Deewane Dil(Continued)

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Hey Guys,
I have stopped this ff abruptly.I am sorry for that.I want to continue this,Hope you will support me as you did & will like my otther parts also.Sorry for not continuing it.Now I will do.I hope you like it.
CHARACTER SKETCH

ARMAAN MALLIK:-Most popularly known as Ammy.He is hot,handsome,caring,prankster,loving everything a girl wants in a men.He works as a part time DJ & is a famous & popular actor.He loves to play basketball.

RIDDHIMA GUPTA:-Most popularly known as Riddzy.She is hot,beautiful,traditional,simple,sweet, sensitive & caring.She is a well known actress.she loves to play basketball.

MUSKAAN CHADDA:-Best frnd of Riddhima.Just like in DMG.She is a doctor.

RAHUL GAREWAL:-Best frnd of Armaan.Just like in DMG.He is a doctor.

ANJALI MALLIK:-Sister of Armaan.Just like in DMG.She is a fasion designer.

ATUL GUPTA:-Brother of Riddima.Just like in DMG.He is a model.
More characters will be introduced later.

Part 1

In Night,In a Disco.
There we see a guy playing music for the Disco.As we move closer we see non other than our very own Armaan.Then on entrance we see two people coming,one is a girl & the other is a guy.As we move close we see non other than our ver own Riddhima & Atul.
Armaan is wearing this
http://img1.chakpak.com/se_images/303054_-1_564_none/karan-singh-grover-wallpaper.jpg
Riddhima is wearing this
http://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/photo.cms?msid=2300835
Atul is wearing this
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2230/2125411058_f2fb036c79_m.jpg
Atul & Riddhima enter the Disco.As soon as Atul enters the Disco he sees his frns & started talking to them leaving behind Riddhima.as soon as Armaan & his frnds sees Riddhima they starts laughing & makes fun of her.Riddhima didn't liked this 7 went outside crying.Armaan saw this & didn't felt nice & he goes out to appolize to Riddhima.He sees her sitting under a tree crying.He goes & sits next to her.
A;-Excuse me.Miss.
R:-Yes.
A:-I wanted to appolize to u.Actaully i have never seen a girl wearing a salwaar-kameez in a disco that's why.I really didn't meant to hurt u.Plz.Forgive me.
R;-It's ok.I understand,actually its my fault also.I shouldn't have wore salwaar-kameez in a disco.
A:-May I get a pleasure to know ur name.
R:-Riddhima
A:-Riddhima what?
R:-Riddhima Gupta & urs?
A:-Armaan Mallik.will u be my frn?
R:-Sure
A;-Gr8t then.Tell me something abt u.
R:-My name is Riddhima Gupta.My father is a g8t doctor. &...
(R's cell phone starts ringing0
R:-Excuse me.
A:-Sure.
R on phone.
R:-Ya Bro.
At:-Kha ho?
R:-Bhar
At;-Bhar kha.Tum jaanti ho ki agar Dad ko pata chal gaya to main mar...
R;-Bro.Calm down.I am outside the Disco.
At:-OH!THANK GOD or else today Dad would have literally killed me for sure.
R:-Bro.Aap bhi na jab dekho papa ke bare mein aise baate karte rahte ho...
At:-Abbe Chup.Papa ki Pari.Jab dekho Dad ke side leti rahti ha.Iske ke saamne kya jaara sa Dad ke bare mein kha diya ho jayegi chooroo & vice-versa.
R;-Bro
At:-Accha Baba.I am sorry.Mein bhar aata hoo kyuki ab hume jaana hoga.
R;-Theek hai.Bye
At:-bye
(R to A)
R;- Accha ab mujhe jaana hoga.Baad mein milte hai.
A:-Theek hai.Kya mein tumhe tumhare ghar tak chor doo.
R;-Thanks but no thanks kyuki mera bhai disco mein hai toh mein uske saath jaoongi.
A;-Ok.Bye
R:-Bye.take care
A:-U too.
(At comes & takes r away & A goes back to Disco).
Part 2
After some hrs. in Gupta's residence

R:-Papa.Papa.Kha ho aap?

D:-Yaha Beta. Study mein.

DR.SHASHANK GUPTA:-He is a gr8t doctor. He is a dean of Sanjeevani.He loved his wife frm core of his heart but unfortunately she died but he never got married again as he thinks that no one can replace her.He have two children name-Ridddhima & Atul.He loves both of them a lot.Riddhiam is his Pari.Before doing anything he always consult her as he thinks she is his luck charm.

R:-Accha Papa ab khana khanne chalo.

Sh:-Theek hain Beta

(R,Sh & At have dinner,with their normal chit-chat & masti)

R:-Mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai.Main jaa rahi hoon sone aur papa kal mujhe dinner chahiye.

At:-Kyu??

R:-Tum papa ho kya?Anyways mein kal shopping karne jaana hai.

At:-Par…

Sh:-Shut up Atul.Theek hai Beta.

R;-Thanks papa.

Sh:-Ur welcome.

R;-Good Night everyone.

Sh & At:-Good Night.

In Mallik's Residence

An:-Toh saab ko aane ka mauka mil gaya?

A:-Sorry.Late ho gaya.I promise aage se jaldi aaongaHow's ur work going?

An:-Fine.Ab jao fresh jao aur dinner ke liye niche aajao.

A;-Fine

In dinning table

A;-Aapka kaal programme kya hai?

An:-Shopping aur tum mere saath chal rahe ho.

A:-Par…

An;-Par-War kuch nahi .Tumhe chalna pare ga.Dad ke orders hai.

A;-theek hai.Dad kha hai?

An:-Office mein.Unka phone aaya tha kee who who ho jaayenge.

A:-Ok.Good Night

An;-Good Night.

Jai Mallik;-Bussiness Tycoon of the world. Idol of every business men. Everyone thinks him as their God Father.His wife died 5 yrs ago in an accident.He loves his two children-Armaan & Anjali alot. Armaan is his lucky charm & always consult him for everything.

Next day

In the Grand Plaza Mall

A;-What the hell!Ma'am saab toh shop mein jaa chooki hain aur mujhe pata bhi nahi konsi. Why Dad? Why Dad?why with me only?

Suddenly a girl comes & falls on Armaan.They both fall down on the floor.They see each other. They were lost in each other's eyes. After sometime they realize what they were doing & gets up.

R:-Soory

A;-It's ok. Ridddhima

R:-Ya

A;-Remember me

R:-Uh!Armaan

A;-Ya.So,what were u doing?

R:-Nothing much.Just shopping.

A;-Oh!Are u free?

R;-Why?

A;-Just thought that if u don't mind we can have a coffee together.as a treat of becoming frnd.

R:-Sure.

(They go to have a coffee.As soon as they we see people running to them to get their autographs.After sometime.They are now sitted on a table & ordered their coffee & sandwhiches)

A:-So u r an actress?

R:-Ya & u also.

A:-Ya

R;-I hope sometime we work together on a movie.

A;-Ya.Me too.

Part 3
A & R chat for sometime.A's mobile rings.He excuses himself & picks up the phone.

A on the phone

A:- Hi Dude,Kaisa hai?

K (Karan Johar);-theek hoon.Tu bata?

A;-Main bhi theek hoon.

K:-Mujhe tujhse karni thee.

A:-Aacha bol.

K:-R u free?

A:-Right know?

K:-I meant r u working on a project(cause A worked in one film at a time)

A:-Oh!U mean that. No

K:-Gr8t!Will u work in my next movie?

A:-Sure.If I like ur script.

K:-Ok fine,I will come to ur home &….

A:-Hey Dude wait.I was just joking.I am dam sure ur movie would be worth to have a star like ARMAAN MALLIK.

K:-Really MR.OVERCONFIDENT.

A:-Hey!I am not overconfident.I was telling u the truth.

K:-Really.

A;-Ya I am the heart throb of girls.They die to see me(what say girls,isn't he right)

K:-Ya.I know.

A;-Anyway, who is the actress of the film?

K:-I don't think u have heard her name MR.BUSYBEE.(He means he is dam busy that's why he sometimes calls him that,hope u like the name)

A:-Will u tell me.

K:-For ur kind of info. I want to inform u something abt her before telling her name.

A:-OK

K:-It's that if u r the heart throb of firls then she is the heart throb of boys. They die to see her.

A:-Really.I am eager to know her name.

K:-Her name is Riddhima Gupta.

A;-WHAT?????

K:-Hey,what happened?

A;-Nothing.

K:-Do u have some prob.

A;-No, not at all.

K:-Then u r working in the film?

A:-101%

K;-Gr8t.

A;-When the shooting is starting?

K:-Day after tom.

A;-Where do I have to come?

K;-Paris.

A;-Ok

K:-Bye.meet u tom. in Paris.

A;-Ya.Bye

(A was going to tell R abt the film but R's phone rings & she excuses herself & picks up the phone.)

R on the phone

R;-Hi

K;-Hi, How r u?

R;-Fine & u?

K;-Fine.i wanted to ask u something

R;-Ya ask.

K;-Will u work in my next movie?

R:-Sure.Who Is the actor/

K;-Armaan Mallik

R;-WHAT???

K:-Hey!What's this???

R;-What happened?

K;-This is the same way Armaan reacted after hearing ur name & know u.What's wrong?R u guys ememies?

R;-No

K:-Then

R;-Nothing

K;-BUT…

R:-Forget abt it.When the shooting is starting?

K:- Day after tom., but u need to come to Paris tomorrow.

R:-Ok.Bye

K:-Bye.See u tom.

R;-Ya

A & R's talk

R;-Hey guess what?

A;-We r working together.

R;-In karan's movie.

A;-Shooting in Paris.

R;-Starts day after tom

A;-Needs to reach tom

A & R;-WOW!!!

R;-Our wish came true

A;-Ya.I am dam happy.

R:- Me too.

A;-Ya.i need to go.I will meet u tom in the airport.

R;-Ya bye.

A;-Bye

(A & R go to their respective homes.They r eagerly waiting for tom.An is coming to Paris as she is the designer of the movie & At is also coming cause he is free & wants to see Paris)

Part 4

Next Morning

In an unknown house,

A guy is sleeping in the bed.The alarm clock is ringing from past 15 minutes & his sleep is disturbed.He does not want to get up but he has no other choice.He gets up & sees the clock.It's 8.00 am.

G;-Oh!My God..Aaj toh Hitler mere ko kaacha khaa jaagi.Aab kya karu.Late ho chooka hoo kyuki mujhe 8.30 report karma tha.i hope uss jangli billi ne Hitler ko complain na ki ho.

(I hope u got .it's none other than Rahul)

He rushes to the hospital but he is 5 minutes late.

In the hospital,

Gi:-Aaj toh maaja aayga.Woh abhi tak nahi aaya.Aaj toh yeh gaya.Baachara Kaanghjura.

(I hope u got it.It's none other than Muskaan)

Hitler comes

Dr.K:-Good Morining interns

Interns:-Good Morning ma'am

(There r other interns Sonia,Prachi,Karan & Mayank.if u people want to know abt them 7 their life then plz tell me otherwise I will concentrate on AR & RM)

Dr.K:-Where is Dr.Ra?

M(very happily);-Ma'am who abhi tak aaya nahi.

Dr.K:-Kya?

(Then we see Ra running & reach the nurse station)

Dr.K:-DR.RAHUL GRAWEL.Aapko samy ki kadar hai ya nahi.

Ra:-Ma'am…

Dr.K;-Just shut up.U r 10 mins late.So, u r going to do night duty & tom I want u on day duty too.

Ra:-Ma'am who…

Dr.K:-Tom's night also.

Ra:-Ma'am…

Dr.K:-3 days

Ra;-Fine ma'am.

Dr.K;-Remember continue working & no braeks.

Ra:-Fine Ma;am.

(Dr.K allots duties to all of them & then goes)

Ra:-Shit!3 days work without breaks.

M:-Haan bahut maaza aaya.Enjoy urself.

(Ra was abt to speak something but she goes)

In the airport

(A & R meet each other & they introduce At & An to each other. After introduction there is an announcement for their flight & they go.The sitting arrangement is such that A &R r sitting together & At 7 An r sitting together.They have general talk in the plane & they reach Paris.They go to their hotel & A& R's rooms r opposite to each other & At & An's rooms r opposite to each other.In the evening they thought of visiting places in Paris as they have never came to Paris.)

Next Morning

(A & R gets up & goes for their shoting & At & An goes to mall)

Shooting Area

K:-Hey Guys

A & R;-Hi

K:-So,ready for shooting.

A & R:-Ya

K;-Grt.Shld we start?

A & R;-Sure

(They discuss abt the first scene & starts)

(A does not know why but he is getting attracted to R.he just don't know why but she is the only thing which he wants to see & talk to & he always thinks abt her & sees her everywhere.)

Part 5

Next day

In Mumbai,Hosspital

The interns r working very hard as intern of Month is going to be announced soon.they r busy with their patients.

In Paris,Shooting place

R is waiting for A as the shooting is stopped cause A have not reached yet 7 they can't shoot further without A.R is getting angry as she is waiting for him for past 2 hrs. A comes & R blast on him)

A;-hey stop it.

R;-Why?

A;-Cause u have no rights to talk like this to me.

R;-Really

A:-Ya

R;-Fine.I am not talking to u & our frndship is no more.

A(agrily):-Fine

(After few days A gets high fever as have not eaten anything or drank anything & shooted no-stop without break & that also in rain. H misses R a lot.Nw he knows that he loves her * wants te tell her how much he loves her 7 wants ro be with him)

In the shooting area

R:-Woh dubaara late hai samajta kya ha apne aapko

K(talking on the phone):-hey listen aaj ki shooting cancel kar do

Guy:-Par kyu?

K:-Tumhe nahi pata.

Guy:-Kya?

K;-Ki Armaan ko high fever hai aur who shooting nahi kar paaye ga.

( R hears all this & does not know why but wants to go to him & always be with him as she had also fallen in love with him. Se rushes to hotel & goes & knocks A's room0A says in very low voice come in.She goes & sees him lying in the bed & is looking very weak & pale.)

R:-Hi,Armaan

A(Happily):-Hi R

R;-Kya main yaha baith sakti hoon?

A:-Sure

R-How r u?

A:-Better

R:-Jhoot

A:-Nahi

R:-Hain kyuki tum bahut weak lag rahe ho.

A:-Ha!Ha!Ha! Very funny.Mujhe fever hai aur main weak nahi lag raha hoon MISS.RIDDHIMA GUPTA

R(crying):-Main toh…

A(sees her crying);-Hey I was just joking why r u crying?

R:-Nothing

A:-Riddhima

R:-Armaan who…

A;-R main tumhare aago9eyes) mein aasu nahi dekh sakta kyuki main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon aur tumhare bigaar mar jaanoga.Pata nahi kabse par main tumse apne jaan se bhi jaada pyaar karta hoon.jab bhi tumse…

R:-Nahi milta toh accha nahi lagta aur she keeps on saying.

A:-Riddhima

R;-SSH!Main bhi tumse pyaar karti hoon.

A;-Sach

R:-Haan

(They hug each other & R makes A eat something)

Part 6

A & R hug each other.After few minutes they apart & R says that she is feeling hungry. She says this because she can make out frm A's face that he had not eaten anything as he was very weak.R orders lot of food.

A:-Baby why r u ordering so much?

R:-Firstly I have ordered for both of us & secondly why u called me baby?

A;-I love u more than my life & I want to call u baby.

R:-In that way I shld also call u something & I will call u Shona.

A:-Fine u can call me whatever u want.

R was abt to say something but was interrupted by a knock on door.R goes & opens the door & came back with food.

R:-Chalo ab khaana khaa lo.

(R feeds A & then eats herself actually A wanted to feed her but she does not let him feed him as he was damm weak.Due to R's presence & hr love A gets well after 5 days.He starts shooting gets completed & now they have to do one more scene in Mumbai.They reach Mumbai.At & An knows abt AR & they all planned to tell their relationship to their parents.)

In Mumbai,Way to Sanjeevani

R:-Jaldi karo Armaan

A;-Hain baba.Par kya kisi ko pata hai kit um waapis aa gayi ho?

R:-Kyuki main humesha intern of month announce karti hoon aur unhe dati.

A:-Oh!!!Par Intern of Month hota kya hai?

R:-Ek award hota hai.Us insaan ko diya jaata hai jiske saabse jaada points ho aur usne bahut accha kaam kiya ho.Yeh har month diya jaata hai.

A;-Oh!!!!

R:-Shona kya hua???

A:-Kuch nahi.

R:-Shona

A:-Fine.Baby u promised me that u r going to have dinner with me.Then…

R:-Shona who told u that I am not going to have dinner with u?

A:-No one.I thought that as we r going to Sanjeevani so.

R:-Oh!Then for ur info. I am going to have dinner with u after I have done my work & I also wanted to introduce to u to my dad.

A:-Really

R:-Ya

In Sanjeevani,Audi

Sh:-Sorry guys but this time R can't come as she is busy with her shoots.

(Suddenly door opens & R shouts Wrong Dad)

Sh:-Princess u?

R:-Ya

(Then A enters & all the girls r whispering to each other that "he is hot","he looks better in real life", "He rocks the world" & so on.r hears this & felt jealous & she didn't liked this at all so she says to her dad that she is tired so u announce the intern of month.I am going.A says fine R I will also come & then)

R:-Tumhari problem kya hai,jaha bhi main jaaoo tum bhi wahi aana chhaate ho?

Part 7

A:-Yeh tum kya kha rahi ho?

(That time r hear one more girl saying to her frnd that he is so cool)

R:-Shut up!Tum kabhi mari baat kyu nahi soonte ho?

A:-Kab main tumhari baat nahi suntan hoon.

Sh:-R chalo tumh winner ka naam aanounce karma hai.

(R leaves A & goes to announce the name.)

A(in his mind):-Mujhe R se baat karni ho gi.

R:-INTERN OF THE MONTH goes to DR.MUSKAAN CHAADA.

(M is very happy)

Ra(in his mind);-Isko toh main baad mein dekh loonga.

(R gives award & goes to A & she is still angry)

R:-Tumhe pata hai ki tum kabhi-2 kitne irritating ho jaate ho?

A:-WHAT?????Maine aisa kya kar deeya kit um mujhe daanti jaa rahi ho.I am going.I don't want to stay here.

R:-OK,Plz go.

(A goes & he is very irritated,An somehow gets to know they r going out on dinner & she wants to irritate A & want to make R jealous,so she thinks abt a plan & calls R.R is going to her house.her phone rings she picks it up.)

R:-Hello.

An:-Hello.Is this R?

R:-Ya, may I know who is on the other side of the line.

An:-I am An,A's sister.

R;-Hain bolo kya kaam tha.

An:-Mujje tumhe yeh khana tha ki A would not be able to come to dinner as his bst frnd Nikita is coming frm London.U know they were so closed to each other one time that we thought they were in love.They make an awesome pair,I wish they marry but unfortunetatly he loves u.

(R is feeling damm jealous now & hangs the phone.An is happy.)

Nikita Sharma

She is the best frnd of A.She is just like in DMG but she doe not love A as she has a bf Abhimanyu Modi & loves him a lot.

Abhimanyu Modi

He is the bst frnd of R.He is just like in DMG.He loves N a lot.

(A suddenly remembers that N is coming frm London.He forgets abt the the dinner & goes & receives N.He does not inform R abt his plan.R is now dam angry,)

R(in her mind);-A ke liye N itni important hain ki usne mujhe inform tak nahi kiya.Woh aise kaise kar sakta hain.Kya uske aur N ke beech mein kuch chal raha hai?Kya who use pyaar karta hai?Woh mere saath aise kaise kar sakta hai.

(These thoughts were coming to her due to this she could not sleep & A also didn't slept cause of N & R as he was talking to N the whole night & was thinking why R was so rude to him.)

Next day,Shooting area

(R phones rings & she picks it up)

R:-Hello

Guy:-Hi Ridz main abhimayu bol raha hoon.

R:-Hi Abhi.kaise ho?

Ab:-Theek hoon.Tu bata.

R:-Main bhi theek hoon.

R:-Kya kar rahi hain?

R:-Kuch nahi.

Ab:-Achha,tere liye ek surprise hai.

R;-Sach kya?

Ab:-Main

R:-Main matlab

Ab:-Main Mumbai aa gaya hoon.

R;-Sach

Ab;-Hain

R:-Mujhe tujhse milna hai.Kyu na tu mere shooting ke liye aa jaye.

Ab:-Sure

(r gives the shooting area address to Ab,A listens the whole conversation between R & Ab & is really pissed.In anger & jealousy he calls N & tells her to come where he is shooting.N & Ab both arrive but does not see each other when they were coming.they spot AR who were fighting over some issue)

N:-Hi A

Ab:-Hi R

A & R;-Can't u see I am busy right now.

N & Ab:-Fighting with each other.

A &R;-Ya any problem

N;-NO,but my name is Nikita

Ab:;-My name is Abhimanyu

(A 7 R stop fighting & see N &Ab hugging each other & saying I love u)

N:-A this is Abhi whom I love & r marry very soon.

(A & R r both surprised & felt ashamed that they did not trust each other especially R.After talking for sometime Ab & N goes.The shooting gets over.There is awkward silence between them.They both don't know how to speak or apologize to each other.In the end R gets courage to speak to him as she thought that it was her fault more than A.)

R:-Hey A

A:-Hi R…i…dd…hi….ma

R:-A mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

A:-Hain bolo (gets some courage)

R:-I don't know how to start but I know my mistake 7 wanted to say sorry to u.I know I shld trust u but I don't know what happened so suddenly.

A:-I am sorry.It was my fault too.Plz forgive me.

(R hugs A & says I love u & A replies to that but unknown to them a reporters & journalists has seen all this.Reporters had recorded all this.

Part 8

Sanjeevani,nurse station

M:-Good Morning

Interns:-Good Morning

M:-Jaise kit um log jaante ho ki main tum logo ko 1 hafte ke liye duties doongi toh I hope kit um log mera saath doge.

Interns(except Ra);-Ofcourse

(M gives duties.K comes & tells M & Ra that they have night duty today.They r disappoint by this but doesn't say anything)

Next Morning,R's house

Sh:-Riddhima!Riddhima!

(R comes running)

Sh:-Yeh kya ha????

R;-Kya Papa

Sh:-Mere saamne bohle bane ki jaruraat nahi kai.

R:-Papa…

At:-Dad kya hua?Itna kyu chila rahe ho aur woh bhi R ke upper.Kya baat hai,aaj suraj kha se nikla.

R:-Shut up!Papa aap mujhe baataye toh ki mene aisaa kya kiya?

Sh:-Kya kiya.Yeh pooch kya karna baaki hai?Yeh dekho newspaper mein kya likha hai.

R:-Oh!Yeh baat hai.Papa hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai.

Sh;-Pyaar my foot!

R:-Papa aapko mere aur A ke pyaar ki insult karne ki koi hak nahi hai.

Sh:-R….

R:-Papa aap kuch jaante hai A ke bare mein.

Sh:-Main nahi jaanta aur na jaana chaata hoon.
R:-Theek hai fir Main A ke bina jee nahi sakti aura b toh mujhe hee kuch karna parega.Main ghar chorke jaa rahi hoon.

Sh:Theek hain.

R;-Papa main jaane se pehle apko yeh baat baatna chaati hoon ki main apse bahut pyaar karti hoon aur aapki respect karti hoon.

AT:-R main tumhare saath hoon.

R:-Thanks.

(R goes to her room & packs up her bag & leaves the house.Something like this happens in A's house but eventually J agrees cause he does not have any valid reason to say no.R's goes to A's house & tells him,An & J abt what happened.They do not have any problem.They let her stay her in their house & J announces Ar's marriage after 2 weeks.)

Part 9

(R was happy & unhappy too.She was happy because she is going to marry A & unhappy because her father have not approved for their marriage & she is going against her father wish.A comes to her.)

A:-Hey why r u crying?

R:-No nothing I am not crying.

A:-I know u r lying & u r upset.

(He goes & sits beside her.)

R:-I don't know why I am feeling unhappy.

A:-Cause ur father does not approve of our marriage.Am I right?

R:-Yes.But I love u & can't live without u.

A:-If u r not happy then we will not marry.

R:-No,I ma happy & I want to marry u.I know after sometime papa will approve our love & marriage.

A:-OK.As u wish.Remember I would be always there for u & I love u.

R:-Thanks & I love u too.

A:-Thanks kisliye.

R:-Thanks isliye kyuki tumne mujhe yeh yaad dilaya hai ki papa mujhse jaada dar tak naraaz nahi rahe sakte.Aur agar hote bhi hai toh tum mere saat humesha rahgoe.

A:-Exactly.I luv u.

R:-I luv u too.

(unknown to them Sh heard everything as h came to talk to J abt some professional work but still he does not approve because his ego was too much.AR relationship were the talk of the town.Everyone knew abt their marriage in next 2 weeks.A,R,An,At,Ra,M were busy preparing things for various functions.J was busy handling the prob of Sanjeevani & ofcourse taking care of his son's marriage.Firstly he was against the marriage but now he treats R as his daughter.Now he realized that the only person who can handle A & the house is R.Ab & N went London for some reason but promised to be there on AR marriage day.An is very happy to have R as her sister-in-law because R is a very good frnd of her.At is happy to find his sister happy with A & he finds a grt frnd in A.The engagement is tomorrow.A & R r happy as tom they r going to get engaged to each other.)

Next Morning,Sanjeevani

M:-Hey Ra if u don't mind will u plz pick me as my car has gone for repairing.

Ra:-Fine

M:-Thanks

(Last night while they were doing their night duty they thought of being frnds.)

M & Ra:-DR.Keerti

K:-Yes

M:-May we get a half day leave.

K;-Why?

Ra;-Because our bst frnds r getting engaged today.

K:-Who?

Ra;-A & R

K:-Oh!They r getting engaged today.How could I forget.They r the talk of the town.I am going to see their engagement on TV.

M:-May we take a leave.

K:-Yes

Ra & M:-Thank u Ma'am.

K:-U r welcome.

A'S house

J:-Hey Guys,kya kar rahe ho?Tum log toh aise kaam kar rahe ho jaise engagement ajj raat ko nahi agle mahine ho.Hurry up.

Servants:-Yes sir.

(they hurry up & the whole house is decorated)

A'S room

(A talking on the phone.)

A:-Mera kaam toh ho gaya na.

G:-Yes Sir

A:-Mujhe aaj sab kuch tayar chahiye.

G:-Sir aaj kyu?

A:-Kyuki main use gift mein dena chaata hon.

G:-Gift?????

A:-Hain Gift.Engagement gift.

G;-OK Sir.Don't worry saara kaam ho chooka hai.

A;-Gr8t.Aaj raat ko main tujhe call kaaronga tab who kaam karna joh meine kha tha.

G:-Theek hai sir.

(A keeps the phone down.)

A(in his mind);-Aaj ka din tumhare saabse accha din ho ga.I promise u that R.

(A & R goes for shpping as R wanted to buy clothes & A insisted J & R for going with R.They know that if they don't listen to A then he would be angry & his temper is too much too handle.An is in the Paris for some fasion week.She would arrive directly to the venue.)

A & R in the Shopping Mall

(They go to a designer shop as A & R want everything perfect for their marriage.)

In the shop

(R is looking at few dresses & does not know which one to buy cause she likes them all.R asks A to decide.)

R:-A

A:-…

R(little louder:-A

A;-…

R(shouting);-A

A:-Kya hai kyu choila rahi ho(who was staring at her came back to reality)Kya hua?

R:-Yeh sawal toh tumse poochna chaahiye.

A:-Kuch nahi

R;-A

A:-OK.Fine I was looking at u.Common who will not look at u & get lost.Ur so beautiful,sexy & hotttttttttt.

R(blushing):-Thanks

A:-tum mujhse kuch poochna chaati thin a toh pooch.

R:-Hain.Woh mujhe baatao na ki main kaunsa dress loo.

A;-Tum joh bhi phaano khoobsurat toh lagogi.Doesn't mind what u wear.

R:-A.Pplz

A:-OK.OK.All of them

R:-Kya?Tumhara dimaag theek toh hain.

A:-Pehli baat mera dimaag ek dum theek hain aur doosri baat engagement ke baad bahut saare functions hai toh isliye.

R:-Oh!Main toh bhul gayi thi.

A;-So,shall we.

R:-Yes

(AR buy there clothes.AR have their lunch in a restaurant,spend some romantic moments for sometime & goes back to the house as J was calling them & saying that they need o get ready.)

Part 10

(A & R r eager 2 meet each other before d engagement.They get ready.(They tried 2 meet each other but in vain,either Muskaan comes or J's comes.At last they meet each other in d engagement hall.They have eyelock for 10 mins or so.Sh didn't came cause his ego didn't let him.At came happily.Media people were covering everything.They thought of asking Q's 2 AR later.J announced that engagement is going 2 start in 2mins so AR went 2 the stage.A puts d ring on R's hand & vice-versa.

(Everyone clapped & wished them good luck for their marriage & life.A was holdind R's hand & does not leaves it.)

An:-Hey A,alteast leave bhabhi's hand now.She is not going anywhere.

(Everyone is laughing on this but A's remark made them quite.)

A:-Tumne ekdum sahi kha ki R ab kahi nahi jaayegi par kya karu R ke bina jee nahi sakta hu.Woh meri jindagi hai aur who nahi toh main nahi.Tum toh haath ki baat kar rahe ho par tum yeh nahi jaante ki uske haath pakerne se mujhe yeh ehsaas hota hai ki yeh zindagi kitni sundar hai,hume humsha zindagi ka har pal jeena chahiye.Yeh ehsaashota hai ki pyaar kitna sundar aur pyaara ehsaas hota hai.Pyaar duniya badal deta hai.Pyaar insaan ko jeena sikhata hai.Pyaar insaan ko asli zindagi ka matlab batata hai.Pyaar pa liya toh samjoho sab kuch pa leeya.Main toh bas apni poori zindagi R ke sath khushi-2 bitana chata hoon.

(R was admiring A.She didn't know when she started crying.A saw this & didn't liked it.He removes R's tears & tells her 2 smile.)

M:-Heys, Guys.Let's play antakshri.

Everybody:-Good idea.

M:-So d teams t

A(interputing);-Main aur R,At & An aur tu aur R.

Voice:-Hume bhul gaye.

(They look at d direction frm which voice came & saw N &Ab.)

A & R:-Tum toh shaadi ke din aane wale the na.

N;-Right par phir socha ki hum apne bst frnds ki engagegment kaise miss kar sakte hain.

A&R:-Absolutely right.

(An & N introduces themselves 2 others.They start playing.)

At:-Chalo guys,meri behan ki engagement hau kuch toh chor –hungama ho jaye.Let's dance.

(DJ starts d music & everyone comes on d floor except A &R.The other comes & forces them 2 come 2 d dance floor & eventually they agree.They told know only AR r going 2 dance.They said no but J said them 2 dnce then they have no choice except 2 agree.They danced & everyone was admiring their dance & their love for each othr as they were lost in each other's eyes.After dance they talk for sometime & then d media asks them Q's they answer them politely & patiently.Theyu all go 2 their home after enjoying.A takes R to some unknown place 2 R.A takes R infront of………………..

ENGAGEMENT DAY
Armaan's dress
Riddhima's dress
OR
OR
Anjali's dress
Atul's dress
Nikita's dress
Abhimanyu's dress
Engament rings
A's ring
R's ring
Part 11(a)
Bunglow
Living room
Kitchen
AR'S Bedroom
An's bedroom
J's bedroom
AR's bathroom
An's bathroom
J's bathroom
Dining room
Outside d bunglow
A:-Toh kaisa laga?
(R does not know what 2 tell & how 2 react.She never thought A will do this.She had never felt this much happiness which she was facing now.She loved A's surprise alot but does not know how will she tell him & if she tells also will she able 2 express him what she feels now.)
R:-Uh..Woh..Main..It's..Nahi..Toh..Yeh..
A:-Riddhima maine tumse poocha hai kaisa laga hai aur tum yeh kya kehti ja rahi ho.Kya tumhe yeh pasand nahi aaya?Maine yeh sirf tumhari khushi ke liye kiya aur...
R(intreputing him):-Aisi koi baat nahi hai.It's awesome,lovely,mindblowing,excellent,perfect.Hain ekdum perfect.This is just perfect.I don't know how 2 express my feelings but A sach kahu toh Armaan it's just like a wonderful & perfect dream.Maine isse acha aur sundar kuch dekha nahi.Armaan yeh sirf ek ghar nahi,yeh tumhara pyaar hai.Yeh tumne itne pyaar se banwaya hai ki yaha ki har cheez bas mujhe tumhare pyaar ki ehsaas dilata hai.Main tumhe kya kahu.It's just like a dream.Aisa lag raha hai ki mein ek dream dekh rahi hoon & I just want it like it.Main samay ko rokna chhati hoon taaki yeh pyaar aur yeh ehsaas kabhi khatam na ho.Armaan ek waada(promise) karo gey ki tum mujhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaaoge.Agar tumne aisa kiya toh main mar jaaongi.Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakti.Nahi jee sakti,nahi jee sakti.
(By now she was crying really badly & hugging Armaan tightly jaise ki woh usse chor ke chale jaayega.)
A:-Bas Riddhima,Bas.Main tum se waada karta hoon ki main tumhe kabhi nahi choroonga.Main bhi tumhare bigar nahi jee sakta.I love u alot.I love u alot.
(He is also hugging her tightly.After sometime when R stops cryiny & is stable he shows her d house.But still she was not leaving him so they were hugging & seeing d house.R's head was on A's chest & they were moving because A knows R is feeling insecure & he does not wants that
Part 11(b)

Next Morning

A's House

R's Room

(She is sleeping & d alarm clock rings.She gets up.She goes 2 d bathroom to have bath. Living room

R:-Goodmorning dad.(R calls A's dad,dad now)

J:-Goodmorning beta.How r u?

R:-I am fine & u?

J:-I am also fine.Jao aur A ko uthao.Tum toh janti ho na usse .Ab who tabhi uthega jab tum jaogi.

R:-Jee Dad,main abhi usse uthathi hoon.

(A got in a habit now that he only gets up when R comes 2 him.Usko yeh lagta hai ki agar subha-2 R ko dekh liya toh poora din achha jaayega.)

A's room

(A is sleeping.R goes 2 him.She always thinks that he looks so cute & innocent when he sleeps but she have 2 wake him because it an order frm Dad.)

R:-Armaan utho.

A:-Nahi(sleepily & cutely,just like a small child who does not 2 do something but is forced 2 do.)

R:-Abb bache ki tarah nakhare nat karo.Har subaha ka naatak ho gaya hai.Main tumhe uthane aati hoon aur tum ho ki uthne ka naam hi nahi latte ho.Get up.PLz

A:-NAHI

R:-ARMAAN

A;-NAHI

R:-FINE

(She goes & gets an ice-cold water in a bucket & throws it on his face.Guys don't worry nothing much happened.Kyuki yeh har subha hota hai.

A:-Aaah!Aaah!What is this?Why did u throw water on me??

R:-Because u were not getting up.(innocently,jaise ki usse pranks kya hote hai pata hi na ho.)

A:-Oh!Really.Yeh kaunsa way hai kisi ko uthane ka.

R:-Ab tum uthoge nahi toh main kya karu.

A:-Ya whatever.Tumse fight karne ka mera mood nahi hai.

R:-Oh!Grt.Mera bhi nahi hai.

A:-Accha suno.Meri Goodmorning kiss toh deti jao.

R:-Armaan

A;-Kya Armaan.Mujhe bhi pata hai ki mera naam Armaan hai.Give me kissssssssssss.

(R eventually agrees.She goes near him & kisses him on his lips.Firstly it was simple one then turned into passionate one.It lasted atleast for 5-6 mins.They were breathless when they broke d kiss.)

R;-Armaan

A:-Hain Riddhima

R;-I have 2 go.

A;-Don't go.

R;-☺️Bye,meet u at breakfast table.

A:-OYE!HOYE!

Note:-They r in d same house were they used to live i.e Armaan's house.They will shift on d wedding day.
Part 12
Dining room

(R is serving breakfast 2 An & J as A is still in his room.)

A:-Good Morning everyone.

J:-Good morning beta.

An(sadly);-Good morning.

A;-What happened???

An;-I lost my one of d best contract.That was reallyyyyyyyyyyyyy impt.

J;-Arre main isse kab se samjha raha hu par yeh hai ki.Ab tum aur R hi isse samjhao.

A & R;-Sure

A;-An,ek baat bolou.Bura toh nahi maanigi na.

An;-Ofcource not.Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai kya.

A;-Toh suno.Hamare career main contracts impt. Hain par usse jaada jab hum unhe loose karte hain toh cope kaise karte hai.

An:-Matlab??

R:-Matlab ki hum har contracts toh paa nahi sakte.Right???

An:-Right.

A:-Then,humne joh contract ko loose ki hai,uske ke bare main bhul kar doosre contracts ke bare mein sochna chahiye.

R:-Yeh sochna chahiye ki ab main aur better kaise kar sakti hoon taaki media & people ko bolne ka koi mauka hi nahi mile.

A;-Agli baar itni mehnat karo ki who bas yeh kahe ki kya kapre design kiya,isse accha koi nahi bana sakta.

R:-Agar An, nahi hoti toh hum isse kabhi nahi phan aur dekh paate.

A:-Ek contract loose karne se kuch nahi hota.

R:-Agla joh contract mile usko apne poore dil aur dimag se karo.

A;-Bhul jao ki tumne koi contract loose kiya.

R:-Bhul jao who impt. tha

A:-Har contract hi impt hota hai.Bhala who kuch bhi ho.

R:-Exactly.Hume yeh nahi sochna chahiye ki yeh chota aur bara hain.Har contract impt. hota hai.Har contract impt hota jaise ki A ne abhi kha hai.

A;-Ab sab bhulo aur joh agla contract mile usme concentrate karma.

R:-Samjhi.

An:-Hain,tanks bro & bhabhi.

(An calls R bhabhi cause she thinks thore din ka hi toh farakh hai phir AR ki shaadi ho jaayegi.)

A & R:-U r welcome.

J:-Thank God!Tumne iske dimaag mein kuch toh daala.

An;-Dad.

J:-OK.Peace.I was just joking.

(They both hug & then they all which they call GROUP HUG OR SPEACIAL HUG.An & J leaves as they had their breakfast.R was serving him d breakfast.

A:-Kya hai?

R:-Tumhara favorite.

A;-ALOO KA PARATHA.

R:-Hain.

A;-Jaldi do

R:-Yeh lo.Pata nahi itni jaldi kya hai.

(He didn't gave any reply 2 her because he was busy in eating.)

A;-Wow!!Tumne banaya??

R:-Hain

A:-Grt.Kyuki tumhare haath ke aloo ka partha itna yummy hote hai ki bataya hi nahi jaa sakta.

R(blushing):-Thanks.

A:-Achha suno.Mujhe khilao na.Plz.

R:-Par.

A(cutely):-Plz.

R:-OK

(She feeds him & he feeds her.)

Afternoon

A:-Baaki sab kha hain?

R:-Dad Pune gaye hain aur An Delhi.

A:-OK

R;-Achha main jaa rahi hoon.

A:-Where?

R:-Mera ek shoot baaki hai movie ka.Toh isse khatam karne jaa rahi hoon.Uske liye toh jana hi parega na.

A:-Hain.Toh theek hai jao.Maine kab maana kiya main toh bas pooch raha tha.

R:-Armaan tumhe kya ho gaya hai main toh bas general talk kar rahi thee.

A:-Haan,general talk hee karti jao aur mere bare mein bilkul mat socho.

R:-Aisa kab hua ki mai tumhare bare mein na sochti hun??

A;-If I tell u not 2 go anywhere & just spend time with me will u?

(She thinks & then tells him that he should accompany her & then they will go wherever he wants.He very happily agreed.)




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Hey,
A Friend is a hand that is always holding your's,no matter how close or far apart you maybe!!!!!!!

I am really sorry for late update.Here is a promo.
PROMO
R:-Armaan???
A guys comes from behind & hugs her.She smiles.
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Ru:-Muskaan
Mu:-Kya?
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R:-Armaan yeh bahut sundar hain.
Mu:-Tumhe pata hai ki I love Chinese.
Ra:-Nahi par mujhe bhi Chinese bahut pasand hai.


Note:-Pm's will be send later.
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