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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 16 years ago

DELETED for some reasons. Please do not PM me for this.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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cid-cop

@cid-cop

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

very nice...i enjoyed it throughout

the advantage of reading the story over watching it is that you can get to know the person's feelings and thoughts.

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gnshah

@gnshah

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

excellant work bro. i wish someone from CID unit is reading and they make the story into real CID episode. this story is very gripping. love this script. great work bro.

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

From Sunday my mood was not good but your story changed my mood. Again feeling good and less pain. You again re freshened me to write my story which I am thinking only for past 3days and not writing. Thanks for this.

As far as your story is concerned too good as always and yes Abhijeet might not have landed in trouble so many times in serial but in this forum he is winning the race of getting into trouble.
👏 for this story
👍🏼 for next story.

just a suggestion can that guy satish alias Rajiv be not from CID and from other intelligence agency. Because our ACP is too smart and he can know that this guy is from CID. In serial they show that he knows each every CID member before anyone else. SO just in that context I said. This way also its fine.

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Interesting story. Well written especially the climax, I could see the hotel reception, Daya Sir hiding, Abhi Sir peeping, sees Daya Sir hiding and another man keeping an eye on him, shoots and all that. Very nice.

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tejashree

@teju_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

excellent story visrom.i didnt know you can write such a great and excellent story .

if you want give it to cid feedback.hope they will agree

Edited by tgodse - 16 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

interesting story,climax was the show stealer.You clearly showed how well Abhijeet and Daya understand each other and hats-off to Abhijeet's wittiness keep up hoping to read many more from u

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

interesting story, very well-written.👏👏

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

👏 👏 👏 👏..........awesome work buddy 👏.........very gripping story............ 👏.......... & also u deducted freddy's foolishness & abhijit sir's flirting 😆 😆 😆.......
but the story as a whole was intresting....... quite different from wat we watch on TV 😃
continue writing .....😃