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Posted: 15 years ago
welcome dear friends
awwwwwwwwww u like the naughty look
will post soon next one
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW SARA sooooooooooo cute. Dm is no naughty. I can visualize his expressions while he is in a romantic mood. The way u have written dt DM checked every thing in d room b4 opening d door Ohh I laughed a lot. Very sweet. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next one SOON.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cuckoo_chand

WOW SARA sooooooooooo cute. Dm is no naughty. I can visualize his expressions while he is in a romantic mood. The way u have written dt DM checked every thing in d room b4 opening d door Ohh I laughed a lot. Very sweet. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next one SOON.

oh dear that is so nice and will post it soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago

The drops of rain 16

He opens the door to found Baa with champo and they are bring the breakfast for santo along with the medicine which Hiten go to buy it in the early morning

DM smile on there faces and he let them enter the room…….

They walk to where santo is rest …….Baa sits down as she look at santo and she starts asking …….

Baa: DM how the night go ……everything was ok?....last night the falling of rain was heavy…….

DM: ha Baa I checked santo temperature and give her the medicine on time the one which the doctor was given us………..and she just been sleeping the most of the night as she don't feel the storm at all

DM says it all in once and in a normal way as he actually did that and that what happened………

Santo smiled a tiny one as she hearing every word along with remembering every moment she spend it in DM arms…..the moments of dreams and it was it really was….santo say to herself

DM continue his talk along with Baa checking santo as she look to her face to her eyes ……………and suddenly Baa smiled ….a big one and she say …..

Baa: ok…ok…..seem everything is ok ……and she look at DM and again look back to santo in the same time ……..u know champo we will live them to have breakfast ……chalo come with me we should prepare the table for the rest of the family …come …come …. she say that while she walked out the door with a big wiliness smile on her face as she have knew what had happened in this room last night …….

DM not notice what is happening unlike santo who understand everything when Baa rub over her hair and she keep looking at her suddenly the smile appear and that make santo get sure that Baa notice the happiness and the shining on her face on both of there faces but ……

Baa want to remain silent not bec of santo but bec of DM who look younger and happy after such long time so for that she just left them alone behind her…….

AS they walked out side the room DM close the door and he turn to face a smiley santo who rise her hand to him as she asking him to come and hold her hand and that what DM did ……………….

As he holds her hand he felt that he has coming back to his home ……..she just pull him to site beside her as she want to feed him up…….

DM sit and he bring the tray on the bed along with santo folding her legs so now the tray settle between them ……..and she say

Santo: Dhramraj u thinks that Baa notices something or anything?

DM: NO……No way of that I behave normally in front of her…………….he say that and start to take some food in his hand …….DM rise the hand with food to santo mouth but santo say…

Santo: no u eats first………she likes asking him

DM: santorii …..meri pyari santorii….u Saied that u tired so u need u power now just eat from u husband hand without too much talking ……

Santo blushed as she know the meaning behind his words ………and she start eating from his hand as she also feed him in the same time ...........they lost in each other eyes and ………

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg sara i wuv it how cute.... baa knew what happened lol.. dm is too cute trying to cover up lol..i liked when santu called dm to hold her hand and she pulled him to sit.. thats sooo romantic,,,,. luv u sara keep it up my dear as I am eagerly waiting for the next drop of rain...
Edited by DmLovesSantu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: DmLovesSantu

omg sara i wuv it how cute.... baa knew what happened lol.. dm is too cute trying to cover up lol..i liked when santu called dm to hold her hand and she pulled him to sit.. thats sooo romantic,,,,. luv u sara keep it up my dear as I am eagerly waiting for the next drop of rain...

sam dear haa the romantic come even from touch will try to post today 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara dear...speechless...naughty dm...he acted normaly infront of baa...bt baa realizd wht happend as she saw ther happines in ther eyes...tis happines remains 4ever...santu hold his arms and puled him 2 sit him besides her...wen i read it,the scene came infront of me...wow wow wow wow....and dm said u need power...naughty boy...luvd ur each and every line sara...
❤️ u...dear...post it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ah Sara loved the drops of rain 😍
Baa can feel and sense that something special happened between them during the stormy night from looking at both our duffords, DM all looking young and happy and naughty DM get strength back and DM acting cool like Baa will not notice the change in him 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
comeon dm baa knows everything.i luv her..shes sooo sweet
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Posted: 15 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwww

sheela .......aww love is all what is between them

shahrah........ha she will notice
priya........ha she is lovely
same..............:)

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