FF-A Haunted Hotel

Hey friends, i am starting my new FF - A Haunted Hotel
It will be little boaring😃
Heres the first part-

A Haunted hotel
Prem-Heer, Meher-Preet, Veera-Nihaal milkar lonavla trip ke liye jate hai. Woh log wehan 'raj kiran hotel' mein rukte hai.
(At receptionist desk)-
Receptionist- Welcome to this hotel and have a good time here.
Preet- Humara to hamesha hi good time hota hai.
meher- preet, tum kabhi nahi sudhroge
Veera-bilkul sahi kaha tumne
Prem- humein 3 rooms chahiye.
Receptionist- yehan pe sabhi rooms khali hai. Koi bhi room le lijiye.
Preem (whispered)- Ajeeb hotel hai yaar.
Prem-well...ok
Sab log upstairs jate hai aur ekdusre ke pass wali room lete hai.
(In prem-heer's room]-
Prem-finally ab hum dono ko koi disturb nahi kar payega (hugged her)
Heer (pushed him) -prem...ab jakar so jao. Kal humein pura lonavla ghumna hai.
Prem- haa to kal ghumna hai (getting closer to her) aaj to nahi.
Heer (blushing) –Prem. Please
Tabhi door pe koi knock karta hai. Prem jakar door open karta hai.
Prem-Preet, kya hua?
Preet (shocked) –Prem bhaiyya, aap mirror kyun tod rahe the?
Prem (confused) –Mirror? Nahi to. Main aur heer to abhi baatien kar rahe the. Tumne koi sapna dekha hoga
Preet- nahi prem bhaiyya. Meher ne bhi woh aawaz suni. Shayad bahar se aayi hogi. Well good night bhaiyya-bhabi
Prem-heer-Good night preet.
Prem (confused)-pata nahi preet kya baat kar raha tha
Heer- mujhe bhi nahi pata. I think humein ab sona chahiye. Bahut nind aa rahi hai
Sab log unke rooms mein so jate hai. Tabhi prem ko kisi ladki ki chillane ki aawaz aati hai. Heer bhi us aawaz se uth jati hai.
Heeer-Prem, yeh aawaz kiski thi?
Prem-kahin Meher ya veera ki to nahi?
Prem-Heer door open karte hai to wehan preet-meher aa jate hai
Preet-prem bhaiya, aapne woh aawaz suni?
Prem-haa. Woh aawaz ager heer ki nahi hai aur meher ki bhi nahi to phir kiski....veera
Sab log veera ke room ke door pe knock karte hai.
Veera- kya hua guys? Itna kyun darwaza khat-khata rahe ho. Woh bhi itni raat ko.
Preet-veera, kya tum chilla rahi thi?
Veera-what? Nahi to
Nihaal- par veera, maine bhi kisiki chillane ki aawaz suni. Phir tumhe kaise kuch nahi suna?
Veera-pata nahi tum log kya bol rahe ho. Mujhe ab bahut nind aa rahi hai. So please sab log jakar so jao. Good night
All-good night.
Veera ke room se bahar nikalne ke baad sab logo kisi aadmi voice sunte hai-
Man-jo bhi woh chillane ki aawaz nahi sunega, uski maut pehle hogi (laughing)
Prem-kaun hai? Kaun hai yehan?
Meher-preet, please yeh hotel abhi chod dete hai.
Preet- nahi. Main yehan se yeh sara confusion solve karke hi jaunga
Prem-he is right meher. Waise bhi lonavla mein baki sabhi hotels full hai. Hum itne raat ko kehan jayege.
Heer-ok but kal subah yehan se chale jayenge. Ok.
Prem (holding her face) –ya. I promise.
PReet- i think ab humein so jana chahiye.
Prem-ya good night
Preet-good night aur koi bhi aawaz aaye to mujhe bula lena.
After 1 hour-
Heer sone ki koshish karti hai but use nind nahi aati. Isliye woh window ke bahar dekhti hai to wehan use 2 red eyes dikhte hai. Jo heer ko stare kar rahe the.
Heer-prem, utho. Dekho woh kaun hai.
Prem-what happened heer?
Heer-window ki taraf dekho prem.
Prem window ki taraf dekhte hi shock ho jata hai. Woh window ke pass jate hi woh red eyes gayab ho jate hai.
Heer (crying) –pata nahi yeh sab kya ho raha hai?
Prem (holding her hands) –heer, chalo hum preet ke room mein chalte hai.
Prem-heer dono preet ke room mein jate hai.
Preet-prem bhaiyya, what happened?
Prem- mujhe aur heer ko window mein 2 red eyes dikhi thi aur jab main window ke pass gaya to woh eyes gayab ho gayi
Heer- but strange baat yeh thi ki wehan woh red eyes thi but koi insaan nahi tha. I mean na uska sir na uska face...kuch bhi nahi
Preet-bhaiyya-bhabi aap dono aaj isi room mein rahiye. Please.
Prem-ok.
After 1 hour
Meher- mujhe bhuk lag rahi hai. Please koi dinner order karo
Prem-haa. Waise bhi hamne aaj dinner nahi kiya
Preet receptionist ko call karta hai.
Receptionist- Hello. Boliye preet sir
Preet (shocked) –tumhe kaise pata chala ki main preet hoon
Receptionist-is hotel mein sirf aap tino couples hi to hai
Preet-ya. Acha mujhe dinner order karna hai.
Receptionist (smiling) –aap acha lage aisa dinner main abhi 5 minutes mein bhejti hoon.
Preet-ok. Thanks.

Hey friends, what do you think? Meher-Preet ke samne khane ki jagah kya aayega?

Haunted............

Originally posted by: NIMMY

Haunted............

scary.............

something new

but

<font color="#008000">jo bhi woh chillane ki aawaz nahi sunega, uski maut pehle hogi (laughing</font>

whats that all about

Ya....Something New😊
It means ki 'Jo us hotel mein koi scary thing experience nahi karega, woh sabse pehle marega'😃

Hi shifali, its really different from other ffs continue soon............

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

wow...shefali...nyc one yar....lukin forward...

Thanks a lot Divya😊

Originally posted by: premheer19

Hi shifali, its really different from other ffs continue soon............

Thanks a lot😊 Ya...It's diffrent FF...Main zyada ghost stories padhti hoon na, isliye yeh idea aaya😃
I will continue soon😊

actully mai bht darti ho n yeh stry prhte hue bhi bht dar lag rha tha.cntinue soon n do pm me..........mjhe pta krna hai k yeh yaha se jaye gai kese.n plz dnt kill premeer.......unhe awazein ate rhe........

Originally posted by: foxi

interesting..continue soon

Thanks😊...Ya i will.

Originally posted by: laviza97

actully mai bht darti ho n yeh stry prhte hue bhi bht dar lag rha tha.cntinue soon n do pm me..........mjhe pta krna hai k yeh yaha se jaye gai kese.n plz dnt kill premeer.......unhe awazein ate rhe........

bw

awesum strt

Hey same mere sath bhi hota hai. Mujhe bhi aisi ghost stories padhte hue bahut dar lagta hai. Even jab main yourghoststories.com pe jakar wehan ki stories padhti hoon tab main 1 week tak dari hui rehti hoon😔
Actually yahin story ka sabse bada twist rahega ki woh wehan kaise jayege. Hey don't worry. main premeer ko nahi marungi....wahin to story mein important hai😊 haa unhe aur preet-meher and nihaal ko bhi awazein aati rahegi.
Thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: shefali_goenka

Hey same mere sath bhi hota hai. Mujhe bhi aisi ghost stories padhte hue bahut dar lagta hai. Even jab main yourghoststories.com pe jakar wehan ki stories padhti hoon tab main 1 week tak dari hui rehti hoon😔
Actually yahin story ka sabse bada twist rahega ki woh wehan kaise jayege. Hey don't worry. main premeer ko nahi marungi....wahin to story mein important hai😊 haa unhe aur preet-meher and nihaal ko bhi awazein aati rahegi.
Thanks a lot😊