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Posted: 15 years ago
prachie, just finished reading the FF.. I am eagerly waiting for the next part.
I understand, with how much enthusiasm we post one part and then the expectation of responses. Yes, dear, everyting ( liking, comments) count to continue with next part.. I am glad that i was not looking for responses at the beginning, and was keep posting the parts.. i was crazy lol with the story line... but now when i read back few earlier parts, there is so much blunder, and then i thought, did they all read through it and still gave me supprt to continue..
so i belive just concentrate on your story line and go ahead.. sometimes we feel very sad ,not seeing comments by expected people...and wait for long ... but then they also have their side... so, i woukd like to say, continue with ur storyline, the readers will surely support you... go ahead dear... Good Luck 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

prachie, just finished reading the FF.. I am eagerly waiting for the next part.

I understand, with how much enthusiasm we post one part and then the expectation of responses. Yes, dear, everyting ( liking, comments) count to continue with next part.. I am glad that i was not looking for responses at the beginning, and was keep posting the parts.. i was crazy lol with the story line... but now when i read back few earlier parts, there is so much blunder, and then i thought, did they all read through it and still gave me supprt to continue..
so i belive just concentrate on your story line and go ahead.. sometimes we feel very sad ,not seeing comments by expected people...and wait for long ... but then they also have their side... so, i woukd like to say, continue with ur storyline, the readers will surely support you... go ahead dear... Good Luck 👍🏼

thanks hope u like it... :)
thanks for your encouraging words :) don't worry your ff is amazing, we all love it 👏
thanks for your support... every word means a lot 😳
i will continue tomorrow with part 13... eeep😕
thanks again
love
prachiee 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for this lovely Radev story,your idea is really unique&unacceptable
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part 13

Previously

He (Arjun) broke away from the kiss in pain and raised his hand to slap her…

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He was watching both of them through the gap in the door…

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Arjun raised his hand to slap her. His eyes overflowed with anger and her eyes in fear of the awaiting pain…

But he was watching through the gap in the door, and at the right moment, he rushed in and held Arjun's raised hand.

Dev: ARJUN! How dare you raise you hand on my fianc?

He pulled Arjun's hand away and punched him one in the stomach.

Arjun winced in pain, and as per plan, punched Dev one in the stomach.

The boxing match continued for a couple of hits and then Radhika decided that enough was enough, and pulled with all her strength at Dev's arms and dragged him to the side.

She was terrified… She had just seen Dev's violent side. Instead of talking to any of them, she walked off, giving both a dirty look.

She went downstairs after cleaning up and informed everyone that she was going to the Mandir, but didn't know what time she would be back.

She reached the Mandir and went to the empty space near the river bank.

There was a strong wind blowing and the trees rustled in the wind creating a strange atmosphere. She went as far away from the Mandir as she could and sat by the river bank.

She was thinking about everything. Her life, what she wanted to do – to become a doctor and hen her mind rested on the topic of marriage.

She didn't want to get married yet, hell this marriage was happening without her opinion!

But she admitted that Dev was different, different to any boy she'd ever met…

His touch was different, it extinguished the flames all over her skin… but.

But, but she saw his violent side… and it wasn't pretty.

And she wasn't some dumb nave girl either!

She could stick up for herself, heck she could! She was a strong person! So what was the need for all the violence?

Screw the idea of acting soft! She was going to turn into her normal, un-nave self.

Then….

This argument inside her head may have sounded stupid, but it would determine a lot of things…

Meanwhile, Radhika's mehendhi function was going to start in approximately 3 hours, but she (Radhika) was no where to be seen…

*******

Dev and Arjun were secretly talking between themselves:

A- s***, that wasn't supposed to happen. She was supposed to go crying to you…

D- I know… crap. What do we do now…

A- I dunno, just wait and watch…

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Radhika came back, and it was only 2 ours left till her function. She avoided all questions and went straight into her room to think.

R(thinking)- what is going on…. Ughh I don't know… why am I getting married? No one has asked me even if I WANT to get married… heck. I have my whole career to start in India… Ugh… if only I knew that I was going to be got rid of so quickly, then I wouldn't have come back to India… I miss US. I miss it loads… my freedom, my friends, my life… And here I am in India, destroying my life my getting married to an idiot… Ugh… I hate it. I hate men who treat women like they're some vulnerable thing… I hate men who treat women like they need protecting from each and every little thing. Gosh. I'm not a baby… what was the need for Dev to beat up Arjun? All that violence, all that anger? Why am I ruining my life? ……

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MEANWHILE (AT THE SAME TIME AS RADS IS THINKING)

D(thinking)- why am I feeling like this? Radhika has been away for a couple of hours and I am feeling this strange kind of emptiness in my soul… this pain is unbearable… but why? I have never felt like this before… so why now? I know that this pain is because of Radhika… but why is it happening… I shouldn't be feeling pain from her, I need to GIVE her pain… then… but… oh no…

He realised it then. No wonder Radhika's each touch made him shiver. No wonder her laughter made him happy and her frown made him sad… he LOVED her.

D(to himself)- Love? It can't be. I love ANGEL. ANGEL! NOT Radhika! Radhika has caused ME pain, I can't love her… it's lust… yes… just lust…

He tried convincing himself, his mind was convinced, but his heart thought differently…

*******

Radhika- I know who can help me… Angel… I'll ring her now…

Radhika managed to find her iPhone in the mess of her wardrobe and quickly dialled the number….

Angel picked up; RADHIKA!!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I have AMAZING NEWS!!

R- huh?

Angel: RADS!! I'm pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

R- WHAT!!! REALLY!!! EEEEEEP!!! OMG!!! How many months????

A- 2!!!!!

R- And you didn't tell me???

A- Stupid, I found out today!!!

R- OMG!! ANGEL I'M SOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! I'M GONNA BE AN AUNT!!!

In her mind, Radhika thought not to stress Angel out with her problems, and decided not to tell her.

*****

Vaishali and Devaki: RADHIKA!!! WHERE ARE YOU!!! You need to get ready!!!

Radhika sighed. She NEEDED to talk to Dev NOW.

R- Yes mom, I'm getting ready…

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She straightened herself and proceeded out the door. There, Dev was waiting for her.

D- We have to go down together.

Radhika thought for a minute. She remembered her promise to herself: to become her normal self again and stop being soft and acting un-nave,

R- And if I don't want to?

She said with as much attitude as possible to the man she was on the verge of hating.

She glided down the stairs, leaving a shocked Dev staring and admiring her back.

D- Wow. She has got a really nice body… he said to himself… daydreaming.

Radhika was wearing: http://www.nimmifashions.com/Images/designer_sarees/NFD-105.jpg

(with jewellery in picture)

It was really simple and hugged her body like second skin, and of course she looked stunning in it.

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She reached the bottom of the stairs and was met by Vishaka, who was burning in jealousy over the fact that Radhika, her YOUNGER sister, was getting married to HER love….

She grabbed Radhika's arm, before anyone saw her, dragged her to a secluded corner.

V: Remember what I told you, Radhika? I told you to KEEP YOUR HANDS OFF Dev… and what do you do? You decide to get married to him? Shameful woman… Watch it you b****. You think you can steal MY love and get away with it? Just wait and watch. Just wait and see my plan. Wait and watch my wedding the day after tomorrow. MY wedding, NOT yours.

R: Speak softly Vishaka. You don't want everyone to find out about yourplans, do you?

Radhika spoke in such a cool way, and with attitude that it shocked Vishaka to her wits…

Mrinalini saw Radhika, and called her over… Dev saw them, and stood silently behind both of them…

M: Radhika you look sooo pretty!!!

Dev in his mind, 'well she IS my bride…

R: Thanks bhabhi, but also, you are looking pretty amazing yourself, especially with your glowing face… Radhika said, teasing her a bit…

Dev in mind: 'Radhika, you know how to make people feel good…'

R: Bhabhi, how many months pregnant are you?!

M: Sirf… um 5 months…

R: Wow! You are doing really well for 5 months, Radhika the doctor, told her…

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Precap:

What were you thinking about? He asked her after the long silence.

Nah, it's nothing… she replied.

Go on, you can tell me… he urged

Actually I was thinking how I'm supposed to seduce you…

And before she knew it, she had said it and her eyes widened at the thought of his response.

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Sorry for the short part, I wrote it in a hurry, all this boring stuff needs to happen before the new plot starts twisting the story… sorry

Please leave your comments, thanks

Love

Prachiee😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankyou 😳
yesiwill update soon, probably nextthursday, andguys/girls, i'm sorry... i said i would update yesterday... but i forgot... the whole remembering to update the ff thing, hasn't sunk in yet, sorry 😕
love prachiee
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Prachiee, really good update dear...I will be anxiously waiting for the next update, thursday feels so far way!😭😭 Anyway i appreciate your effort to continue the FF!!
Edited by sun_singh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_singh

Thanks Prachiee, really good update dear...I will be anxiously waiting for the next update, thursday feels so far way!😭😭 Anyway i appreciate your effort to continue the FF!!

It's now problem 😛, thanks, im glad you liked it... personally iwas bored when i was writing it but the good parts will come soon 😃
hehehe., yeah thursday is a bit far away😕 ... but i can onlyupdate once a week, because my school gives me loadsof homework... , and also becuase from now and for two years, i have really important exams.... so its hard Cry
thanks foryour support 😛
it really means alot to me:)
😳
Love
prachiee
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prachiee

It's now problem 😛, thanks, im glad you liked it... personally iwas bored when i was writing it but the good parts will come soon 😃
hehehe., yeah thursday is a bit far away😕 ... but i can onlyupdate once a week, because my school gives me loadsof homework... , and also becuase from now and for two years, i have really important exams.... so its hard 😭
thanks foryour support 😛
it really means alot to me:)
😳
Love
prachiee
xxx
😳

I fully unders. dear, always put your education first as it shapes your future!! Good luck to you...

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the update,i am waiting for another update.pllzzzz update sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait for the next part!

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