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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy pinky:-) hiii
amazing update yaar thankssssss
mayu was too angry yaar yess angry young man 😆
bechari nupur ko rula diya...ya par fir manaa bhi liya 😉
But they are friends now that's the good part not for long 😉😆
do continue soon surely
n thanx for pm u r welcome 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

hi pinky when r u going to update


today or tomorrow 😊
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will update today or tomorrow....😊
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RECAP:

Mayur fight & make up. Sajan scene.

PART 6:

Sheena went to RV. She was very angry with the developing bond of mayur. Mayu made nupur eat sandwich she couldn't digest the fact. She was angry with rv for his stupid challenge.

Sh(angrily): tum jaanto ho tumne kya kiya?

Rv: kya hua?

Sh: tumhaari wajah se mayank aur nupur kitne kareeb aa rahe hai....un ke beech dosti ho gayi hai....mayank jo kabhi kissi ladki ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi tha achaanak uss behenji ke kitna kareeb jaa raha hai.....jab dekho tab dono saath mein rehte hai......yeh sab sirf tumhaari stupid challenge ki wajah se.......achaa-khaasa dono ke beech jhagda hua tha par uss behenji ko challenge ki wajah se mayank se dosti karni padh rahi hai......aur mayank......woh bhi sirf nupur ke saath hi rehta hai.....main tumhe warn kar rahi hu.....agar woh behenji yeh challenge jeet gayi toh main tumhaari bahut buri haalat kar dugi.....

Rv: relax.....tum itna hyper kyu ho rahi ho???maine bahut soch-samajh kar yeh challenge diya hai....tumhe kya lagta mayank party meinn aayega?tum toh usse jaanti ho......woh party mein kabhi nahi aayega....aur agar woh aa bhi gaya toh tumhe lagta hai woh dance karega???mayank & dance (he started laughing) aur fir maine last condition sabse difficult rakhi hai.....mayank & kiss is impossible.....yeh challenge toh main hi jeetuga....Ms.behenji ko toh haarna hi padhega.....itni insult karooga uski ki dono behenji waapas morena bhaag jaayegi.

Sheena relaxed a bit after hearing this.

Rv(smirking): and don't worry I'll make sure ki mayank party main naa aaye.

NEXT DAY:

Nupur got up very early because she wanted to reach on time to college so that mayank becomes happy & she can ask him for the party.

She had done lot of rehearsels standing in front of the mirror last night. Yet she was very nervous.

She reached the college 15 minutes early. She went & sat on the stairs waiting for mayank. She was hoping he'll be in good mood. She couldn't sit in one place & started roaming from one place to another & started fiddling with her dupatta.

N: by god nupur.....itni tension toh exam ke din bhi nahi hui thi.....ussko sirf aaj party mein aane ko kehna hai.....relax nupur......usse propose toh nahi karna fir itna kyu darr rahi hai.....kyunki yeh mayank hai......morena mein toh log mere saath bahaar jaane ke liye marte the aur yahaan toh sab ulta ho raha hai.......hey bhagwaan please madad karna...ni practice ki hai....ek aur baar try karti hu....(with a huge smile) mayank....tum mere saath party mein chalo ge? Shit no....yeh bahut zyaada smile ho rahi hai.......kal itne ache se practice ki thi aur ab sab bhool rahi hu....relax nupur......just relax (taking a huge breath)....sab theek ho jaayega.....bhul gayi aamir ne kya kahaa tha All Izz Well..

Just then she saw some girls were running around here & there. She couldn't understand what was happening all of sudden. They wanted to give some gossips to each other. She heard the words 'mayank & 'bouquet'. She thought they all were gone mad. She went in search of mayank. It was 9:00 & she was sure mayank must have come. But when she saw him she was shocked. Mayank had a bouquet of flowers in hand. Mayank bringing flowers for someone? That was way too shocking. Now she understood why the girls were so excited. They hoped the bouquet was for one of them. Even she was anxious to know why did he bring a bouquet. As soon as he came girls started walking near him with a hope that he'll give it to them. The news spread like fire & people came from library & canteen to see if the news was true. No one could digest this fact. Nupur wasn't liking the way girls were drooling over him. She never knew mayank had a girlfriend. He didn't seem like a boy having girl friend. Mayank was too busy smiling at the girls surrounding him so she went away from there in anger. She went & sat on their usual stairs. She was very frustrated unkown to the reason why. She looked at the time. It was 9:05.

N: aaj woh late ho gaya..obviously ladkiyon ke beech ghira hua hai toh yahaan tak kaise aayega.......sab ladke ek jaise hote hai...pata nahi mujhe kyu lagaa ki mayank alag hai..aur usski girlfriend hai????uss ne kabhi bataaya kyu nahi?aaj aane do usse...uski khair nahi...

M(coming from behind): kiski khair nahi?

She got up with anger on her face. Mayu was confused with her behavior. She started walking towards him (just like he had walked yesterday). He went back & back looking at her weirdly. Nupur caught him at the pillar just like he had done yesterday. She showed him his watch indicating time. He gave a sweet smile at which she started melting.

N(trying to be angry): good morning Mr.Akdu...I'm sure tumhaari subah ho gayi ya fir abhi tak apne sapno ki duniya main hi ho?

At this mayank bursted out laughing. Nupur was confused. She was trying to be angry & mayank was laughing at her.

M(laughing): by god nupur....tum toh hadh hi karti ho.....tum mujhe mimic karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.....par let me tell you tumhe gussa karna bilkul nahi aata......

N(hitting his chest): kya mayank....yeh galat baat hai.....jab tumne mujhe daanta toh maine ek achaa effect bataaya aur aaj jab main tumhe daant rahi hu toh tum mujhpar hi has rahe ho....kamse kum thoda toh dukhi hone ka naatak karte.....saare gusse par paani fer diya.....shit yaar lagta hai Mumbai aakar main acting karna bhul gayi......shahrukh kya sochega??ki main 'nupur bhushan' acting karna bhul gayi....nahi main aisa nahi hone dungi....main aaj hi roz ghar jaakar thodi acting ki practice karti hu.

M: shahrukh?

N: arrey shahrukh khan.....the great actor....don't tell me tum shahrukh ko bhi nahi jaante?

M: main jaanta hu shahrukh kaun hai...par tum usse jaanti ho?

N: ofcourse....poori duniya SRK ko jaanti hai.......

M: mera matlab hai kya tum usse personally pehchaanti ho???kya woh tumhe pehchannta hai?

N(smiling): haan woh roz mere sapno mein aakar mujhe compliment karta hai ki main duniya ki sabse sunder ladki hu......usse meri acting bahut achi lagti hai.....aur woh mujhe mere prince charming se bhi milwaayega......

M(rolling his eyes): sirf SRK kyu???aur bhi hero's ko invite karlo apne sapne mein...salmaan ko bura lagega.

N: haan main bhi yahi soch rahi thi par agar salmaan aa gaya toh shayad unke beech jhagda ho jaayega mujhe lekar....dono ko main itni achi lagti hu.....kya karu.....par main ranbeer ko aaj raat zaroor invite karoogi....mujhe uspe thoda crush hone laga hai....uski aur SRK ki aaj raat dosti karwa deti hu....fir mere liye no problem..shahrukh bhi mujhe ranbeer ke saath dekhkar khush hoga.

M: Ms.Morena agar sapney dekhna khatam ho gaya ho toh kuch padhaai kar le?

N(coming out of dreamworld): haan chalo......and don't worry main SRK ko tumse bhi aaj raat introduce karwaa dugi......and by the way main tumhe mimic nahi kar rahi thi......tumne mujhe kiya........

M: maine kab kiya?

N: achaa bhul gaye??? 'by god nupur...tum toh hadh hi karti ho'.....by god toh sirf main kehti hu fir tumne kyu kahaa?

M: kuch nahi...tumhaara effect ho raha hai.....

N(looking at the bouquet): yeh kiss ke liye?

M: oh.....yeh flowers tumhaare liye.....

N(happily): mere liye???tum mujhe flowers de rahe ho?thanks.....

Nupur looked at it closely. There were a variety of different flowers. She didn't even recognize some of them.

N: par itne alag-alag kyu hai?

M: hello madam, yeh decorate karne ke liye nahi hai....tumne kal kahaa tha na tumhe biology achaa lagta hai....isliye maine sochaa aaj hum flowers ke baare mein padhege....isliye main yeh sab alag flowers dhundh kar laaya.....in ke help se padhna easy hoga.....tumhe sab kuch jaldi samajh jaayega....sab different parts of flowers, different types of flowers.......main subah se kitne garden ke chakkar lagaa kar aaya hu inn flowers ke liye....aur fir saare flowers kharaab na ho jaaye isliye inhe ache se bouquet main pack karwaa diya.

Nupur was touched by his gesture. He wasted so much time for her.

N: tumne breakfast kiya?

M: nahi....time nahi milla.

Nupur held his hand & took him to canteen. They had breakfast & then started studying biology. Girls had seen the bouquet in nupur's hand & felt she was lucky. They didn't know the reason behind that bouquet. Sheena was fuming with anger. She went & told rv about this & rv told her mayu will never come to the party so she shouldn't worry.

Mayu thought nupur one chapter of biology & he realized nupur was indeed very good at this subject. Nupur enjoyed playing with the flowers. After they finished studying one rose was still left (the other flowers were dissected to show nupur the internal parts of flowers). Nupur took that rose & smelled it. It was still fresh.

N: mayank.....main yeh rose le rahi hu....

M: par tum kya karogi iss rose ka?

N: tum toh isse dustbin mein daal doge....bechaara rose......sirf yeh hi tumhaare heartless behavior se bach gaya warna baaki sab flowers ka toh tumne murder hi kar diya....kam se kam isse toh baksh do......main isse sambhal kar rakhoogi...I love roses..

M: ok baba rakho par mujhe lecture dena bandh karo.

They then had their lunch & attended practicals & lectures while nupur was trying to find the right time to ask mayank for the party.

LIBRARY:

Gunjan had come little early for library work. She sat in the library reading books & making notes. She felt someones eyes on her. She turned to see who it was but when she turned the person kept a book in front of his face. She started back with her work & realized this was continuing again & again. Someone was constantly staring at her & then would place the book in front of his face when gunjan would look.

G: zaroor samrat mazaak kar raha hoga.....abhi usse sabak seekha ti hu.

She went & sat in front of the person.

G: dekho mujhe aisa mazaak bilkul pasand nahi....maine kaha na tumse ki main party mein aa rahi hu.....fir kyu tum mujhe itna pareshan kar rahe ho?

The person removed the book from his face. Gunjan was shocked. It was not sam. It was that stupid nerd on whom she threw the letter yesterday. He started blushing more. He was flashing his eye lashes at gunjan. Gunjan was speechless. He was about to speak something but gunjan ran away from there.

IN THE CLASS:

Gunjan went & sat in the class. The class was still empty. She was frustrated. That nerd was continuously staring at her in the library. He got some wrong signals yesterday & now he was after gunjan. Gunjan wanted to beat up sam for his stupid behavior. The class started filling slowly. Sam came & gave a smile to gunjan. Gunjan was angry with him. He was about to sit beside gunjan but gunjan rudely told him that place was for dia. He knew gunjan was angry for some reason but he was sam & no one can remain upset with him. He went & sat behind gunjan. The nerd entered & looked at the empty seat beside gunjan. He went to sit there & gunjan was shocked.

G: yahaa par dia aanewali hai....

Nerd looked sad but sam interrupted.

S: arrey don't worry dia aaj party ke preparations mein busy hai isliye woh nahi aayegi.....tum gunjan ke paas baith sakte ho.

The nerd was very happy. Gunjan looked at sam with daggers while sam gave her wicked smile.

S(whispered in gunjan's ears): mujhe baithne na deni ki sazaa toh milni chahiye na chashmish.

Gunjan cursed him under his breath. The nerd had again started staring at her. Gunjan was feeling very conscious. Sam could feel gunjan's nervousness. All of sudden that nerd pinched gunjan on hand & started shouting 'same pinch'. Gunjan got confused & so was sam.

Nerd: woh hum dono ne chashme pehne hai....isliye hum dono chashmish.........so same pinch.

Gunjan didn't know how to react to his stupid behavior while sam was very angry with him.

S(thinking): how dare he touch chashmish?isse toh sabak seekhaana padhega....

S(to nerd): tumhaara naam kya hai?

N: Nathokumardas

S: I meant sirf naam...not pura naam.

N: haan yeh sirf mera naam hai.....mera poora naam toh Shri.Nathokumardas Ramchandra Balrajpratapsingh hai.

S(rolled his eyes): its ok nathosomethingdas....toh tum aaj party mein aa rahe ho?

N(looking at gunjan): haan kissi ne itne pyaar se bulaaya hai....main toh zaroor aaoga....

Gunjan wanted to tell him about the mistake but that time teacher entered.

S(thinking): ab aayega party mein mazaa.

Gunjan was feeling suffocating & so was benji who was sitting behind natho. He had used some weird chameli oil in his hair which was stinking. Benji was making faces while sam was trying hard not to smile. Gunjan's pen fell down & she went to take it & natho purposely brushed his hands with her. Sam was burning again. He touched chashmish the 2nd time. Sam was sure he'll keep troubling her so he had to do something. He knew gunjan was really annoyed now. It was Ms.Aha's lecture & she was very cool teacher. Sam never had trouble in convincing her about something.

S: ma'am.....

Ms: yes sam?

S: mujhe abhi-abhi dia ka sms aaya.....usse kuch last minute preparations mein meri aur gunjan ki help chahiye........it seems kaam bahut zyaada hai par time kum.

Ms: aur aaj ka lecture?

S(smiling): ma'am gunjan is genious....woh mujhe zaroor padha legi.....aur next class tak mein ready rahooga....please Ma'am hum jaaye?

Ms: alright....par yeh chapter zaroor padhna aur kuch doubts ho toh clear karna.

S: thank you..

Gunjan wanted to attend the lecture.

G: par Ma'am

S: chalo chashmish.......dia is waiting for us.

He took her book & bag in his hands & caught her hand before she could protest. Benji was looking at sam angrily. He could've taken him also but no he made him sit behind that stupid nerd. He decided he won't leave him later.

G: sam mera haath toh chodo......aur meri bag do.......

Sam gave her bag.

G: kya hua dia ko??kahaa hai woh?

S: woh....actually...chashmish dia ka koi sms nahi tha....

G: WHAT????TUMNE JHOOTH KAHA?

S: sorry chashmish...main jaanta tha woh natho tumhe pareshaan kar raha tha....isliye

G(angrily): isliye tumne jhooth bola?how could you?

S: toh main aur kya karta?

Gunjan turned back in frustration to go to class & tell Ms.Aha the truth but sam caught her hand & pulled her towards him. Her head collided with his chest. She felt some tingling sensations in her body. Sam looked directly in her eyes & spoke.

S: haan maine jhooth bola....par sirf tumhaare liye....main jaanta hu tum uss lecture mein bilkul dhyaan nahi de paa rahi thi.....meri wajah se woh champu tumhe pareshaan kar raha hai & I promise aaj ki party ke baad woh kabhi tumhaara peecha nahi karega......mujhe bhi jhooth se nafrat hai par main apne doston ki madad karne ke liye jhooth ka sahara leta hu.......agar main tumhe wahaa se nahi nikaalta toh agle 2 ghante tak tum class mein fasi rehti aur mujhe bilkul achaa nahi lagta.

Gunjan melted looking at his concern.

S: I'm sorry agar tumhe bhura laga par mein apne friends ke baare mein bahut possessive hu....candy, dodo, mayank, benji, aur ab nupur aur chashmish mein meri duniya basti hai...main kabhi inhe dukhi nahi dekh sakta.

G: doston ki madad sach keh kar bhi ki jaa sakti hai.....promise karo aaj ke baad tum jhooth bolke kissi ki madad nahi karoge.

S: agar tum mujhe sachaai ka raasta bataogi toh main jhooth nahi boluga....promise..

He held her hand & smiled while she smiled back.

S: chalo ab....

G: kahaa?

S: mere jhooth ko sach banaane.....dia ko dhundhkar uski party preparations mein madad karte hai.

Gunjan smiled & went with him.

END OF DAY:

The day got over. Nupur still hadn't asked mayu for the party. Mayu was about to go home but nupur stopped him.

N: mayank ek minute ruko.....mujhe kuch baat karni hai.....

M: kya baat hai nupur jaldi bolo......mujhe ghar jaa kar padhaai karni hai..

N: woh....mujhe poochna tha...woh.......tum yahi ruko main do minute mein aayi.

She ran to the washroom. Mayank looked at her confusingly. She stood in front of mirror.

N: by god nupur kya ho raha hai tujhe? Tu mayank ko pooch kyu nahi paa rahi?kal itni practice ki par ab isse dekhte hi saare dialogues bhul gayi...kitni mehnat se dialogue banaaya tha......kya tha woh.....haan 'Mayank, my Mr.Timetable, kya tum apne precious timetable mein se mere liye 30 minutes nikaal sakte ho? Please apni iss nayi friend ke saath party mein chalo.' Okay......jo bhi ho main mayank ko manaa loongi.

Nupur went out after finally deciding she'll go & tell come what may. Just than sam came there & dashed with her.

S: sorry.....

N: by god sam.....tum rajdhaani express bankar kahaa jaa rahe ho? Itni jor se koi takraata hai kya? Agar meri koi haddi toot jaati toh main aaj mayank ke saath dance kaise karti?

S: sorry woh benji mera murder karne ki koshish kar raha hai aur main aaj raat ki party tak khud ko bachaane ki koshish kar raha hu warna chashmish ke saath dance kaun karega?

N: chashmish?

S: haan woh gunjan.....woh akeli ho jaayegi na....

N(teasing him): tumhe bahut fikar hai meri behen ki?

S(winking at her): kyunki tum aaj kal mere bhai ke saath bahut busy ho gayi ho na....

N(nervously): woh.....aisi koi baat nahi...hum dono toh sirf dost hai......

S: main aur chashmish bhi sirf dost hai......par chashmish ko kuch buri nazar se bachaane ke liye uske saath rehna padhega.

N: thanks sam....tumhaare jaise dost gunjan ke saath hai isliye ab mujhe zyaada pareshaani nahi hogi......

S: par mayank ka kya hua???tumne usse baat ki?woh party mein aa raha hai na?

N: nahi maine abhi tak nahi poocha......tumhaara bhai toh Mocambo se bhi dangerous hai.....

S: mocambo?

N: haan Mocambo.....Mr.India nahi dekhi kya??? 'Mocambo khush hua haha'....by god usse dekhkar samajhta nahi woh mocambo hai ya hitler.....par don't worry main bhi nupur hu....usse aaj party mein aana hi hoga.......main jaakar usse baat karti hu....pata nahi uske kitne minutes waste kar diye maine...

S(winking at her): all the best.

N: thanks.

Nupur went to mayu. He was still waiting for her.

N: mayank.....woh mujhe poochna tha....kya tum

M: aaj ki party mein aaoga?yeh hi poochna tha na?

N: haan tumhe kaise pata???

M: HOW COULD YOU NUPUR????NAHI MAIN TUM JAISI LADKI KE SAATH KABHI KAHI NAHI JAOGA!!!!!

Nupur looked at his face flashed with anger. She could even see hurt in his eyes. From behind she saw RV passed by giving her a big wicked smile. She understood RV had brainwashed mayank.

Sorry for the delay....Will try updating soon.....

I'm not satisfied with this part....I feel something is missing.....Anyways you all read & comment......

P.S: I'm short listing the PM list to those who read this ff......If anyone is not receiving please let me know so that I can add....😊

Please comment/criticize.....😳

Edited by pinky_5 - 15 years ago
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pinkey well thanks kaho ya nahi but thanks for updating and for making me smile.....giving a wonderfull night by writing this update
now whats going between sheena i think rv have some plan in his mind na........
and nupur reheaseld and now she is nervous yaar very well wriiten i can imagine nupur's face too...
and now maynk or flower lagta hai nupur ka kuch effect ho gaya hai .........
and nupur jealous wow yaar...
nupur ko truely gussa karna nahi aata
yaar kitni sweet hai vassie aj kal muje bhi ranveer aat ahai dreams main but yaar..........nupur ke liye to mein ranveer ko chod sakti hoon
sarri soch per pani fake diya kaha mein dremas mein kho gayi or maynk sirf usse biology study ke liye flowers laya tha shit yaar......
but so sweet too.........
and gunjan yaar what's going on .......lagta hai vo nerd us flowers se hurt ho gaya i mean cupid of love......
and now same pinch

pinkey hats off to you
yaar i feel jaise three idiots mein vo aamir ko salam kartien they vassie i will salute you but yaar shit i can't do this na...but jaddu ki jappi.....yaar itna mast update hai mera dil khush ho gaya
lovley update
and name oh god i can't stop laughing
but i hatts of to you for writing this part "dosto mein meri duniya basti hai.......pinkey i thank god for giving me you faria,tapoor ,jenni and everybody who make me special
wow yaar mocamboo i just miss this and everything is perfect pinkey ya the missing think was maynk's lovley eyelock but ya i know in next update you will fullfill my this wish too.........
but yaar this fight how this will end i don't think now maynk will come to party .....
pinkey do something to help nupur .............plz
or yaar one question "kya next update may kiss bhi hoga kya"
sorry silly question 😊
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww...Mayu bringing roses for her was so sweet!!!

Sam-Gun were also damnnn cute! and tat nerd is actually funny..:P

I simply HATE RV!! Ugggh!!

It was a nice part..cont soon! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow wonderful part loved it continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pinky fab part
i was so happy seing ur pm
enjoyed the part
please continue soon
eager to know next
loved mayur parts
really cherishing old mjht trough ur ff
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update plz cont soon and thx for the pm

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