Do I have to say the words...(AR) #1 - Page 12

Originally posted by: repercussion

Hmmm.....armaan's problems could be the the feelings that leave him flustered and the beauty at sight....moreover the night out was beautifully penned Thank you! 😊 though riddhima could have always been a lill reluctant about being carried She would have voiced her reluctance for sure, but unfortunately (or fortunately 😉), our hero didn't give her the chance to do that. She was in his arms before she knew it 😉 and well her discomfort was captured passionately, well ofcourse she aquiescenced into being driven to home by him but armaan could have been alil more gregarious(too much sarcasm?)...Yup, Armaan could have been a little more gregarious, but it takes quite some effort to get words out of him (especially when they aren't caustic comments)....moreover, he was too busy fighting his internal battles at that moment gosh he's a wreck hollow all the way, besides, envy seems to sprout into a sapling against his own brother...but when it's abt the women in one's life things go haywire and families witness vertical splits gud to know we wudn't have to bear the drama though...Didn't think a triangle would work out here 😊 u are indeed capturing the simple story in an angle that makes it intriguing by the day...riddhima- common despise him for a lil longer and then u cn have him all by urselves (wink)...of course, AR forever 😃 and what's with armaan stopping dead in his tracks...the enchantress casts a spell unknown on all earthlings, let alone the protagonists lol...thnx to aphrodite and her son cupid! Bless them! BTW, you did put that in a wonderful manner 😊

Originally posted by: crimson_10

Hello again... 😉

Firstly, let me tell you that it was an amazing update. Am also happy that you kept your promise of giving me many "Armaan moments" to drool over. The icing on the cake was of course the wonderfully penned AR moments that left me asking for more. Also great to see that Rahul is more inclined towards Muskaan now 😉

I must have already told you, but please let me tell you again that you are an awesome writer. The way you breathe life into your characters is worth many claps 👏

Will be eagerly waiting for your next update.

Cheers!
Aashi

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Hey Richa:

Sorry have not been able to comment on the last two parts but finally all cought up now....

Loved the update......

Oohhh....love the chemistry btwn AR....he was mesmerized by her looks...awesome.....

Loved both the parts.....

Can't wait to see how these two fall in love...

Great updates...
Thanks for the PM & pls continue soon

Originally posted by: richa_b

Hey Aashi.....hope you are doing fine sweety!

Thanks so much for your appreciation. Really means a lot dear 😊😊

Love and hugs,
Richa

Originally posted by: navtinder

I just finished reading all the part and awesome work I must say.

I love all the characters that you have potrayed. arman has really intrigued me, wonder what's going on in his life that has made him cold and arrogant.

Please add me to your pm list, and update next part soon