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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Suvarna....

Hey ... loved the way you have used steel bridges. Entire novel (Atlas Shrugged) crossed my mind - especially the moment between Franscisco and Slug as kids when she shares her dream.

Coming to the part, I liked it ... though not understanding the chemistry between anyone, including Armaan-Shashank. Well, maybe still some updates for that. Though, loved the way the characters of each were depicted in the part. The hurt on Armaan's face with cold response from Anjie, Rahul noting similarities between Armaan and Shashank.
Thanks for the PM and looking forward to next update soon. Please please please update soon.



Hello Suvarna,

Thank you very much for the comment. Those two lines are enough to flashback to Atlas Shrugged.
Chemistry or the harmony of the relationship is going to take a while to establish. This series will be little slower than the last as the scope is wide and the complexity is high.

You are welcome for the PM. Updates were slow till now but its going to pick up coming weeks.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: kashfull

woah ur really something man. i mean ur writing skills r too good, just amazing. no words to describe ur writing skills. ur a fabulous writer and i really mean it.



Hello,

Thank you very much for the comment. And many thanks for your kind words of appreciation.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey L

interesting part...Armaan is a nice guy...its good to see how rahul bonded with him. getting anjali to accept him will be a tough task
nice story
plz post the next part soon and thnx for the pm
Sur



Hello Sur,

Thank you very much for the comment. You are welcome for the PM.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: desire_20

just read the last 2 parts and they were great, i like how ur displaying each character n im really looking forward to how armaan and anjali's relationship progressses... btw why did shashank think of bringing armaan home now, after all these years? im not sure if u have already mentioned that.... neways continue soooooon



Hello,

Thank you very much for the comment. The series is going to be little slow and things are going to take a while before the complete picture is unveiled.
Every one in this story has a back story and many reasons for the things they do; just like us random people. And that makes the story a little complex as I am trying to get it as close to reality as possible.

Thanks,
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Tahmina96

im so sorry for the late comment

it seems like Anjali is looking for something in Armaan to fight and argue against him for. Like Atul said, i can't figure out why. Maybe she always thought of him to be stereotypical step brother but when he wasn't she was too egoistic to show that she was wrong or maybe she doesn't want everyone to forget about what went wrong in their family by using Armaan as the reminder...i don't knwo she is a complicated character, even Atul can't figure her out, he just know's how to handle her. I loved it, plz continue soon

tnx for the pm
Tahmina



Hello Tahmina,

Thank you very much for the comment (Its alright if its late).
Anjali is just not happy for Armaan to be there. She is reminded of things from her childhood and that makes her unhappy. Anjali is in reality not a complex character but she has a different views on things than normal. The way she interacts with Armaan is the proof of that.

Glad you liked it.

Thanks.
L.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 3: Not utilizing one's intelligence for the betterment of the society is deemed selfish?

"How is Rahul taking it?" Anjali asked Atul as they were getting ready for the day. Atul sighed. Anjali, who never bothered with the affairs of Gupta Steels unless it was annual report of balance score card, was unnaturally persistent about knowing everything that involved Armaan.

"Rahul seems to be having fun. I have never seen him this enthusiastic before. He is the only person who speaks with Armaan more than handful of words", he didn't bother hiding his jibe against his wife. She was being unfair to Armaan. Not that she would listen to him.

"Rahul needed someone of his age to play with besides Armaan is now on probation. Once Armaan gets to be one of the main players in the board, the dynamics between the two would change."

"You are awfully confident that Armaan would pass his probationary period with flying colors", Atul didn't lose an opportunity to mock his wife.

"I am not blind Atul. Armaan is intelligent. The way he speaks ' the slow drawl with a hint of detachment, the way he observes and listens to everyone before he talks and the way he presents his ideas are all signature of my grand pa; at least that's what dad said. His old job was not something a man of his age would be offered very easily. He has proved to those people and that is why he was entrusted with his job." Anjali replied.

"So you think this companionship between Armaan and Rahul is not going to last for long?"

"I don't think so Atul. Rahul is a very sensitive guy. If Armaan plays cheap political and mind games with him, Rahul would simply quit whatever he is doing and do something entirely new. You have seen him Atul. He may be sensitive but is also aggressive when it comes to getting job done. But he will not play games to cement his position in the company. He is much more than that. Whatever is the intention of dad is to bring in Armaan at this phase, no one is sure of. Like everyone else, we have to speculate. "

"Anjali you are simply assuming that Armaan is here for power and inheritance which is not true. The man doesn't give that aura. He seemed to be well grounded and genuinely nice."

"Can you guarantee that Atul?"

"I cannot."

"That's precisely the point. Armaan coming in is going to ruffle up feathers which are unwilling to be disturbed. Not to mention attract unnecessary attention", she looked at Atul pointedly.

Shashank had made sure that he had kept many of the relatives at bay. In the beginning many people seemed tried to befriend them and when Riddhima derived a correlation chart along with verifiable statistical data that the visiting of relatives directly reflected Gupta Steels market value, Shashank had laughed and told her that he always knew that.

"It is natural Riddhima to be closer to people who have power."

"Why is that? I mean whatever you have achieved is because of the work you have done and you are entitled for the entire credit. Why allow people who want to ride on your success?" Riddhima who was all of eighteen year old had questioned. It wasn't a naive question but an honest one. Shashank had laughed. Riddhima had led a sheltered life and hadn't seen intra-familial politics and rivalry.

"They aren't trying to ride on dad's success Riddhima. They want to remind him that they are around and that there would be one day they would be at our doorstep asking for our help. They are only looking for themselves Riddhima, what is wrong in that? It's a matter of survival for those small companies." Anjali had patiently explained while buttering her toast. She knew that relatives were those people who had to be entertained but never allow them to get too close. It was a sticky situation to be in.

"Has either of the two made any statement?" Atul asked Anjali who was now packing her bag for the day.

"If they had, then there would have at least a dozen reporters hanging around the Gupta steels or our outside the residence. Abhi and Nikki aren't reckless. They would behave as if dad bought a new plant. They wouldn't make a big deal out of it."

"I have to agree there. If Abhi wasn't a successful commercial actor, then he would have been an amazing entrepreneur. I am surprised if he wasn't approached about this topic. It involves his half brother after all." Atul added as an afterthought.

"Abhi has respect for dad Atul. He knows that however we deny publicly, we all acknowledge that we are family. Of course rumors have never died down since years but not many bother us as much as they bother Abhi. To an extent, I feel sorry for him. Even though he maintains a distance from us, he ends up at the receiving end of embarrassing questions", Anjali responded.

"You think dad will invite Abhi and Nikki during welcome party for Armaan?"

"I think so. Dad's principles are very intact however naively believes that every person in that party would have his or her integrity intact", Anjali replied with a scorn and walked out of the room arm in arm with Atul for breakfast.

--o00o--

It was unnaturally quiet at the breakfast table. Atul and Anjali had rushed through breakfast even before Armaan and Riddhima could join and had barely spoken dozen words to Rahul.

"How was your first week as a probie risk analyst Armaan? Must have hurt since you are kind of devalued at Gupta Steels" Riddhima was the one who started the conversation. She didn't look up from the newspaper which she was reading and also eating breakfast. Armaan hesitated for a moment to respond. The girl was not even looking at him and was breaking at least half a dozen table manners.

"She multi tasks very well Armaan and for the record, probie is probationary officer", Rahul replied with a grin. Armaan nodded in understanding. But he decided he wouldn't let it go. He basically didn't bother much for table manners and all such things. But the girl was too darn intriguing to let go without having a proper showdown. Rahul had spoken very highly of her and had also hinted at him that besides himself and it was probably only her who would speak to him more than handful of polite greetings. And after that he had told Armaan about Riddhima's lack of education which had surprised Armaan beyond the point of being fascinated. People though didn't believe in education system did end up having a graduation degree. And she came from a highly influential bureaucratic family which meant that money wasn't a problem and the fact that she was naturally brilliant also didn't add up to her dropping out of twelfth grade. Once he heard it, he was sure that he would get to bottom of the story since Rahul claimed that no one really knew the reasons for her aversion to study further.

"Multitasking is one thing Rahul but I always thought that it was considered to be rude to read newspaper at breakfast table and not looking at the person with whom you are starting a conversation." Armaan said and took a sip of coffee.

"Only two rules?" Riddhima neatly folded the paper which had Sudoku on top and picked up the pencil she had stuck in her ponytail and started solving the puzzle with her left hand. Rahul looked at Armaan and grinned.

"Two and counting", Armaan replied wryly. Riddhima looked up from paper and grinned at him. He couldn't help but smile back at her. The first time he met her he saw a childish innocence in her and had believed that she was the pampered girl of the family. Well she was the pampered girl of the family but she was no innocent when it came to economics or well anything for that matter. He never really had a chance to interact with her but he was truly intrigued by the girl who was always doing something or the other.

"On an average we live for, say, sixty years. That is sixty years without any major illness and all our limbs properly functional. I am already in my late twenties which mean I have only thirty years left. There are so many things to do in this world and there are so many things to learn and I feel that I am always running out of time. You know what I mean?" She asked Armaan.

"Don't you think you are overreacting Riddhima?" Armaan asked raising an eyebrow.

"Of course I am. It's a perfect excuse for me not to work", she grinned cheekily. He chuckled at that.

"Why don't you come with us sometime? Work can be as much fun", Armaan asked her. Rahul waited for an answer. He had cajoled Riddhima plenty to go to work with him. He knew that she wouldn't need much training to get into pace but she had flatly refused. Shashank had asked him not to force her much and Anjali had turned her eyes red. Rahul had dropped the subject after that point.

"I am not interested Armaan." She refused.

"Why?"

"I never really liked the idea of doing a work for a greater idea, you know? I mean there is an idea or a plan which a mastermind has. A mastermind here is Shashank uncle or board of directors or even your department. And based on way too much of data, certain action plans are prepared and are made ready for execution. And I get to do the execution in the most operational efficient way. I might as well feed the ducks in our pond rather than doing that sort of work where I have to work to meet a goal set by someone else." Riddhima replied. Rahul was surprised. She had given him a totally different answer about freewill and such and now with Armaan she was providing something totally new. Armaan looked surprised and didn't answer for couple of minutes.

"Is that so?" Armaan asked mildly after giving her words a thought.

"Not at all. I just made it up." She trilled and laughed at the two baffled faces and slapped newspaper in front of them.

"Four minutes and nineteen seconds; my new record along with the latest fancy reasoning I gave Armaan for not doing any work." She looked the two faces who still looked quite stunned and replied.

"We all have our reasoning for what we are and what we do Armaan. I wish you stop asking for mine", Riddhima replied in a flat tone.

"No." Armaan replied in a firm tone and stared back at Riddhima who was stupefied with his answer.

Rahul only stared at the two of them in open amazement. The ever polite good guy Armaan was purposely egging Riddhima and Riddhima who always maintained her cool was showing traces of aggressiveness.

"Why?" Riddhima asked in a challenging voice.

"Because it is wrong. You are depraving society a talent which can bring about changes for betterment of our future. You are bright, smart and intelligent and you have all the resources which can help you in every step of whatever plan you put forth for the betterment of the society. And whatever reasoning you have cannot be bigger than what you can offer to the society," Armaan replied in equally challenging tone. Riddhima was about to respond when Rahul interjected.

"It is time for us to go Armaan." He said and practically dragged Armaan by the arm.

"This conversation is not over Armaan. Your naive perspective of a man and his responsibility towards society just because he exists in it is flawed and is baseless." Riddhima's voice raised a notch as Armaan moved farther from the dining table.

She could see him nod and waved a goodbye to her after managing to rile her up. She waved back and knit her eyebrows in thought. Armaan was not what she had originally thought. There was something primitively untamed in him that gave him a shade which she had witnessed few minutes earlier. She smiled at the thought of meeting him again and continuing their argument.

To be continued.

Click here for next chapter.

Edited by Ling - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
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Hey L!
Nice to see you here after the brief gap.
Though not much action happened, still the vigour is maintained. Armaan has shown a different shade here. He seems to be very effectively resilient after the short debate with Riddhima. Takkar baraabar ka tha. I absolutely loved it. I am expecting that he brings out some more best from Riddhima now onwards. Interesting!
Thanks for the pm, and yes added you in my buddy list. Thanks for it too!
Edited by Prasanthi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woah im actually spellbounded by the convo between our armaan and riddhima. really superb
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Posted: 15 years ago
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where were u
was missing ur ff sooooooooooo much
great part
anjali will not accept armaan so easily .she has set her mind that armaan is just being polite now he will cahnge later ...well cant really blam anjali
love the convo b/w AR ....hope it was more
plzz update regulary as u had done before
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Hey that was awfully late but brilliantly worded.
The argument between the two protoganists was nicely put forward and definitely turned on my brain cells to evaluate what Ridhima actually meant.
But I still cannot say that the part compensated for the delay. That was one thing I liked a lot a about you that you were so prmpt in yor updates and suddenly you disappeare
whatever kept you occupied, I hope now you can update faster. It's a gripping story and I would hate to wait for week after week to know what happens next
but the convo between AA was also good. I don't find Anjali strange. She is reacting perfectly normal considering her situation. You cannot expect all to let bygones be bygones

love
Shveta

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