I LOVE U MORE---A letter from Ridz to Armaan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A Letter from Riddhima to Armaan :


I LOVE YOU MORE

In words, I try to speak tonight,
I speak, through the words I write,

You are my million dreams come true,
I have many friends, but none like you.

Your voice, your touch, your kiss,
I miss them all.
In your arms, I let go,
Yet I don't fall.

You love me, I know
And I you,
But for us, fate had something else in store,

I'm sorry for all the pain I gave you.
When I broke your heart, know that mine broke too.

As I walk through fate's door,
Your hand I'll have to let go.

But one promise I want you to make me too,
Take care of my heart , cause I'm leaving it with you .

I want you to move on , to live, to be happy , to let go,
But always remember, I love you more.

This is a poem that I wrote inspired from a poem that my friend wrote. I wrote this to express what Ridz would want to tell Armaan after she makes "the decision to stick with what her fate has in store for her".

Do comment and let me know what you think ?

PS: I had written this way earlier during Armaan's entry but thought after todays SBS segment this would be very relevant. So posting it again



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Posted: 15 years ago
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wo-hhow !!!

shru you are back... !! and how.. !!

amazingly fantabulous ... !!!

that really struck a chord... πŸ‘ 😍

luv,
nikki
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Thanks πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: nickyashok

wo-hhow !!!

shru you are back... !! and how.. !!

amazingly fantabulous ... !!!

that really struck a chord... πŸ‘ 😍

luv,
nikki



Thanks niks πŸ˜ƒ

I really want her to say something on these lines to him when we have the locker room scene they showed in SBS 😳
I mean not a poem like this but the basic content abot how she still loves him and always will love him but was doing all this only because thats her fate and destiny now. πŸ˜­πŸ˜•
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful it couldn't get
better. One of the best post.
It was powerful enough to get
tears rolling down my cheek.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Janulicious

Wonderful it couldn't get
better. One of the best post.
It was powerful enough to get
tears rolling down my cheek.



Aww. Thanks πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mesmerisingly beautiful😭
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Originally posted by: qazplm

Mesmerisingly beautiful😭



Thanks πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thats fantastic! Loved it!

And its so perfect for the AR situation as shown in SBS!

Great Work!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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shruti it was so nice! matches the current dilemma of armaan and riddhima. i loved it!
you deserve a round of applause!
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