Dill Mill Gayye Open ff (PART2 PG :08{02/08})

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KashArshlover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Sameera And Hima!!
Awesome work Guys!!!! I mean its a wonderful idea and will also help the new writers to gain some experience...
Sam!!!! I must say idea dhamakedar hai...Bohat maza aye gaa...i cant wait to see different twist and turns you people are going to create for AR-SR-AS . I so cant wait to read the first part....Is open ff se ek faida to hoga atleast humay updates k liye zyaada intezaar nahi karna pare gaa aur hum readers kisi ek writer ka dimagh nahi khaein gay.... After all har part ki composition ek different dimaagh kare gaa...😆
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So, sameera you are going to post the first part!!!! Hmmm interesting dekhte hain suspense aur ansoon queen kya likhti hai???? i am so excited to read the first part...Plzz sameera continue soon and hima!!! make her update fast yaar!!!!

Luv,
Kaajal⭐️

Edited by kash_lover_21 - 15 years ago

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Hima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

hehehe Kaajal .. Now its really a high time to keep our predictions into

action yaar .. hum bhi kam nahi hei DMG ki CV's sei ..

what say 🤣

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teenorchid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

samira u write the first part

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Alright!!!! I am writing the first part....😊

Edited by sameera_12 - 15 years ago

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi Guys!!!!!
As DMG started with AR so, i am writing the first part on AR...

"Kisi ki zindagii mein pyaar kum par jata hai aur kisi ki zindagii mein pyaar ka saath...." A sad tear escaped his eye...

"Hhhh... Khushnaseeb hogi wo ladki jisse tum chaho gay..." she tried to console him...

"Huh!!! wo ladki...bus ek khawab tha...jo ankh khulne se pehle he toot gaya..." He said wiping away his tears which made her cry...

"Jaante ho ???? Pehli baar tumse milne k baad.... mein saara waqt yehi sochti rahi k akhir tum ne meri madad kyun ki???? Jo baat meine kabhi apni kisi dost se bhi share nahi ki wo baat ek ajnabi se meine kyun kahi????? "

Pause

"Its strange naa???? Hum jab bhi kisi problem mein hote hain khud ba khud he ek doosre k saamne a jaate hain...." She smiled a little...

"To??? aj tum kis problem mein ho????" he asked changing the topic...

"Rehne do... mujhe laga tha k mera problem he sab se bara hai par tum to mujhse bhi bari problem mein ho....Jab dil toot ta hai to kaisa lagta hai mein is baat ka andaaza bhi nahi laga sakti..." she said looking deep in his eyes...

"Tum humaisha meri problems solve karti honaa.... to batao.. meri iss problem ka kya solution hai????" he asked...

"Solution???? wo to tab dun gii naa jab tum mujhe poori problem batao gay...akhir aisa kya hua tumhare aur uss ladki k beech???" she asked softly...

"You know.... insaan apni zindagii mein kabhi na kabhi koi na koi aisa khwab zaroor dekhta hai jis kay such hone ki usse sab se zyaada khwahish hoti hai....Mein wo khwab kabhi nahi dekhna chahta tha...par pata nahi kab kaise mein apne app ko rok nahi paya...." he said looking at her...

"Par wo ladki kaun hai????" she asked ..

"Kaha na khwab hai..." he again said...

"Ufff!!!! yaani ladki hai he nahi hoi???? phir problem kya hai????" she asked pouting...😉

"Problem yeh hai k mere mom dad jis se meri shaadi karwana chahte hain mein uss se shaadi nahi karna chahta... Ab unhun ne mere saamne shart rakhi hai k ya to mein ussi ladki se shaadi karun ya phir mein khud ek achi ladki pasand kar k do din k ander un k saamne laoon..." he explained his problem...
"Oh... yaani you are waiting for your dream girl aur dream girl abhi tak mili nahi hai...right!!!!!" she asked...

"Yeah right!!!!! Ab mein do din mein kaise decide karun k mujhe zindagii kis k saath aur kaise guzarni hai?????" he gave her a questioning look.

"Aur mujhe laga tha k tum kisi se pyaar karte ho aur tumhara dil toot gaya hai.... kitni emotional baatein karte ho???? mujhe bhi rula diya..." she frowned....

He laughed again and then asked...."Acha tum batao k tumhari kya problem hai ajj????"

"Meri problem yeh hai k mujhe apna fashion designing ka corse karne k liye fees deni hai aur mein kisi ka ehsaan nahi lena chahti...Lekin agar mein fees de dun gii to phir mere pass rehne k liye koi jagah nahi hogi...." she told him her problem...

"Oh.... ab do din mein to koi job milne se raha aur agar mein offer karun paise ya job ki to tumhe kisi ka ehsaan nahi chahiye..." He said what he felt...

"Yeah right!!!!! Mujhe samajh nahi a raha k kya karun????" she said droping a stone in the pond...

Armaan Mallik was the son of the most richest business man in India Billy Mallik... Armaan was his only son and was quite sensible and simple...he gives respect to others because he belives izzat do gay to izzat mile gii.....Everything was perfect in his life till he met her...

The very first day of his office, He met with a car accident in order to save a child...thankfully everything was fine, he was turning to go when someones dupatta came flying and landed on him... he didnt knew it was her essense or something else which made him go crazy....

It was an unexpressible feeling for him, he didnt know that it was his good luck that from that day he unknownly started dreaming of his dream girl or his bad luck that he didnt even saw her....Just a feeling and nothing else was there so how can he tell his parents about it?????

Riddhima Gupta!!! A very sweet and innocent girl, her parents died 5 years back and today whatever she was, was just because of her hard work and determination... She never accepted anyones sampathy...

It was her luck that when she was feeling very lonely and was stuck in a great big problem when she bumped into a guy who was also looking tensed...

It was first time when Armaan and Riddhima met.... Sometimes people talk to strangers because they know strangers can't hurt them or harm them...They both were shocked when thay find eachother's problem's solution...
"I guess hum shayad miley he isliye thai k hum ek doosre ki problem solve kar sakein..." he said with a smile on his face....
"I guess you are Right!!!!" she said smiling back...
"Hi!!!! I am Armaan Mallik!!!!" he extended his hand...
"Hi!!! i am Riddhima Gupta!!!" and they both shaked hands....
It was from then onwards that When ever they both are in a problem they used to meet at the same place and its a coincidence that they always get into trouble at the same time...

"Abay kya yaar hum do ghante se yahan bethe hain aur kuch solution nahi mila...." said an irritated Armaan....
"Ab kya kar sakte hain agar aj hum donow ka he badluck hai to...." said Riddhima raising her sholders....
"Waise tumhe to ek aisi ladki ki zaroorat hai jo tumhari situation samajh sake aur agay ja kar tumhare liya masla na bane... i mean agar zindagii k kisi mor par tumhe tumhara pyaar mil jaye to you must be free to go where your heart will take you..." she said...

"Wow!!! kya solution diya hai...."Armaan clapped sarcastically...
"Kahan mile gi mujhe aisi ladki do din k ander???? huh???" He asked with a frown...👏

"Wo mujhe nahi pata bus mujhe jo soojha meine bol diya...." she said pouting...

"Oh... aise agar problem solve karni hai to tumhara bhi problem solve kiye deta hun... tum ek kaam karo tum kisi se shaadi kar lo... fees tum dedena aur rehne k liye ghar free mein mil jaye gaa..." he laughed out loud...

"Very Funny!!!!! Shutup!!! " she glared at him....

"Acha chalo yeh choro pichle ek maheene mein hum friends to ban he gaye hain...isliye ajj hum saath mein apna bad luck celebrate karte hain..." saying so he stood up...
"W..wh..what???? tum pagal ho gaye ho kya????" she asked looking at him with widen eyes...
"Dekho...abhi hum saath hain...khush hain... kal pata nahi hum kis tension mein ho???? kya pata hum phir miley na miley???? so lets enjoy this momemt..." saying so he extended his hand towards her which she grabbed and stood up...

They both started walking towards an unknown place....

"Hey tumne life mein kabhi kisi ki cycle churai hai????" she asked smiling mischiviously...

"Cycle???? cycle chori kar k humay kya miley gaa????" he asked folding his hands...

"Uff...you know tum problems mein kyun phaste ho???? kyunki tum bohat boring ho...kabhi masti maza try nahi kiya????" she raised her eyebrow...

"Nahi!!!! Lekin pagalpan zaroor try kiya hai...would you like to try????" he asked in a challanging way...

"Why not..." she accepted....

They were walking when Armaan saw some people....
"Dekhna...in mein se jo bhi mujhse miley gaa wo mujhe pagal kahe gaa..."

"Kya???? lekin kyun????" she asked with a confused look....

"Bus dekhti jao...." saying so he walked forward....

"Oh..sorry!!!!!" said a person who just bumped into him...

"Arre sorry ki kya baat hai???? tumhe to adaat hai takraane ki..." saying so he hugged him tightly...

"Arre hatto...ajeeb pagal hai..." the person ran away and riddhima burst out laughing.....

In just 15 minutes 10 people passed by saying "yeh admi waqai pagal hai...pagal khane se bhaag kar aya hai...."

"Now your trun..." said Armaan...

"Lekin mein yeh kaise?????" she looked uncomfortable...

"Dont worry tumhe yeh nahi karna....tumhe sirf un paanch ladkon ko bhagana hai jo iss waqt tumhe tarr rahe hain..." said Armaan pointing towards a gang...

"Ummm are you sure i can do it????" she asked with a hesitation...

"Be confident yaar..." he said....

Now riddhima started walking and that gang followed her....

"Hi kahan ja rahi ho????" a guy tried to tease her..

"Arre app !!!!! app a gaye.... chaliye mein ap he ko dhoond rahi thi...Kahan thai app????" Riddhima grabbed his hand...

"Arre yeh ladki kya pagal hai????" the other guy said...

"Chup mujhe pagal bola...." Riddhima hit him with her sandal...
"Mujhe sandal mari???? mein tujhe chorun gaa nahi...." The person try to pull her towards him and the situation became serious but right at that moment Armaan came and said...."Arre tum yaha kahan se agai????"

"Bhai sahab maaf karna yeh pagal khane se bhaag kar i hai...." Armaan tried to save her....

"Jahan se bhi i hai ab bach kar kahan jaye gii?????" one of the guy smirked...

"You see latoon k bhoot bataon se nahi maante...." nsaying so Armaan punched him hard and all others ran away....

"Sorry!!!! thoda zyada ho gay..." He apologized to Riddhima...
"Chhh choro humara badluck to waise he chal raha hai..." said Riddhima...

Alright!!! i am ending the first part here... i think from here anybody can give different twist and turns to change thjs story as they like....I think enough options are there....
Hopefully pasand aya hoga...actually bohat jaldi mein likha hai bagair sochay...jo type karte hua dimagh mein aya likh diya...I know part thoda chota hai but i don't want to get blamed that i didnt left enough options for others...so kaafi saare option diye hai ,,, Agay jo jaisa chahe story ko ek naya mor de sakta hai..

And yeah its not necessary but if anyone wants to use these divider siggies in further parts...feel free to use aur agar kisi ko title siggi mein help chahiye ho to feel free to pm me...

Now someone else please continue from here...

Waiting to see your response ...
Love,
Sameera
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Edited by sameera_12 - 15 years ago

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Hima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Yes .. Yes .. 'm continuing Ur fab. part with my comment yaar lolzz

But seriously an awesome n yet different start Sam .. Must say!!!

Both AR r at different problems .. seems damn interesting yaar

N there Pagal - pan n Masti is Soo full of fun .

'm just loving this start ...

Early waiting how this story goes in future ..

TaKeCaRe Yaar LoTs Of LoVe

Edited by k_anjali12 - 15 years ago

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: k_anjali12
Yes .. Yes .. 'm continuing Ur fab. part with my comment yaar lolzz

But seriously an awesome n yet different start Sam .. Must say!!!

Both AR r at different problems .. seems damn interesting yaar

N there Pagal - pan n Masti is Soo full of fun .

'm just loving this start ...

Early waiting how this story goes in future ..

TaKeCaRe Yaar LoTs Of LoVe

Yeh kya hai??? 😲Mein behosh ho jaoon gii...itni jaldi comment.....😆😲
Anyways...Thankyou so muxh... i am glad you like it...so you don't u continue???? kuch tum bhi kabhi try karo...😉

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Hima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Yeh kya hai??? 😲Mein behosh ho jaoon gii...itni jaldi comment.....😆😲
Anyways...Thankyou so muxh... i am glad you like it...so you don't u continue???? kuch tum bhi kabhi try karo...😉

R u fine na' .. not fainted right!! after seeing my sooo early comment
😆
N moreover how can I be late this time yaar .. never heheh .. me .. continuing ... hmm .. hmm .. lets see ..

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Sameera

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: k_anjali12

R u fine na' .. not fainted right!! after seeing my sooo early comment
😆
N moreover how can I be late this time yaar .. never heheh .. me .. continuing ... hmm .. hmm .. lets see ..