P.S: I hate you:replies to the comments pg-11, 12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome DI
Loved it
Please continue with the next part soon

Take Care
Zoya

Originally posted by: shonasukirti

amazingggggggggggggggggggg & veerrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy long post:)

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Kanu ji.. kya baat hai.... awesome OS yaar..!! n the best part is the way u hv brought in this awesome.. SUSPENSE in it..!! Luvd it yaar..!!👏👏

n yh Sohana.. i was super confused too... abt the Armaans.. n i actually thot that Kanu has brought in another twist in the tale..😛 Glad .. kanu that u clarified that the two Armus r separate.. 😉

n OMG.. Bharti had to go to Jail.. for this Rockstar rocky.. who happens to be Mr. Armu Sinha.... oh God.. now i dunno whether to b angry on my HE-Man... or hope its all a big misunderstanding?? 😔

Really a delight to read.... keep em coming.. dear.. U knw.. ur my SUPER-Star.. now dun ya 😳 Luv ya!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Durga A.

This is so cute Kaninika!

But what happened to the other Armaan? 🤔

Dear friends, it was most of your question, "where is the other Armaan?" So I thought I will answer this first.

Part 8

I have told you that Bharti goes out for investigation and to meet her friends. So what we can see is Bharti coming to the police station to meet somebody, and it is her college friend Armaan.😲

Bharti had never stayed in jail. When Police came to arrest her, Armaan came to Bharti's place to give her some class notes. In the mean time Bharti was trying to tell the police that she didn't kill anybody, she tried to explain that rocky called her to that house and when she was there Sam was already killed. But Police did not believe her. 😒

Just then Armaan came in. At first he noticed what is happening. He opened the bracelet of his hand on which his name "Armaan" was written. He very quickly came near Bharti and said

"Bharti, you have dropped your bracelet in the college, I have brought it for you."😊 And then very quickly he put the bracelet into Bharti's wrist.

Bharti was shocked.😲

Police: wo Bharti ka bracelet hai to yeh kiska hai? 😲He showed the bracelet which was found near Sam's body. It was written "Bharti" on the bracelet. Maine college ke students ko puchha hai and unlogo ne kaha yehi bracelet unlogo ne Bharti ke haath mein dekha hai.

Armaan: O, yehwala, yeh to mera hai.😊

The police was surprised to see that both the bracelet looks the same except for the names.😲 (Actually Armaan and Bharti bought them together😊)

Armaan: ek jaise dikhta hai na isliye college mein log confuse ho jaate hai.

Police: but tumhare bracelet mein Bharti ka naam aur uske bracelet mein tumhara naam?😕

Armaan: is liye ke hum log ek dusrese se bohut pyar karte hai, to ek dusreka naam saath mein le ke ghumte hai.😳

Bharti was shocked.😲 What was Armaan trying to do?😕

Police: bohut ho gaya pyar pyar ka khel, ab tumdono chalo mere saath police station.😡

Ultimately police took them to the police station but Armaan was able to convince the police that Bharti was not there, it was him. Even police got evidences that earlier Armaan had a fight with Sam. Armaan was successful, may be it was easier for the police that Armaan killed somebody; it was difficult to believe that a girl like Bharti can kill a guy like Sam. Bharti tried a lot, but she was not able to convince Armaan.😒

Bharti: Its just not possible Armaan, tumne kuchh nahi kiya, yeh zaroor Rocky ka koi plan hai, tum aise surrender karoge to Rocky kabhi bhi pakra nahi jaega, 😔I can't let you do this. I will go and tell police that you are doing this for me, for our friendship, main bataungi ki tumhari jagah mujhe andar kar de.😒

Armaan: bachcho jaisi baat mat karo. 😒Tum nahi janti jail mein rehna tumhare liye kitna mushkil ho sakta hai, you don't know these people. Chinta mat karo, I will be alright. Tum Rocky ke against evidence collect karne ki koshish karo.😊

Years passed. Armaan and Bharti never knew that things can be so difficult. They were not getting any news about Rocky, he vanished somewhere, nobody could tell where he was, and he didn't even complete his final year. Bharti was never able to convince Armaan, he never wanted Bharti to come behind the bars.😭

All these 4 years Bharti tried to bring Armaan out of the jail, but all her efforts were in vain. She became so very much distressed. She started drinking a lot, she really didn't want to live but Armaan never listened to her. After 4 years Bharti saw Rocky again. This time he was not Rocky but he was Armaan Sinha, father of a 3 yr old daughter.😲

Part 9:

Bharti came to meet her friend Armaan

Armaan (with a big smile on his face, though he looked very miserable): Kaisi ho tum?

Bharti: kuchh thikthak evidence nahi mil raha hai😒

Armaan: Jia kaisi hai? bohut pyari bachchi hai na?😊

Bharti: "Jia bohut achhi hai, she is the sweetest girl I have ever met." 😊Jia's name brought a smile on her face😊, Suddenly her smile faded. 😔 "Armaan, main kitni pareshaan hun, ke mujhe evidence nahi mil raha hai aur tum itni cool ho?"😡

Armaan (smiling): Bharti, kya tum Jia se uske papa ko chhin sakti ho?😊

Bharti looked at him : Armaan you are just impossible, I will go to the judge and tell him that I am the culprit.😡

Armaan (still smiling): nobody will believe you.😉

Bharti left from there, she was very much pissed off. 😡She was feeling awful. So desperately she wants to release Armaan and at the same time she is coming closer and closer to Jia. What can she do?😕😭

That day she drank a lot and came back home totally drunk. Jia was fallen asleep at that time.😊

Armaan (this time its Rocky😆) was looking at her very angrily.😡

Armaan: what do you think of yourself? Tumhe pata hai ke yahan pe ek bachchi rehti hai? 😡meri tin saal ki beti, how can you come like this? 😡Tum janti ho Jia kitni bar tumhare bare mein puchh rahi thi, bohut mushkil se use neend ayi hai. Tumhe agar yahan pe rehna hai to thikthak se raho, meri baat yaad rakhna, agar koi Jia ki life mein koi bhi problem lata hai, I wil kill that person.😡

Bharti couldn't control her anger this time:😡 maar daloge? Ha tumhe to wohi ata hai. yeh sab meri wajah se nahi, tumhari wajah se ho raha hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai jab Jia ko sach baat ka pata chalega to wo kya sochegi? Tum saari zindagi usse sabkuchh chhupa nahi sakte.😡

Suddenly both of them were freezed. Bharti understood that this is not the right time to tell all these things. Within a second Armaan's face became pale. He left from there, went to Jia's room and banged the door.😒

Bharti lied on the sofa, she was very tired, and soon she fell asleep.

Part 10:

Next morning Armaan woke Bharti up with a cup of coffee.

Armaan: I am sorry Bharti for what I told you last night. 😔Zaroor koi wajah hogi tumhare late ane ka. I behaved very badly with you.😔

you are right Bharti. Agar Jia ko pata chalega ke maine uski maa ke saath kya kiya hai to wo pata nahi kya karegi,😒 I know indirectly I killed her mother. Bharti, I was really a bad guy when I was in college, but now I am trying to change myself. Main puri koshish kar raha hun Jia ko khush rakhne ke liye.😊

Meri life mein jo hua hai main nahi chahta ke wo Jia ki life mein ho. I have grown up seeing my parents fighting all the time 😒and then bohut kam umro mein I lost them. 😔I want that Jia should get all the love she deserves. 😊Main usse ma aur papa dono ka pyar dena chahta hun. Mujhe is ke liye kisiki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. 😔

wo kya hai ke kuchhidino mein tumne Jia ke dil mein apni jagah banali. 😊Shayad isi wajah se main tumhe kal raat kuchh zada hi bol diya.😒

Bharti listened to everything Armaan told. She didn't know why but Armaan's words seemed genuine. Is he a changed person?😕

Part 11:

More days passed. Armaan and Jia accepted Bharti as a part of their family. For example:

Incident 1:

Oneday:

Armaan: Aj Bharti aunty khana banayegi😆

Jia: yayyyyyyyy🥳

Bharti: Jia mujhe omlette ke siva aur kuchh banana nahi ata

Jia: call your Pari😃

Bharti: Pari, wo '.main' wo abhi Switzerland gayi hai, uski dost se milne😛

Armaan started laughing to hear Bharti's story about the Pari😆

Armaan: don't worry we will help you.😊

Bharti was trying to cook Roti sabji, Armaan was helping her. Jia was roaming around and jumping in joy. Armaan and Bharti can't stop smiling to see Jia so much happy.😃

For some moments Bharti totally forgot what her actual aim is.

Incident 2:

Three of them went to "Essel World", had a lot of fun, and then they went for shopping, then to Juhu Beach and finally had dinner together.😊

Part 12:

Bharti came to meet her lawyer. The lawyer told her that if she couldn't get any evidences it will be real difficult for Armaan (not Rocky). 😒Soon there will be trial and Armaan will get lifelong punishment.😭 Bharti was very upset that day. She didn't know what to do. She was not in a mood to come back home.😭

At 3'O clock in the night Armaan (Rocky) found Bharti on the street again. She was again totally drunk.😒

Bharti: tum? tum kyun kabhi mujhe chhorte nahi ho? just leave me alone.😡

Armaan (shouting in anger😡) : what do you think of yourself? Tum jab chahogi hamari life mein aogi aur jab chaogi chali jaogi? 😡Tumhe pata hai tum aane ke baad meri aur Jia ki life mein kitni khushi ayi hai?😳 Ok, mere bare mein nahi, tum to Jia ke bare mein soch sakti ho na?😡 don't you know howmuch she loves you?😒 maine kaha that na jo meri life mein hua hai wo Jia ki life mein nahi hone dunga, but same thing is happening in her life, wo bhi sirf tumhari wajah se.😡 utho, just come with me.😡

He came towards Bharti, held her hand and started pulling her.😔

Bharti: chhodo mujhe, it hurts.😒

Armaan suddenly realized that he has no right to do this. He left her hand.😔

Armaan: OK, tumhari marzi, bas mera ek request, please come home today, just meet Jia once.😳

There was something in Armaan's eyes, Bharti couldn't say no this time. She agreed to come back.😊

Days were passing by. Bharti was not getting any evidence against Armaan, rather every day she was getting to know good things about him.😒 Not only this she sensed something, some changes in Armaan's behaviour, his eyes.😳 She was totally hating it.😡

It was Jia's birthday. Armaan and Bharti planned to give a surprise Birthday party. The day before, when Jia had gone to sleep, Armaan and Bharti started decorating the house with balloons, colored papers and flowers, helping each other.😊

Once Bharti was trying to fix a balloon on the wall, she was standing on a chair; suddenly she lost her balance and as she was about to fall Armaan held her. Bharti instantly close her eyes, when she realized she didn't fell down she opened her eyes.

She saw Armaan looking at her very romantically. 😳She kept looking at him. Armaan moved closer to kiss her.😳 Suddenly Bharti realized what is happening. She came out of his clutches and started shouting.😡

Bharti: what do you think of yourself Mr. Rocky? Main un larkiyon ki tarah nahi hun jo tumhari issi harkato ko bardast karungi. Just leave me.😡

Bharti remembered the day when she was dancing on the stage with Rocky. That's the worst day of her life.😒

She left without saying anything else. Armaan was totally shocked. 😲He completed the decoration. The house was really looking beautiful.😃

Part 14:

Next morning Jia was very delighted to see the decorations. 😃Armaan and Bharti gifted her numerous dolls and toys. 😃All through the day Armaan stayed with Jia and Bharti.😊 They had lunch outside. 😊

Bharti was talking with Armaan only when Jia was around, other times she was totally avoiding him. Armaan tried to say sorry but she was not ready to listen.😒

In the evening there was Jia's Birthday party. Armaan invited some of his friends and neighbours. Jia was looking very beautiful. Bharti dressed her as Indian Pari.😊

Everyone was enjoying a lot. Armaan kept looking at Bharti hoping that she will forgive him. Bharti was very very pissed off.😒 She was not able to bear Armaan anymore, he definitely knows some magic. Bharti couldn't concentrate on her aim. 😒But Jia? How can she forget her? She was doing all these for Jia.😊

Everyone was enjoying, dancing with the music tunes, eating food, playing games. 😊Suddenly the light went off. Jia became very sad. 🤔Suddenly somebody whispered into Bharti's ears "candles jala do", it was Armaan. 😊

Bharti brought some candles and started lighting them. 😊Some of the guests started helping her.😊 Suddenly she heard the sound of the guitar. She looked up and saw Armaan playing his guitar.😊

Jia was very happy.🥳 She never knew her papa can sing or play guitar. She ran towards him and sat on his lap. Armaan kissed her and started singing.😊

Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

Aye Khuda paathshala (FULL SONG)

Everyone was dumbfounded; they never knew Armaan can sing so well.😃 Only Bharti knew it. She was hearing this voice after such a long time. This voice, which took her heart away when she was in college.😳

Occasionally Armaan was looking at her.😳

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

Bharti couldn't stay there. Armaan was looking at her with full of love.😳 She so very much wanted him to look at her like this when she was in college.😳 And now he is doing it and she was hating it.😡

She came out to the balcony. But she was able to hear Armaan's magical voice.😳 She covered her ears with her hands so that she couldn't hear it.😒

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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Magical dii
I can understand what bharti must be going through

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh Kanu dear!!

You did it ONCE again...Leaving it in parts and making me so eagerly, excited for the next parts..!! 😆..I want to know what happened next NOW..!! ...This is SO interesting..am loving the way the storyline is unfolding..and woah Rocky the Rockstar has the same name as Bharti's friend Armaan...?? 😲...Cool!!..

I read your comment back to Sohana on you saying that you always have either TWO Bharti's or TWO Armaan in your FFs..😆 That's so cute!..And i like the reason behind it..You don't want anyone to come between ArBi...😳..Aww so sweet!...and I LOVE THIS LINE: "Rocky the Rockstar was ROCKING the party..!!"....🤣....I don't know why but when i read that line i burst out into laughters...😆..I guess there was alot of ROCK in it.😆

Now now back to making proper comments...( 😆)...Why Bharti so pityful..Lying drunk on the road..:(..I feel sad...and wonder what's the mystery behind that night 4 years ago...and what happened to Bharti's friend from college Armu..?..Why he never help Bharti...? :(

Can't wait for the next part..:)

Loving it alot and hoping those questions will be answered there..😊

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

🤗 I like to confuse you peolpe😆
You will get your answers soon😃
BTW awsome Aamir siggy, too hot😳

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Great start di 👏👏 the mystery that you have created is really awesome ... really curious about what exactly happened 4 years back and what was Sam doing at Armaan's house that night ... But what happened to the other Armaan ??? Jia is very cute😛😛 and I hope this Armaan has actually not killed Sam...

please continue soon ... very well written 👏👏