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RECAP:

Nupur's dream. Mayur meet & fight. Gunjan waiting for dia in college. Dia has arranged a surprise party for gunur. RV & friends planning to trouble gunjan.

PART 2:

RV: Are you ready boys?

Boys: ofcourse RV'..iss behenji ko tang karne mein bada mazaa aayega'..

RV: so what are you waiting for? Start moving.

Sheena: tum nahi jaa rahe?

RV: kya zaroorat hai? Asli fun toh yeh sab dekhne mein hain'.mere boys hai na mujhe show dikhaane aur aaj toh excel mein ek achchi joker aayi hai'..taali bajaane ke liye bhi toh koi hona chahiye.

Gunjan was standing all nervous. The gang of boys came to her & started walking around her slowly forming a circle. Gunjan got scared looking at these boys who were moving in circle around her & laughing at her. She didn't know what to do. She had never felt so unsafe in her life. She wished her di was here. The boys continued laughing on her. She tried moving out of the circle but the boys didn't let her go out. They blocked the way completely. Gunjan was sweating. She knew no one here & the passerby's didn't care to help her. She tried to go again but failed.

Boy 1: itni bhi kya jaldi hai madam?? Kya tum iss college mein nayi ho?

Gunjan nodded her head.

Boy 2: tabhi itni darri hui hai bechari'..dont worry hum itne bhi bure nahi hai'..

Boy 1: humaare college ka reevaaj hai you know as in parampara'..hum har naye students se kuch karaate hai''aisa kuch jisse humaari naye students ke saath achchi dosti ho jaaye.

Boy 2: par inse kya karvaaye???

Boy 1: ismein sochne ki kya baat hai???

He pulled gunjan & removed her glasses. Gunjan got scared. She couldn't see anything clearly. Books fell from her hand.

Gu: please mere chashme de do'.mujhe kuch theek se dikh nahi raha'..

Boy 1: de denge'..itni jaldi kya hai???pehle hum parampara toh nibhaa le'.warna principle ko bura lagega ki humne nayi student ke saath dosti nahi banaayi.

Boy 2: chashme haasil karne ke liye tumhe ek chotta sa kaam karna hoga.

Gu(nervously): kya?

Boy 1: woh kya hai na hum thode bored ho gaye hai'.toh humme thoda entertainment chahiye. Isliye tum humaari liye dance karogi'.

Gunjan's eyes widened. She couldn't dance. How could these people be so harsh to her? 'What wrong have I done'she thought.

Mayank entered the college. He was running in full speed like a fast train. He didn't pay attention to anything or anyone besides him. He had to rush to the libraray. He was late & he was afraid the book he needed someone else might take it. He was still cursing the accident girl for umpteenth time. Sheena saw mayank & started smiling.

Sheena: RV tum apna yeh show enjoy karo'..main jaakar apne mayank ko dekhkar aati hu.

RV(rolling his eyes): tumhe uss pagal mein kya achaa lagta hai sheena???usne aaj tak kabhi tumse baat nahi ki'..jab se college start hua tum sirf us hi ke peeche padi ho'.woh kabhi tumhaare taraf dekhta hi nahi'..usme aisa kya hai ki tum usse itna pasand karti ho?

Sheena: Money speaks honey. Uske paas itne paise hai ki ek baar mera naam usse jud jaaye fir life time mujhe paiso ki zaroorat nahi padhegi'..meri mom aur uski mom bhi friends hai'..mom kehti hai mayank ko apni khoobsurti ke jaal mein faans lo fir life set hai. Aur waise bhi tum mujhe kehte ho tumhe uss arrogant dia mein kya achaa lagta hai? College start hua hai tab se tum bhi toh uske peeche padhe ho.

RV: dia jaisi koi nahi'..tumhe achaa lage ya bura par sach toh yeh hi hai ki dia excel ki diva hai'.par main dia se life spend nahi karna chahta sirf night spend karna chahta hu'..iss college ki har ladki rv ko date karna chahti hai par rv ka dil dia pe aaya hai'.

Sh(teasing): woh dia jo rv ko bhaav hi nahi deti'..kitni koshish ki tumne usse pataane ki par aaj tak woh tumhaare paas nahi aayi. Mujhe nahi lagta tum uske saath kuch kar paoge so better tum usse bhul jao'..

RV(smiling): rv loves challenges'..dia mere liye sabse bada challenge hai'.dekhte hai kab tak rv se bach paayegi.

Sheena: even sheena loves challenges'..dekhte hai mayank kab tak meri khoobsurti se bhaagta rehta hai.

Both hi-fived each other.

Sh: tum apna circus enjoy karo main mayank ko dekhkar aati hu.

Sheena left & RV went back to enjoy gunjan ragging scene. Mayank was walking in full speed & dashed itno samrat.

Sa: wooooo'..kya kar rahe ho mayank'..aaj toofaan express ki tarah kyu jaa rahe ho?

Ma: main bahut jaldi mein hu'..main already 15 mins 37 seconds late ho chuka hu'..mujhe library pahunch na hai'.

Sa(shocked): WHAT??????MAYANK SHARMA AUR LATE???? THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE'.KAISE HO GAYA??

Ma: please sam abhi mujhe jaana hai'..hum baad mein baat karenge''.

Sa: No ways dude'..itni badi baat ho gayi''tumhe mujhe bataana hi hoga'..(making puppy face) please bhai'..

As always the last 2 words worked. Sam would always emotionally blackmail mayank using this word. Mayank sighed. He started the story of accident & suddenly all his anger was coming back. At some places he was literally yelling while mentioning the accident girl.

Ma: you wont believe sam woh pagal ladki kitna bad-bad karti hai'..uski bakwaas sunkar mere kaan pak gaye'..yahaan tak ki usne mera itna time waste kar diya.

Sa: relax bro'..itna hyper kyu ho rahe ho'..you should be glad ki koi police case nahi hua warna tum aur mom dono faste'..dont forget tum abhi 17 years old ke ho aur driving license 18 years ke baad milta hai'..tumhaare paas abhi kachaa license hai'..agar kache license par tumse accident hota toh tumhe bahut problems hoti'..shayad jail bhi jaana padta'.aur mom ko equally problems face karni padti kyunki yeh license unhone dilwaaya hai'..you should be glad woh ladki police tak leke nahi gayi'

Mayank hadn't thought about this. Samrat did hav a point. Last thing he wanted was his mom to have problems because of him. Maybe the girl wasn't that bad he thought. But still he felt irritated thinking about the girl & her big mouth. All he knew was that he wasn't interested in meeting this girl ever. First time his day had gone so horribly wrong.

Sa: chal forget that mayank. Tum lunch time pe canteen mein pahunch jaana.

Ma: nahi sam main khaana nahi khaoga'..aaj jitna time late hua hu utna mujhe break mein compensate karna padhega'.

Sa: shut up mayank'.tum apna lunch skip nahi kar sakte warna main mom ko bol duga. Ek din tumhaara time table thoda delay ho jaayega toh koi pahaad nahi toot padhega. Aur waise bhi tumhe canteen mein bulaane ka ek aur reason hai.

Ma: kya?

Sa: aaj dia ki cousin sisters college join kar rahi hai. Unke liye surprise party hai. Dia chahti hai lunch mein unhe party mille aur pure college ke saamne unhe introduce kare. Issi bahaane tum bhi unse mil lena.

Ma: par sam'.

Sa: please mayank'..thode time ke liye aa jaana'.Unse tumhe introduce kar denge fir chale jaana'.please

Ma: theek hai par sirf thode time ke liye.

Sa: thanks dude.

Ma(looking at his watch): OMG!!!!! 20 mins late. Bye sam

Before waiting for sam's reply mayank ran away. Sheena had over heard their talk & then ran behind mayank to library. Sam saw this & knew there was no change in this girl. She had always been behind mayank & had a habit of eavesdropping in anything about mayank. But she wasn't of his concern at present. Sam was more interested in knowing about the girl who fought with mayank. Today for the first time in his life he had seen mayank displaying some emotions. Mayank was always the bored type saying a simple yes or no in any of his talk. But for the first time he had seen mayank in a different light. Mayank wouldn't stand near a girl for more than 5 seconds least alone talking or fighting with a girl for 15 mins. Whoever this girl is had a great impact on mayank. It was the first time someone could remove some emotion from mayank & that too in 1 meeting. Sam & shilpa aunty had tried to bring little changes in mayank so that the boy shares his problems & sorrows also with them rather than only happiness. But mayank being the good boy never displayed any sadness if he had in his life. Sam wanted to find this girl & bring her in mayank's life to see if any more changes mayank undergoes or is it just his imagination & he is thinking too much. Then it struck to him he was to bring dia's cousins from gate & ran towards the gate.

BACK TO GUNJAN:

Gunjan was still standing shocked tears flowing from her eyes. She didn't know what to do.

G: aap log aisa kyu kar rahe ho??please main dance nahi kar sakti'.mujhe chashma waapas karo'..mujhe jaana hai'

Boy 1: kya kar sakte hai? Yeh toh college ki parampara hai'..itna toh tumhe karna hi padhega.

RV was enjoying this show from his place.

Boy 2: arrey bechaari rone lagi'..theek hai ek kaam karte hai'..tumhe dance nahi karna toh mat karo'.tumhaare aankh par hum rumaal baandh lete hai'..woh game toh tumhe pata hi hoga na'.blindfold ka'..bahut simple si baat hai'.aankhon par patti lagao aur apna chashma dhundhlo'.agar chashma pakad liya toh chashma tumhaara.

G(begging): please mujhe chod do'.mera chashma waapas karo'.

Boy 1(teasing): waapas chahiye'..yeh lo'

He threw it in mid air & the other boy caught it. They started playing catch-catch with it. Gunjan knew she had no option. No student was helping her. Some were busy laughing at her & others too busy to notice her. She took her handkerchief & put a blindfold tears rolling down her eyes. She tried to locate her spectacles. All the boys were laughing & making fun of her. Some were playing with her hair. They gave her directions telling right & left turn to make her get her specks but their real intention was to make her dash the pillar & laugh at her. As per their instructions gunjan was about to dash a pillar when she hit samrat & fell but samrat stopped her from falling. His arms encircled her waist preventing her from falling down. His hot breath was falling on her neck. He felt different holding gunjan in his arms. With one hand he removed her blindfold while the other remained around her waist. She opened her eyes slowly to find a pair of black eyes staring back at her. Her eyes were red & swollen yet he was drowning in those eyes. He could see some part of fear in her eyes but also she had relaxed in his arms. She felt secured. He couldn't take off her eyes from her. He was busy studying her beauty. Just then they heard oooooooo's & aaaaaaa's from the boys.

Boy 1: kya sam???kuch toh standard rakh'..

Boy 2: aisi behenji ko pakad rakha hai'.

He left gunjan & looked at the boys. Gunjan didn't know what to do. Sam caught her hand & brought her towards the boys. She was hesitant but sam's one nod directed to her relaxed her body. She stood behind him quietly & he holded her hands tightly.

Sa: uska chashma waapas karo.

Boy 1: dekho sam iske beech mat pado'.yeh humaara maamla hai'..tum yahaan se jao.

Sa(looking directly in the boys eyes & pointing his finger): main sirf ek baar kahooga. Tum jaante ho samrat ko baatein repeat karna achaa nahi lagta.

Boy 2 to 1: forget it'.de de chashma'..iss waqt pangaa lena theek nahi hoga. RV isse baad mein nipat lega.

Boy 1 gave him the specks. He was about to go but sam stopped him.

Sa: itni jaldi kya hai? Pehle isse sorry kaho.

Boy 1: sorry my foot'..RV tumhe dekh lega'.tab shayad tumhe humse sorry kehna padhega.

Sa(cunning smile): yeh toh waqt hi bataayega'.get lost!!!!!

The boys left & gunjan started crying again. Sam had never seen such a delicate girl.

Sa: dekho tum please rona bandh karo'..woh log waapas nahi aayenge'..

He removed his handkerchief & wiped gunjan's tears.

Gu: thanks.

Sa: no thanks'..afterall aaj se hum dost hai aur dosti mein sorry aur thanks ki zaroorat nahi padhti'.kyu gunjan?

Gu: tumhe mera naam kaise pata chala?

Sa: mujhe sab pata hai'..tumhaara naam gunjan hai, tum morena se aayi ho, tum do din pehle hi mumbai shift hui ho. tumhaara aaj first day hai, tumhaari behen ka naam nupur hai, dia aur uday tumhaare cousins hai, tum yahaan dia ka wait kar rahi ho, tumne school mein 96 % score karke record banaaya hai. Tum bahut sweet aur caring ho'.

Gu: yeh sab tum kaise jaante ho?

Sa: woh kya hai na Baba Samrat ki nazar se kuch bhi chup nahi sakta'..Samrat baba knows everything'.main tumhaara bhavishya bhi bataa sakta hu'.

Gu: bhavishya?

Sa: tumhe princi se 10:30 ko milna tha aur ab 11:00 ho gaye hai isliye thode time mein tum mujhe princi ke room mein daant khaati hui milogi.

Gu: OMG!!!!!main toh bhul hi gayi'..mujhe principle se milna tha'..di bhi abhi tak nahi aayi'..hum late ho gaye hai'.pata nahi principle sir kya soch rahe hoge'..pehle hi din late'..

Sa: relax gunjan''sir tumhe khaa nahi jaayege'..jao aur abhi mil lo unse.

Just then nupur entered.

Nu(screaming): tu abhi tak sir ke cabin mein gayi nahi? Pata nahi sir humaara kya haalat karenge'

Sa: relax nupur tum bhi itni hyper ho kar aayi.

Nu: tum kaun ho???meri behen ke saath kya kar rahe ho? Dekho main tum jaise ladko ko ache se jaanti hu'..meri bholi behen se dur hi rehna warna woh haal karogi ki by god kabhi excel mein toh kya mumbai mein bhi nahi dikhoge'.gunjan issne tere saath aisi waisi koi harkat toh nahi ki na???bata agar issne kuch kiya ho toh''by god yahi college mein ulta latkaa dugi isse.

Sa: gunjan please jaldi kuch bolo warna tumhaari behen mera murder kar degi'..

Gu: di yeh aisa ladka nahi hai'.issne kuch nahi kiya'..issne mujhe bachaaya'.yeh samrat hai.

Nu: bachaaya???kya hua tujhe???tu royi thi? Teri aankhein kyu laal hai???

Sa: nupur yeh baatein baad mein karna pehle principle ka paas jao.

Nu: tum mera naam kaise jaante ho?

Gu: kyunki yeh baba samrat hai jiske paas sabki information hoti hai. Baba Samrat knows everything. Please di ab chale warna principle humme kha jaayega.

RV had heard everything.

RV(thinking): lagta hain yeh dono ladki iss gang ke liye special hai'.pataa lagaana hoga inka relation kya hai.

Samrat took them to the principle's cabin.

Sa: tum log jao main baahar wait kar raha hu'.fir main tumhe dia ke paas le jaoga.

Gu: tum dia ko bhi jaante ho?

Sa: of course Baba Samrat knows everything.

He winked at her. She was surprised but then smiled & followed nupur inside.

Samrat was busy thinking about gunjan & her innocence.

Sa(thinking): tumne theek kaha tha dia'..tumhaari behen sabse alag hai'sabse innocent'mere baba samrat ke mazaak ko bhi sach samaj liya'.she is very sweet...I think we'll be great friends.

PRECAP: Surprise party for gunur. Mayur meet & fight. Mayank's mom is happy with this news.

Okay finally done & I guess a pretty long part to make up for the delay. Sorry MN fans you'll have to wait for the next part to read mayur fight.

I've selected the title as haseen pal since it got maximum votes. Hope others are not disheartened.😳

Please comment/criticize.😳

Edited by pinky_5 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyyy pinky
Really amazing start
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm


thankssss a lot seema for your sweet comment....have updated...😊
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oh boy
kya part tha
awesome blossom
i totally loved it
u rocked it
thanks for the pm
n it was aeriously amazing

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Pinky.. the update was nice!!
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Loved the part and baba samrat was brilliant and nupur as usual chatter box loved it cont. soon
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hey awesome ff yaar.........very nice........n really nice part....waiting for mayur to meet again!!!!.........already fallen for ur ff......do update soon!!!

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