Siddhant-Riddhima Ek Atoot Rishta #1

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Sid's mom misunderstood Armaan to be Riddhima's husband and happily talks to herself.

Sid's mom : Haansh ab yeh besharam aurat mere bete ka piccha toh chodegi!
Then Sid's mom goes home and calls Naina's papa and says
Sid's mom: Jai Shri Krishna Bhaisahab, main Sid ki mummy bol rahi hoon. Woh sagaii ki taarikh pakki karni thi na isiliye phone kiya.
Sid happens to hear this while walking down the stairs and goes running to his mom
Sid : Mom yeh aap kya kar rahi hai, aap meri sagaii kyon karwana chahti hai
Sid's mom (while on the phone): Tu chup reh
Naina's papa hears this on the other end and goes : Behnji aap ne mujhe choop rehne ko kaha
Sid's mom: Nahi nahi bhaisahab, woh toh mai apne is nalayak bete ko chup rehne ke liey keh rahi thi
Naina's papa : han..han....han, toh theek hai. Main ek kaam karta hoon main panditji se aaj hi baat karta hoon aur sagaii ka mohurat nikalwata hoon. Taarikh pakki karne ke liye main aaj sham ko Naina ko leke aapke ghar aajaonga
Sid's mom: Theek hai bhaisahab, waise bhi aise shubh kaam mein der nahi karni chahiye.
Sid's mom hangs up the phone and smilingly tells Sid
Sid's mom : Ek khush khabri hain Naina ke papa panditji se mohurat nikalwake aaj hi tumhari aur Naina ki sagaii ki taarikh pakki karne aa rahe he. Chalo chalo, bahot kaam pada hai

Sid is in flashback thinking of Ridzy and then comes back to reality and screams
Sid : Mom, par, mom
Sid's mom: Par, var kuch nahi, ab mein teri ek baat nahi soonnewali hoon. Badi mushkil se tujhe uss besharam aurat ke choongal se choodaya hai aur ab isse pehle ki koi aur tujhe apni choongal mein fasa le, main tumhare haath peele kar dena chahti hoon.
Sid leaves angrily and goes upstairs to his room and starts walking around the room talking to himself . Sid talking to himself : " Main Naina se kaise sagaii kar sakta hoon, meri shaadi toh already ho chooki hai. Ab yeh baat main mom ko kaise bataoo? "
Suddenly and idea clicks into Sid's head and Sid calls up Yuvi and tells him about his plan. (Plan kya hai woh secret hai so that you enjoy the upcoming reading)
Yuvi on the phone : Theek hai Sid, aaj shaam ko mere pyaar aur tumhari shaadi dono ka imitihaan hoga aur main iskeliye taiyaar hoon aur Naina ko bhi taiyaar kar loonga
After hanging up the phone, Sid talks to himself , " Yuvi ko toh samja diya ki kya karna hai, lekin Riddhima, oose kaise bulaoo. Aur ab Armaan bhi toh waapas aa gaya hai, aur mom samajti hai ki Riddhima ki shaadi Armaan se hui hai. Toh Main mom se kya kahoon ki Riddhima ki shaadi mujhse hui hain lekin woh Armaan se pyaar karti hai. Oh God, no ways.Agar maine mom se aisa kuch kaha toh mom zaroor mera thepala bana degi. Ek kaam karta hoon, Suv se baat karta hoon, shayad uske paas koi idea ho."
Sid : Suv, suv
Suv : Superboy, kya hua, mujhe kyon dhoond rahe the.
Sid : Suv mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai
Suv : Superboy, kya baat hai aaj kal aap bhabhi chodkar mere saath apne secrets share kar rahe ho, baat kya hai
Sid : Riddhima ke baare mein hi baat karni thi. Tum aaj sham ko Riddhima ko koi bhi bahane se yaha boola sakti ho please?
Suv : Lekin baat kya hai
Sid : Woh mein tumhe baad mein samjha doonga, philhal tum kuch bhi karke aaj sham ko che baje Riddhima ko yaha le ao.
Suv : Lekin mom?
Sid : Woh sab main dekhlonga, tum sirf Riddhima ko yaha lekar aao
Suv : Theek hai superboy
Suv goes to Naina's home and talks to Riddhima
Suv : Hai bhabhi, aapki bahot yaad aa rahi thi toh aapse milne chali aayi.
Riddhima : Achanak meri yaad kaise aa gayi
Suv : Bhabhi mujhe aapki help chahiye
Riddhima : Meri help, lekin kis liye
Suv : Aaj shamko aap mere saath mere ghar chalegi
Riddhima : Lekin kyon?
Suv : Bhabhi woh maine kuch salvar suits kharide hain kyonki mom hamesha mujhe daatti rehti hai ki salvar suit pehno. Jab main shop mein gayi toh mujhe samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kaunsi loo aur kaunsi nahi loo toh maine bahot saari dresses le li woh bhi superboy ke credit card se. Isse pehle ki bro apna credit card bill dekhkar mujh par baras pade, mujhe jo jo dress nahi chahiye woh return karni hai. Toh please aap kaun se dresses acche hai woh decide karne mein meri help kariye na
Riddhima : Theek hai, lekin sham ko hi kyon, abhi kyun nahi?
Suv : Kyonki sham ko ghar pe koi nahi hoga, mom bhi nahi aur superboy bhi nahi
Naina thinks something is fishy and is about to say something just then her mobile rings and its Yuvi. Naina on the phone : Haan bolo Yuvi
Yuvi : Naina, meri baat dhyaan se soono. Then Yuvi tells Naina about the whole sagaii thing
Naina figures why Suv is taking Riddhima to Sid's home
Yuvi is waiting on Sid's terrace as per the secret plan alongwith Jp, Jiggy and Raaj. Sid is all dressed up in Sherwani as forced by his mom, his mom is busy preparing and has all sorts of mithais ready and is waiting at the door for Naina's papa and Naina.
Sid goes to Suv, " Yeh Riddhima abhi tak kyon nahi aayi, tumne usse aane ke liye kaha toh thana na"
Suv " Haan, superboy maine unhe yaha aane ke liye kaha tha, ho sakta hai unhe taxi nahi mili hogi ya woh traffic me phans gayi hogi"
Scene changes:
Ridzy is waiting on the street for a taxi bcoz she din't know that Naina and her papa are going to Sid's home, she thought they are going out for some gujju function so she din't go with them.
Ridz is waiting for the taxi and no taxi wala stops, suddenly a maroon van goes further and comes back in reverse, the glasses of the car roll down and Ridzy is shocked to see that it is Armaan.
Armaan, " Armaan, aao Riddhima main tumhe chod deta hoon"
Riddhima, " Nahi Armaan tum jhao, main taxi leke chali jaoongi"
Armaan, " Come on basket, zidd mat karo, waise bhi is area main tumhe koi taxi nahi milnewali"
Riddhima hesitantly goes with Armaan
Armaan, " Waise basket, tumhe jaana kahan hai?"
Riddhima : Suv ke ghar, usne mujhe dresses select karne boolaya hai
Armaan, " Ajeeb zamana hai, ab ek doctor ek intern ke liye dresses bhi select karta hai"
Ridz remains quiet during the whole ride and then Armaan pulls in front of Sid's sky scraper.
He sees Jp and Jiggy standing on the terrace and is curious to find out whats going on.
Riddhima tries to enter through the main door, while Armaan decides to climb the pipe and go to the terrace thru the pipe.
Scene changes
Naina and her pappa has already arrived and Sid's mom is going gaga over them and offering them things to eat. Sid is constantly looking at the door and then looking at Suv
Suddenly the door bell rings and Sid's mom opens the door.
She is shocked to see Ridzy at the door and says " Tum, lekin tumhe yahan kisne boolaya hai?"
Riddhima : Suvarna ne
Sid's mom stares at Suv and gives her a raised eyebrow look
Suv : Jee mom maine hi inhe yahan boolaya hai.
Riddhima and Suv go to Suv's room and Riddhima tells Suv that she told her that no one would be home then why is everyone there.
Suv : Woh kya hain na bhabhi ki mom or bro ka bahar jaane ka plan achanak change ho gaya aur mujhe aapko inform karne ka waqt hi nahi mila
Yuvi and the gang works on bringing the plan to action (The plan is to tell Naina's papa and Sid's mom the truth about Yuvi and Naina and Ridz-Sid wedding)
Naina's pappa : Behnji, panditji ne kaha hai ki sagaii ke liye ek hi muhorat hai aur woh bhi aaj ka iske baad saat mahine tak koi muhorat nahi. Isiliye main saari taiyari karke aaya hoon aur hall bhi book karke aaya hoon aur mehmano ko bhi boola liya hai. Aur haan aapko angothi ki chinta karne koi zaroor nahi, uska bhi maine first class intzaam kar diya hai. Ab aap bilkool bhi aana kani mat karna
Sid's mom : Lekin bhaisahab itni jaldi
Naina's papa : Aare, isme jaldi kya? Humare gujarat mein toh NRI log ek flight se utarte hain, shaadi karte hain aur doosri flight se vaapas bhi chale jaate hain.
Scene changes :
Armaan goes to the terrace thru the pipe and talks to Jp
Armaan : Mr. Mughal Sarai, tu yaha kya kar raha hai
Jiggy : Hum sab Sid ki sagaii pakki karne aaye hai
Armaan : Sid ki sagaii, kiske saath
Raaj : Naina aur kiske saath
Yuvi gives Raaj and angry look and says,
Yuvi : Guys mujhe lagta hai ki hume nicha chalna chahiye, kahin der na hojaye
All of them including Armaan : Haan chalo chalo
Scene changes:
Naina's pappa and Sid's mom are about to finalize Sid's sagaii with Naina.
Sid's mom : Badhaii ho bhaisahab yeh rishta......
Before Sid's mom could complete the sentence, Yuvi interrupts her while walking down the stairs and says
Yuvi : Yeh Rishta nahi ho sakta
Sid's mom : Kyon nahi ho sakta? Aur tum ho kaun yeh sab kehne wale?
Hearing Sid's mom's screaming, Ridz, Suv come there too and everyone including Armaan stares at Yuvi
To be continued...................................................

Edited by Khushi007 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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love it yaar cnt wait for part two
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww Khushi! lovely :)

I can't wait to read further! add the rest soon😳



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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Khusi............atlest tum to zaldi raaz par se parda uthao 😛
btw...........it is awesome....waiting for the part 2
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice👏....keep them coming......give the CVs a run for their money😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww khushi!! I loved it!! continue sooand pm too plzz if you can
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow loved part 1!!!
plsss pm me wen u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey khushi..nice fic..
Sid's mom is hell bent on fixing his wedding..but he tries to convince her not to..too bad, she doesn't agree..
Sid makes a plan with Yuvi n soon everyone is involved..
Riddhima is waiting for a taxi n Armaan pulls by..she has to go with him..
Sid breathes when she comes!..lol..n Armaan is confused whats going on..he finds out the truth n they go down..
Yuvi stops Sid's mom..n i wonder what he'll say now..
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome FF!

Can't wait for the next part!

Add me to your PM list!

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