Love in silence:Shiv,Gauri,Neha Bamb

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love in silence Part 1







"I'm Shiv Kapoor.I'm going to narrate you the story of a sweet innocent lady who won my heart.She is not alive now."
He wipes his tears.

Shiv is with a cute girl in his car.He stops the car.
She:Why did you stop the car Shiv?I was enjoying the romantic long drive."
S:Neha,i'm going to give you even sweeter than a long drive.What you like the most.Happy Birthday dear Neha..."
She is surprised.He gives her a gift.It's wrapped.She opens it.She is surprised to see it.
N:Wow!It's my favourite chocolate.Thank you so much Shiv.This is so sweet of you.."
She takes the chocolate and makes him bite it.Then she also bites it.Both of them share the chocolate with each other.
N:Tonight there is birthday party at home.I will wait for you."
Shiv is silent.He thinks:Oh my God!Tonight Samar bhaiyya's and Gauri Bhabhi's wedding anniversary party is also there.I will not tell this to neha now.She will go crazy."

Samar enters his dark bed room.
S:Gauri!
Suddenly somebody lights the lamp.He sees Gauri holding a lamp with a smile.
S:Gauri,you are not ready yet?
Gauri keeps the lamp on the table.
G:Yes,i'm coming now Samar.One minute..
Samar laughs and goes near her.
G:What happened?
S:I can't understand why ladies take a lot of time to dress up.
She smiles:Because ladies have a lot of things to do to dress up.Men have nothing much to do.Right?
He smiles.

Wedding anniversary party....
Samar and Gauri cut the cake and feed each other.
Shiv plays the song "Chand chupa..."{Hum dil de chuke sanam}.Samar and Gauri dance softly to the song.
Shiv thinks:I'm getting late for Neha's birthday party.How will i leave now?

Neha is upset:Shiv has'nt reached yet.What happened to him?I'm getting tense.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
nice start
neha is dead???
cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
nice intro.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow great start love to read more pl contii soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start................is neha dead????????????? cont soon..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The starting is really heart-wrenching and very very touchy.I am liking it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love in silence Part 2


Shiv is about to go out.He goes near the door.
Samar:Shiv,where are you going?
Shiv is hunting for words:Eh..eh...i'm not going anywhere.I was just looking where any new quest is coming.
Sa:Nobody is going to come.
Samar goes.Shiv is relieved.Gauri goes near Shiv:Going to see Neha?
Shiv is shy:How did you understand that Bhabhi?
G:Where else will you go?
He blushes.

Shiv reaches Neha's house.Neha is relieved.
N:Shiv..you came?I'm relived now.
He smiles.
N:Why did you become late?
S:Today is Samar bhaiyya and Gauri bhabhi's wedding anniversary.There was a party.
Neha gets irritated:On my birthday also you are giving more importance to them?
S:I'm sorry Neha.
N:You know...purposefully i did'nt cut the cake for you.
S:Let us cut the cake...
Neha's dad Suryaban comes:Hi Shiv...you came...Neha was waiting for you...
Shiv holds Neha's hand and cuts the cake.He puts the icing all over her face.
She puts cream on his face also.Everyone laughs.

Neha asks Shiv:Did you tell everyone about me?
S:No,Gauri bhabhi knows...she gives me full support.Only she knows where i'm now.
Neha is irritated:Oh!Always you and your Gauri Bhabhi.

Samar and Gauri in the bedroom.
S:Today is our first wedding anniversary.All are celebrating along with us.We are happy.But the truth is that nobody knows that we are not husband and wife yet.We are just good friends.
Samar's mom Nikhila who was about to enter the room hears it:Samar!
Samar and Gauri are shocked.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohho neha doesnt like shiv's close relationship with his bro and bhabhi and samar and gauri arent husband and wife?????????????????????cont soon.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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samar and gauri, arnt husband and wife!! aw please carry on really intrested to read the next sence love it. thank you soo much for writing an fff with two of my frav characters...thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Happy to know that Gauri and Smar are not man-wife.

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