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Hey guys, Its me shona....Smile

Okei...my friend mariam (Marian_MJHT) requested me to write an os for her, im sorry for the delay jaan, i was totally busy since the past weeks, so i have slieghtly changed this os a bit, so hope u like it, this is my third OS on the current track.....kya karon....yehh track hai hi itni achi...lolz...so i thought of making another os..Smile


Gunjan her heart was not ready to accept Sams apology, all she could thought was Neils loss "chale jao yahan se"

Samrat he who came here to apologize was shocked hearing those piercing words from gunjan...his chashmish, his love, what more he could expect "chash....."

Gunjan now got angry and shouted "meine kaha na, chale jao yahan se" saying this she walked away from there

Samrat was totally heartbroken, what more could he get from life, his parents left him and now his chashmish, he stood there shocked, hoping for his chashmish to give a glance back, but for his surprise, she didnt turn and went straight from there "issi baat ka to dar tha mujhe chashmish...mein tumhe khona nahi chahta tha...shahid us sardarji ne sahi kaha tha.....mein tumse door chala jata hon...agar tum mere paas wapis nahi ayi..to mein samjh longa.................................k tum meri kabhi thi hi nahi........." he went from there taking his broken heart away with him.

Gunjan she was totally feeling bad for Neil, after all he was he childhood friend, she went to his office hoping for he to accept her apology after what happened, but she stopped at the door " agar neil, mujhe dekh k aur sad feel kare to......nahi......mein usse baad mein millongi"she took a step back, but then she heard a neil speaking to himself, she stood there and leaned in to listen, what neil was saying.

Niel "kyun howa yeh sab, kyun.....meine kissi ka kya bigara tha...jo mere sath aisa howa hai.....ek film hi to banana chaha tha.....lekin wo bhi mujhse door chali gayi.....meine socha ha...k shahid..is film se meri manzil mujhe mil jayigi....lekin na mujhe meri manzil mili na hi pyar....." he went from there

Gunjan she stood there totally feeling sad for neil, but when she heard the word love, she was totally shocked "neil, kissi se pyar karta hai....kon hai wo?".....she saw that neil was coming out, she quickly hided, neil went from there " shahid neil k cabin mein kuch pata chal jayi" she went in, she looked alot, but couldnt find anything useful, she was looking through the files when her eyes went on the laptop "neil issi laptop ko dekh kar baat karaha tha, shahid, issi mein koi prove ho" she opened the laptop and was dam shocked " meri photo!!!...." the person who she thought was her friend was her lover since childhood, he had her all information on the laptop, what more surprising could there be "neil....mujhse......pyar karta hai".

Samrat he went out, his eyes wanted to cry, but couldnt, his heart wanted to pour out, but couldnt, he loved her the most and shes the one, breaking his heart, he sat on the bench outside, thinking about the past memories," when he first met her as bhavesh, when they both fell in the pool, when he became her secret friend, when they confessed their love to eachother", a smile appeared on his face, atleast he got a smile with some memories. He looked at the moon "tumse meine bohot pyar kiya hai chashmish, aur hamesha karta rahonga....bas ek bar mere paas wapis ajao...aur kehdo...k samrat meine tumhe maaf kiya....." tears drooled down his cheeks, they were not the tear for missing her, they were tears of pain, pain of loosing her" meine waqai mein yeh sab jaan much kar nahi kiya chashmish...lekin yeh baat mein tumhe kaise samjhaon.....kaise" he putted his hands on his eyes, not to show anyone that hes crying, not even the moon, who was lightening his bright white light on him, the moon was shining at him, alone....hemoved his hands and looked at tthe moon "jab bhi chand nazar aata tha to chashmish mere paas hoti thi" he looked beside the empty seat and then looked at the moon " lekin aaj mein bhi tumari tarah, ......akela hon........

Gunjan she ran from there " mujhe neil se baat karni hi hogi" she looked everywhere but couldnt find him, then she went outside, she saw him standing alone, looking at the sky, she went upto him "neil"

Neil turned around and saw gunjan " gunjan tum yahan, kya baat hai"

Gunjan she didnt want to discuss this matter with him but she had to "mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi"

Neil "han bolo" looking at gunjan confusingly

Gunjan she didnt wanted to say this " kya....kya (she hesitated) kya tu..tum..mujse pyar karte ho" she finally said it.

Neil was shocked " tum...tumhe kaise pata chala"

Gunjan looked at him with a guilty face " actully......

Samrat he sat their wiping his tears " ab mujhe chalna chaiye.....lekin jaane se pehle..mein ek baar chashmish se milna chahta hon" he went back from there

Neil " han yeh sach hai, mein tumse bohot pyar karta hon, mein tumse bachpan se bohot pyar karta hon" he was looking directly in her eyes

Gunjan stood their shoocked, tears escaped her eyes, her heart divided in two" neil mujhe bachpan se pyar karta hai aur mein uske pyar ko kabhi samjh hi nahi payi, mujhe kabhi pata nahi chala k neil mujhse pyar karta hai" all these words were roaming around in her head, she looked at him but then she remembered samrat, she backed off " neil tum jante ho na....

Neil he knew what she was gonna say, he completed her sentence " han mein janta hon k tum sirf aur sirf samrat se pyar karti ho, aur mein tum dono k beech nahi aana chahta, na hi kabhi aounga.."

Gunjan was more suprised, " neil ne hamesha mera aur samrat ka bhala chaha aur samrat....wo kabhi mere pyar ko samjha hi nahi....ek taraf neil hai jo apne pyar ko hamare liye kurbaan kardia aur ek samrat....jo mujhpe bhasrosa nahi karta" she looked at neil " neil...tum bohot ache ho...lekin mein tumse pyar nahi karsakti....kyunke mein sirf aur sirf samrat se pyar karti hon...im sure...tumhe mujhse bhi ziada achi larki milegi...

Neil looked at her and smiled " tumse achi koi nahi hai gunjan"

Gunjan looked at him with teary eyes " neil please meri baat ko samjho...hum bohot acha dost hai...aur hamesha rahenge ok"

Neil smiled "ok, " he hugged her " thanks"

Gunjan was shocked at the sudden move but then she hugged him back

Samrat he was going back to the hotel, when his flower fell down "iss flower ko bhi abhi girna tha" he picked up the flower " yeh bhi meri tarah murjha gaya hai" as he moved the flower from his face, his eyes direct went on gunjan and neil, he was dam shocked, he saw them hugging eachother, tears formed in his eyes, and his heart was aching in pain " to isliye chashmish mujhe jaane ko keh rahi thi, ta k mere peet peeche, yeh sab kar sake.....mein nahi janta tha k chashmish itna gir jayigi" he went upto them and clapped his hands

They both were hugging eachother just then they heard the voice of claps, they broke apart and saw samrat their.

Gunjan she looked at him confusingly

Samrat eyes were filled with pain and hatred for them, he felt like killing neil but then he controled himself " wah....i must say......awsome planning"

Neil looked at him confusingly " kya matlab hai tumara"

Samrat gave a sleight laugh " wow....planning tum logon ki...aur matlab mein samjhaon"

Gunjan got angry now " samrat saaf saaf bolo kya baat hai"

Samrat " im sorry gunjan, kahin meine tum dono ko disturb to nahi kiya na"

Gunjan hearing her name from samrats mouth pierced her direct in the heart "gunjan......"

Neil understood what samrat was trying to say " kya bakwas karahe ho tum"

Samrat now he got angry " tum apni bakwas band rakhoge to tumare liye ziad acha hoga.....ab mujhe samjhe ayi k gunjan mujhe kyun wapis jaane ko keh rahi thi....ta k mere peet peeche yeh sab kar sake..."

Gunjan was shocked to hear those piercing words from his mouth " SAMRAT!!"

Samrat " apni awaz neeche rakho....chahon to mein bhi chila sakta hon......lekin mein tumari tarah nahi hon....tum janti ho meine us reporter se tumari information kyun li?................kyun k mein tumhe sorry kehna chahta tha....tumse mafi mange aya tha....tumse yeh kehne aya tha k gunjan... mujhe is film se koi problem nahi hai.....meine uss reporter ko sirf humari life k bare mein bataya tha.....lekin usne mujhse badla lene k liye...neil ko bhi beech mein dal diya... tum janti ho us reporter ne mujhe kya bola....k neil apni film ki end mein....apni manzil ko yani tumhe anjam dene wala hai.....isliye mein yahan aaya tha
........mujhe dar tha....k kahin tumare saath kuch galat na hojayi...kyunke tumare bina mein marjaonga.....lekin aaj mein zinda hoke bhi mar gaya....tumne mujhe mardala gunjan.....u killed me...

Gunjan She stood their shocked listening to the truth, she felt bad, guilty for not trusting sam, for not understanding him, for not supporting him " Samr...."

Samrat was so angry, that he couldnt even hear his name from her mouth, anger was fuming inside his body " oh ples, mujhe kuch nahi sunna" he got tears in his eyes, his anger turned into sadness " meine tumse kitna pyar kiya, yahan tak k samrat the great, tumhe....sirf tumhe itni door se sorry kehne k liye aya......lekin tum " anger filled his eyes again "....tum chahti ho na....k mein tumse door chala jaon....tum breakup chahti ho na....to theek hai....aaj bhi wohi hoga jo tum chahogi....cause i still love you" a tear escaped his eyes from the word of love " mein tumse itna door chala jaonga....k tum dhoonti reh jaogi...lekin samrat tumhe kahin nahi milega.....shahid we were not meant to be......together...." saying this he turned his back, and walked out.

Gunjan She stood their numb, she felt like shes no more, like she dosent exist, cause theres no gunjan...chashmish, without her samrat...and samrat just broke up with her, a tear rolled down her cheek as she saw her love going away from her " samrat....ples wapis ajao...ples....mein tumare bina marjaongi..." she broke down, like a sinking ship" I love you samrat.......I love you..."

End

okay guys, ples tell me how it was and yeah i will write the next part afterwards as i have a fractured arm lolz😆 so ples bear with me....sorry, while then, enjoy this
luv yaa
shona

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Res!
Me first! Me first!

Omg! Sona! Pehli baat Maine teri pm se pehle padh liya! Lolz! I think ur attitude is rubbing off on me! Lolz! I am just in love with this update yaar!! And of course u should continue it asap! Still feeling sorry only for sam! I hate gunjan! I hate her so much now, that it will be hard to like her again! Grrr! But I felt so sorry for Sammy....he deserves so much better! And I hope Gunjan realizes her mistake quickly and goes to manaofy him! Warna, she won't wanna know me! PlzplzplzplzplzplzplzplPlzpzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzllzlplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzlplz continue it sooonnn meri pyaari si behna!! Love uu!!!
Urs,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i love ur os its amazing and sad.............plssss cont soon i really badly want to know wat happens next..........keep up the good work di..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Res!
Me first! Me first!

Omg! Sona! Pehli baat Maine teri pm se pehle padh liya! Lolz! I think ur attitude is rubbing off on me! Lolz! I am just in love with this update yaar!! And of course u should continue it asap! Still feeling sorry only for sam! I hate gunjan! I hate her so much now, that it will be hard to like her again! Grrr! But I felt so sorry for Sammy....he deserves so much better! And I hope Gunjan realizes her mistake quickly and goes to manaofy him! Warna, she won't wanna know me! PlzplzplzplzplzplzplzplPlzpzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzllzlplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzlplz continue it sooonnn meri pyaari si behna!! Love uu!!!
Urs,
Sanju!



lolz sanju....im very sorry i had to stop here as my arm was aching...really sorry for that...and yeah i will try to cont soon...i really love your comment...n good..tu bhi meri tarah banti jarahi hai...pm se pehle pardna lolz😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 part di

how r u ??
how did u get ur arm fractured??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: preety88

i love ur os its amazing and sad.............plssss cont soon i really badly want to know wat happens next..........keep up the good work di..........



thnx hun...im glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

gr8 part di

how r u ??
how did u get ur arm fractured??



thnx dhruvika..im fine dear...i fellfrom my stairs lolz....😆😆
thnx 4 asking jaan
luv ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowow tht was nice and sad
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely os dear
i loved it
you have stopped at such a hert breaking part but i understand hope ur arm gets better soon
anyways update when u can
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg omg omg dis was jst so so sad poor Sammy I was cryinh whole time during reading dis OS man I feel so sorry for Sam n after knowing da whole truth gunji will realize her mistake bt can't believe she didn't believe Sammy she always misundestood him man continue soon n btw how's ur hand nw n how u factured it hopee it get better take care of ur hands

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