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A girl tries to get in an overcrowded bus but she is unsuccessful because of constant pushes from behind so she waits .
a boy who is at a little distance sees this n goes n helps her get in the bus.
girl thanks the boy through her eyes boy accepts it n smiles
then inside the bus there is no seat for the girl so she stands
there is one man siting n he is constantly staring at the girl
she feels very uncomfortable
this is all being watched by the boy he goes next to that mans seat and tells him oh uncle aap ko sharm nahi ati kya ! the man is confused n asks him what is ur problem then the boys says aap ko padna nahi ata kya ???????? the man gets irritated boy continues jab itne bade akshar mein likha hai for ladies then how come ur sitting here when the girl is standing at this the man is all embarrased n gets up immediately n lets the girl sit then the girl sits n thanks the boy who smiles.
the boy is sitting at the next seat behind the girl
he starts the convo by saying hi n introduces him as mayank
girl - hi i m nupur she starts with thanks for the help n all the but mayank stops her by saying no need to thanks
then both just smile at each other
then the bus stops both of them get down n wish each other bye
nice meeting u n all stuff



ok sorry guys i was getting bored so wrote this
please forgive me if u find it nonsense cause its my first os
its just an experience that i thought of sharing
nope not mine but one of my friend when she told me i found so filmy n just imagined mayank n nupur so just wrote this hope not bugged anyone

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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's very nice sweetie! I loved it!
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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itz sweet kirti...well,i thought it wud go more...newayz,loved it.
nething looks god on mayur....


P.S.loved ur dp.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks all u pressed the like tab n those who commented
i m so happy u people really liked it 😊
thanks guys 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice....
I know its an OS but Pls continue this na...
Edited by mjhtnupurmayank - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice os dear...
pls continue it...
stuti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was lovely dear ..............you wrote it really well .........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nyc one dera!!
u wrote well !!
pebz😉

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