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Posted: 15 years ago


shot 5

"I have to do something I have to I cant leave her this way they don't understand her I have to do something"…
this was all that's going all through the mind of the business tycoon prem juneja , the person who didn't think twice of acts he does is now concentrating hard on something and cant get it out of his mind , the person who took decisions in seconds is now tired of thinking just thinking because he can do only that …
he wanted to run away But true love is a durable fire In the mind ever burning; Never sick, never old, never dead; From itself never turning.
He cant understand whats wrong with him but the problem is that everything is wrong with him , before few minutes he was guilty , then he was dizzy in her thoughts , then was angry on the people to disturb , and now he is trying to get an idea to help her
God this has to be kidding, so many emotions has aroused in him
He paced in his room like a children use to march at scouts, he was messing with his fingers and hair and suddenly preet entered
"whoa PB r u alright I heard that girl "
"m fine preet relax"
"fine really I heard from the doctor tht the mad girl got violent"
" she is not mad okk so keep ur limits to what u talk"
"ok ok well I came here for something else u have been discharged we will be leaving now"
"and what about her"
" gosh stop concerning that much PB we did whatever we can now we cant take her home"

prem thought for a minute and then it clicked
"good idea we can take her home and I really don't thnk this doctors can take care of her they don't understand her I saw what they r treating"
"whoa whoa a minute please what r u on and on blabbering"
" u heard right we will take her home see I have done a big mistake and she is my responsibility now"
" oh please PB she aint ur responsibility plz I don't understand whats happening to u ?"
"m talking all right and god when the hell did u started contradicting my decisions"
"don't use that power on me okk m not going to take that girl home my god u even don't know who she is u know I seriously think she is just acting and all and she is just concerned with money"
"ok its just rediculous to talk with u I will do whatever I think I want okk u should not be concerned with that "
"god damnit PB do whatever u want m least interested"

saying this preet stormed out of the room and prem saw his brother leaving with so much temper and he really didn't know what this temper was for …

preet wasn't much interested in her treatment nor to know about her not to take her home but prem was , he got discharged that day and was reluctant to even take her but preet didn't let that happen and even doctors forced that she has some tests to be done so he left the topic , it was three days he was back home but he cant take his mind off her and he knows what he is gonna do tomorrow

next morning he and preet went to hospital as per prems request and preet cant disobey his loving PB so he went unwillingly
preet went to talk to the doctor and prem went to take a glance of her , god it felt to him like he will become mad without a slight look of her
he tiptoed to her room but on entrance he heard some yelling voices and he could see it was her yelling at a nurse
"when are you going to take me out of here"

and then prem made his entry
"today"

and there she looked toward him with her big beautiful eyes
and prem spoke again
"I hope u wont mind giving us some privacy"
and he indicated the nurse to leave

he went forward and sat on the tool next to her bed
" so u got ur answer heer , we are leaving"

she didn't spoke anything
"heer r u listening"

and this time she looked at him and spoke
"I don't believe you"

"and why don't u believe me"

"because u left me that day alone"

"hmm I did a big mistake"

they were talking to each other like a child complaining to his guardian

"yes u did and I know u r lying as others use to , I know I don't remember my home so I cant be going"

and that melted prem the small smile on his face disappeared seeing her teary moist eyes
and the thing that amazed prem was that she was calm with him no yelling no shouting

"well I did u a favour by telling ur name didn't I "

and this time again heer looked at him
"yes "

"so will u do me a favour heer"
"yes"

"will u be my friend heer"

saying this prem extended his hand
heer waited for a few seconds looking at him and then she automaticaaly gave her hand in his
"yes"

" I need another favour"
"yes"

"will u stop saying yes"
"yes"

and prem looked at him making an angry face
"I mean no I mean yes okk ok I wont say yes "

saying this heer smiled a little bit and that was the first time he saw her smiling unwilling to let go off her soft creamy skin in his hand he went on staring her but after a few minutes he felt a small pull on his hand and it was her looking away trying to free her hand and prem embarresedly left her hand and ruffled his hair

" ok so heer as per friendship principles friends trust each other so do u trust me and will u come with me to my home"?

he saw her this time she nodded a little bit and he could see tears were now flowing through her eyes
prem couldn't help his emotions and he got up and took his hands to her cheek and took the tiny drop of tear on his finger
"I promise if u cry like this I l ask doctors to anaesthesize u and keep u here because I don't like cry babies , so I l ask the nurse to get u ready if ur crying ssession has ended so that we can go home"

saying this he left
in this few days prem has discovered a new being in himself and he was enjoying that

they completed all the neccesities in the hospital and three of them came out near their car
prete who completey ignored her presence was going to enter the drivers seat when prem stopped him

"leave it preet I will drive"
saying this he opened the back seat for heer and then making her comfortable he went near the drivers seat and opened the door
but the sight of inside of the seat , the steering wheel , the seat , the glass, and lastly her face got him distracted his hands began to tremble and sweat started flowing of his forehead , a quick flash of that night appeared near his eyes and horror caught him , trying to shake the memory of his head his eyes went on heer at back seat and again a fresh layer of memory of her blood drenched body caught him and he nearly collapsed and like found himself getting pulled into that nightmare
but the voice of preet saved him from collapsing
"r u fine PB"
he was looking at prem with horror struck eyes , he could see him trembling
"preet I think m not well u drive "

saying this pem left the place and came and sat beside drivers seat
beginning their journey back home , with a new start of friendship, emotions and something more which he yet has to discover …..




Love cures people -- both the ones who give it and the ones who receive it.
By
Karl Menninger



Ok that's it
Love
Aishu


I know I know its kinda filler m so sorry I was probably laming but u know we need to go up the story so heres a short part for u all





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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update........loved prem's concern for heer.......i dont agree with preet.......hope he'l stop ignoring heer from now on..........premeer scenes wer very cute nd adorable........cant wait to know wat happens next.......but the update was short ........pls do cont sooon nd dont make us wait for soooo long..........thanx 4 the pm........
Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
premeer scenes were cuteee
thnx for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesme update.......luvd prem concern towards heer.....prem heer scenes were cute.....but why preet is ignoring her......hope he understands her soon......thanks 4 pm.....update soon and long one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey fab update...soo glad prem took the tough decision of bringing heer home...im glad atleast now her thoughts wont trouble her much as she'll be rite in front of his eyes....well it was short and uve updates after such a long time....!!! i wish that something more to be discovered is done sooner..plzzz/..
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Posted: 15 years ago
meeeee!!!

shot 5

"I have to do something I have to I cant leave her this way they don't understand her I have to do something"… Aww...his sooo understanding but wat can we expect from PREM 😆😉
this was all that's going all through the mind of the business tycoon prem juneja , the person who didn't think twice of acts he does is now concentrating hard on something and cant get it out of his mind , the person who took decisions in seconds is now tired of thinking just thinking because he can do only that …Well, I think Heer has taken over his brain and intelligence like most of the time Additi takes over his speech during the awards 😍 its a sight to see 😳😳😳
he wanted to run away But true love is a durable fire In the mind ever burning; Never sick, never old, never dead; From itself never turning.
Very well described... I have this verge of losing my mind in your words... He cant understand whats wrong with him but the problem is that everything is wrong with him , before few minutes he was guilty , then he was dizzy in her thoughts , then was angry on the people to disturb , and now he is trying to get an idea to help her
God this has to be kidding, so many emotions has aroused in him OMG!!! Heer yeh tum kya kar rahi ho😲😲😲😲
He paced in his room like a children use to march at scouts, he was messing with his fingers and hair and suddenly preet entered
"whoa PB r u alright I heard that girl "
"m fine preet relax"
"fine really I heard from the doctor tht the mad girl got violent"
" she is not mad okk so keep ur limits to what u talk"Haan Preet! 😡 Tumhari hone wali bhabhi hai...zaban sambhalke baat karo 😆
"ok ok well I came here for something else u have been discharged we will be leaving now"
"and what about her"
" gosh stop concerning that much PB we did whatever we can now we cant take her home"

prem thought for a minute and then it clicked
"good idea we can take her home and I really don't thnk this doctors can take care of her they don't understand her I saw what they r treating" 😲 Ghar??? Prem you move fast my boy heheheh
"whoa whoa a minute please what r u on and on blabbering"
" u heard right we will take her home see I have done a big mistake and she is my responsibility now"
" oh please PB she aint ur responsibility plz I don't understand whats happening to u ?"
"m talking all right and god when the hell did u started contradicting my decisions"
"don't use that power on me okk m not going to take that girl home my god u even don't know who she is u know I seriously think she is just acting and all and she is just concerned with money"
"ok its just rediculous to talk with u I will do whatever I think I want okk u should not be concerned with that "
"god damnit PB do whatever u want m least interested"

saying this preet stormed out of the room and prem saw his brother leaving with so much temper and he really didn't know what this temper was for … I dont like this part... Prem Preet fighting is not good 😭😭😭😭😭😭 ruins the perfect brothers' image but still looovveee them 😳😳😳😳

preet wasn't much interested in her treatment nor to know about her not to take her home but prem was , he got discharged that day and was reluctant to even take her but preet didn't let that happen and even doctors forced that she has some tests to be done so he left the topic , it was three days he was back home but he cant take his mind off her and he knows what he is gonna do tomorrow I think Preet is jealous 😆😆😉 Heer taking over his PB ahhahaha

next morning he and preet went to hospital as per prems request and preet cant disobey his loving PB so he went unwillingly 😳😳😳 Soo sweet of him to do so
preet went to talk to the doctor and prem went to take a glance of her , god it felt to him like he will become mad without a slight look of her
he tiptoed to her room but on entrance he heard some yelling voices and he could see it was her yelling at a nurse
"when are you going to take me out of here"
on a date???
and then prem made his entry
"today"

and there she looked toward him with her big beautiful eyes
and prem spoke again
"I hope u wont mind giving us some privacy"
and he indicated the nurse to leave
she better not hahaha
he went forward and sat on the tool next to her bed
" so u got ur answer heer , we are leaving"

she didn't spoke anything
"heer r u listening"

and this time she looked at him and spoke
"I don't believe you"

"and why don't u believe me"

"because u left me that day alone"

"hmm I did a big mistake"
shaammmeee Prem... dont leave her like that
they were talking to each other like a child complaining to his guardian

"yes u did and I know u r lying as others use to , I know I don't remember my home so I cant be going"

and that melted prem the small smile on his face disappeared seeing her teary moist eyes
and the thing that amazed prem was that she was calm with him no yelling no shouting
thats really cute scene...could imagine in my head
"well I did u a favour by telling ur name didn't I "

and this time again heer looked at him
"yes "

"so will u do me a favour heer"
"yes"

"will u be my friend heer"
cough cough "Premji hamara kya?"
saying this prem extended his hand
heer waited for a few seconds looking at him and then she automaticaaly gave her hand in his
"yes"

" I need another favour"
"yes"

"will u stop saying yes"
"yes"

and prem looked at him making an angry face
"I mean no I mean yes okk ok I wont say yes "

saying this heer smiled a little bit and that was the first time he saw her smiling unwilling to let go off her soft creamy skin in his hand he went on staring her but after a few minutes he felt a small pull on his hand and it was her looking away trying to free her hand and prem embarresedly left her hand and ruffled his hair
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
" ok so heer as per friendship principles friends trust each other so do u trust me and will u come with me to my home"?

he saw her this time she nodded a little bit and he could see tears were now flowing through her eyes
prem couldn't help his emotions and he got up and took his hands to her cheek and took the tiny drop of tear on his finger
"I promise if u cry like this I l ask doctors to anaesthesize u and keep u here because I don't like cry babies , so I l ask the nurse to get u ready if ur crying ssession has ended so that we can go home"

saying this he left
in this few days prem has discovered a new being in himself and he was enjoying that

they completed all the neccesities in the hospital and three of them came out near their car
prete who completey ignored her presence was going to enter the drivers seat when prem stopped him

"leave it preet I will drive"
saying this he opened the back seat for heer and then making her comfortable he went near the drivers seat and opened the door
but the sight of inside of the seat , the steering wheel , the seat , the glass, and lastly her face got him distracted his hands began to tremble and sweat started flowing of his forehead , a quick flash of that night appeared near his eyes and horror caught him , trying to shake the memory of his head his eyes went on heer at back seat and again a fresh layer of memory of her blood drenched body caught him and he nearly collapsed and like found himself getting pulled into that nightmare Lovely flashback... reminds me of Ta ra rum pum 😳
but the voice of preet saved him from collapsing
"r u fine PB"
he was looking at prem with horror struck eyes , he could see him trembling
"preet I think m not well u drive "

saying this pem left the place and came and sat beside drivers seat
beginning their journey back home , with a new start of friendship, emotions and something more which he yet has to discover …..

Sooo sorry Aishu di!! Totally forgot but as soon as I saw your pm I wanted to read but then I thought of editing this first 😳 Lovely update


Love cures people -- both the ones who give it and the ones who receive it.
By
Karl Menninger

Edited by 0711rokxoxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey aishu nice update..............................but why preet is not ready to take heer home.....................

and prem may be Mr.Prem Juneja for outer world but he is lovely prem to heer........so he is reacting cutely to heer..................i like dis thought.............................

but this is not at all fare..................u updated almost after one mnth.............but u gave such a short update............................:(
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful short update
Prem caring for Heer is nice. they are so cute.
now Prem got scared to drive. Prem and Heer are friends. hope Prem finds her family soon.
hope there is no more probblems
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update...so prem's decided to take heer home...good...we'll get more premeer scenes now...oh prem seems to have already lost his heart to her...
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Posted: 15 years ago
oohh.....sad that preet and prem had a light fight...
hehe....friendship...mmmhhh...

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