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After all the hungama & confusing about the baby' Nupur came to know about Ria & Mayank....she was very upset & left from there

Mayank was searching for Nupur everywhere in the college library, canteen everywhere he saw Gunjan

M-Gunjan Nupur kaha hai

G-pata nai

M-pata nai matlab tumhare saath hi thi na

G-Di ghar chali gayi shayad

M-acha theek hai

He quickly left for home

He opened the door it was all dark inside he went & switched on the lights 'Nupur 'Nupur kaha ho tum

She was not there

M-Yaha bhi nahi hai'Nupur tum kaha ho''he was worried

Nupur......though she acted like a fighter in front of everyone deep inside she was really hurt not because she didn't trust Mayank she had full faith in him but because he hid his past from her

She didn't mind Riya being Mayank's friend in the past but she was hurt that Mayank didn't think it was important for him to share about his past with her''..she sat there on a bench lost in thoughts '.

It was 9-00 still Nupur didn't return Mayank was waiting for her impatiently he thought maybe she went to Gunjan's house he called Gunjan

M-Nupur aayi kya waha

G-nai Jiju Di tou yaha nai aayi

M-phir kaha gayi hogi

G-wo di thoda disturbed thi na tou shayad kahi gayi hogi

M-hmm'

G- don't worry jeeju mai di se baat karungi

M-Nahi gunjan'iss baar nai mai khud uss se baat karunga akele'.

G-theek hai'bye

M-bye''he kept the phone

He knew Nupur was maha upset but where was she 'was she alright''he was tensed he felt guilty as he was responsible for what Nupur was going through

He was tensed he was missing her there was never a day when she was out for so long without him'..she was always there when he used to come home exhausted after the college work "Mayank aa gaye tum" she would say like a perfect wife waiting for her husband'.& hug him'that one hug would refresh him'the warmth in her hug vanished all the stress he had''the bliss he felt in her hug made him feel complete''

Thunder lightening brought him back from his thoughts he looked outside it was raining

Nupur was walking on the road'..when suddenly it started raining'..

She had tears in her eyes which slowly rolled down her cheeks'.

Rains she loved rains & she had shared some most memorable moments with Mayank in rain but today she was loving it coz it didnt show her tears''.

Mayank on the other hand was hell scared where was she it was raining so heavily was she alright

M-itni barish ho rahi hai 'mai kaha dhundu use'.

The guesthouse door was open he was pacing continuously looking outside when he saw Nupur walking

Nupur was walking she didn't observe when she passed the outhouse & walked ahead

M-Nupur kaha jaa rahi hai'.he ran out after her in the rain

Nupur 'Nupur'.he called out but she was lost in her own thoughts'.

Nupur he finally shouted which made her stop in her tracks & she turned

He went & hugged her

M-Kaha thi tum Nupur'college se tou tabhi nikal gayi thi na '.. mai kitna pareshan ho gaya tha ''

Kyu Mayank'..she asked'.leaving him shocked he broke the hug

M-Kyu ??? kyu ka kya matlab I was scared for you he said looking into her eyes

Though it was raining heavily Mayank could make out her tears rolling down her cheeks he knew she was disturbed because of this whole baby & Ria issue

M-Nupur mai jaanta hu tum Ria ko lekar upset ho but believe me Nupur mere aur Ria ke beech aisa kuch nai hai'..he said holding her by her shoulders

N-Mai jaanti hoon Mayank dukh iss baat ka hai ki tumne mujhe apne past ke bare mein kuch bataya nai meri tumhari life mein kya inti bhi importance nai hai ke tum apni life ke bare mein mujh se share karo bolo Mayank bolo'.kya importance hai meri tumhaari life mein

she said cutting between words the rain water was making it difficult for her to speak

Mayank stood silent wondering what was she asking....how important she was???'. she is his life'''she jerked away his hand from her shoulder & walked ahead'..

Jo hawa ka jhoka ho wo tum ho..... she stopped......

Jo khushboo se mehka ho wo tum ho.....

Hai chamka sa aasman mein koi ...

Wo tara nahi ...bas tum ho......

Tum meri dhadkan ho Nupur '

Meri zindagi........ mera pyaar ho'.tum meri himmat ho'.har subha jab mein aankhein kholta hu tumhe apne paas paa kar mere dil ko sukoon milta hai....

By this time Nupur had tears in her eyes.....

tum meri saans ho Nupur Mai tumhare bina mar jaunga

Tum pooch rahi ho tum mere liye kya ho....

N-Mayank'

M-tum aisa sooch bhi kaise sakti ho ki tum mere liye important nahi ho....mera koi past tha hi nai Ria tou meri achi dost bhi nai thi mere zindagi mein sirf ek hi ladki thi.. hai' aur rahegi aur wo tum ho Nupur'.

You are my best friend 'my love'.my wife 'my life'.

his eyes were watery as he said this

what he said touched her heart she felt bad for over-reacting

M-I'm sorry Nupur ''He took her hand in his'..I never wanted to hurt you....plz mujhe maaf kardo'..I should have told you

she could see the sincerity in his eyes she had complete trust on him he could never break her trust'..

N-nai Mayank tumhe sorry bolne ki zaroorat nai hai I trust you mai hi zyada over-react kar gayi mai'..she said with tears in her eyes

M-tum meri patni ho tumhe haq hai mujh par naraz hone ka mere liye possessive hone ka'..magar mai tumhare aankh mein yeh ansoo nai dekh sakta'.he said looking into her eyes'.

Nupur didnt wanted him to know that she was crying as she knew it woud hurt him..she smiled & said'.mai kaha ro rahi hu yeh tou baarish ka paani hai...'.

M-Nupur tumhare aansu aur paani mein mujhe fark pata hai'..he said rubbing off her tears'.

He cupped her face & brought his face close to hers Nupur closed her eyes feeling the raindrops on her face he leaned closer & kissed her forehead'.

Ab ghar chalein'..he wrapped his arm around her shoulder & she felt safe in his embrace both went back home''.

As they entered

Achooo'!!! Mayank sneezed

M-Dekha tumhari waje se mujhe thand lag gayi

N-Kya??? Meri waja se maine kya kiya ????

M-kya zurat thi tumhe itni raat ko bahar Barish mein bheegne ki

N-Tumhari waja se'.Hawww'..haaa'Achooo''

M- lo khud bhi shuru ha gayi

N-Maya'..Achoo'.

Mayank brings a towel and gives it to her

M-apni bak bak bandh karo aur baal pooch

N- mai bak bak kar rahi thi

M-jo bhi ho'he goes from there

N-Isse tou mai Achoo'.

Mayank went to the kitchen to make adrak wali chai for her

N-aane dou usse abhi baata ti hu

Mayank made the tea'.& placed it infront of her

M-Biwi aap ke liye adrak wali chai'

Nupur was very happy

N-wah patidev aapne mere liye adrak waali chai banayi'.

M-waise tou mai world ki best coffee banata hu '.chai maine first time banayi hai'ab yeh melodrama band karo aur chai pi lo tumhe thad lag jaayegi'.he said sitting on the bed beside her .............

As Nupur was drinking the tea Mayank sneezed again'.

N-tum bhi na Mayank mujhe tou towel de diya par apne baal nai sukhaye'.

She took the towel & sat on her knees on the bed behind him & started drying his hair

N-Thanks Mayank

M-kis liye

N-for everything'' tum na world ke best pati ho'..she said ruffling his hair.....

M-acha... tum tou aise keh rahi ho jaise tumhare bohot saare pathi hai''

N-Mayank tum'.she said pinching him

M-Ouch!!!!!!...kya Nupur mai tou mazak kar raha tha'.he said making a face'

N-mujhe pata hai sweetu'. she wrapped her arms around his neck from behind'& gave a soft peck on his cheek.....


That's it guys

I know its not that good but I wanted to see something like this at the end of this track ....which is not possible😆

Do comment if you like it

Luv

Nidzy

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Edited by maria88 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nidzy di!!!!!!!!!

these r for u









it was realllly goooooooodddddddddd yyaRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

emmmmmmmmmmmmm looooviiiiiiiiiiing it

it was swriously too god

and even mee to want it in the track

loved these lines
He was tensed he was missing her there was never a day when she was out for so long without him'..she was always there when he used to come home exhausted after the college work "Mayank aa gaye tum" she would say like a perfect wife waiting for her husband'.& hug him'that one hug would refresh him'the warmth in her hug vanished all the stress he had''the bliss he felt in her hug made him feel complete''''


Mayank stood silent wondering what was she asking....how important she was???'. she is his life'''she jerked away his hand from her shoulder & walked ahead'..

Jo hawa ka jhoka ho wo tum ho..... she stopped......

Jo khushboo se mehka ho wo tum ho.....

Hai chamka sa aasman mein koi ...

Wo tara nahi ...bas tum ho......

Tum meri dhadkan ho Nupur '

Meri zindagi........ mera pyaar ho'.tum meri himmat ho'.har subha jab mein aankhein kholta hu tumhe apne paas paa kar mere dil ko sukoon milta hai....

By this time Nupur had tears in her eyes.....

tum meri saans ho Nupur Mai tumhare bina mar jaunga

Tum pooch rahi ho tum mere liye kya ho....

N-Mayank'

M-tum aisa sooch bhi kaise sakti ho ki tum mere liye important nahi ho....mera koi past tha hi nai Ria tou meri achi dost bhi nai thi mere zindagi mein sirf ek hi ladki thi.. hai' aur rahegi aur wo tum ho Nupur'.

You are my best friend 'my love'.my wife 'my life'.





M-tum meri patni ho tumhe haq hai mujh par naraz hone ka mere liye possessive hone ka'..magar mai tumhare aankh mein yeh ansoo nai dekh sakta'.he said looking into her eyes'.

Nupur didnt wanted him to know that she was crying as she knew it woud hurt him..she smiled & said'.mai kaha ro rahi hu yeh tou baarish ka paani hai...'.

M-Nupur tumhare aansu aur paani mein mujhe fark pata hai'..he said rubbing off her tears'.

He cupped her face & brought his face close to hers Nupur closed her eyes feeling the raindrops on her face he leaned closer & kissed her forehead'.

Ab ghar chalein'..he wrapped his arm around her shoulder & she felt safe in his embrace both went back home''.





N-for everything'' tum na world ke best pati ho'..she said ruffling his hair.....

M-acha... tum tou aise keh rahi ho jaise tumhare bohot saare pathi hai''

N-Mayank tum'.she said pinching him

M-Ouch!!!!!!...kya Nupur mai tou mazak kar raha tha'.he said making a face'

N-mujhe pata hai sweetu'. she wrapped her arms around his neck from behind'& gave a soft peck on his cheek.....


these were the line ilove


it was damn cool


chalo tumhe aadhi maafi mil gayi yeh update karne ke liye


but dont forget aadhi baaki hai


pls update all your ffs( last warning)


love pebbzzy





Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome , terrific os dear................................👏👏👏👏
loved it to core.............................
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update dear..it was really nice..and pls continue ur other ff's also..desperately waiting 4 it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sho shweet hun!
Absolute loved it!
I hope the cvs show something like this
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wow superbv update!!!!
would love it if they showed sumthin lyk this!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
kassh ye mjht me real me hota par hamari assi kismat kaha.
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice part dear...
update soon
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Oye Nidzy..............jaa kar pehle yeh CV's ko dikhao............duffar CV's se koi story to banti nahi hai.............

Amazing Os yaar..........Loved it........
Understanding Mayank and Nupur..........

But cv's ko kon samjhaye............😡

it was absloutely fabulous one..........

Do write more os but phele update ur ffs.............ok...........😆

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