Story - 'Faraar'

very nice...i enjoyed it throughout

excellant work bro. i wish someone from CID unit is reading and they make the story into real CID episode. this story is very gripping. love this script. great work bro.

From Sunday my mood was not good but your story changed my mood. Again feeling good and less pain. You again re freshened me to write my story which I am thinking only for past 3days and not writing. Thanks for this.

As far as your story is concerned too good as always and yes Abhijeet might not have landed in trouble so many times in serial but in this forum he is winning the race of getting into trouble.
👏 for this story
👍🏼 for next story.

just a suggestion can that guy satish alias Rajiv be not from CID and from other intelligence agency. Because our ACP is too smart and he can know that this guy is from CID. In serial they show that he knows each every CID member before anyone else. SO just in that context I said. This way also its fine.

excellent story visrom.i didnt know you can write such a great and excellent story .

interesting story,climax was the show stealer.You clearly showed how well Abhijeet and Daya understand each other and hats-off to Abhijeet's wittiness keep up hoping to read many more from u

interesting story, very well-written.👏👏

👏 👏 👏 👏..........awesome work buddy 👏.........very gripping story............ 👏.......... & also u deducted freddy's foolishness & abhijit sir's flirting 😆 😆 😆.......
but the story as a whole was intresting....... quite different from wat we watch on TV 😃
continue writing .....😃

hey visrom very good story with nice dialogues... good work ... i liked abhi's role being highlighted more... keep it up.....😊