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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

😆 God u girls are sooooooo funny - Maan talli in Abs, Arjun just saw Nups ahem and now he too is talli!! U gurls are saving so much money for them 😉😉.. Treat maango!

Vroom lovely update, I felt I too was in the party.. I love that song!!
please update karo yaar.. Ab aapki hi sahare raat kaatni hai!! 😭😭😭.. Else I ll go mad..
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yeah will do aaj raat...am going out now..will be back by 9...

catch up with all then...cheers


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sigma

ofcourse 😆
oh nice ending Vru, i wonder what Nupur will do next



badi ladakoo hai..nupss.kahin arjun ke paaon..pe stamp na kar de...
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Posted: 14 years ago
How much longer,,,,,ab to neend bhi aaraheyi hain!!!🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 46
Arjun was almost trembling to have this woman in his hand and she did not look happy about it. He knew she did not want to dance with him, it was obvious with glaring eyes. But he was not going to give up this opportunity to try and bridge the gap that was there between them. They needed to be better acquainted before he even began to try and win her over. She looked like one stubborn woman with too long a memory. He whispered, Now what have I done that is so bad that you have to look as if you are under punishment. It's a dance, and I didn't ask you. Its forced on both of us, so just move till this song and I will release you from my arms. Nupur's face burned. Was she that transparent? Admittedly she did not want to dance with him, but he did not have to say what he did. Ha! So he did not want to dance as well! how gentlemanly of him to say that, she thought caustically. She just turned her face without answering and felt Arjun pull her even closer and they moved to the song in tune and in rhythm. After a few turns she realized that he was actually a very good dancer, he had a fluidity in his movement that spoke of agility coupled with lightness of the feet. She loved to dance and she was happy to find someone who could dance so well. Just as she had started enjoying the song and their rhythmic movements, the song got over and immediately released her. She felt bereft strangely enough and frowned at him at the suddenness of the act.
Arjun had felt the change in her, the minute she had gone from being stiff and unresponsive to pliant and following his lead in the dance. He felt the soft brush of her thighs against his as they moved, felt her hand hold his a wee bit tighter, her body just a breath away. He had felt the betraying hardening and released her as soon as the song had finished, saw her frown but gave a tiny bow and turned away.
Faz had mentally thanked Vicky for this chance. She really liked this guy but for some obscure reason he seemed to always stay away from her. She swiftly went into his arms before he could react. The guy was slow but hell no one really knew her other than her two prankster friends. She usually kept herself aloof. It was mandatory in her line of work and her upbringing had been pretty conservative except for her time with Vicky and Maan who were treated as sons of the family so they did not count. They had also kept a vigilant eye on her in their school days, ready to whip up anyone who even dared to look at her. With such bodyguards, literally, it was difficult to look at a guy let alone express any feelings. When she had felt any feelings for a guy in school, the boys would tell her such stories about them that her feeling died a natural death before they even had wings to fly. These two had been a riot in school and well she had joined them in every prank at school whether it was to shut teachers up in bathroom, only she could enter the ladies toilet from the three of them, to putting glue on teacher's chair, table, black board and even on assignments. It was a wonder that they were not caught and if caught not expelled from school.
Adi seemed to her like a man who was so kind hearted that he would not want to harm even the smallest creature. That was what had attracted her to him in the first place. She had gone to the office and seen Adi give a lecture to Abs, unknown to them, she had been outside the cabin and heard a few snippets of advice he had given her. She had seen him before and liked his looks but his sensitive side had unfolded before her that day and ever since then she had wanted to get to know him. She had found out as much as she could from the employee files and observed from afar his interactions with Sasha and Tasha and other colleagues. She had asked a few some random questions without raising doubts in anyone, all her training with the boys for stealth had finally been put to use. She had liked what she had heard. She slowly moved deeper into his arms as she thought of all the things she had heard about him. She put her head on his shoulder and felt him stiffen, heard an indrawn breath that seemed to rattle through his lungs but his hands tightened on her. She smiled, the guy was liking it as much as her. She then looked up into his eyes, for the first time letting him see what she felt for him, what being in his arms did to her. She smiled a slow seductive smile, that let him know in no uncertain terms what she thought of him and saw an answering smile, acknowledging and responding to the unspoken questions she had raised in that one look. He became bold and gathered her in his arms, closing them around her like a protective shield, putting his head beside hers, chin resting just near the top of her right ear. His eyes closed involuntarily, rejoicing in this silent yet voluble announcement of feelings that was mutual and welcomed. They stood for a few extra moments like that even after the song had died out, signaling each other mutely their desire to be together.
Vicky had been happy with his machinations, he took nargis in his arms as they swayed lazily to the music. He slowly ran his hands up her back and said Zeno! Nupur ka koi boyfriend hai? his chin had been resting on her shoulder and he had whispered the words, but she fliched back, wondering what he was upto and asked, kyun pooch rahe ho? he turned her slowly so that she could face Nupur and Arjun dancing and said, Woh dekh rahi ho? tumhein kya dikhta hai? mujhe possibilities dikhti hai! Nargis laughed in his shoulders ensuring no one could hear her and replied, you are incorrigible. Tum match making kar rahe ho? isiliye dhakka diya tha usse? She gave another look to the couple and said, Hmm! Philhaal to I am sure she looks like she wants to murder him, par yeah mujhe bhi possibilities dikhti hain. Happy with her answer, Vicky nestled her into his arms and started sashaying around.
Maan and Abs were having a very intimate moment with their eyes looking deeply into each other. Maan wanted to kiss her but was not sure if she would bite his lips or kiss him back. He gave a half smile and brought his lips forwards towards her, trying to guage her reaction to his millimeter away mouth. She seemed trapped in the hypnotic gaze of his seeing yet not focusing on what he was doing. She felt herself melt even before his lips touched her. Today had been one of the most wonderful days of her life. She was deliriously happy. She wanted to shout to the world that Maan was hers, hers. She kissed him back when his cool lips touched her but started a fire from her lips to the pit of her stomach. She was lost in the moment of him kissing her, of him celebrating their day in a searing kiss that left her breathless. She wanted to give in, to deepen the kiss, but felt Maan exert his control on himself and slowly pulled away but the lips wanted that one last taste of each other and refused to part. She sighed as he shifted on his feet, adjusting his stance to let his evident arousal get room to dampen down. She knew what he wanted and knew what controlling their passion was doing to him. She wanted to hug him to give him comfort, but he hoarsely said, Il suffit de rester comme a Cherie! Je ne serai pas en mesure de contrler si vous vous dplacez.( Just stay that way Cherie! I wont be able to control if you move.)
Abs's brother who had been helping out with the barbecue looked at that kiss and knew that his sister was definitely in love if she allowed anyone to do that in public. He knew he now had ammunition to harass her for the rest of her life'
Edited by rushtrip - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved...yeh me first!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Reserved...yeh me first!!!😆



So it looks like VIc ke mechanization are working....hmmm NUPS....disappointed that Arjun let you go so soon???....good going Arjun👏...play hard to get that will be the Key to getting NUPS...she hates when someone that she notices....ignores her😛.......this will help build the tension in your relationship!!!!😉

Stick with Vic and Me...we will get this relationship on the road......for you guys.....enough pushes in the right direction at the right time....and waalla...the rest is already at play between the two.....we will just facilitate!!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

thankoo maam...for writing..so fast...




That's the least I can do...you churn out the updates...I'll churn out the comments!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved.. read it and loved it!! but it was small 😆😆..want bigger update 😭🤔
Vroom, me going home now .. Its 12 PM , so imagine my haalat.. May just hit the bed once I read home..
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Posted: 14 years ago

👏👏👏👏

srry..couldn't comment earlier....was just too much feed up with my life.....

it was fav bt tooo short....😆

arjun.....kya kahu...he is aahhh...😆😆 aur ye nups ko kya hua....isse toh bura lag raha hai....haila....control lady....dont 4get who u r....noone can affect u....(sivaye arjun k😳😆)....meri pass ana saab thik kar dungi...kya hua agar woh chor k chala gaya toh....jao kisi aur saath nacho😆😆😆
vrush, tumhe vut,vabisya,bartaman dekhni aati hai kya...??lagta to hai u know my lifestory bettter thn me...😕
ye lo...nags tu v JD ki gang mein samil ho gayi....😲 ab mera kya hoga..*aapka kya hoga janabe ali*.....
faz & adi😉😉...waah...adi to bold ho raha hai...hmm😉😛
maabs...control guyss....humbhi moujud hai vai...vaise kisi ne dekha v nehi hoga...saab apne kaam mein busy hai😉😛...
haila..vaisaab ne dekh liya...how sweet...apni behan ki kitni fiqr hai aur pehchanta v hai....i wish meri v aisa koi vaai hota...😭....
vrus...suspence pe suspence..uski upar aur ek suspence....kya hai yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm, so all love birds are busy good goood...kisi ne nahin dekha Maabs except Abs' bro...woh apna chhote bhai hone ki responsibility of teasing Abs to death bakhubi nibhaayga! 😆 Can't blame him!

Hmm, Nups wanted to continue...par Arjun kya kare..He doesn't want to embaress himself further! 😉

FaAdi- Hmm, so Faz listened to my convo w/ Adi...Happy these two are finally able to know each other's mind..😳

Vicky & Nargis : The bindaas matchmakers for Arpur!😆

Maabs- How does he have so much control I am left wondering..But I 👏 that. I feel bad sometimes but we will do everything according to traditions so that neither of us feels guilty. It's not easy on me either!

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