I think the script and plot have become shallow

Prateeksh

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Posted: 15 years ago

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These days, I dont get those strong and assertive feelings this show used to depict earlier...i mean even in dhulwadi, Shaan and Khanak scenes were treat to watch....

but these days, Khanak is only a scapegoat for all the blames...and Shaan's character has been undermined....Natasha is totally confused....i mean who would allow their daughter to stay in would be's house? when Mr A has been always very negative about Shaan...

Also the story line is not going anywhere...they just work randomly.....well they can show stuff like -

Khanak getting educated...she has faced so many issues in the city and otherwise becoz of being not educated...atleast Dadi should encourage her and make her learn....not for shaan or something...but for herself....she is being ridiculed for this so many times....

also, Shaan and natasha shld have some space....why is natasha here? she justifies that she is here to gain back her love...but what can she do atleast these 6 months until they get a divorce...

we know shaan got the motivation to go to office and start working from Khanak's words...may be indirectly they shld try to show the bond between khanak and shaan..not necessary love, but atleast some respect, some friendship.....

i dont know, but i feel that the show is definitely lacking a strong script and i am not too motivated to watch it on regular basis...

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rusha4003

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Prateeksh ... we all felt the same...

But dont lose hope yaar ... things are beginning to look up ....

I'm sure we have treat in store now .....do watch !!!

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TitanFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

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they r moving in slow motion........ n they wont disaapoint us ( i realised it ) even i want khanak to learn things reason being simple they can show her thinking about it after making so many mistakes , ppl want to work on them n khanaks a person who comes in that category ....... hope so

ya shn tashu need space but not real misunderstandings to show that ......

i want more of shans office scenes .............................

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tanthya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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I too felt that ! but since yesterday, the serial seems to have perked up.., after careful analysis and reanalysis ,i have realized that it is due the absence of Natasha !!😉 That girl is the perfect fly in the ointment...

Neither does she have any chemistry, nor does she have any Acting abilities ,her scenes with Shan look rehearsed and artificial unlike Shanak's scenes...I hope they send her off to Antarctic for a long haul or better still get her married off to Mr.Mittals son and let her drop out of the radar..

There are many more interesting and realistic ways of showing Shanaks growing closeness instead of bringing on this over used Triangle ...

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Sejal

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Well, i would have agreed with u 2 days back,😆 but since the past 48 hours alot has happened.Shanak have woven their magic and i do agree that there are some loose ends, but then again those things will always be there in any show, but you have to move past them. I dont think the show needs much improvement, concept is good, dialogues are good, acting is good except for Natasha's ,oops sorry 😳, script is a bit dicey but will improve with time,.They just need to show Shanak 24/7.

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rishani

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yes,the show is having slowly more Shanak scenes,and i'm sure dat their track is starting right now. Yesterday & today epsiode was fab,so let's see & wait to see what will happened next cause i'm sure this show is going to ave many good things & suspense for us.😛

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rborocksss

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Posted: 15 years ago

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no i dont think this show has lost charm.till now whatever has been shown is completely justified except a few scenes which is still acceptable. this show is more situational based at least till now where every character r distinct so one cannot expect positivity everytime & a show is of no interest if some bitterness is not shown.

but having said that things r now shaping up well & in right direction.

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Maddy

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Okay, I would agree till two days ago. It's definitely looking up again so please don't lose hope!! I think though that your suggestions should definitely be implemented!! 😃 But the last two episodes have been so freaking adorable, don't you agree!?!?! 😳 😆

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Krishna

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Loved all your suggestions and hope they do implement them....but they seem to have shown improvement with the last two episodes with good dialogues etc. So hang in there and give them time.

Edited by kubare - 15 years ago

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isomers

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Posted: 15 years ago

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There's always a time for everything, you can't just expect them to show all of that at the same time. 😆 Just hang in..please don't loose hope! the show is still in it's beginning stage.

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