TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 32

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hey shabz here are the comments for the previous update..part 8..
this part is really special shabz..loved the confrontations that nakku had with dutta...well baji becoming handsome n masculine😲me getting jealous of him😲..baji giving the glass of water must have been so insulting for the girl.... 😕 (thanx for clearing the doubt 😉

Ur welcum ...but y r u jealous ..!😆
well well.. nakku meeting dutta and telling him..."i followed u like crazy buh u ignored me"...awww that was soo sweet of nakku...and poor thing!!dutta didnt even get a chance to say nething..dutta to 'woh mein' ,'woh mein' mein hi rehgaya 😆...nakku falling over dutta and dutta holding her was sooooo 😍 ...and yes the naughty naughty dutta..saying wese mera naam dutta patil hai..suna hoga...oofffooo full on boasting huh??😆he was tooo [:p] here..

"acha yeh to batao humari agli takkar takkar kab hogi"🤣..thats hilarious!!.OMG he is soooo naughty here!!!..and finally dutta n getting the phone no😆...1 thing i can say..pyaar mein bohot taakat hoti hai..look at his will power n guts with which he got the ph. no.!!pyaar ho to aisa....😆...

shabz this part was amazing!!!!this was a special update n shish i missed it.....but well done ya..i would love to see such more naughty updates...


Thanx Nazia ...😳
I m so glad that u liked it ....
I m working on more TaSha scenes & their next meet .....😉


comments 4 the 9th update...
aaawwww... shabz...it was such a cute part..loved the way baji took the ashirwad... 😳..i felt like pinchin his cheeks 😳 😆 i am really eager to knw wat had happened ..y r the two bros seperated?? 😕 ...plzzz update soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: mayur-tasha

very nice awesome...

Originally posted by: newbe

Subhanallah😆 dill khush kardiya ree😆

Originally posted by: Irika95

very nice shabzz..continue asap 👏

Originally posted by: jess_dutta

hey shabz..great part yaar..love this baji..he so cute

the flower scene is real nice..love his style of taking aashirwad

waiting to see more of tasha and baji scenes

hope u update soon

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

love ur fan fic...plz update soon

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Shabz...caught up on the latest part finally. My hunch is i think right. I love the fact that here Baji and not Dutta is the tormented guy.

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey shabz..just caught up with part

great part yaar..really enjoyed it

baji is so cute yaar...the flower thing was real sweet..loved how he took aashirwad..hope u update soon...with more tasha scenes

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome update!

I am going to offer to murder Kala - save everyone the frustration 😆

Cont soon and get well soon!

As for your comment to my previous comment- Do I watch the show? 😆

Originally posted by: maybe-just

* Faints seeing such a long comment *😆

Ohmigosh Shabz, you are sbsolutely making this story work! 👍🏼

I'm lovin' it!

Thank u so much Faz ..😳

Since I havent commented on none of the parts, I will be commenting on all parts here! Told you, I'd give you a big surprise review though I don't think it was a surprise if I told you! 😆😆
Yup ,,u did ...& I waz w8ing 4 ur comments ..😉

The first part, I love how Naku's story started with the fortune teller and most amazingly, the two hottest men of LTL are going to be the leading men in Nakusha's life! 😉😉 I love the fact that both were introduced on the same day, and now there's a suspense as we dont know who Nakusha's life partner is going to be! 😉 The way you explained about Baaji Rao and Dutta Bhao 😍 DAYUM! They are smokin' HOTT!!
Me so glad that u liked it ...but i think i didn't do justice here ,,,,could hav described much better ..!😆

What I love about the second part is that the story moving gradually, not too fast or too slow, its at a constant pace, which is really good, at least it isn't going the LTL way 😆 wahan par toh story he aatak gaye hai 😕😆 Now onto the Dutta VS Baaji ❤️ That is just sooooooo good. Why? Because we get to see 2 gorgeous guys as rivals and they look Hot whilst having the rivalry! 😉😉 And Nakusha is thinking about both? 😲😆 Nice twist, I wonder if she herself has figured out who the lucky man is going to be? 😉😉

Show mein story chal kahan rahi hai jo atak jaye ..😆
Oh she will realize sooner or later ..!

MJHT gang in the 3rd part! OH MY GOD! I love you for itttt!!!! 🤗 You brought one of my favourite characters Nupur into the FF, now this is a unique FF! 😉 I love Nupur and By God she is the same Nupur 😆 teasing Naku about her two men like that 😉 And oh my Mayu too is included 😳 Dutta again 😍 Now I'm intrigued to know who's picture Baaji was looking at?? Hmmm... and this new couple is alright I guess, I wonder what part they are going to play in the whole story!?

Mayur r there just as fillers ...but may b i will increase their parts ..!😉

😆😆 TaSha bumping in the Mall 😳😆 That scene was hilarious, I loved the makhi comment by Dutta, their cute fight was so entertaining, I wonder why Dutta was amused! 😉 And love Nupur teasing Nakusha, what a twist, bags get switched! 😆 coincidence?? 😆 Now who's this women with Baaji? 😡 I don't like that, 😆 jealousy is not good! 😳 Awwww...Antara looking after Kishore's son like that, awww...such a cute scene, I loved it but oh my god! A shocker! Kishore getting married to Kala 😲🤢 I can just tell that she is going to be a total vampish character! 😆
Smart girl ...😆
yh ,,,she is total vamp here ...!

Not liking Sam girl one bit in Pa5rt 👎🏼 but hehe nice Baaji and Naku scene, but why is Naku so uncomfortable around Baaji? Didn't they have that cute eye lock before?? BTW you mentioned Mayur but what about Sajan? I thought it was the whole MJHT gang? or is it just Mayur? 😆 Whoa Dutta thinking about Naku 😳 I can sense TaSha being the couple 😉 That was such a sweet scene between Dutta and Aaye! 👍🏼 And UGGHHH 🤢 Kala is still the same, greedy cow, she's after the money. AGAIN! 😡

No Sajan ,,,,,only Mayur ..!😆
Its alwayz going to b TaSha ..😍

😆 Naku running after Dutta and him thinking its a Dream! 😆😆 I loved this part, Full of Tasha moments, mother-son talk but the last bit I found a bit odd, the children getting married 😆 or would it be in the future when they are old enough! BTW the kid Sups is just aaggghhh 😡 poor Bunty, getting stuck with such a brat 😆 But that Bunty and Pari moment was so cutee awww, Pari found a brother! 😳 Die Kala Die, as you can see I hate her here too 😆

The children r not getting married ....
hav u heard of bachpan mein rishta pakka hona ....yahan bhi yahi maamla hai ..😆

Whoa, this past I loved. So Bunty is Dutta and Chintu is Baaji? Am I right? or is it the other way round 😕 Because is Baaji is chintu then he gets 75% of the property, which would make sense as to why he's alone now? Antara had always been a good mother meaning Dutta and Aaye. Okay I'm confuzzled! 😆 Loved this part, LOL at the clothes for Aaye 😆 And whoa confrontation between Dutta-Baaji...I wanna know more so Imma move onto the next part! 😃

Yup ..Baaji is Chintu & Bunty is Dutta ...

Part 8 was sooooooooo good. 😳 oh my god oh my god, TaSha moments! 😳 I could totally imagine TaSha like that!!! 😳 Haye, in love with TaSha all over again 😉😳 Ohmigosh, Pari comes back 😲 Means a Pari and Baji love story 😉😆 Poor Chintu, his dad passes away 😭

Awwww Baaji is so cute totally love him but HATING Kala and Sups 🤢 Leave the poor kid alone, his dad just died! Again more sweet mother son moments between Dutta and Aaye! Thanks for the short update!

So here you are Shabz, I had to type this all over again 😡 because my computer crashed! Twice!!! After my 3 hour exam this was the best I could do today, my eyes are literally going to close and I'm so tired but I just had to write all this for yew! 😉

Awwww ,,,pooor Faz ,,,here a jadoo ki jhappi ...🤗

Thanks so much for a wonderful FF 👏👏 I'm really liking the whole concept of the story, the way the stories intertwine is just genius. Very creative and rocking FF 😃

Waiting for you next update! 😉🤗

Faz x

Baaji is driving aimlessly on the roads ,,,too much is going on his mind ..he stops the car near a beach side …no one is around …he takes out a bottle 4rm the car & starts drinking 4rm it …he is thinking bout maa ,,,he wanted to see her ,hug her ,, but something had stopped him … it had been so many years since he last lay his head on her lap & slept ,,,gosh how he wanted to sleep ….tears wells up in his eyes ,,he wipes it off wid his hands & starts drinking again …he suddenly starts hearing voices ..voices that had been haunting him …

A crying female voice : maine bahut koshish ki ,,,par aur meh nahi she sakti …

A male voice : Ye jhoot bol rahi hai ….mera yaqeen karo …

The same female voice : Main mar jaungi ..main mar jaungi …mera dum ghut raha hai …

Another female voice shouting at him : khush ho gaya na tu …wo mar gayi hai …par tujhe kya …tu jaa apne saghe k paas …hamara kya lagta hai tu …jaa un qaatilon k gale mil …tu bhi khush ho jaa ..

The same male voice pleading : Maine kuch nahi kiya ,,,main nahi jaanta ye kyun hua ..kaisa hua ..meri baat suno ,,,tumhe mera yaqeen karna hoga …

Suddenly all these voices starts to grow on his mind their volume increasing ….he feels his head spinning ..in desperation he covers his ears with his hands to stop them ,,,but it doesn't ,,& then he screams …he collapses on the ground & screams again & finally breaking down ….he is crying uncontrollably ..after crying his heart out ..he just sits there on the rocks staring blankly at the space in 4rnt of him ..he again takes the bottle & starts drinking ..

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Rano is walking down the beach ,,she is thinking about the job ,,,,she is not certain whether she wants take it or not ..but then she thinks about uncle ( Manager ) ..what would she say to him ..he had been always been there 4 her after parents death …he had insisted to her come here & work …now also she was staying at his place as a paying guest …there was only uncle & auntie ,,,they had no children ,,,he had just not liked the idea of her staying in the hostel ..but then she had coaxed him to take a rent 4rm her if he wanted that she lived in his house ..he had agreed with much difficulty … she is thinking about the past ,,hw she had met Baaji & their moments ,,it had not been good …she had been shocked to see him at the office during the interview call ,,,he waz the last man she had expected to b there ..she is just walking & then realizing she had come too far in her thoughts …it's a very remote place of the beach ,,,& no one is there ,,,she turns to go back but then she hears a man scream ,,she gets terrified ,,looking around she notices a man ,,she can only see his back …the man falls down on his knees & he is crying now ,,she had never seen a man cry like before ….she is scared as to what to do ,,, she stands there 4 a little while ,,he has stopped crying now & is drinking 4rm a bottle …she starts to leave but then suddenly the man gets up & turns his head …she is shocked to see Baaji there in this condition …he has a bottle in his hand… she just stands there in the dark …Baaji cannot see her …he is too drunk to even walk …he is trying to walk back to his car but then stumbles & falls …he gets up again but then falls again ..Rano goes up to him & helps him get up ..he asks her : kaun hai ..she doesn't reply ,,he asks again …she replies : dost hi samajh lo ..she holds on to him ,taking his hand she takes it around on her shoulder to give him support & makes him walk ..he is muttering sumthing ,,,she is not able to understand ..Finally after much difficulty she manages to take him to his car …she looks around 4 the driver but doesn't find him around …She looks at Baaji ..he is taking something out 4rm his pocket ..its the car keys …he tries to open the lock but fumbles ..Rano is surprised to see that he intends to drive the car …

Rano questioningly: ur not going to drive the car ,,ur not in a position to drive a car ..

Baaji drawls : Kyun kya mujhe hua …theek to hoon main ..he smiles at her , & again tries to open the door ,,the keys falls out of his hands ..he tries to pick up the keys but falls himself ,, he laughs at himself ..Rano is luking at him …She picks up the keys & tells him to get up ,,,she would drop him home ..Baaji tries to get up & falls again ,,Rano gives him her hand 4 support ..he takes her hand & gets up & fully putting his weight on her 4 support …they walk a little to a taxi stand …she takes a cab & makes him sit ..she sits besides him & gives the address to the driver ..

Baaji : ye tumhari gaadhi hai …

Rano : Nahi ,,,ye taxi hai ..

Baaji : Par hum taxi mein kyun ja rahe hain …tumhari gaadhi kahan hai …

Rano : mere paas gaadhi nahi hai ..

Baaji : magar mere paas to hai ,,,usme chale …

Rano : Mujhe driving nahi aati ..

Baaji : Mujhe aati hai ,,,main chalaunga …

Rano : Aapki haalat nahi hai car chalane ki ..

Baaji : arey tumhe kaise pata ,,mere sar mein dard hai aur ghoom bhi raha hai …. He holds his head with his hand & then lies down keeping his head on lap ….Rano is too surprised to do anything ..she stares at his face ,,,his eyes r closed as if sleeping peacefully .... there is a silence in the car except 4 the bangles on her hands which made sound when she ran her fingers through his hair ..suddenly he takes hold of her hand ,,opens his eyes & looking at her thoughtfully he sayz Maa bhi aisi hi chudiya pehenti thi …unke haaton mein bhi aise hi chan chan karti thi …mujhe bahut achchi lagti hain …Rano just looks at him ..he continues " mujhe maa ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai" …Rano can see tears in his eyes … she hesitantly runs her finger through his hair …Tears well up in her eyes too ,,,she is too pained to see him in this condition …she is thinking what could hav happened in Baaji life ,,,why is he in this condition …

Suddenly the taxi stops ,,,they hav reached their destination …Rano wakes Baaji up ,,he opens his eyes inquiringly ….she tells him that they have arrived at his home …he gets up ,,Rano helps him down wid the help of the driver … The watch man opens the door & helps Rano take him inside … She asks the watchman to take him up to his room ,,but he goes saying there is no one at the gate …he points upstairs towards Baaji room ..she calls him back to help but he leaves …she tells to Baaji who is leaning on to her "tumhare naukar bhi tumhari tarah hain ..khadoos " ..after much difficulty she takes him up … On reaching upstairs she asks him " tumhara room ab bhi wohi hai kya" …He luks up at her & asks "tumhe mera room pata hai kya .." …She gets puzzled & lies " Nahi ,,,mujhe kaise pata hoga tumhara room kaun sa hai .." ..waise tum ab apne kamre tak to jaa sakte ho ,,,mere sahare ki zaroorat nahi .." & takes his hand off her shoulder …He stands on his feet & just as he steps towards his room he stumbles & is about to fall when she holds him to steady him..he laughs aloud …she takes him to his room ,,, just as she steps in ,,she looks around ..nuthing is changed but then everything luks changed to her …past memories again hit her …she lets go of his hand & turns to leave …Baaji quickly comes across her …. " Tum kahan ja rahi ho"

Rano : apne ghar …

He asks her not to go …Rano sayz : Ye aapka ghar hai aur mujhe apne ghar jaana hai …dair ho rahi hai .. Baaji comes closer to her : tum kaun ho …mujhe kyun lagta hai k maine tumhe kahin dekha hai ..

Rano : dekha hoga …dunya mein bahut se logon se milkar aisa lagta jaise hum unhe jaante hain ..saying this she turns towards the door ,,but Baaji suddenly pins her back on the wall …with both his arms on both sides of her ,,,,looking deeply in her eyes he sayz : tumhari aankhen bahut khoobsoorat hain ….Rano is too shocked to do anything …she tries to get away …but he doesn't leave any space 4 her to get out …She looks up him …He continues : Tumhari aankhen mujhe kisi ki yaad dilate hain ..

Rano looking up him asks almost in a whisper : Kiski …

Baaji & Rano luk into each other eyes ,,,Baaji bends down & places a kiss on her forehead …Rano closes her eyes …Baaji cups her face & slowly kisses her on her lips …A strange sensation shots up within Rano …she almost freezes at his touch …a warm feeling suddenly taking over her ..Baaji arms go around her tightening his hold her ,,,she also hugs him back ..he deepens his kiss & Rano responds back with same passion & fervor .. after a while Rano suddenly realizes that this is wrong ,,she couldn't let Baaji do this to her ,,,she didn't want to get hurt ..she could feel Baaji hands moving on her back …she knew she had to break it …gathering some courage she breaks off the kiss & getting out of his hold pushes him behind ,,,he tries to hold her back but she stops him telling him that ur drunk ..…they r both breathing heavily .. just as she turns ,,he hugs her 4rm behind & asks her not to leave him …,,his arms encircling her again ..he kisses her on the neck ..she breaks 4rm his hold & pushes him bak again …he falls on the bed ..he tries to hold her hand due to which sum of her bangles break causing a cut on her wrist …she looks up him …he laughs & finally passes out ….she comes near him ..seeing him pass ,,she straightens him on the bed ,,takes off his shoes & covers him with a quilt …she goes near his face & kisses his forehead …Baaji murmurs something in his sleep …Rano leaves the room & goes downstairs …she looks around the house on her way out ….she doesn't find anyone at home …on the gate she asks the watch man where were the family members ...the watchman replies that Baaji lives here all alone ,,,he has no one in his family ,,,Rano is very surprised ..she gives him Baaji car keys & explains the location where its parked & leaves 4rm there …On her way back Rano is thinking of Baaji & where could his family be ….she knew he had a family ,,but the watchman had said that he was all alone & had no family ….she decides to ask her uncle about him ..

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Naku is packing her things ,,,,she is leaving 4 her home in Panchgani in the morning …Nupur is helping her out …

Nupur : Yaar ur going so soon …kuch din aur reh leti ..

Naku : Nupur madam ,,,main jaldi nahi ja rahi ,,, balke is baar mera stay kuch zyada ho gaya …

Nupur : Din kaise beete pata hi nahi chala ..

Naku : haan ye to hai ..

Nupur teases her : Waise tumhe waapis aana to hai ….apne janmon k saathi se nahi milna kya …haan yaad aaya wo tune apne bags exchange kar liye ..

Naku : haan wo main aaj gayi thi …ho gaye ..

Nupur : Phir to fight nahi hui uske saath ..

Naku thinking about the morning incident kinda blushes ,,,she looks away 4rm Nupur & says : nahi ,,,koi fight nahi ..

Nupur : achcha to phir idhar dekh meri taraf ..

Naku glaring at her : kya hai ..

Nupur exclaims : Hayee Naku …tere gaal itne gulabi ,,gulabi kyun ho rahe hain ..kuch to daal mein kala hai ..

Naku putting her hand on her cheeks : kya bol rahi hai ..kuch bhi bolti rehti hai ..

Nupur : kuch to gadbad hai ….bata na kya hua ,,koi shararat to nahi ki us hunk ne ..…she winks at her …Badle badle se sarkar nazar aate hain ..

Naku going red again in a stern voice : Nupuurr …kuch nahi hua & now stop it ..

Nupur teasingly sings : Jab se tere naina ,,mere naino se laage re ..sab se begana hua …b4 she could sing further Naku runs after her with a pillow in her hand …they r running after each other & teasing each other when the door bell rings .. Nupur goes to open the door saying to Naku " Mayank hoga pizza k saath .."…It waz Mayank at the door with the pizza ..he greets them & hands over the boxes to Nupur …They all sit sown on the floor cushions & start to eat … Mayank asks Naku if her packing is done & he would drop her at the bus stand next morning ..Naku nods ..

Nupur signals Naku & starts teasing her again ,,,Naku glaring her to stop …Mayank notices both of them & asks : Ye tum dono kya ishaare kar rahe ho ….

Naku : Kuch nahi Mayank ,,,,ye Nupur bhi na bas ….Lo tum ye aur lo & keeps another slice of pizza on his plate .. Mayank luks at Naku & then at Nupur & then shrugs his shoulders & continues with his eating .. Nupur again starts doing signals to Naku …Mayank luks up : Kya hai ,,

Nupur : Kya ,,,maine kuch kaha kya ..

Mayank is about to say something ,but then stops ,,,he picks the drinks glass , when Nupur sayz to him in a dramatic way : Waise aaj tum bahut sexy lag rahe ho …. Mayank almost chokes on his drink ..Naku is having a hard time to stop giggling ....Mayank sits up straight ,,,his hands automatically goes up to his shirt button which is unbuttoned …he quickly buttons it up …clearing his voice he asks her : tumhari tabiyat to theek hai …

Nupur : meri tabiyat ko kya hua ..theek hi hoon …getting a little closer to him ..she humms the song Jab se tere naina mere naino se laage re …& winks him to come more closer …

Naku now has her hands on her mouth to stop herself 4rm laughing aloud …

Mayank gets up : Naku mere khayal se ab mujhe jaana chahiye ,,tum subah tayyar rehna …then luking at Nupur he sayz "Nupur ki neeyat aaj theek nahi hai" ….he stops as to wat he said luks at nupur who is glaring at her & then saying : nahi mera matlab tabiyat theek nahi …use aaram karna chahiye …& he leaves after bidding them good night …Just as Mayank leaves Naku looses all control & laughs like mad ,,Nupur also joins her ….Naku laughing mimics Mayank : "Nupur ki neeyat theek nahi hai …"….Omg Nupur …Tumne to Mayank ko dara diya …dekho kaise izzat bachcha k baagha …they laugh sum more & then get up to go to sleep ..

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Its almost midnight when Dutta reaches home after his business dinner …before going to his room he goes to check on Aaye ….he opens the door to her room slowly ,,She is sleeping on her bed ..he cums closer to her bed ,,,& properly arranges the duvet on her legs …he watches her 4 a few minutes ….she looked a little disturbed in her sleep …just then he notices the bouquet on her bedside …he instantly knows that who could have send it …He takes a deep sigh & thinks " at least u remembered maa b'day" … he knew Aaye missed him a lot … Baaji held a very special place in Aaye's heart … Only if Baaji understood ..He stands there 4 a little while gazing at her & then goes to his room ..