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ARTI OS-WISH CAME TRUE.....
Hi guys,dis is my first official OS on ArTi.i have tried my best to make it as beautiful n wonderful as d 2 actors are.hope u like it.
It was Saturday.the time must be around 6 pm,but it looked like it was well already past 7 pm.the sky was overcast with dark clouds,n it looked like it may rain ne moment.Rati loved it.she loved d touch of d cool breeze against her face.it reminded her of something,well, whet was it???Ah..she remembered-Arjun.it felt like his touch.his warm touch beside her,each n every action of his-whether his cute flirtatious nature,his adorable smile-she loved it all.OR .did she love...???She jerked her head out of all dis and glanced at d table -clock.it was 7-15!!oh god,she had been lost in her thoughts for such a long tym dat she didn't realize.she rose 2 lay d table for dinner.Arjun n Navina were coming 2 her place and she had better get ready quickly.
She showered quickly and began 2 rummage thru her wardrobe.15 minutes later she came out of her room looking ravishing in a beautiful red dress n her beautiful long hair tied loosely wid a clutch.she glanced at d clock again.it was 8-15.where were her firends?well,they wud come.Rati did a last minute check of her apartment whether everything was in place or not.Well,it was-just like d perfect dinner she had planned for them.Butter-chicken,it was Arjun's favorite and Navina-well, even she likes it and mostly it was Chinese-which Arjun loved!!!!
The bell rang.Rati hurried 2 open it.Arjun stood there n he looked-well, HANDSOME in a black shirt n jeans.well,he always looks handsome. black was soo..his color!!!But-??
Rati-where's Navina???
Arjun-On,she cudn't come.she had 2 b at her cousin place at d last minute n told me 2 inform u.don't worry-i m going 2 devour navina's share too.i m very HUNGRY!!!BTW- u look gorgeous!!!
Rati-u r looking good too.
Arjun-i know,i always look good!!!(winks at her).
They sat for dinner.
Arjun-ahha..butter-chicken.dats my favorite.
Rati-i know-dats why i made it!!
Arjun-everything my fav!are u on a impress Arjun mission or wht??!!!(gives her his typical mayankish stare)
Rati-(a bit uncomfy and apprehensive)no,itz nothing like dat.(smiles sheepishly) .butter-chicken's my favorite too.
Arjun-oh.i see....!!but,u r not ur usual self.whtzz up??ne tensions???
rati-nothing.itz just dat i m.....NOTHING,i said naa....
they finished their dinner silently after that.
They were standing together in Rati's terrace garden after dinner.A strong wind was blowing.the cool air caressed their skin n it aroused Arjun 2 d heights of.....what???joy??wht for-Rati was not his.she never said so at least.he looked across at d lady standing near him-Rati pandey!!dat was she-this woman with her independence,her frees pirit,her unsurpassable beauty-of which she was herself quite unconscious. he just felt a warm glow simply being at her side.Rati and Arjun both of them stood n watched in a trance as the whole of Mumbai lighted up wid innumerable tiny lights.each n every single flicker of light seemed 2 b voicing d only one thought of Arjun's mind-his single hope,his one strong longing-RATI!!!
They stood there-watching.in d distance,they saw a falling star.
Rati-quick.make a wish!!
Arjun closed his eyes n was silent for a moment.
Rati-did u make a wish?
Arjun-yes.
Rtai-wht did u wish for?
Arjun-i can't tell u.or it won't come true.i'm going 2 make it come true[/]Arjun thought.
Rati leaned back and smiled at Arjun-"itz so perfect.isn't it?!!
Arjun-it can always be like dis Rati.
Rati-wht do u mean.??
Arjun-i mean,we cud get together.forever.
and there it was,out in d open.he heaved a sigh of relief.he had been in love with her n now finally,he said it!!
Rati-Arjun!!!!
Arjun-I'm crazy bouit u Rati.u hav changed my whole life.and i mean evry word of it.
Dis was totally unlike d Arjun Bijlani which Rati knew.
It seemed 2 Rati dat she had waited for dis moment all these years to happen in her life.it changed everything.she had found d stranger she had been in love with,her prince,her [I] Lochinvar.there were tears in her eyes.
suddenly,the silence of the terrace was broken by a sudden clap of thunder.dark grey clouds opened their skirts wider n wider n soft rain began to fall.Arjun took Rati in his arms n kissed her tenderly n softly on her forehead.they locked glances and in a moment he realized every single thing about her-her incoherent thoughts,d eyes dilated with passion for him n it stirred2 many things in him. Rati closed her eyes n pressed close 2 him.time had stopped n there was nothing but the 2 of dem n d soft n sensuous music of drain-d magic of d moment.his hand brushed against her hair n d hair clutch came off n her hair fell loose n open-there she was-d most beautiful woman he had ever seen!!! and they stood there in d rain,completely lost in each other,never 2 b apart again.
They stood there,in a tight embrace,holding each other close,in d rain and Arjun thought joyfully-I MADE MY WISH COME TRUE!!!!!
guys..plzz give ur valuable comments on it..wud love dat!!!
Hi guys,dis is my first official OS on ArTi.i have tried my best to make it as beautiful n wonderful as d 2 actors are.hope u like it.
It was Saturday.the time must be around 6 pm,but it looked like it was well already past 7 pm.the sky was overcast with dark clouds,n it looked like it may rain ne moment.Rati loved it.she loved d touch of d cool breeze against her face.it reminded her of something,well, whet was it???Ah..she remembered-Arjun.it felt like his touch.his warm touch beside her,each n every action of his-whether his cute flirtatious nature,his adorable smile-she loved it all.OR .did she love...???She jerked her head out of all dis and glanced at d table -clock.it was 7-15!!oh god,she had been lost in her thoughts for such a long tym dat she didn't realize.she rose 2 lay d table for dinner.Arjun n Navina were coming 2 her place and she had better get ready quickly.
She showered quickly and began 2 rummage thru her wardrobe.15 minutes later she came out of her room looking ravishing in a beautiful red dress n her beautiful long hair tied loosely wid a clutch.she glanced at d clock again.it was 8-15.where were her firends?well,they wud come.Rati did a last minute check of her apartment whether everything was in place or not.Well,it was-just like d perfect dinner she had planned for them.Butter-chicken,it was Arjun's favorite and Navina-well, even she likes it and mostly it was Chinese-which Arjun loved!!!!
The bell rang.Rati hurried 2 open it.Arjun stood there n he looked-well, HANDSOME in a black shirt n jeans.well,he always looks handsome. black was soo..his color!!!But-??
Rati-where's Navina???
Arjun-On,she cudn't come.she had 2 b at her cousin place at d last minute n told me 2 inform u.don't worry-i m going 2 devour navina's share too.i m very HUNGRY!!!BTW- u look gorgeous!!!
Rati-u r looking good too.
Arjun-i know,i always look good!!!(winks at her).
They sat for dinner.
Arjun-ahha..butter-chicken.dats my favorite.
Rati-i know-dats why i made it!!
Arjun-everything my fav!are u on a impress Arjun mission or wht??!!!(gives her his typical mayankish stare)
Rati-(a bit uncomfy and apprehensive)no,itz nothing like dat.(smiles sheepishly) .butter-chicken's my favorite too.
Arjun-oh.i see....!!but,u r not ur usual self.whtzz up??ne tensions???
rati-nothing.itz just dat i m.....NOTHING,i said naa....
they finished their dinner silently after that.
They were standing together in Rati's terrace garden after dinner.A strong wind was blowing.the cool air caressed their skin n it aroused Arjun 2 d heights of.....what???joy??wht for-Rati was not his.she never said so at least.he looked across at d lady standing near him-Rati pandey!!dat was she-this woman with her independence,her frees pirit,her unsurpassable beauty-of which she was herself quite unconscious. he just felt a warm glow simply being at her side.Rati and Arjun both of them stood n watched in a trance as the whole of Mumbai lighted up wid innumerable tiny lights.each n every single flicker of light seemed 2 b voicing d only one thought of Arjun's mind-his single hope,his one strong longing-RATI!!!
They stood there-watching.in d distance,they saw a falling star.
Rati-quick.make a wish!!
Arjun closed his eyes n was silent for a moment.
Rati-did u make a wish?
Arjun-yes.
Rtai-wht did u wish for?
Arjun-i can't tell u.or it won't come true.i'm going 2 make it come true[/]Arjun thought.
Rati leaned back and smiled at Arjun-"itz so perfect.isn't it?!!
Arjun-it can always be like dis Rati.
Rati-wht do u mean.??
Arjun-i mean,we cud get together.forever.
and there it was,out in d open.he heaved a sigh of relief.he had been in love with her n now finally,he said it!!
Rati-Arjun!!!!
Arjun-I'm crazy bouit u Rati.u hav changed my whole life.and i mean evry word of it.
Dis was totally unlike d Arjun Bijlani which Rati knew.
It seemed 2 Rati dat she had waited for dis moment all these years to happen in her life.it changed everything.she had found d stranger she had been in love with,her prince,her [I] Lochinvar.there were tears in her eyes.
suddenly,the silence of the terrace was broken by a sudden clap of thunder.dark grey clouds opened their skirts wider n wider n soft rain began to fall.Arjun took Rati in his arms n kissed her tenderly n softly on her forehead.they locked glances and in a moment he realized every single thing about her-her incoherent thoughts,d eyes dilated with passion for him n it stirred2 many things in him. Rati closed her eyes n pressed close 2 him.time had stopped n there was nothing but the 2 of dem n d soft n sensuous music of drain-d magic of d moment.his hand brushed against her hair n d hair clutch came off n her hair fell loose n open-there she was-d most beautiful woman he had ever seen!!! and they stood there in d rain,completely lost in each other,never 2 b apart again.
They stood there,in a tight embrace,holding each other close,in d rain and Arjun thought joyfully-I MADE MY WISH COME TRUE!!!!!
guys..plzz give ur valuable comments on it..wud love dat!!!
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