My FF for die hard fans of Tasha!!!!updtd pg 3&5.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Friday episode

Well guys the LTL forum has go amazing fans and such wonderful topics. This is my small gesture in the form of FF to all those who love LTL. with the super duper twist of the vehicle tumbling down the hill here goes my prediction????.

Baji comes running near the cliff and there is no sign of the vehicle. He shouts with agony Bhau- Dhutta bhau where are you? He is shocked and tears are rolling down his eyes- he is shouting- I cant live without you bhau-----

Behind him comes BAbi with a shocked expression saying "Nakku NAkku"

Baji looks with a blank face at ABbi and hold her and cries "Masi-"

Sethji is crying and the scene freezes there.

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Nakku opens her eyes and looks around in aconfused state. She gets flashes of the vehicle falling down. Suddenly she shouts "Sahib" She looks around shaking and there is no sight of Dutta.

She is trying to get up but he rleg is caught in between a branch of a tree and the ground. She lifts it up slowly, she is bruised and slowly looks around.

In the far sight she can see the vehicle in an upside position. She is not able to walk but musters allt he strength and goes near the vehicle and is astonished to see inside Dutta unconscious or???..(Guys this all we would get to watch on Monday but I want to proceed further)

She shouts Sahib sahib and tries to open the door but she is not able to do so. She goes to the rear door from which she was thrown out andtries to get in.

She can only see one aprt of Dutta this side, a chain popping from his pocket. She realsies it is the chain she has given to Dutta.

She pulls the chain out- takes the locket on which Bappa is there and she questions "Bappa aaj hamara sahib ko kuch hua tho I will not live- so its your duty to save two lives" Tears are rolling down and she tries to pull Dutta's hand but the chain is in her hand so she puts the chain on her neck-(So guys the MS is back to the sherni).

She is shouting sahib- sahib- and tries hard to pull him out- She manages to pull him halfway but the seat is obstructing her to do so.

She helplessly looks out and with the help of a big branch she somehow pushes the seat back and Dutta falls outside- His head seems to be hurt and lying inconscious.

She tries to hear his heartbeat and in tension she doesn't know if it is beating or not. She falls on his chest crying "Sahib aap mujhe chodke nahi ja sakthe" She hears some bell sound and looks up.

A bit far away there seems to be a temple. She gets up and wonders if she can pull him there but she cant move him. So she elaves him there and runs towards the temple for some help. On the way she comes across a holy man and he is surprised to see her. She requests him to help her and tkes him to Dutta. He sprinkles water from his vessel on Dutta and puts some tulasi water. No response from Dutta/ He looks at his pulse and says- There is a feeble pulse- let us take him to the temple- we might find some help-

Bot of them with great difficulty take him to the shiv mandir. As they go the pujai is closing the temple to go. They stop him and they make Dutta sleep on the floor. The pujari gets some cloth and cleans the wound on the head and applies some haldi and says "I think his head is hurt- he might regain consciousness shortly" He says he is leaving to go on top where he lives and he will get some medical aid from top the next day morning"

Nakku says "Why cant we take him now"

The pujari says he cmes to this temple every day only for some time as it s a very old powerful temple and nobody comes here. There is no conveyance from her and ne has to go by foot and that Dutta cannot move now he has to rest for the night. He promises he will be there by the next day morning. He asks if he has to convey to anybody and aks her to give any contact nymber. She has no idea of Dutta's family numbers.

He tells her that Diya will glow and there is nothing to be frightened about. He gives her some oil to apply to Dutta and some fruits to eat.

They leave.

Nakku is looking helplessly at Dutta and goes to shiv idol and prays to the god.

She rings the bell and suddenly Dutta opens his eyes . Nakku sees this and runs to him and he looks at her with blank face.

Nakku says "Sahib sahib" an dhe agin dozes back. She puts some water in his mouth and she massages his foot with the oil. His legs move with her touch and she is happy with the response.

His eyes are closed and he slowly says "Nakku please get down- listen to me"

Nakku realsies he is talking about the incident and says "Sahib open your eyes- IAm fine"

Dutta doesn't open his eyes and gets back to sleep.

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Baji and his group are frantically searching with torch lights. The gang says "Saab we cannot go further in the jungle at this hour- Lets start again in the morning"

Baji gets angry and shouts they cannot stop searching.

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swati2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing.........u made my day........ continue soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow you have written it beautifully.Please continue ASAP.
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Thanks for the FF. Very well written.....👏

please do continue😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyyyyy really nicely written...

Good work..👍🏼👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey really good start just love it....pls upload asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
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(Guys this all we would get to watch on Monday but I want to proceed further)..so true!!! 🤣

yay MS back in sherni's neck!!balle balle!!

amazing work sarala...it had a realistic touch..thats what i loved about ur FF..great going ya!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great fic plz continue soon will be w8ing
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Luved it!!!!
plz continue ...............
plz pm me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey !!u write beautifully!!! 👍🏼

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