NEW FF: TERE LIYE... important message p11 21.7.10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Helllo!!!!! Hi, I'm prachiee (real name Preity) most of you will know about the ff i am currently continuing for mystery_97, which is 'Only you...'

welll.... i present to you, my new RaDev ff: (completely made by me this time 😉: please give loads of support!!!
i will update this ff once a week on tuesday...
so....here goes:

Prachiee Telefilms Presents...
A tale of two lovers...
Made for each other by God, yet separated by man...
A tale of two soul mates...
Ready to do anything...
for each other...
and their love...
Tere Liye...
For your sake...
Inspired by my dream....😆


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PART PAGE

Introduction------------1
PM List------------------1
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2-------------------------3

3-------------------------5
4-------------------------7
5-------------------------7
6-------------------------8
7-------------------------10
8-------------------------in process
-PM LIST-
If you would like to be added or taken off the PM list, please PM me, thanks. 😃
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palak13
DEVIKA8
bvs7691
radev_66
littlekitty
sugarandspice
*Maleena*
RaDev_addict
-Destiny-
chalhov
DEVED1284
radev_forever
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Posted: 15 years ago
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TERE LIYE...

For your sake...

PLEASE DO READ THE LYRICS AND TRANSLATION; THEY ARE IMPORTANT TO THE FF.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iA0djwFD0NA

Tere liye, ham hain jiye- For your sake, I live

honton ko siye- with my lips sealed.
Tere liye, ham hain jiye- For your sake, I live,

har aansoo piye- swallowing all my tears.
Dil mein magar- But in my heart,

jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye- the lamp of love continues to burn
Tere liye, tere liye- for your sake, for your sake

Zindagi, le ke aayi hai- Life has brought with it

beete dinon ki kitaab- the chronicle of days past.
Ghere hain, ab hamein,- incomparable memories

yaadein be-hisaab- surround us now.
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe- Without asking, I received

kitne saare jawaab- so many answers!
Chaaha tha kya- Look at what I desired, and what,

paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye- in turn, I received.

Dil mein magar- But in my heart,

jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye- the lamp of love continues to burn
Tere liye, tere liye- for your sake, for your sake

Kya kahoon- What can I say?

duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair- The world has shown such ill-will to me.
Hukam tha, main jiyun- I'm commanded to live life,

lekin tere baghair- but without you.
Naadaan hai woh- How ignorant they are,

kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair- who say you are a stranger to me.
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye- Many wrongs we have been done, my love!
Dil mein magar- But in my heart,

jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye- the lamp of love continues to burn
Tere liye, tere liye- for your sake, for your sake

Tere liye, ham hain jiye- For your sake, I live

honton ko siye- with my lips sealed.
Tere liye, ham hain jiye- For your sake, I live,

har aansoo piye- swallowing all my tears.
Dil mein magar- But in my heart,

jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye- the lamp of love continues to burn
Tere liye, tere liye- for your sake, for your sake

PART 1

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Radhika:

'Dev...' My heart pulse quickened, my breath deepened.. 'Dev...' My insides screamed to me in want and longing...

'Dev...' I breathed. My eyes filled with litres of unshed tears... my hand went over my stomach, where presently my will to live was... my child... Dev's child... before everything happened...

I sat up abruptly, breathing deeply... the sharp pains in my heart was still fresh, and the wounds were still deep...

I needed him so badly, yet I couldn't get him... I wanted him so badly, yet he was out of reach...'Dev... where are you?' I asked... waiting for the answer I was never going to get. My throat dried up in pain as the tears threatened to spill, but I somehow controlled them. If the tears spilled now, I would break my promise to him' to my Dev'

FLASHBACK:

'Jaaneman, you look horrible when you cry, you know?' he grinned at my tearful face, trying to make the mood lighter. 'Come, I'll show you!' he dragged me off the chair and into the adjoining bathroom and placed me in front of the mirror. 'See!' he laughed, my face was red and puffy, as were my eyes.

'Baby, promise me you'll never cry again, I don't like it' ok?' he took my cold, small hand and clasped it into is warm, big one. He rubbed it slightly to make me realise he was there for me' for us'

END OF FLASHBACK.

'Dev'' my insides cried again' 'Where did you go'? We need you!' I whispered to the air. The trees rustled, and were the only witness to my suffering'

'Beti, tum jag gaye? (Have you woken up?)' The croaked voice of a half-asleep ashram member asked me' If only she knew' sleep had left me forever, just like my Dev'

'Nahi, mai thik hu, mujhe neend nahi aarihe, isliye, aap so jao, mai abhi aaye. (No, I'm fine, I can't sleep, you go to sleep, I am just coming)' I managed to give a decent answer to her, although she didn't suspect anything from my hoarse voice and went to sleep.

My eyes again filled with tears' Dev. Dev. DEV. My heart pined for him.

'No. I shouldn't be sad. I chose this. I protected him. I saved him, then why am I crying? Stop being selfish. YOU SAVED HIM! You should be happy! He's alive because of your decision'!' I tried convincing myself that what I decided was right, my mind was deceived but my heart wasn't.

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Dev:

'Jaaneman'' tears seeped through my eyes' 'Kahan ho tum? (where are you?) Why did you leave me?' My body ached for her, but she was gone'

'If only' if only I didn't leave her on her own for those 10 seconds' if only' then, maybe she would be here with me now, I need you baby! Where are you?!' My cries were left unheard' I turned my face to the picture of Krishna in OUR room'

'Why, God Why, WHY?! Why did you snatch my Radhika away from me!?'

'I know she's alive. She can't leave me like this. She promised me that we would be together, forever, then why!'

FLASHBACK

'Baby! Where were you! Don't do that EVER again!!!!!' I almost shouted in fright.

'Sorry, I was looking at the sea'' she replied with a guilty look on her face.

'Jaaneman, it's ok. Promise you'll tell me next time you go anywhere, ok?'

'Don't worry, I promise, we'll always be together, forever''she sighed and rested her head on my chest'

END OF FLASHBACK.

'Baby' you broke your promise' but it's ok, I forgive you' if you please just come back' Please baby, PLEASE!!!' I cried throughout the night' sleep had evaded me' and it was out of reach, just like Radhika'

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please leave comments, thanks loads prachiee 😳 xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg prachiee i was crying i cant believe radev want to be so close to eachother but they cant but wonder wt the mystery is i hope u tell us soon and make radev meet soon to plz lovely start i loved the lyrics very nice and the first part briallaint so that nice 2 ff in a week one one tuesday and thursday thanks alot prachee tc xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: palak13

omg prachiee i was crying i cant believe radev want to be so close to eachother but they cant but wonder wt the mystery is i hope u tell us soon and make radev meet soon to plz lovely start i loved the lyrics very nice and the first part briallaint so that nice 2 ff in a week one one tuesday and thursday thanks alot prachee tc xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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hehehe you are also the first one comment ⭐️
aww,,, dont cry... its ok... hehehe this ff will have a lot of mystery... 😊 radev will reunite... butnot yet.... yay im glad you liked the lyrics... they make me cry sooo much😭
thanks im glad you liked the part 😛 hehehe yes two ffs in one week 😉
no problem, thanks sooo much for giving me loads of support in both ffs....
hehehe
take care
loads of love
prachiee
😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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What a sad start why r they seperated.Interesting starting with tragic circumstances.😲😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwwwwwww This is sort of a new approach for a FF. I mean a story after RaDev are together.
Loved it a lot! If I'm not asking much can you please update this FF twice a week so that I can at least try to control my suspense nerve? 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalhov

What a sad start why r they seperated.Interesting starting with tragic circumstances.😲😭

hmmm... quite sad story Cry hehehe the mystery of why they are separated will soon be revealed...
thanks for your comment
prachiee 😳
xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: radev_forever

Awwwwwwwww This is sort of a new approach for a FF. I mean a story after RaDev are together.
Loved it a lot! If I'm not asking much can you please update this FF twice a week so that I can at least try to control my suspense nerve? 😉

hehehe... yh i decided to try something different...
im so glad you liked it... but im sorry, i wont be able to update twice a week... school and exams etc...
sorry
but you 'll have to wait once a week....
maybe later when school slows down its demands i will post twice a week...
but not now...
sorry again
thanks for your comment 😊
prachiee 😳
xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting start 👏👏👏with😭😭😭
waiitng for the next.
add me to PM list
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

interesting start 👏👏👏with😭😭😭

waiitng for the next.
add me to PM list
thanks

thankyou 😃i know 😭
next on tuesday
iwill surely add you to thepm list
thanks for your comment😛
prachiee 😳
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