My Story.ONE SHOT(AR) 29/3/10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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My Story

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Its twenty-two years that he is not with me. We started liking each other after our first meet only. His blue eyes attracted my green ones. It was surely love at first sight. His muscular body, his tattoos and specially his dimple made me more attracted towards him like a magnet. He was Muskaan's that is my best friend's boyfriend Rahul's best friend Armaan. Actually Muskaan's family did not know about Rahul her love… as they were too strict and a very conservative family and therefore she were scared to tell them that she loves Rahul.

One day her father came to know about Rahul and Muskaan and then after that day he did not let Muskaan to step out of the house. I being her friend became a messenger of their love and few days later I convinced her parents to let her atleast attend the college. She started to meet Rahul in the college and Rahul brought Armaan with him as he was his bestfriend. Armaan and I left them alone in the corner table of the cafeteria and we two sat a bit far from them in the same cafeteria as we did not wanted to disturb the lovebirds.

We started our conversation with hi's and hello's…..i was too shy to speak…..looking at him I understood he was also nervous…he ordered two cups of coffee for us…We started to talk and let our feelings come out. After few minutes the waiter served us the coffee. He suddenly asked the waiter to put some salt In his coffee. I asked him why. He said that he was born near the sea and enjoyed the salty taste from childhood. He missed his parents still living there near the sea…saying that tears came out of his eyes and thus our actual conversation stared and we fell in love. Few days we dated each other. We dated each other in the nearby zoo that is the famous Alipur Zoo in Kolkata, which was close to my college. I still cannot believe that we dated each other in the zoo near the Crocodile's Cage….Muskaan often said that OUR LOVE WAS TOO DANGEROUS…and therefore named our love DANGEROUS LOVE….no one would dare to separate us….

Two years later we got married and our love which was always there was growing more and more day by day. Few months later I got pregnant and hearing this news he was overwhelmed…we were blessed with our first cute little daughter whom we named Arima…..She became the apple of his father's eyes…..We lived as the happiest family on this earth…but how did we know that this happiness was only for short time. He being a doctor and his father being a retired army officer recommended him to go to Kashmir as the army needed doctors to cure their wound as there was no one available that time and as war was going on most of them died and therefore they needed a resident doctor for the time being….He agreed to go and I also agreed because I was happy to know that by some way he can help the country….I really wanted him to go but I was very sad that he was leaving me and our princess .

Before leaving he gave me a letter and kissed my forehead saying that he will be back by our anniversary. After he left I opened the letter it read that the first coffee date we had and he asked for salt to put in his coffee as he was missing the salty taste…..he lied….he hated the salty coffee and out of nervousness told salt for sugar and he drank it…. because he was nervous to speak and after that coffee date only we were together… and having me in his life was the biggest happiness than anything…my eyes welled up…..After that day whoever asked me how salty coffee taste I always replied that its very sweet…..love is not to forget but to forgive.

Wherever he is there is no network through which I can contact him…Every anniversary I wait for him as he had promised me that he will come back in our anniversary…but he never mentioned the year so I still keep waiting for him as I just want to hear him saying "I am back forever"…It will be twenty five years of our marriage tomorrow ….these twenty two years I celebrated it with our daughter but this year I really want him as it will be silver jubilee of our marriage…I hope my wish comes true….

Next day at six morning I heard the bell rang…my heartbeat became fast as I was going to open the door…As I opened the door I could not speak anything…He is back…he opened his arms and I hugged him. He said " I m back forever love…Happy Anniversary"….my wish came true…As he came back he said I still look the same old Riddhima…as beautiful as before….while I complimented him by saying "you r my same old handsome armaan…my macho man"…

Later in the whole day he admired me saying about my green eyes…my beautiful hair…my innocent face which he missed these years….Arima was also very happy to meet his father… Armaan was also happy to see his little princess who has also turned to a beautiful young lady…After this day we lived happily ever after….


Note-the coffee part is taken from a small sms....this is my return treat as my xams r over😊

plz do comment....and criticize n do press the like button

love

Debadrita

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nidha1983 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woah dear its really sweet and touching one plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

From KASIAN'S"You'r an Angel with Golden heart, with beauty & grace,
You'r my shining sun, my glowing stars, my precious moon...
You'd always show how much u care with the loving things u do

You're an angel that gives me a reason to live,
You're an angel that gives me inspiration...

I love you so much that words can't explain
This joy that I have for you." To Shilpa




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Norz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely os
it brought tears in my eyes
glad that he was alive
do write more
prettyasjen thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww it's beautiful, I had tears in my eyes while reading the part where he goes away!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aw its a really wonderful peice.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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itz awesome debarita di...ive already tld u:)
keep writing mre such stories plz
Soulmate27 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmmmmmmm....what pain and what love.................very very nicely written.............👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi dear! it was very touching.
round of applause for you!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful os
im glad armaan came back
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadAbtArmi

hmmmmmmmm....what pain and what love.................very very nicely written.............👏





thank u

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