Your One Short plz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok as we know that Aroshi is gonna leave her house (she must have thought why should i stay behind Akhir main kisi say kam hun😉)
now the doc(better call him lallo😆) character is gonna shown properly (how am i gonna bear that torture i dont know)🤢
so i was wondring how this story is gonna shapeup and how things will move towards Aroshi's wedding with doc? (one crying saxena will start smiling after that)😆😉
can you guyz come up with ur one short which will narrate Aroshi meeting doc and marrying with him and that too with shamji's concent.
so what are u all waiting for start writing you one short guyz.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok here goes:
Proff and adarsh cum back home sad from the moneylender. As they have no other way of arranging money, proff says " hume ek behen ki khushi ke liye doosri ko daav par lagana hi hoga". All shock. Pouring tears, arushi runs to her room. Sitting on the floor with her head on her bed she cries bitterly. Images of her dear doctor flash before her eyes then she remmembers angad's antics. She stands up straight..."i cant let them sacrifice me for didi's sake.. let that krishna leave her....any way he doesnt deserve her... hes a gunda...i'm not going to make the same mistake didi did". Determined she walks upto the door and stops. Proff and wife were talking outside the door. Proff " call angad tomm....the faster v finish this the better for pratigya". Arushi shocked , how cud her parents be so cruel. She backs away from the door.
In the dead of the night, arushi sneaks away from her house. She cudnt wait for morning to cum she had to escape away. She walks down the lonely streets...looking around weather that sick angad or frnds were following her. The road was empty and without looking arushi crosses the road. A car was speeding across the road and dashes into her. Arushi falls to the floor and faints. The car stops and out steps Doc (lets name him voldemort). He sees the bleeding figure of a girl and panicks. He didnt want to b involved in a accident case. He hurridly picks her up and drives to the hospital.
Morning,
Every1 is worried for arushi. They search the whole house as well as the terrace. But no sign. Worried they sit in their sittingroom gulping tea and pouring tears. In walks angad with a namaste saurji. All shock. He walks up to proff and touchs his feet asking for his bride. All shock (again😆). Meanwhile, arushi wakes up in the room. Doc Voldy had taken her home.....as the hospital wud first ask for family and then wait for the police to cum....he tended to her there. In walks voldy with breakfast. Arushi stunned to see doc in pyjamas. She stares shamelessly at him. Doc stares back. *eyelock*. Then recovering they both mermer a sorry. Realising this was the moment, doc proffesses his love for arushi which dear arushi accepts. She then tells him of her problem (angad). Voldy gets up and says he will solve it. He takes his phone and calls up someone.
Police rush into proff's house and arrest angad + gang for blackmailing, kidnapping and attacking nitin uncle. All shock (again😆). Angad is taken off to the police van where doc voldy, arushi and suprisingly krishu and prats r waiting for him. Thinking this was his chance, angad shouts out to krish that prats spent d night with him. Again saxena clan shock. Pratigya looks at krishu expecting him to burst with anger. But krishu smiles and tells the police " achi khatir dari karna iiski". Police take red monkey and frnds away. Confused proff asks krishu that hw did he cum here. Krishu answers that morning voldy called and told him everything. He believes prats. He had then called the cops to get rid of angad. Arushi questions voldy that how he knows krishu.
*Shocking Revelation*
Doc voldy is krishu's twin bro who left his house 1 yr ago as bauji didnt want him to work as a doctor. Krishu and voldy hug after meeting after so much time.
1month later
Voldy and arushi get happily married and shift in with krishu and prats in pratigya nivas
ALLS WELL THAT ENDS WELL
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Posted: 15 years ago
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seems u guyz are still lost in friday's epi :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@serial manic:
kahaani pori fimly hai hahahaha i loved teh part where saxena's were having tea ( jsut because of them tea business is running) :P
and then teh part where u actually precented teh doc krishna's brother
hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aik bhai itna hot yeh kis pay chala gaya :) ekhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
then how calmly krishna handled the situation ah i wish he would react in same manner at truth revelation :)
great job dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aarushi will leave her house and she may ask for shelter from that doctor...or she may find a job wid accomodation.....whereas SS will bring KriYa back home for his election matters..when he'll decide to bring KriYa back home......he'll see that they were living happily in pratigya nivas and pratigya is getting closer to Krishna....So SS may forgive Pratigya as well.
And as for angad's truth, if pratigya gets closer to krishna, they mi8 unite there..and start their married life afresh.....So if krishna comes to angad's truth he may trust pratigya and will support the saxena's.....This way the saxena's will start liking Krishna
and then angad will force arushi to marry her but the doctor will save her and will marry her



Edited by Aabrayy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aabrayy




Aarushi will leave her house and she may ask for shelter from that doctor...or she may find a job wid accomodation.....whereas SS will bring KriYa back home for his election matters..when he'll decide to bring KriYa back home......he'll see that they were living happily in pratigya nivas and pratigya is getting closer to Krishna....So SS may forgive Pratigya as well.
And as for angad's truth, if pratigya gets closer to krishna, they mi8 unite there..and start their married life afresh.....So if krishna comes to angad's truth he may trust pratigya and will support the saxena's.....This way the saxena's will start liking Krishna
and then angad will force arushi to marry her but the doctor will save her and will marry her



Abi that is more kriya one short that aroshi and doc's hehehehehe
ok jokes aprt if krishna is gonan get closer to prats and ss will forgive her just to see that closness will he be able to forget his own insult which he has felt when she refused to say sorr.
a person like ss wont ever forget that i dont think so
and yeah ur right doc will provide aroshi a shelter and thats how he is gonan get gud marks in shamji's eyes
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Fatii: lol....sory dear......but i jus cudnt imagine wat will happen b/w arushi and that doctor...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeahyeah i know that very well just think out of teh box twin sis😉

Edited by waniya_fatima - 15 years ago

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