hardness. Nargis moaned. She lost almost all coherent thought as she felt him against her belly. Just then she felt something vibrate in his trousers and her eyes widened. He said, "must be bro, poor souls they have even lesser space than I do" having fun at their expense with glee. He picked up and said, "we have been caught, coming to rescue now."
Nupur who had been wondering what had taken Nargis so long, had heard whispers coming from cupboard and opened it. "Ah so this is where you have been delayed. You two are the limit. JD, what are you doing and Nags what did you think, we won't wonder where you had vanished? Out both of you," putting her hands on the hips. "JD, tonight, no Nags for you now scram before the rest of the girls scream the place down."
Well that's what they heard, a scream from the kitchen. They quickly went to the kitchen after they saw Faz laugh and give a whooping clap when she saw Vicky and joined them. In kitchen, Abs had given the yelp when she had seen Adi, peeking out from the attic as she had taken a bottle of water from the fridge and had opened a cabinet to take a glass out. Fortunately she had dropped the plastic bottle and not the glass.
Adi had then sheepishly jumped out of the attic, followed by Arjun and the last of them was Maan, grinning from ear to ear seeing Abs's expression.
Edited by rushtrip - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I can't believe this guy...Yeh Vicky bhi na...khud to aaya to aaya....lekin puri paltoon ko bhi apne saath liya.......can you believe it!!! Thanks to the disturbance...at least I am out of the HOT seat on answering all those intimate questions....phew!!!!

Nups...it good to see you back to yourself again...muje lagta hain ab Arjun ki khair nahi!!!!😆

Great update Vrush....very funny...looking forward to the next part.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
darling..i hope your mood is restored..along with nupur...

i love this vicky of yours..he is quite a character...even if i say so myself...

tumhein chorne..ka naam hi nahi leta..cupboard mein..bhi? haila...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwww hufff whts next man.thoroghly enjoyed ur update and waitin for next does it get any better
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh i hope so..lots of kissing.and fun moments..for all of them..hee hee..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oh i hope so..lots of kissing.and fun moments..for all of them..hee hee..

hmmm...waiting...waiting...😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
kahan kahaan chhoopaya becharon ko!! attic mein, cupboard mein?? koi baat nahi....pyaar mein sab karna pudta hai aur karvana bhi pudta hai. :)

aagay kya rush?? kitchen ka thanda paani peekar ghar chalein??
Edited by KriHaan_GurMaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb as always👏👏👏
aahh...gud to see nupur back in her original form.... 😉 abb to arjun ki khair nehi😉 imagine arjun calling as a toad...trrrrrrrrr....😆😆
ye lo vicky miya to apni puri khandan aur barati leka aaye hai....pakre gayee na....😆😆 gud job nags👏😆
& miss nags is teaching us ahem...ahemm lesson...😆😆 ab iss mamle mein inse aachi to koi ho hi nehi sakta.....😉
bechari abs...shock kaisa laaga...???😛😆....maan 😆😆 *aapka kya hoga janabe ali*...
Edited by -sann- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update Vrushali ....too funny ...looking forward to the next part....
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