Love beyond eternity..Shravan and Sachi updt pg85

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I'm gonna write a small fan fic on Shravan and Sachi..

It starts with Shravan in his room thinking how to break up with Sachi..

He calls Tara..
Tara:Shravan,I am busy.
Shravan:Main tumse bauhot zaroori baat karna chahta hoon..please,abhi milo at Cafe hill top.
Tara:Shravan,I can't..may be some other day..
Shravan:Please,Tara maan jao..
Tara:Ok,fine..I will come.
Shravan:Thanks..bye!

Sachi's jijaji wants to take the sister in law's out for dinner..Everbody is going to Cafe Hill top..

Shravan was sitting on a table,waiting eagerly for Tara..He was desperate to tell her that he loves her and wants to marry her. He was excited and nervous..his right leg shacking badly and his eyes constantly on his watch and the entrance.He was hoping that nothing goes wrong this time and he is able to tell her. He was checking the ring in his pocket..it was there.
'Tara ,jaldi aa jao..'..he said to himself..



Bhabhi,Sachi,Shreya,Sachi's brother and Jijaji were getting inside Taxi..
Sachi was wearing a beautiful pink anarkali suit with golden border..
Jijaji to Sachi:Sachi,main apna wallet ghar par bhool gaya..tum le aao..
Sachi:Par Jijaji,Taxi aa gayi hai..
Sachi was nervous infront of him.She had a bad feeling about this.
But she nodded and went inside.Jijaji gave an evil grin.
Sachi's elder sister:Sachi kahan ja rahi hai?
Jijaji:woh kuch bhool gayi hai,wahi lene ja rahi hai..
Sachi's elder sister:but Taxi aa gayi hai,hum wait bhi to nahi karte hain taxi waale..
Jijaji:haan,yeh toh hai..waise bhi hum sab fit nahi honge ek Taxi mein..tum log jao..main Sachi ko lekar doosri Taxi mein aata hoon..
Sachi's elder sister:par..tum?main rook jati hoon..
Jijaji:Nahi,tum chalo..ma se daat nahi khani mujhe ki do ladkiyon ko akele he chod diya..
Sachi's elder sister nodded and left with the others.
Sachi returned with his wallet..
She was shocked to see everybody gone.A familiar fear started gripping her and her hands started to tremble. She saw Jijaji standing alone and smiling at her.She gulped. Her first instinct was to turn back and leave..but too late Jijaji was coming towards her.
The more he moved forward the more it scared her..
She was praying for a miracle..
Jijaji stood in front of her staring at her as if he was scanning her..
She looked down nervously..
"arre Sachi beta..",came a male voice from behind.
Sachi quickly turned around and saw Mamaji coming towards her. She breathed a sigh of relief.
she smiled at him. Jijaji frowned and quickly changed the way he was staring at her.
Mamaji:Arre,beta mujhe laga tum sab chale gaye honge toh main Sachi ko chod doon..
Jijaji:Nahi papa,main Sachi ki hi wait kar raha tha..
Sachi was uncomfortable again.
Mamaji:acha,yeh toh bauhot acchi baat hai,chalo main tum dono ko chod deta hoon..
Jijaji:arre nahi papa,iski kya zaroorat hai..main le jaunga Sachi ko..
Mamaji:Nahi beta,mujhe zara us taraf kaam hai..toh main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon..
Jijaji frowned and his eyes reflected deep anger.
SAchi thanked God silently.
In the Taxi,Sachi sat with mamaji while jijaji sat in the front seat.

In the Cafe..Tara entered..with frustration on her face.
She looked at the sky,it looked as if it was going to rain.
Shravan stared and smiled at her.
Tara:andar chalo,mujhe lagta hai baarish hone waali hai..
Shravan:haan..haan..chalo..

Behind them Sachi's family entered the Cafe..

Tara and Shravan were seated in a corner with a beautiful view of the sky...
Shravan:Tara,main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon..
Tara:Kaho..but jaldi kaho mere paas time nahi hai
Shravan:Tara main..main....tumse ..pata nahi kabse..par..
Tara:Shravan,tum jaldi bologe..
Shravan:Tara,I..I..kaise kahoon.....
He pulled out a ring and there a strong thunder in the sky..
He went down on his knees and looked deeply into her eyes which reflected surprise..and held her hand with one and pulled out a ring with another..
Shravan:Tara,main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon..will you marry me?

Sachi got out of the van and looked at the sky.A small drop fell on her eyes..she wiped it and stared again at the sky.She felt strange..she felt as if the rain was telling her something..something was wrong..she shouldn't be here..And that very thought it started raining with full force and all the wind started to blow wildly..She quickly waved to Mamaji and ran inside the Cafe with one hand over her head...She was almost wet..Jijaji followed her..
She searched for her family.. and couldn't find them but she could her Jijaji staring at her with anger..
She quickly walked towards the Ladies room..and then she saw somebody familiar..
She walked towards the table and smiled..

Tara: Shravan,I'm sorry..main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti..
She looked sympathetic and shocked..
Shravan:Par,Tara main tumse baohut pyaar karta hoon..
Tara:Shravan,pyaar to main karti hoon tumse but sirf pyaar ke sahare hum zindagi nahi jee sakte..look at yourself..tum ekdum clueless ho apne future ke baare mein..I mean how do you plan to support me? aur main apni padai poori karna chahti hoon..
Shravan:Par,Tara agar tum mujhse shaadi nahi karogi to mere ghar waale meri shaadi Sachi se kardenge..
Tara looked at him in an annoying manner.
Tara:ok,main tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hoon but ek saal baad..
Shravan looked at her with a sinking feeling..
he sighed and looked at her..

Sachi's smile faded away..she stood transfixed in her place and looked at the familiar figure..She felt her heart bleeding..her head felt heavy and a pain in her chest.

A tear fell down her cheek..

Shravan looked straight ahead of him and saw Sachi standing there with tears in her eyes.

His whole world collapsed in that second. He felt a pain in his heart when he saw her crying,he felt a wave in his stomach and stood up.

Sachi stared with tears in her eyes..'It was over now..her life was a curse',she thought.

Tara looked at Shravan's expressions and followed his eyes.

She looked puzzled.

Tara:Shravan..shravan'

She kept saying but he didn't hear her.She shaked him.

Shravan came back to his senses..

Shravan looked from Sachi to Tara..

Sachi turned around and ran away from the caf. She ran out in the open,it was almost a storm'

The nature reflected how she felt..

Note: List of all parts on Page 42

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Very lovely update.Plzzz write next part soon.I'm really waiting for it.
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Hey this was just awesome..nicely written..continue soon..
..I'm really waiting for the next part..loved it..BTW what's your name?

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Thank you everybody😃😃😃😃
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Jijaji saw Sachi running and tried to run after her but his wife called him just in time.

He cursed her and faked a smile.

Shreya:Jiju,SAchi kahan hai??

Jijaji:Sachi,abhi abhi bahar gayi hai..

Shreya:itni bearish main?

Jijaji:Haan,main bhi yehi soch raha tha,itne main tumne bula liya..

Shreya:Toh Jiju aap unke peeche kyon nahi gaye?

Sachi's brother: Main dekhta hoon..

He went running outside and saw nobody except wind blowing with high speed and rain..

"Sachi..Sachi…",he called out but no response.

Shravan looked at Tara and her eyes questioned him.

Tara:Shrava.kya hua? Do you know her?

Shravan: No..I mean haan..issi se toh mere gharwale meri shaadi karna chahte hain..

Tara(now rolling her eyes):isse? Shravan,tumne use dekha hai..ab use abhi pata chal gaya tum kisse pyaar karte ho..ab to khud he tumhara rishta toot jayega? Aur tum apne gharwaalon ko bata dena kit um mujhse pyaar karte ho..

Shravan still felt the pain. He felt guilty..

Shravan:Tara,mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai for her..

Tara:bura kis baat ka shravan,use ek din to pata lagna than na?

Shravan:haan,par aise?

Tara:Chodo usko,tum apne gharwalon ko bata do..

Shravan nodded and smiled. He told himself that she will be fine.

Shravan decided to call her and appologise.

Tara:ok,ab main chalti hoon.Take care ok?

Shravan smiled and hugged her goodbye.

He called Sachi's home.

Mami:Hello

Shravan:Namaste,main Shravan bol raha hoon. Aunty kya sachi ghar par hai?

Mami:Namaste beta!Kaise ho? Sachi toh ghar par nahi hai,woh sab bacche Caf Hill top gaye hain dinner ke liye.

Shravan thought she might be with them.

He started roaming in the restaurant. He was careful not to be seen by her family.

Shravan:Ok,aunty. Thank you.

Mami:koi zaroori kaam tha?

Shravan:nahi mami..woh main baad mein call karta hoon.Bye.

Mami giggled.

Shravan checked the whole restaurant but couldn't find her.

Her brother was standing on the entrance and calling her name. He ran towards him.

"Arre Shravan tum yahan?",He said.

"Haan,main doston ke saath aya tha..aap kisi ka wait kar rahe hain,"Shravan asked.

"Arre nahi,who Sachi kahin chali gayi hai..yeh ladki bhi na..itni bearish mein pata nahi kahan chali gayi..,"Her brother said.

Shravan felt more guilty..

"Chaliye,main help karta hoon..,"He offered.

Both guys went in different directions calling her name.

Shravan cursed himself for saying yes for their wedding.

He ran from one place to another calling out her name.

Sachi was sitting on the stairs of the mandir. She cried uncontrollably.

She was wet..She leaned on the grill next to her.

Shravan asked a tea vendor nearby about Sachi.

He said she went towards the mandir.

Shravan thanked him and ran towards the temple.

He prayed for Sachi to be all right.

A tree fell behind him from the storm..he hurried up the stairs. Sachi was crying..

Shravan saw her sitting beside the grill and thanked God she was ok. He felt somewhat relieved.

"Sachi..Sachi..",He shouted at her angrily.

She looked at him with a terrible pain in her eyes..

Shravan:Tum pagal ho gayi ho? Itni baarish mein akele kahin bhi..kuch ho jata to?

Sachi:Toh mami ke sar se ek bhoj kam ho jata..sabki life asaan ho jati…

Shravan:Sachi,bhoj kam nahi hota..socho unhe kaisa lagta jab unhe pata chalta ki tumhe kuch ho gaya?

Sachi: Aap yeh sab baatein na he karein toh accha hai..please,chale jao yahan se..akele chod dijiye mujhe..

Shravan was hurt and he wanted to console her.He felt a deep searing pain when he saw her cry.

Sachi was crying badly.

Shravan held her by the shoulders and turned her towards himself.

Sachi looked at him angrily and freed herself from his grip.

Sachi:Kaha tha na maine apse,aapka jo bhi jawab hai please bata dijiye..kyun shravan aapne meri umeedein badai? Kyon nahi kaha ki aap kisi aur se pyaar karte hain? Kyun?

Maine waise he bahut kuch saha hai,ek aur rejection seh leti main,par yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi shravan? Kya milla aapko mere dil se khel kar?kya mila mere gharwaalon ki umeedon se khel kar? Aapko pata hai,jab ek ladki 25 baar reject hoti hai to us par kya beetti hai? Aapko kuch nahi pata..kaise pata hoga,aap toh ek ladke hain..aapse koi kuch nahi kahega..Shravan,agar aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte the phir kyun kiya yeh sab?

Shravan was staring at her silently. He had never seen her so angry. He realized that it was a mistake to say yes..he had only thought about himself,and he always has been thinking about himself. He had hurt her feelings..He never thought it could have been so serious..that it would hurt her so much..

Sachi started to leave.

Shravan: I'm sorry Sachi,mujhse nahi pata tha ek ladki ke liye haan ka kya matlab hota hai..main sirf apne bare mein soch raha tha..par jab tumne mujhe bataya ki tum par kya beeti hai,toh main tumhe hurt nahi karma chahta tha..main un ghatia ladko ki list mein nahi hona chahta tha..

Sachi: Par Shravan aapne mujhe hurt kiya hai..aur un sab ladko ke kahin zyada..

Shravan: Sachi,mera yakin mano mera irada tumhe hurt karne ka nahi tha..par..par..ye sab ghalti se ho gaya..maine tumhe batane ki bahut koshish ki thi magar har baar kuch aur ho jata tha..yaad hai jab main khidki se tumhare ghar aaya tha tab main I love you kehne nahi aaya tha,main Tara ke baare mein batane aaya tha…aur restaurant mein bhi maine who sab Tara ke liye kiya tha par tum aa gayi…

Sachi didn't say anything but she kept walking down the stairs..

Shravan looked at her and felt guilty.

The rain and the wind were getting dangerous ..Sachi's leg twisted and she fell down the stairs..

She screamed and Shravan ran after her..

Her head hit the tree that had fallen behind Shravan..

"Sachi..sachi..iske sar se toh khoon nikal raha hai..sachi,please aankein kholo..utho..sachi..",Shravan was saying holding her in his arms. Her head was bleeding.

Sachi was unconscious.

Shravan called an ambulance.

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Hi sona..me soma 😆
Great update..loved it yaar..plz continue soon..



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Awesome part. Just loved it. Please continue soon.
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: O Suspenseful! :)
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