LOve,life and hope(sg os on current track)

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Hey my sweetheart sgians…guys I am back with what I love the most…thats writing on my januables. its after a very long time guys so pls don't throw shoes and tomatoes on me.It's a one shot in one part only that starts from yesterday's precap scene with shukla sir and mayank.

M: Shukla sir samrat kahan hai??kal raat college mein students ne jo bhi kiya ye samrat ki responsibility banti hai ki woh unhein punish kare.

SS:mayank hum nahin jante ki mohadaya samrat is waqt kahan hain…unka phone bhi nahin lag raha hai….

Mayank cudnt believe how can samrat be so irresponsible…but to him there was nothing new to this!!!

M:no wonders…!!! Its all damned my fault…meri hi galti hai ki maine ye expect kiya ki us hadse ke teen saal baad samrat mein kuch maturity aa gayi hogi…ki usne zindagi ki kadar karma seekh liya hoga…par kuch cheezen shayad kabhi nahin badlati…sabki life ke saath khelna…pehle bhi ye samrat ka shaunk tha…aur aaj bhi hai…
As soon as words were coming out of mayank…simultaneously all those tears began to develop again in his eyes…how hard he may try but the very thought of that tragic day always used to shake and shatter mayank into bits.to hide his tears from shukla sir mayank turns away from him.
SS:par mayank aap kehna kya chahte hain…
M:(sucking in all his tears gathers courage to speak)…main yehi kehna chahta hun sir ki in students ko excel mein admission dekar humne inke future ki poori responsibility li hai…inhein sahi aur galat raste ki pehchan karana humari zimmedari hai….ye humari responsibility hai ki agar students kuch galat karte hain…college ka discipline…yahan ke rules todte hain to hum unhein woh karne se rokein…but jab college ke trustee ko hi koi hosh nahin hai to koi aur ismein kar bhi kya sakta hai…
"U are right Mr. sharma"…comes a voice from behind.Mayank turns around to see who is it and finds indira shergill standing with shukla sir.
I:Shukla sir kal raat jin do students ke beech boxing match hua tha…aap unse kahiye ki woh dus minute mein aake mujhse mere cabin mein milen.

Hearing her instruction shukla sir leaves from there.Mayank too begins to walk away from there but indira stops him.

I:one minute mayank…tum aise nahin ja sakte…u know mayank kisi bhi baat se mun pher lene se uska solution nahin nikalta…life ki problems ko face karma hi unka solution hota hai…jab tak purane ghav na bharein tab tak zindagi kabhi nayi manzil ki taraf nahin badh sakti…..

M:(now facing sam's mom)exactly mrs shergill…aapne bilkul theek kaha…jab tak purane ghav na bhar jayein tab tak aage badhna impossible hai…par samrat ne mujhe aur gunjan ko jo ghav diye hain…woh kabhi nahin bhar sakte…..samrat kitni bhi maafi maang le…par uske maafi maangne se kabhi kuch bhi waise nahin hoga jaise pehle tha….

I:main janti hoon mayank ki samrat se galti hui…aur use us galti ka ehsaas bhi hai…par use is tarah beech raste mein akela chodkar jaana kya tumhari aur gunjan ki galti nahin thi???? Aur mayank what do u think ki tumhari wife nupur…aaj tumhein samrat aur gunjan ko aise dekhkar bahut khush hogi…tum teeno ko aage badhna hoga mayank….aur woh tum tabhi kar sakte ho jab tum sab ek saath koshish karo……………..
Mayank gets annoyed at what all sam's mom said to him…coz somehow even he too internally realizes that it wasn't samrat's fault alone…even he too was an equal partner in crime as he himself asked samrat to speed up the car.

M:dekhiya mrs. Shergill pls…mujhe nupur ya samrat ke bare mein koi baat nahin karni…bahut achcha hoga ki hum is relationship ko sirf professional rakhein.
Indira gets irritated at mayank's stubborn behaviour.She cant believe that how the three of them are so firm in themselves letting their lives become a living hell.
I:to theek hai mayank…if u want this to yehi sahi…and then listen to me…samrat aaj college isliye nahin aaya kyunki woh kal raat se hospital mein hai…he is in ICU since yesterday night…u know why…coz he attempted to suicide!!! He consumed poison.
Mayank is shocked to hear what she said.But before mayank cud say anything she handovers to him some files.
I:ye lo mayank…ye files…in mein us accident ki saari investigation report hai.shayad tum nahin jaante but hospital se discharge milne ke baad samrat surrenedered himself to police.aur char maheene ki investigation ke baad court ne bhi use release kar diya tha bina koi bhi charges ke saath.shayad in files ko dekhkar tumhein aur gunjan ko ye samajh aa jaye ki tumhein kya karma hai.
Saying so she leaves from there.Mayank is left all alone in that corridor…with those files in his hands.Somehow mayank had realized that the end of all the hatred he and gunjan have given to samrat was nearing.He opens the files and begins reading them….
Scene shift:(Mayank's home)

Gunjan is sitting in nupur's bedroom cleaning her cupboard…where she found all her belongings just as intact as nupur had left them…all her dresses…her favourite earings…her last read mayapari…everything just made gunjan out of her breath…three years had passed since nupur went away but the pain for gunjan was still the same…the tears were still fresh in her eyes…..

G:kyun di…aisa kyun kiya tumne…kyun mujhe aur jiju ko aise akele chodkar chali gayi…ek baar bhi nahin socha ki hum tumhare bina kya karenge…kyun di..kyun kiya aise…

Suddenly much to gunjan's surprise mayank enters the room…gunjan had opened all of nupur's belongings at this time coz she knew that mayank wud arrive late in the evening…but seeing him back home in afternoon only gunjan is surprised.she quickly
gathers all the things and puts them back into the cupboard.She immediately wipes off her tears…and turns around so that mayank cudnt see them…
G:arre jiju…aaj aap itni jaldi ghar aa gaye…mujhe to laga ki aap shaam tak ayenge…

M:haan gunjan aaj college mein zyaada kam nahin tha…woh…samrat college mein nahin aaya tha…isiliye…gunjan aaj samrat…

But before mayank cud complete his sentence gunjan interrupts him in between…

G:its ok jiju…mujhe aur kuch nahin janana…aap ab jaldi aa hi gaye hain to
aj hum bachon ko mumbai ghumane lekar chalte hain…na jane kabse mere piche pade hain ki bahar lekar jao.

Gunjan is just trying to change the topic from samrat by saying all this but before that mayank speaks up….

M:Gunjan samrat hospital mein hai!!!...usne kal raat suicide karne ki koshish ki…aur kal raat se woh ICU mein hai..
Mayank's words left gunjan numb…though she had detatched herself completely from samrat…but some strings were still intact…the strings of soul ofcourse…as if a part of him was still present inside her. Though her heart had stopped feeling anything for him…but still the very news of him fighting between life and death left gunjan's heart heavy with pain…she cudnt understand why…why was she again getting so affected by him???…
"so what if he is in hospital it shudnt effect me…why the hell am I becoming so worried for him…he was the one who killed my di..he deserves this pain…he deserves every bit of it…" popped the thoughts in gunjan's mind…but her heart still yearned to see him once…it still longed to see that whether he is fine or not…!!! It was a war going inside gunjan….
Going crazzy bcoz of this inner conflict of hers gunjan closes her eyes with pain and covers her ears forcefully with her hands….

M:gunjan aankhein band kar lene se hum sachai se nahin bhaag sakte…
Gunjan is shocked to hear what mayank said.

G:kya!! Jiju aap kehna kya chahte hain…hum samrat ko kabhi maaf nahin kar sakte…to...to kya hua agar woh hospital mein hai…jo bhi usne di ke saath kiya…woh uske liye is se bi zyaada taqleef deserve karta hai…

M:nahin gunjan…samrat ne aisa kuch nahin kiya ki us se sab itni nafrat karein…usne aisa kuch nahin kiya ki hum use hameshan ke liye apni zindagi se door kar dein…
G:jiju pls mujhe in sabke bare mein phir se koi baat nahin karni.

M: main janta hoon gunjan ki tum samrat ke bare mein koi baat nahin karna chahti…par tum ye files to dekh sakti ho na.(mayank handovers the files to gunjan)

G:kya hai in files mein???

M:samrat ki innocence ka proof gunjan.
G:kya!!
M:haan gunjan…ye us accident ki investigation report hai…jo sirf ye kehti hai ki jo bhi hua usmein sirf samrat ki galati nahin thi.bhale hi us din samrat ki car bahut tez speed par thi gunjan…lekin phir bhi woh highway spped limit ke andar thi…samrat ka apni car par poora control tha…usne humara vishwas nahin toda gunjan…balki car ka control isliye bigada kyunki woh truck jis se humari car ne collide kiya tha..woh wrong side se aa raha tha. aur sirf yehi nahin gunjan…samrat ki car ki breaks pehle se hi fail thi…car mein ek boond bhi break oil nahin tha.Gunjan samrat apni taraf se car bilkul sahi chala raha tha…haan car speed par thi…par woh accident ka kaaran nahin hai gunjan.accident us truck ke wrong side se aane ki wajah se aur car ki breaks fail hone ki wajah se hua.
The investigation report and mayank's words were gradually weakening gunjan's firmness…even her mind somehow began to justify things…gunjan's logical sense too somehow began to realize that what all happened wasn't samrat's fault completely.
But still its too difficult for her to forgive him.now gunjan was all broken and she hugged mayank tightly leaving the files…
G:aisa kyun ho raha hai jiju…kyun sirf mere saath hi…ab to main khud ko samjha chuki thi na ki mujhe hamesha..hameshan us se door rahna hai…phir kyun kismat dobara mujhe uski taraf kheench rahi hai. Kyun mera dil baar baar ye soch raha hai ki agar uski galti maaf karne layak nahin hai…to saza dene layak bhi nahin hai…aisa kyun ho raha hai jiju…main kya karoon jiju…main kya karoon….
M:(breaking the hug and wiping off her tears) gunjan aaj humare saamne sirf ek hi sach hai…kuch rishtey hain jo kabhi laut kar nahin aa sakte…par kuch rishtey aise hain jo humse door bhale hi ho gaye hain…par agar hum chahein to unhein apni life mein phir se wapas la sakte hain…nupur shayad kabhi wapas nahin aa sakti…par woh bhi hamesha se yehi chahti hai ki hum dono samrat ko wapas le aayein…use maaf kar dein…aur apni zindagi naye sire se shuru karein. apne liye na sahi gunjan par nupur ke liye humein yeh karna hi hoga…tabhi shayad woh aur hum dono khush rah sakte hain.jao gunjan…maine tumhein hamesha samrat se door rakhne ki koshish ki…bina ye soche ki iss se nupur ko kya mahsus hota hoga…shayad isiliye hi main aaj tak use yahin kahin mahsoos kar sakta hoon…aisa lagta hai ki maine aaj bhi use kisi bandhan mein bandha hua hai…jo hum samrat ke saath kar rahe hain gunjan woh un sab se khush nahin hai…isliye jao gunjan aur samrat ko apni life mein wapas le aao…use humari life mein wapas le ao…jao gunjan jao…
nothing was left more to be said for gunjan….today after nearly three long years for the first time gunjan had let her heart overpower her mind…she was just not thinking anything…she just wanted to feel it….feel the love she and her soul had been yearning for every single second she was away from samrat…she just wanted to feel every bit of it.
Scene shift:(city hospital)

Gunjan at reception…she panted badly as she had coming running all the way from the parking lot to the reception like crazy.

G:(to the receptionist) samrat shergill???
Rec: mam he has been shifted to room no. 101 just a few minutes back…its on the first floor.

Gunjan rushes to room no. 101 and breaks open the door of the room.She sees samrat lying on his bed with his face in one direction and his tears had made the pillow appear moist…he looked completely lifeless…all his eyes swollen and red as if he had been crying since long. Sam's mom was sitting beside him and the nurse was adjusting the IV on his wrist.There wasn't a single expression on samrat's face…neither of even pain…as if he was completely numb even to the pain of the needle that was stuck into his wrist.
Seeing all this a lone tear escapes gunjan's eye…there was a time when gunjan cudnt see even a single scratch on samrat…and now he was in this condition right in the front of her eyes.suddenly sam's mom notices gunjan standing in front of her…

I:gunjan…
His mom's words and samrat suddenly comes back to life…as if the name again pumped back some hope into him…samrat looks towards the door and sees gunjan standing there.

Seeing her eyes samrat's heart misses a beat suddenly….she wasn't the same gunjan he met last nite…she looked different…she looked like his chashmish..exactly she was his chashmish…he was able to see that…

S:chash…chash-mish….
I:gunjan tum samrat se baat karo I have to go n attend an important phone call…par…par samrat…gunjan…is baar ye yaad rakhna ki ye last chance hai tum dono ke paas apni life mein aage badhne ka…agar aaj tum nahin kar paye to…to kabhi nahin kar paoge…..
Saying so she leaves the room.

Gunjan slowly moves near samrat's bed and sits close to him…both their eyes looked painfully into each other…thousands of words of consolement…words of pain…words of guilt…their eyes said to one another.
S:pls mujhe maaf kardo chash--..mera matlab gun-jan…pls mujhe maaf kardo…main kabhi nahin chahta tha ki nupur ke saath ye sab ho…woh meri bhi dost thi…
par phir bhi meri galati ki wajah se…woh hum sabko chod kar chali gayi…sirf meri galati ki waja se chash…gunjan..sirf meri galti ki wajah se…(now samrat was completely broken….and gunjan cud see that)
G(breaking the silence):tumne…tumne theek kaha samrat tumhari ek galati ki wajah se di humein hamesha ke liye chod kar chali gayi…par maine ye realize kar liya hai samrat ki kisi ki ek galati ko hum poori life to lekar nahin beth sakte na…ek na ek din hum sabko aage badhna hai…aur..aur woh hum tabhi kar sakte hain samrat jab hum ek saath hon…ek dusre ke saath rahkar hum kar sakte hain…
S:iska matlab gunjan tumne mujhe maaf kardiya…
G:haan…maaf kardiya…par sirf ek shart par…
S:main tumhari har shart manne ko taiyyar hoon cha..gunjan.
G:tumhein promise karma hoga samrat ki aaj ke baad tum kabhi apne aap ko marne ki koshish nahin karoge…di ke saath jo bhi hua uske liye repent karne ka ye tareeka nahin hai…jo bhi galtiyaan hum sab se hui hain….hum milke unke liye repent karenge…unhein theek karenge…aur ye koshish karenge ki life kabhi phir aise mod par na aye ki humare liye ek doosre ko maaf karma itna mushkil ho jaye…promise karo samrat…ki
tum kabhi aisi galati dobara nahin hone doge…ki hum sab alag hone par majboor jo jayein…

S:I promise gunjan…jaisa tumne kaha bilkul waise hi hoga….
G:aur..ek aur promise karma hai tumhein samrat…
S:kya…
G:ki tum abse mujhe..mujhe chashmish hi bulaoge…

Hearing gunjan's words samrat's heart sank for a while…he cudnt believe that his life was slowly returning to hope…that the dawn to his waling night was though still blur but appearing atleast …seeing things turning a lil sweet atlast..samrat's eye dripped a drop of tear…

Gunjan knew what was just needed at that time…though she still hadn't come over things completely…she hadn't still forgiven samrat wholeheartedly…but she had promised to herself that she will try to move on…move on for her di…and for the fact that she had understood that though samrat committed a mistake but he deserved forgiveness for that….he deserved atleast a chance to repent….
she moves closer to samrat and kisses his forehead gently with consolement…her gesture somehow squeezed out the the infinite pain accumulated in his heart…that comes out to her in the form of a low pitched but a deep weep…hearing which gunjan just keeps his head on her shoulder…and both of them are lost into a hug…a hug that consumed all the pain that had accumalated in their hearts since the past three years!!!

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thats it guys...if u like it pls do comment or hit the like button.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg yashi...wat an os..it was awesome mindblowing,amazing,fantastic...yaar loved it...it touched my heart.... 😳 it was so emotional... 😭 😭 ....hope aisa hi mjht mein bhi...cv's should get ideas like this... 😊 .....wonderful yashi...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Yashi! It was awesome yaar! U made me fall in love with SG all over again..😍
just cant see them apart!😭
Beautifully written!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yashi!! 🤗
Beautiful OS hun!!
Loved it to the core..
i hope everything gets back to normal soon.. cant see Sajan in soo much pain!! 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fabulous os.....i loved it sooooo much
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: zummi03

omg yashi...wat an os..it was awesome mindblowing,amazing,fantastic...yaar loved it...it touched my heart.... 😳 it was so emotional... 😭 😭 ....hope aisa hi mjht mein bhi...cv's should get ideas like this... 😊 .....wonderful yashi...



awwwwwwwwww...zummi 🤗...thnx so much for reading my shot zummi even though u r having exams..u took out from ur precious time a few minutes to read it...so glad that u liked it...hope i did enough justice to sajan's emotions...luv ya...❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarahh-

OMG Yashi! It was awesome yaar! U made me fall in love with SG all over again..😍

just cant see them apart!😭
Beautifully written!



hey sarahh..thnx a ton dear for reading the os 😛.awwww feels so gud that u found it too gud to give me such a huge compleiment 😳.I am so happy...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

Yashi!! 🤗
Beautiful OS hun!!
Loved it to the core..
i hope everything gets back to normal soon.. cant see Sajan in soo much pain!! 😭



jyoti...🤗..i knew it i knew it u will surely come to reply me 😳...i love u so much jyoti.thnx shoooooooooooooooooooo much for such a warm feedback jaan..and i so agree with u jyoti its so tough seeing sajan like this...especially sam tonite...😭.Hope things become fine soon.and luv u for this lovely reply..muaaahhhh...❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: preety88

fabulous os.....i loved it sooooo much



thnx so much preety for liking the os...am so happy cud make u like it.thnx a ton for ur precious feedback dear..luv ya...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yashi awesome os....
loved it...
bt i want gunjan to forgive sam whole heartedly....

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