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Posted: 15 years ago
really superb sara loved each & every bit very beautiful & amazing...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ sheela it is morning so the little girl need them
@ leena .........thanks dear :D
@mula......awww sweety..........:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sara such a romantic episode yaar!!!!!!!!!!!! when did Pooja enter into the room? soooooooo sweet. Post the next 1 ASAP
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Posted: 15 years ago

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folded rag 1

Santo just smile and get up as she cover DM more with bed sheet …….now she get out the bed taking with her…. her little princess ……..and in very low voice she say to Pooja

Santo: bita …..baba very tired and he need sleep ……

As she walks with her out side the room , santo closed the door and take Pooja to Baa ……Santo leave Pooja there as Bass say that she will take care of her ……Baa smile the one with meaning to santo as santo walk back to her room……

When santo enter she found DM just be as she left him ……..emotional smile appear on her face as she see him …….she closed the door behind her …..walk to the bed and stand next to his place ………her eyes speak it more then any words could describe her feeling……the happiness inside her dance like the once from such long time when she danced under the rain because of the payall gift………

She could not believe that he is here sleeping with a lovely smile on his face ……she just could not believe her lucky to coming back again to his life …….suddenly santo remembered something and she walked to the wardrobe ……she opened and start to search …………

Then in a moment she found it ……..it is folded of piece of cloth and santo sigh ……..this is for her more expensive then any things in this life ….more then the jewelry more then the money…….more more

Her eyes turn from the folded piece to DM ………..and there are small drops appearing in her eyes of tears ….santo again look to what in her hand and she site down the floor in silent ………

She start to open the rag when DM voice reach her ears as he start to call her in sleepy voice……

DM: santo……..ahhh….santo……

Santo: ha Malik ………in low voice as she start to get up along with him sitting on the bed …….DM was wear his underwear with his dota ….he look sleepy….and fresh ……he just like what his waif doing sitting on the floor …..And in his strong voice DM asked

DM: ai santori what u doing sitting there on the floor? U are alright?

Santo: ha Malik I am Ok ………..now she just walk to the bed and sit on it……

I just was looking for this ……..and she show him the rag……..

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear .......meri bandini

I am sorry for paining u as I throw the stupid words in u face in unforgettable way........and when i be alone in my room ....my heart just break that u away from me and u will not come because of me and that is just .......mistake

so when I came to u ......calling u .....that not because I just hurt u but because I hurt my self also in that uncarre moment but u punished me and I deserved meri pyari

as u give u back like u say I am here and not here at the same time and it just killing me so deeply .............

i bring u in my arms .......saying in my silent touch ...........santo i love u ....forgive me

but silence not enough .................so the waiting honeymoon is u gift ....is my way to say :

SORRY.......meri Bandin .........SORRY

u ......Malik
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great epi. n letter dear...👏 Luk fwd for next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww sara i wuv it dear... aww.. I look forward to your FF's they are apart of my everyday life.. Muahz... U rock hun as usual... and the letter was just mind Blowing... very emotional.. please continue asap..

Luv...

Sam............
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks guys
priy.......sam...............crystal
i will post soooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Folded rag……2

DM looks at her with questions in his eyes as his still site on the bed …..santo smiled in his face ….that smile of love ….of emotional……and she say

Santo: in my life …..in the moment that I become your wife I had made promise at me self ….that I will never leave u whatever happened whatever I pained ……or hurts …..but not what we want always happened ….the day I had left u behind me for our daughter is the day that I was not letting u go just like that ….I had took u with me …..As I was a bout to take u with me when u throw the divorce matters in my face …..The tears appear in her eyes……..but the words come out even her voice sound be so hoarse …..DM face be like why u say that?....and how? ……..but even that he just keep silent to let her finished what she starts to bring it out

Santo: I was take u along as I hide u in this rag…….ha hide u ….u want to know how…..I will show u ….malik …..

The sentences not continue as santo just have difficult on express her feeling so openly but he know that she just don't want to hide anything from him from now on …..DM hand settles on Santo back and move in softly to calm her down and make her more relax ….santo smile ….the one wish show that she is fine

She start to open the rag and what inside it is not what DM was expected ……

The rag contain …..
The bangle whish he had given her in dance competition that had done in Dhrampour ……..the pic. Of Hiten weeding whish are taken for both of them ……….his Kurta one of his old one ….the white one whish santo throw the red color on it………some of his hair mix with long hair which is belong to her ……the mirror that he was bring it for her from his first trip to Anterwape when she took the payal …….and the most emotional one for him is the white sheet of there first weeding the one when he walked away from her ..She just keep it as it is part of them ……….and there are random pic of them ………………..and payals that he had give her once

DM never expected that never ….he look at the things to look again at her ….. And he understand that she live just with him ….in him……forever and what he do

DM just hug her in sudden and santo be so emotional as her tears start to fall down in there losing moment ……in there life ……in there ….just there

DM holds her tightly in his arms, as he notices the tears DM lips catch the tears with soft touch and……

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara its superb & well emoted😍, love both episode👍🏼 and the letter was lovely😳

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