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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

Well well Devika I am really pleased so lovely ff keep it up😃😃 but dont ignore your research paper CB and CB forum are soooooooooo addicting with all the sweet responses from everyone😃

Chalhov, you know what, my instructor made me to rewrite the paper 3 times😡...he he..finally i got it done( i think i was more busy updating my FF than finding mateerials for my paper...he he..😲..i think she got tired of reading my paper...i should have given her a copy of my FF😆..but then she won't understand a word from it😕..Anyway i finished my research session today.😃..so free for tomorrow..planning to update with a looooong note...😉....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey dear again a awesome update!! Loved it 👏 👏 👏 Loved the teasing part 😉 And yes Amma's mor poti radio is getting on nerves!! 😡 😡 But loved Dev and Radhika a lot in this update.... 😊 😃

Thanks Dear..but waiting for the Delhi trip.....😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: xxxh-hxxx

DEVIKA, i have to say you can write really good. 👏👏

I just read the whole story without a break. Please update soon!!! 😃

Thank you😃 I take it as an award. because i know my post has less Radev moments..but still if it kept you to read all parts, i won.😃.......thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 15
Mehandi funtion continues.....
Deepika: Why don't you put mehandi too?
Vish: mehandi...lekin..ha ha ...mei bhi karllongi...Radh try a nice a design on my hand too..but not too much ..just simple..
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Mrinu: Today Radhika is busy ...do you think you get time to put one for yourself..looking at Radh.
Radhika: mei....nahi ..mei bas theek hum...agar mehndi dal diya tho koi aur kam nahi kar sakthi heina.
Mrinu: koi aur kya kam bacha hei karne keliya?
Deepika: bhabhi ..ye tho aise hi hei..kabhi aram se baith nahi sakthi..kuch na kuch karathe rehthe ho..agar mehandi dal diya tho...ussi kshan usko wash karke kuch na kuch kam karne keliye niklenge..
Mrinu: asa hei kya...tho aaj radhika ko mei mehandi legadoongi.
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Deepika: vo kaise? aap ki hathom mei mehandi leg chuka hei..
Mrinu: vo he Mrinalini magic..dekhthe rehejavo..
Radhika: nahi bhabhi mein bas theek hum..aap ko ee sab karne ki koi avasyaktha nahi hei...
Mrinu: radhika..chup rehe aur hath dikha..sab kah rehe hei thum bedi kanha bhakth ho ..tho mei kanha likhthi hum hath mei ..dikha...
radhika: nahi bhabhi..mei...
Mrinu: Rdhika thum kyom dulhan ki tharah saram arehi ho? ab kya eskeliye bhi mere devar se poochna padegi...with a teasing smile she winked at deepika.
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Radh: jee..looked at Mrinu for saying so..and was really frustrated...
Deepika: kya hei..thu hath dikhana...Bhabhi draw only a very small design ..ok.
radhika: forwarded her hands without saying anything further, because she doesn't want to hear any more teasing from them...
Mrinu started a very small flower design at the pam end on Radh's left hand....and wrote Kanha.......bas ....kya achi leg rehe hei thume?
radhika..Just loved that very tiny simple design and said...it looks very pretty and thank you..
Vish: Raadhika ab mere karna..
Radhika: ha...and was about pick a con, then nandu came..radhika deedi aapko sathriji doond rehe hei...
Radhika: mei abhi ayi... and left with nandu...
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Vish: bhabhi aap mujhe bhi legayi yena.
Mrinu: sorry sorry , see my hands, i cannot draw anything, meri design kharab ho jayegi..
Vish: lekin aap tho radhika ko....
Mrnu: vo tho esliye kiya..thaki maine uski bahuth mazak uthayi phir bhi vo kuch nahi kahi..mujhe bura lega...aur she did a wonderful job on my hands...so i did a very tiny one for her..i don't think i took much effort for that , look at mine it is still intact...You may be looking for a full design right..ek kam karthe hei...Ye Reshama...put design for Vish....
Reshma: ok..vish tell me what you want me to draw..or do you want me to write somebody's name within ur design.....
Vish felt shy and looked around the group to find Dev? Raj? or his friends?..somebody...her mind was not clear
Mrinu kyom Vish thume bhi koi mila hei radhika je tharah...ki thum edhar udhar kya thooth rehe ho?
Vish: radhika ko...kaun mila?
deepika: kuch nahi Vishakha..vo bas Kanha ki bath kar rehe thi...
Mrinu: nahi tho..mein apni devar..........
Deepika interrupted Mrni saying..bhabhi aapko dadi bula rehe hei....
Mrinu: dadi...ok then..mei abhi ayi..and went to meet them..deepika had big relief sigh as she wathed her going away....
Radhika and Nandu met sathriji and walked back to a corner and ..
Nandu: deedi thum behuth sundar leg rehe ho?
Radhika: vo tho mei hum hi.....nandu thume patha heina..theri deedi tho sabse sundar hei..mein tho Radha heina apni Kanha ka..aur Radha se sundar koi aur lege ..na munkin....Radha ethni sundar hei aur ethini pyari se hi ki kanha kissi doosre ke barei mei soch bhi nahi saktha......esliye mei kah rehe hum sabse ki....mei sundar hum....
nandu: ab samjhi..tho aap ki kanha kab aa rehe he aapko lene keliye?Kya vo aapko vrindavan se lejayegi?
Radh: ek din vo ayega nandu...aur mujhse kahega ki.......all of a sudden they heard a voice from no where saying
" mein tho bas thumhe lene keliye ayahum Radhika..kya thum mere sath avoge?'
Radhika and Nadu looked all wround but they didn' t find anybody.
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nandu: kaun kaha?
Radhika: patha nahi nandu..koi bhi dikhayi nahi de rehe hei...thum bhi suna na..
Nandu: deedi mujhe legtha hei...sach mei Kanha aagayi hei...Kya aap unke sath ja rehe hei kya?
Radh: ee thum kya keh rehe hi nandu..mujhe dekhne de.ki aise kaun kaha.....and her eyes were still wandering near and there, for the source..
Then Nandu: deedi..lekin jab meine poocha tho aap ne kaha ki...nahi aa rehe hei...aur aap ayi ho aur vo bhi ethni achi kapade mei...phir aap mujhse aisa kyom kaha?
Still looking around Radhika: vo kya heina..DM mujhe bulaya aur usne hi ee kapade diya...aur mei...
'Jhooth'.....a voice came from behind..
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Radhika got shocked and teurned around and found Dev standing just near her...she got really afraid...and Dev saw her frightened face...
Dev: kyom kya huva? thum ethni khabarisi kyum leg rehe ho?
Nandu: aap phir agayi..meri deedi ko thank karne?
Dev: Thank kerne?..ab tho thumhari deedi mujhe thank kar rehi hi aur thum mujhe kah rehe ho?
nandu: deedi chalo..hum vaha jayenge...and tried to hold her hands..
Radhika was about to turn and go with Nandu..but then she felt his hands on her arms, little strong as if holding her back to stay there..she looked back and saw Dev looking at her with pleading eyes.....
Dev: aise kaise jaa sakthe ho? thum usse jhooth kyom bola?
Nandu: aap mere deedi ke hath chodiye? and about to take off Dev's hand.
.Dev held her arm little stronger and said: ..kyom chod dum....thumahari deedi ne hi mere hath pakada tha pehle...ab mei kyum chodthum..aur us din thumhari deedi ne mujhse kaha ki...
."agar vo kissiki hath pakad liya tho vo es janam mei kya agale janam mei bhi nahi chodoongi"..
.thumhe yaad hei..nandu..he was looking at Radh's frighted eyes while telling thiese to nandu....
Nandu: aap aur Birju bhiya us din mere deedi ko uske saza bhi dilaya heina...ab kya aur kuch karna bakki hei...mere deedi ko mei aur dukhi nahi dekh sakthi..mere deedi achi hei...chodiyena mere deedi ko...
dev felt very bad when he heard this from nandu..he slowely loosened his grip, with much hesitation he left her hand and looked at nandu so painly....
Radhika; saw his change and looked at nandu
nandu saw the small red bruice on Radh's hand where Dev held his hand ..and reached for her arm...
nandu: dekhiyene..aap phir se mere deedi ko dukh diya hei...are deedi ka hath dekhona..
dev: saw the small red bruice on her wrist...but he didn't mean to hurt her and looked at Radh as if asking for sorry..radhika understood his frustration and told Nadu..
Radhika: Nandu meine kaha na thum us din ki bath aur math kahegi...theek hei..aur Dev babu se maafi manglena..
Nandu just looked at radh..
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Dev: nahi..nandu tho theek keh rehe heina..
Radhika: aap phir se suru hui kya..meine aap ko car mei kaha na ki vo sab phool jane keliye..phir aap bhi bechom jaise kyom kah rehe ho..
Dev: Lekin mei abhi bhi thumhe....
Radhika: bas aur kuch nahi..aap ne kaha na ki aap mere khas dosth hei..tho kya khas dosth aise hei kya?
Nandu: special friend...you two? when? i was not knowing that..
Radhika: looked at Dev with a corner eye who was standing still with a sad face...ha nandu..bas abhi..when he came to pick me up, we talked a lot and he became my special friend...
Nandu: tho ab aapko khas dosth mil gaya..aur mein kaun hum? aap tho mujhe special friend mana tha na..
radhika: aap mere sabse ache special friend ho..devbabu tho sirf ek special friend..hearing this dev looked at Radhika..and
Dev: why? what is the difference?
Radhika: Nandu is so sweet and he always play with me and always make me feel happy, and always there for me.....so he is special..
dev: aur mei?
radhika: aap tho bas do din keliye aye ho..aur do din bath chali jayegi..ha..phie hum phone tho zaroor kar sakthe ei..lekin phir bhi door hi heina...
Nandu: see see..i am special..you are only a friend.......samjhi...
Dev: that is not fair..i only came to pick you up and gave this dress and what all i did for you..
Nandu: wait a minute..aap ne deedi ko ee dress diya..aur
Radhika: nahi nahi..nandu ee..DM ne diya..
dev: jhooth...bolo aapki hath mei ee dress kisne diya.
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Radhika: haa..ha..vo tho aap ne..lekin
Dev: suna nandu..and she sat on the front seat and i drove her here.....
Nandu: deedi sat on the front seat of the car.... all alone..that's not fair..i won't talk to you any more...so that is why you didn't come with me right?
radhika: nandu..i was not knowing he is coming to pck me up..i stayed back because i had some work to do and then DM sent him...how do i know he is coming to pick me up?
Nandu: sach kah rehe ho deedi and looked at dev...
Dev: ha ha..theri deedi sach kah rehe hei..lekin agar thumhe car mei jana hei tho mujhe bethana mei lekar javvongi..bas ethna kaho ki thumhe kaha jana hei?
nandu: sach mei Dev bhiaya ..he staetrd jumping on the air saying...ab tho aap mere bhi khas dosth ben gaye ho? saying this he forwared his hand to shake with Dev..
Dev shook his hand and looked at Radhika and said ..see now we are best friends..
Radhika: ha ha..malum hei ki ab mei out hogayi hum..
dev: lekin Radhika ...ye betha ki ..why u like car drive this much?
Radhika: kya?
Dev: nahi...Dadi and Birju told me other day that when they came here the first day they saw you looking at that car and stood there admiring the beuty of it...r u crazy for cars?
radhika: crazy for cars...me?..no way...
Dev: phir...?
Radhika: Ha meine kabhi car mei ride nahi ki hei pehle?
" lekin mein tho car ko nahi dekh reh thi?"
Dev, nandu and Radhika looked back and saw daadi coming...
daadi looked at her asking for clarification..
Radhika: vo tho mein......vo khaadi ki..khaadi ki....
daadi: bathvo..kya bath hei?
Radhika: glanced at Dev as if now she has to explain....and looked back at daadi and said...vo khaadi ki colour heina...mujhe vo bahuth pasand ayi...
Daadi: khaadi ki colour..esmei kaunsi bede bath hei..ki thum ethne kho gaye us din....
radhika: nahi dadima..vo aise colour mei kapade mil gaya tho...
daadi: kya?
Rd: vo kya heina..janamsthmi is nearing and babuji gave me the choice to select the dress for Idols and i was searching for a different colour in which i can see my kanha and Radha the beutiful ever..so when i saw this different colour of meroon , i was imagining my Kanha in this colour dress....
Daadi: kya?.........
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Dev started laughing like anything and he couldn't control self ..
Radhika felt so embarssed and she stood there with downcasted eyes....
Nandu: aur Daadi aap ko patha hei....usse kshan deedi ne Ramukaka ke dookan gaye aur usse kaha ki aisa vasthr chunkar lane keliye....vo har hafthe sahar jaathe heina...lekin Ramukaka ko abhi thak mila hei...esliye deedi pareshan bhi hei..esko tho kapade milne ke bath ..she need to stich it too...right?
Dadi: tho yehi bath hei..thum mujhse pehle kyum nahi kah diya beta..mei thumhe esse bhi achi rang ke kapade ladoongi..
radhika: nahi nahi dadima..aap kyum thakaleef kar rehe ho....ramukaka le ayegi....
dadi: uske koi bath nahi...i am so happy that we are blessed to give kanha's cloth this time and you can stich it beutifully and then i can see what wonder u can do with that piece of cloth......
Dadi: lekin Radhika...phie us din jab hum thumse Sathriji ki ghar poocha tho , thune humko edhar udhar kyom khumaya?
Radhika: vo tho mei...
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Nandu: vo kya heina Dadima...deedi not even got a chance to ride in a bus till now..so this was her first ride and actully we enjoyed it and for my deedi it was dream........
Dadi: eisa hie kya.....hum.....
Radhika stood with a downcasted eyes...Dadi just held Rad's " jaw with her hand and lifetd her face to look at her eyes....and said...such mein bete thu hein Krishn ka Radha...you see ur Kanha everywhere.....
then turned to Dev...Ye Dev..thu yeha kya kar rehe ho?
Dev: mein tho yuhi.....
Nandu:Vo bhiya tho humse dosthi karne aya hei...and now he is our best firnd..
dadi: kya..our best friend?
Nandu: ha ...meri aur deedi ki...humne usse hamare best friend mana hei..
Daadi: Dev..ye kya sach hei?
Dev: vo dadima...vo ..vo..
Dadi: that is not fair..as far as i know i am ur best friend and now u got special friends without telling me..
Dev: vo dadima..vo tho...
Dadi: mujhe ab kuch nahi suni hei..mei..and she started walking away with a roothi face,,,,
Radhika> dadima..Nandu bas mazak kar rehe thi ki...vo..sach mein...
Nadnu: mei kyom khooth bolum..?
dadi: ha ha..sach. nandu kyom khooth bolum...beche kabhi bhi jhooth nahi bolthe....heina Nadu and forwards her hands to Nadnu.
Nandu became happy and shook Dadi's hand and said ha ha..dadima..ab aap bhi hamari khas dosth ben gaye ho...
Dadi: became so happy she just hugged him tightly...
Seeing this Dev: dadi ..ab mei out hogayi kya...
Dadi" nahi meri dosth..ha out ho sakthe hei..agar Radhika mere dosth nahi ben jaye tho?
Dev looked at Radh
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Radhika stunned to hear all these and she said..jee miei..aapki dosth...?
Dadi: kyom nahi...why you want only be Dev's special friend...hume pasand nahi ayi...?
Radhika looked at Dev with shock who was looking at her so lovingly...and looked back at dadi and said...: aisa koi bath nahi hei..mei...tho hum tho sirf mazak kar rehe thi....
dadi: ha ha...ab vishay math badalo....kaho meri bhi dosth benegi apne pothe ke sath..... and forwarded her hands to Rdhika..
radhika looked around unbelivably and then looked into Dadi's eyes and small tear dropes filled her eyes and she couldn't hold it any further ..and just went and hugged Dadima whole heartedly....dadima hugged her back..but then felt her tear drop on her shoulder...
dadi: kya huva beta..thum kyom ro rehe ho?
Nandu: khabrayiye math Dosth...deedi aise hi hei...agar kuch acha lege tho vo rona suru kardegi..aap esse thathiye..tho ye theek hojayegi......oh no...thathna math..mere deedi tho bahuth achi hei.....
dadi: ha ha..nandu mujhe malum hei..aur mein tho yehe dekh rehe humna....thum chinta math karo...mei esse kabhi nahi thahtoongi..lekin thab tho ee kya hamesha aise ro bithegi...
Nandu: vahi tho...nahi nahi...sayad badal jayega...meine kabhi bhi deedi ki akhom mei khusi ki assu nahi dekhi na..vo tho hamesha thath sunkar , hasse huve dekha hei...
dadi: kaun thath saktha hei Rdhika ko? Jaha thak mei janthi hum, sab log esse pasand karthe hei...
Radhika: vo ...nandu bas mere mazak utha reha hei....
nandu: mein kyum mazak....
Radhika suddenly put her hands on Nandu's mouth to stop him..but then Birju came to call dadi saying DM was looking for her everywhere...
.Dadi : thhek hei dosth..bath mei milenge..she waved at nadu and walked with Birju....
Nandu: deedi..ab chalei....mujhe legtha hi ki vapas khar jane ki vakth hogaya hei....
Radhika: ha ha..theek hei nandu..hum chalthe hi..babuji thooth rehe honge...
dev: aise kaise ja sakthe hei..
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radhika: jee.....?
Dev: vo..vo...he looked at her slightly pinkish bruised wrist and looked back at her with a sorry look...and said...sorry i didn't mean to..
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Rdhika: aap phir se suru hogaye..mujhe legtha hei ab hame jana hei..
nandu: deedi appne mehandi dali hei kya?
Radhika: vo..mrinalini bhabhi ne zabardasthi dali hei.
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Nandu: dikhana mujhe..pehele bar mei aapki hathom mei mehandi dekh rehe hum....Dev bhiya dekhona kya likha hei......deedi ki Dev ka nam...
dev got shocked to hear that and looked at her hand saw " Kanha"..and his face smiled a little for the naughty thought of his......"Dev on Radhika's hand".......
Rdhika' ab tho chalei..
nandu: nahi..Dev bhaiya aap bhi dekhona..kal mere Deedi ki hath ki mehandi sabse sundar legegi..aur sabse rengeen...dekhna..
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dev: hum..tho nandu...aap ko ethna viswas hei...?
nandu: hei..
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dev: bet legeli?
Nandu: ha bet..
dev: ok..if Radhika's hands show the darkest colour then i will take you both for a car ride....but if not what you guys will do?
Radhika: ee..e..kya khel hei...mazak math karo.
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Nandu: mazak..hum bede log mazak nahi karthi..aur ab tho Dev babu aur Dadi hamari dosth tho ban chuke hei...tho hum kya denge? looked at Radhika....
Radhika: je,,,..
Dev: ok ok..nandu u decide..not ur deedi...ok
nandu: ok......i will take you to Deedi's secret hiding place...
Dev: what? secret hiding place?
Radhika: nandu.........
Nandu: secret hei..lekin sirf mei janthi hum....mei aapko dikhaddonga...manzoor.?.
Dev: manzoor....
nandu looked at Radh and said...deedi mujhe patha hei...dev babu ko hume car ride dene padegi....Mehndi theek se rekhna..nahi tho aapki secret place mujhe dikhana padegi...
Radhika fell in their trap...and she is like..ok ok..now let's go
and she was about to leave...dev held her hand softly , nandu started walking already so he didn't notice.....and said" sorry "...loking at her wrist.and asked" will meet tomorrow..... right?' looking into her eyes lovingly....Radh was abt to say something but her facial expression got changed and she took her hand back forcefully and ran after nandu without saying anything............
dev didn't understand anything...and looked at Radh walking away without even glancing back..felt hurt..but then unexpectedly he felt strong arms holding his shoulder tightly..and dev looked back surprisigly..........
part 16
OK friends...that's for today..possibly for weekend...Hope you will like this part too.....😛
Thank you so much for all your support ..
Have a great weekend....and take care..
Signing off with lot of love...
Devika....😆.
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
good update! really enjoyed it! can't wait for the next part!
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Nice update Devika ...loved it...Plz continue soon
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Beautiful job devika ..Cant wait to read the next part 😃

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Wow i really liked it!! The story is so good that i just want to read more and more. I hope that you can update soon. 😳😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
devika a very nice update again my dear,,keep it up....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Interesting update devika Liked ur response to my post on ur research paper.When is the next one.

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