Entry of Karan Mallik? OS.. yikes!

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beware..this is kinda long...
Everyone is goin insane trying to tell each other how the preparations should be.. Armaan is sitting in a corner getting veryy upset at his parents for fighting in front of his friends. Billy is too busy hitting on Muskaan "baby" while Ananya is screaming from the top of her lungs telling Billy to grow up! Rahul is trying to take Muskaan away from Billy "Uncle" but Muskaan wants to make Rahul reallyyyyyyy jealous and keeps clinging on to Billy…

"tujhe kiya agar mein Billy uncle kay saath khari houn?"

"Muskaan tu abhi kay abhi wahan say hut ja warna..

"warna kiya?"

"warna main tujhe utha kay lay jaoun ga"

"array jaa..shakul dekhe hai aapne? Kese film ka villain lugta hai" muskaanz typical laugh..

"muskaaaannn"

"agar tu meray paas bhi aaya na tu tujhe jaan say maar doun gein"

"kiyaaaaa? Tu mujhe maaray ge??"

"kyoun? Tu jo baar baar mujhe chor kay chala jaata hai.baar baar mujhe maarta hai…who bhool gaya?? Salay!" Muskan in her whining tone

"aub nahi chor kay jaoun ga"

"jhoot..tujh jaisay jhoota aur kameena insaan maine aaj tuk nahi dekha"

"muskaan….main tere qasam khata houn..tujhe kabhi chor kay nahi jaoun ga"

"zaleel insaan..mere qasam kha raha hai taakay main mar jaroun"

"nahi muskaan…tu mujhe ghalat samujh rahe hai… main tera houn…serf tera..aur main aub tujhe kabhiii chor kay nahi jaaoun ga… tujh say door reh kay maine aapna sabaq seekh liya hai….nahi reh sakta teray bagaer….kabhi bhi nahi….."

Grabs muskaan and looks in her eyes

"main tenu chanda houn" (not good Punjabi….sorry)

Muskaan cries and hugs Rahul

Atul is searching for Anjali, as usual, because he hasn't seen her in 3 minutes and 13 seconds… he asks Armaan if he has seen Anjali anywhere and Armaan in his annoyed tone goes "Mujhe kiya pata yaar..yehein kahein hoge..dhoond lay…" Atul finds Anjali standing on a ladder putting flowers up on the wall..

"haila Anjali..tum ye kiya kur rahe ho?"

"Atul…mein flowers laga rahe houn" in a sarcastic tone

"magur Anjali agar tum gir gae tu mein tu tumhe utha bhi nahi sakoun ga….Armaan ko bulana paray ga…aur main nahi chahta kay meray hotay hoay koi aur mard tumhe haath lagae"

"shut up, Atul"

"achaa tum utro wahan say..main laga deta houn ye flowers"

"really Atul? Awwwww soo sweet"

Anjali gets off the ladder and holds Atulz hands

"you know atul..tum nay hamesha mera khayal rukha hai…hamesha mujhe pyaar kiya.. even jub mein tumhe itna daant dete thi..tub bhi…aur maine hamesha sub kuch kaha tum say..magur kabhi ye nahi bataya kay main bhi tumsay pyaar kurnay lage houn.."

Silence

"Atul? ATULLLL!!!!!"

Atul has fainted and lying on the ground

"uffffffff Atul..uthooooooooo… Armaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn!!!!!!!"

"kiya hoa anjali?? Meray parents ke turha kyoun shor kur rahe ho??" Arman says

"es stupid Atul ko uthao..faint hogaya hai..duffer!"

"uffff magur tum nay kaha kiya essay?" Armaan says as he tries to pick atul up

"kuch nahi!! Bus itna he kaha kay mein essay pyaar kunay lage houn"

***Shocked Armaan drops Atul back on the ground***

"ufffff tum bhiii!! Wat..mujhe kese say pyaar nahi ho sakta??"

Silence

"ARMAAN!"

"haan jaaga gaya..mein jaag kiya" Atul says, as he gets up

"shukur hai…warna tum dono ko uthanay kay leye crane bulane purti" Anjali says sarcastically and starts walking away

"aik minute Anjali…kiya tum nay such mein kaha kay tum mujh say pyaar kurnay lage ho?"

"nahi..mazak kur rahe thi..stupid..of course!!"

"OH MY GOD!! Armaan…tu nay sunna??"

"ye sunnay kay baad he tu mere bolti bund ho gae thi" Armaan says…

Anjali starts walkin away again..smiling, a little shyly.. Atul holds her hand..turns her around and gives her a biggg hug!!!

Armaan walks away smiling

While all of this is goin on… a stranger enters the house…. Armaanz back was towards the door but he felt weird…
"its not Riddhima.i know her presence..her smell…but who is this??"

Armaan turns around and

Sees himself staring back at him…

Armaan and the stranger stand face to face…speechless

Everyone around them quiets down….

Nobody utters a word..nobody can think of anything..

Silence…everywhere…..

Finally, abhi speaks up and asks this stranger who he is…. And the words that come out of stranger's mouth makes everyonez jaws drop to the ground..

"I am Billy and Ananyaz son, Karan,….Armaanz twin brother"

"I don't' have a twin brother" says Armaan finally comes back to his senses..

"ask your parents…did ur mother not give birth to two sons.."

"yes, Armaan..you had a twin brother but he died at birth..this is a lie!!" billy and Ananya scream

"this is not a lie..was your doctor, Dr. Mehta?"

"yes…that was him..he was a very kind man and when he gave us the news of our son dying, he cried with us..and helped us recover" Billy said

"he wasn't crying at your pain..he was cryin at his gain… he and his wife didn't have any kids and his wife was in deep depression…when Armaan and I were born, he thought you guys didn't need another son…he could tell you about my death and then adopt me as his son….save his wifez life and have a family…."

Silence again

"wat proof do you have??" exclaims Atul

"this….." karan hands a letter from Dr. Mehta to Billy and Ananya..but Armaan grabs it from Karan and starts reading it…. And then quietly passes it to Billy and Ananya…. It was a letter from Dr. Mehta..explaining everything to the Billy and Ananya and apologizing for keeping their son away from them for soo many years……

Everyone is quiet….all that could be heard was the clock ticking…time moving ahead as Billy and Ananya move back in time and recognize the handwriting of the same doctor that made the medical report of their sonz death…the amount of tears that were shed while holding that report, only they could remember…. The pain that pierced through their hearts was beyond control and both Billy and Ananya started leading separate lives..they loved Armaan but everytime they would see him, they would think about their dead son.. this was the reason Billy started to get involve with other girls cuz seeing Ananya and Armaan reminded him of his lost child.. thatz why Ananya kept herself busy with her kitty parties and Armaan and Billy becuz everytime she returned home, she would dream of BOTH of her sons running up to her and holding on to BOTH of her legs and kissing BOTH of her cheeks…..

Billy broke the silence…

"where is Dr. Mehta?"

"he died…..6 months ago…I was looking for you all.. I didn't believe him either until I saw Armaan..just now… we are one… yet were separated by destiny….and we are here…..united, yet again, by destiny….."

Armaan is the first one to walk up to Karan and gives him a hug…teary eyed…

"welcome to the family, Karan"

"thanks, Bhaiyya" (Karan was born a couple minutes after Armaan)

Billy and Ananya walk up to Karan in disbelief…they touch him…. Feel him… tears roll down their eyes as their heart finally meets one another….. hugging him was the best feeling in the world for Billy, Ananya, and Armaan…

This wedding united more than two ppl together.. the Mallikz brought home another family member along with Riddhima…

Karan Mallik.....

Ahh kaisa laga?? Hahah I just thought of it on my KSG and Dhamaka wali post and made an OS out of it… im not good at writing… just wrote wateva… hope u guys smiled at least ONCE during all this….

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Posted: 15 years ago
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great os
two handsome hunk in the same family 'faints"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.arsh

great os

two handsome hunk in the same family 'faints"

haha thanks...omg.....that would be the BEST epi!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_trisha

Ayeeeee...I like this!!!

hahah thanks trisha..i was soo nervous while writing this cuz im really nottt good at writing but still just kept goin..heheheh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahah why not?!?!? 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gonna read this after a while. di! aah i mis syou
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shihij07

gonna read this after a while. di! aah i mis syou

i miss u too!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haila!!!!
shooooo cute shimz........:P
i really liked it....
karan and armaan mallik!!! twinzzzzz.....oohhh!!!
im gonna faint........:)
--fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaanrox

haila!!!!

shooooo cute shimz........:P
i really liked it....
karan and armaan mallik!!! twinzzzzz.....oohhh!!!
im gonna faint........:)
--fiza

haha fiza....anything is possible in DMG...so why not go all out and make everyone happy??
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Loved it Di...🤗
Great....👍🏼👏....Really...
I really liked the way you fit Karan in the story...⭐️
Plus, do do Malliks...Wow😍....Armaan Mallik and Karan Mallik....Aisa ho gaya toh mazaa aajaye ga......

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