STORY -Case of hidden diamonds - By VISROM

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prabha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Well I guess if the member does not want to reveal his/her identity, we shouldn't ask again (I already did once on the previous page). I am sure when he/she feels comfortable identity will be revealed. Some people like it that way and we respect that. @cadbury123 I just hope your stories keep coming, no matter what username you use.

Edited by prabhanarayan - 15 years ago

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rozeishere

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

lovely story ... i could atually hear the voices of the characters in my head as i was reading it... wonderful... please write some more

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rozeishere

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey this is really good .. u have a talent for writing and u should not feel shy to use it.... i just loved it... please continue with more stories ... whatever name u write under it does not matter

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visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: rozeishere
hey this is really good .. u have a talent for writing and u should not feel shy to use it.... i just loved it... please continue with more stories ... whatever name u write under it does not matter

Thank you so much. 😃

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yashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

thanks visrom😉

great work 😛

Edited by yajushi - 14 years ago

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hin_sa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I just read the story now. It's just beautiful and very fresh without any murder and forensic scenes. I wish simple and cute stories like this were shown more often.

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sneh.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Hey what a lovely story each and every aspect of the story was so perfectly woven. The story aptly keep the interst stiuck to it. Lovely dialogues, some dialoudes I could here Abhijeet sir mouth appropriate like the one prabha mentioned the one I am mentioning below

Abhijeet: Haan sir.... aur yeh raasta sidha patal jaata hain sir. Bohot mushkil se hum dono bahar nikle

Kudos to your writing style, you are always awesome @ stories and this never seemed to be your first attempt 👏

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Sneha...you didn't read my first one???

Thanks for liking it. 😃

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sneh.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

I didnt get you yaar!!!!

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter
I didnt get you yaar!!!!

Sorry...what I meant was, I am surprised that you didn't read my first story....Someone brought this thread up and I just wondered if you and Shag have read it, because I think this was before you both became regular members here.

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