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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 16
DM house continues....
Dev turned back and saw Raj standing behind him holding his shoulder...
Dev: hi Raj...!....what's up?
Raj: you tell me Dev. Who was that you were talking to .?
Dev: kyum? kya huva?
Raj: no ..Dev..i just saw u talking to somebody.....is that was Radhika?
Then suddenly....Birju:..Dev bhiaya..aap ko kaha kaha doond rehe the hum...Sub log endazar kar rehe hei..avona..khar chale.....chaliyena bhiya....Raj bhiaya..ab baki sab batheim kal....humei tho neend bhi aa rehe hei.....he held Dev's arms and almost dragged him with towards the gate,.....
raj: ye Dev..atleast give me the answer yaar...who was it?.....
Dev:..vo..mein...
Birju: kya hei....kal bath karenge,...OK..bhiaya jaldi chalo...
dev: ha theek hei Birju..thu pahale mere hath chod ..mei aa rahei hum na..
Birju left his hand walked towards the gate...Dev felt relief and said 'thanks Birju'
birju: for what? why u r saying thanks to me?
dev: kuch nahi....thum nahi samjhoongi...
BirjU; Ye Dev bhiya ko kya hogaya hei?...ok ok..see Dadima is waiting for u...
dadi: kaha thi Dev thu...khar chalna nahi hei kya?
Dev: sorry Dadima..
Vaisali: theek hei theek hei...ab tho chalo...
They took permission from Deksh's family and left.....
PB house:...
Everybody setteled in their room...Dadi was thinking of Radhika...Amma's words saying she is only a 5th grader and word of calling her Buddu..........Dadi thought...Aisa kaisa ho saktha hei..vo tho ethni achi legthi hei ki ..i started feeling her as my CHOTI Bahu....aur the way both walked together..na jaane kin logom ki nazar pade honge ?......Kanha you need to clear my mind soon....i don't see anybody else here to be my choti bahu...radhika ki awaz mei koi jaddo hi hei..kithni achi gathi hei vo..aur jab mei donom ko sath dekhthi hum tho mujhe ethni achi leg rehe hei ki..kya bathavum....Kanha thu hi tho hei.....dekhthe hei ki aage aapki kya marzi hei.......and she went to bed...
Dev had a shower and changed into his white pajama set and was in front of the mirror combing his hair.....suddenly he saw an image of ht girl in the mirror...he stopped for a sec and started staring at the mirror...Oh..Radhika..now i have to wait till tomorrow to see you again...but then he remeberd the payal..and he took it out from the drawer and went to bed....he listened to the sound of it and then remebered his meeting with her in deepika's room...he grabbed her from behind and just circled her and she was trying to escape..but he held her so strong ....but then when he put her down and he could clearly imagine the frightened face of Radh in the mirror with the payal stuck in between her teeth......he couldn't take his eyes off her at that time....she was looking so beutiful in that yellow dress....and the scent of jasmine was pearcing into his nose and then down to his throat......her images flashed into his memory..her talks with cow and how she talked on the phone andthen how she came out after dressing up...so simple yet sooo beutiful.......and then the bruice that he made on her wrist unknowingly....he thought i feel like she is mine....so only i grabbed her that strong so that she stick with me..........i hate this Raj.. seeing him only she left without even looking back for once...but she was about to say some thing ..what was that?...Oh Raj..i hate you i hate you....i should be very careful tomorrow......then he thought of Nandu's bet......Radhika..kya thumhari hath pe mehandi ki reng khil jayegi....jo bhi ho..mei khush hum..kyom ki...bet tho meine nirnay kiya na...ab tho thum mehndi saaf bhi kar nahi pavogi aur mujhse chup bhi nahi kar pavoge....he looked at the clock and it was almost 3 AM...and he thought aur kithna samay legegi subah hone keliye...Kanha jaldi hi subah hone deejiyena...and he fell asleep in Radhika's thought.....
Next day at Sasthriji's House...
Radhika did all morning routines and was cleaning the cow shed and then eeding the cows ...Amma called her...
Amma: Radhika...
Radhika: approached amma with a emotionless face...jee..
Amma: You are not coming for the marriage OK..stay at home..If somebody ask i will tell them that you are sick ,you are taking rest...samjhi..
Radhika: theek hei amma and went inside to help Devki...
Amma; vishaka betiya ...thumhari dress thayyar hei kya...dikhade mujhe....thumko tho sabse achi legna chahiye...aur Dev babu aur uski Dadi thumhe dekhke aschrya hona chahiye..Vishaka betiya..dikhana mujhe kaunasa dress pehan rehe hei thu...
The phone ring at sathri house and Sasthriji answered..hello...
Phone: ha sathriji mei Daksh...kaise ho aap?
sasthriji: Daksh Babu aap es vakth..sab kuch theek heina....
Daksh: sathriji mujhe aapki madad chahiye...
sathriji: meri mada..boliyena..Mei kya kar sakthi hum aap keliye...
Daksh: DM got hurt again on her ankle.....she is not taking any med or refusing to go to Dr. can you please sent Radhika...she is telling if Radhika do the massage then she will be OK..and you know we need her all around...hum sab busy hei..aur Radhika agayi tho DM ko bhi achi legegi...kya app radhika ko.....
sathriji: is that so...don't worry i will sent her right now...
daksh: nahi nahi...i know that u won't say NO ..so i sent the car already...they will be there any minute...can you please ask her to come quickly....
sathrijI..sure sure..no problem..radhe radhe ..
daksh: radhe radhe and hang up the phone,...
Sathriji: radhika Betiya..jaldi ajjavo?
Radhika: kya huva babuji..sab thhek hei?
Sathriji: beta jaldi thiyyar hojavo..daksh babu sent the car for you..u need to satrt quickly..
radhika: kyom Babuji...?
Sathriji: DM again got hurt on her ankles and she can not move around, so painful for her and you know today is the marriage day and they all are busy and she likes to attend the marriage without pain...so get ready quick..
radhika: ha Babuji...mei abhi thaiyyar hoke ajavungi...
Few minuts passed and amma saw the car leaving from the house , passing gate...
amma: kaun aya tha lala?
sathriji: vo aya tha nahi mom...lene keliye aya tha?
Amma: kya?
s: vo heina..Daksh babu ki vaha se phone aya tha..DM hot hurt again and she wants Radh to do the massage , so they sent the car and Radhika left.....
amma: lekin meine tho...
s: ha ha..hum bad mei jayenge amma....theek hei..aap bhi thiyyariyam suru keejiyena...aur Devkiji se bhi thiyyar hone keliye kahna...mein thanik Mandir jakar aatha hum..... and he left..
Amma stood there as if she needs to say something else with her open mouth , but the space was empty.......
Daksh House;.....
Radhika walked into DM's room and found her sitting on bed with her hands strocking legs......
Radhika: DM kya huva?Dekh kar chal nahi sakthi kya? Aaj tho aapki pothi ki saadi hei..aur padi hei yeha.. Dikhavo pair...
DM: Radhika beta thu agayi kya...?
Daksh: ha ha...let her do the massage..radhika do something ..otherwise it won't be nice,....
Deepika: ha ha Radhika...Dm ko meri saadi par ana hei..aur agar vo nahi aa sakthi tho mujhe bura legega..aur mei arjun se kahoongi ki saadi es room mei karne keliye...
radhika started oiling her ankle and massaging slowely...
DM: deepika beta..ab radhika ayi heina..mei theek hojayegi...just give us one hour we will be out there helping you with everything and i will dance for you at the Mandap...theek hei...chal chal aur hamei akela chod de..
Daksh: ha ha...aap jaldi theek hojayiye..bas..aur kuch nahi chahiye...and they all left..
DM: Radhika beta...zara dheere karna...
Ra: bahuth dard o rehe hei..aap Dr ke pass kyom nahi jaathi..
DM: Dr..aur mei..mere tho Dr..thum ho... na..ab tho sab kuch theek hojayega..
Radhika continued with massaging...DM started thinking...Radhika beta..i don't have any pain..hei..thoda sa..but i know ur amma will plan something not to sent you today for the marriage, that is why i need to pretend ,just for you , because i adore you that much..i want everybody to see you today and admire you...i really wish Purohith family consider you and only you as their CB, nobosy else..That is the best faily..they all are good..and Dev is so dear to me and i know him well..and there is noone else in the world who can take care of you as well; as him..i want to see you both together and that will be my gift to you and my pry to Kanha..and for that if i need to pretend little bit or lot i don't care.........just to see you happy in future..and the rest of ur life...that is ur destination and i will help you to reach there.......DM was just looking at Radhika and her concerned face for her pain and the caring massage that she was doing......
Radhika: ab kaise leg rehe hei...DM
DM: now i feel better ....bas karo ab...aur vo Box leke ajavo...
radhika: mei kuch samay aur massage karrongi....
DM: nahi nahi beta..meine kahana ...mei theek hum..thum vo box dona....
Radhika: washed and wiped her hands and went to take the box....she brought it near DM
DM: open it..Radhika Opened and
DM: now take it out...
Radhika..Took a peakcock coloures sarara out ..
DM: this is for you and u r going to dress up in my room..and i need to see you first...theek hei..
Radhika: ye sab karne ki kya bath hei dadima..mei bas aise hi theek hum..
DM: mujhse bahane math banavo...ab nahi...after two hours you need to change into this dress..OK..before that you need to help me get dressed...after you get ready you can go and help Deepika too...got it.
Radhika: dadima..mei..
DM: maine jo kaha thum ne suna na...ab aur koi bath nahi...acha ...i am going to take rest now..you can go and help deepika or DW..don't disturb me another one hor and be back and help me to get ready....theek hei...
Radhika: was unable to say anything..so with hesitation she left the room..
DM: darvaza band karke jana..
radhika did and walked away..
DM had a teasing smile on her face...and thought this is the only way i can get you ready for today....maaf karna Kanha...mein tho ye sab aapki bhakth keliye hi kar rehe hum na...vaise for this act don't give me real pain by evening , i need to attend my grand daughter's wedding....ok.....
She relaxed as it was a vary good massage...
daksh: Radhika beta..ab maaji kaise ho?
Radhika: better and vo aram kar rehe hei..
Daksh: thanks beta..
Radhika: aap thanks kyum bol rehe ho..ye tho mere phars tha..
daksh:u don't know without her presence how things can go well...Ok
beta..sathriji aa rehe heina..
radhika: ha ha...they will come soon too..
Dekah: ha..ok ok...mei zara vaha jakar dekhthi hum and he went away....
Radhika went back to help DM to get ready and got surprised to see her got ready by herself...
R: you feel alright now..
DM: ha ha better..but not completely.
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Ra: started helping her adjust with saree and hair and with a final touch up DM was looking gr8.
Ra: aaj tho dulhan badal jayegi...
DM: thumhe aise leg rehe heina...mujhe bhi..
R: see see ..i need to tell this to Deepika..
DM: ab mere bath chodo..aur thu jaldi thiyar hojavo...i will wait for you...
R: kya mujhe change karna zarrori hei ?
DM: ha zarrori hei..
I am not going withput you..and you are going to be with me holding my hands today..no other work or no other business unless otherwise i tell you to do..i need you by my side..if i get pain you needd to help me..ok..no more arguments, go get ready...
Radh took the dress and went to change.....
Dadi: Vaisali , i talked to Daksh..he is saying DM is feeling better now, Radhika did the massage..I hope everything is OK with her now.
Vaisali: Us din bhi Radhika ne massage kiya aur vi thhek hogaya na..tho mujhe legtha hei she will be alright...
Birju was driving the car and Dev was totally out of world thinking of meeting Radh...and whether she will be anxious to meet him or not? how dark will be the colour on her hand...He was wearing a cram coloured emproyed kurtha with red stole around neck and was looking handsome......
Mrinalini noted small chirp of smile on Dev's lips and said..Dadima..what happened to Dev, i don't think he is in this world....look at him..
They all looked, dev even didn't here Mrinu's comments....They all started staring at him..
Mrinu: Devar ji..aap sapne se bahar ajayiye and waved her hands in front of him..that didn't alter his state..she slowely shook his shoulder..
Dev suddenly: hath dikhayiyena....
MrniU: kya..? hath ? kyom...?
devarji....
Dev: ha ha..came back to reality and everybody burst out into laugh and strted teasing him...he felt so shy and looked at Dadi...Dadi: ha ha...bas....Dev thumhe ye kya hogaya ho?
Dev: bas dadi vo mei,.........
Vaisali: ab vaha jakar aise kuch nahi karna.....be in this world OK....chodke aye honge koi gorimom ko america mei,...
Mrinu: i don't tink this is american ye tho hindusthani jaodo leg rehe hei.......
Dadi just looked at Dev and Dev was trying to hide his emotions in front of them...
They reached Daksh house and went inside ...
DadI; mei DM ko zara dekhkar athi hum..
Purohith: hum sab jayenge..pehle usse milkar aur bath karange....
Dadi: ha ha...vo theek rehe ga..and Daksh giuded them to DM's room..
Room door was closed , so they knocked the door...DaksH: i think she may be still sleeping..let's see..and he tried to open the door slowely...they all got in...
Surprised to see DM got ready completely and sitting in bed...when she saw them suddenly started rubbing her leg slowely..
Dadi: ab kaise leg rehe ho..
DM: theek leg reha hei..ab tho chal saktha hei...
Daksh: you got ready already..
DM: kyom..aaj mere pothi ki vivah hei aur mei ready na ho javum..
daksh: vo bath nahi hei...vo..
DM: radhika heina..she got me ready..
Dekah: theek hei..mei tho Radhika ke barei mei .....they all started talking
Dev: Radhika yeha hei..par kaha hei? Deepika ke room mei...his heart beating faster by hearing her name...but then he was becoming more impatient...
Purohith: ok..so you take rest ..let us move on
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dadi: ha ha you all go , i will stay with her..
Mrinu: let me go and see deepika
Dev: let me also go with bhabhi...may be Radh will be her room...Bhabhi..mei bhi ayi..
Mrinu: kyum ..thum kyum aa rehe ho?
Dev: vo vo..deepika ko milne..
Mrinu: Devarji..vo tho thaiyyar ho rehe honge..thu edhar ruk, agar vo thiyyar hogayi tho bulalungi...theek hei...
Dev: lekin..mei
DM: rukna beta..edhar aaja...mere pass... i need to talk to you something....later we all be busy..and then after marriage you people won't come that ofeten too..
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Dadi: no no..v will be here for another 2 weeks..Math ka kam chal rehe heina..Dev is going to be the next Rajpurohith right..? So Purohith wants him to see and learn everything beofre we leave here...so will be here for another 2 weeks...Mrinalini and Vivek may go early but we will be here..
DM: that is a good news...acha Dev beta edhar aajavona..
Mrinu: mei ja rehe hum..bad mei milungi...they all left , it was only Dev, Dadi and DM..
DM: started talking to him about his life in amarica and started teasing asking about girls...then all of a sudden they heard a knock at the door..
They looked at the door...and there was standing Radhika in a peacock sarara with bead work , and simple make up and ...simpe but beutiful matching jewelleries.....she had small bindi on her forehead and a teeka.....
She was looking devinly beutiful.......
That moment froze for three of them....
Radhika: DM..aap ko kuch chahiye abhi...nahi tho mei Deepika ko madad karne javum.....
DM: vo..kya kya..ha haina kuch karne ko hei...aur thu.dadi ko nahi dekhi...
Radhika: hu..and looked at Dadi with a sorry face...
and she walked towrds her and took the blessings...dadi was speechless , she was judt staring at her ...
DM: ashirwad tho dena mere betiya ko....vo tho ethni buri tho nahi leg rehe heina..
Dadi: hu..hu..ha...mere ashirwad sada thumahare pass honge beta and she just gave her a soft hug...and said you look so beutiful.
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radhika: vo tho mei......but then suddenly stopped by biting her lower lip....
DM: hamesha aise hi hei mere radhika....why didn't complete the sentence...
Radhika: maaf kar deejiyena...
DM: ha ha....
Dadi: mmafi kyum ..ab tho hum dosth heina....
DM: dosth ..vo kabse?
Dadi: kal se..sirf mera hi nahi...mere pothe ki bhi.
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Radhika : was smiling cutely at Dadi's comment , but then when she heard potha...she looked slowely at Dev who was sitting near to DM...
Actully DM was looking ta Dev's reaction all this time to check his mind and she felt so happy , felt like dancing right then..
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Dev: Dev didn't even blinked once, he was jsut looking at the beuty who was walking, talking , smiling and just forgot the world around him..
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Radhika: looked at him and gave a small smile.
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Dadi: couldn't believe her eyes the way Dev looking at radh..she looked at DM and met her satisfied face too...
DM: radhika beta..mei theek hum..you can go and help Deepika.
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Radhika: took the blessing and walked away....and she disapprerd from the site...
Dadi: ye Dev...thu aise kyum baithi hei..Vo radhika chale gayi.
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Dev: hu..came back to reality..kys daima..still looking at the door.
DM: Dev beta Radhika chali gayi hei...thu kaha kho gayi ho?
Dev: vo mei....he couldn't believe that he didn't even speack to her anything and she left without saying anything to him..Ye Dev kya hoarahe hei thumhe......chal jakar doondna usse....
Dev: dadima ..mei abhi ayi...and he just ran from the room..
DM: ye Dev rukna..but beofre she could finish, he disappered.
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Dadi: i think your dream is coming true...
DM: jaise Kanha ki echa,...
dadi: lekin thu ek bath kaho...why she studied only till 5th.
DM: vo thu abhi bhi es soch mei kya..vo heina..Radhika's was the most intelligent girl in the class and all were praising her at school, all the teachers loved her...but then Amma couldn't tolerate antmore praise on radhika over Vish, so she stopped her from going to school..but she learned from Vishakha's books, did her home work and everything..ha kahane mei vo sirf 5th grader ho, lekin she is intelligent..
dadi felt some relief but not completely...but she was feeling better for Radh and she didn't feel anything bad for Dev's reatction....
Dev was running behind Radhika to catch her but she went inside Deepika's room....he was about to go in but Mrinalini caught him...
Mrinu: ye Dev thu ethni jeldi kaha jja rehe ho? Deepika is getting ready only...Don't make me feel ashamed...wait for sometime she will be done soon and will come out, then you see her..ok..you are rushing as if thumhare saadi ho rehe hei..aur thum dulhan ko dekhne keliye tharass rehe ho?
Wait ok..U don't have any othr things to do..go help Raj..
Dev: bhabhi mei bas.....
Mrniu: ok ok..you go and tell Vivek that i need to talk to him in 5 minuts and tell him to call me in my cell.
Dev: mei kyum..you only call him and tell why should go..
Mrinu: that's because i tried to reach him, but he is not taking the phone..so go...
Dev: with much hesitation went to look for Vivek....
Deepika dressed up like a dulhan and Radhika put the Jasmine flowers in her hair...friends were teasing her..Mrinalini also joined them..
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Radhika: bhabhi..you also put some Jasmine flowers, it will look good..
Mrinu: no no readhika...i never tried..
Radhika: mei theek se lega doongi and she put the flwers , and it really looked cute....
Radhika , are you not doing it..
radhika: mei..ha..I love Jasmine flowers.. and she took a nice long string and arranged at the neck line on her hair and it looked as if if she put a flower clip and her long starght heir was looking prettier with those flowers..
Mrinu: Radhika how you are managing ur long hair..any secret?
Radhika: kyom deedi..i don't cut my heir often.....may be because of that..
Mrinu: radhika thum janthi ho.....?...
She walked near to Radhika and said in her ear....You look so pretty , can i give u a hug.....
Radhika: felt so happy and she just hugged Mrinu with a happy face..
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Aapki mehendi achi ayi he kya?
Mrniu: deepika look at mne..it cameout so well.Vivek, dadi and mom sab behuth khush hui ki mere design dekhkar...
Deepika: look at mine...i think Arjun likes me very much..
And they all apreciating the colour..then Mrinu...Radhika Thumhari hath dikhavona..dekhthe hei mere design achi ayi ki nahi?
Radhika: opened her hands and it was soo dark and so beutiful...Deepika said.." thumhari DEV thumse behuth pyar karthe hei...radhika..
Mrinu: DEV!!!!!!!!!!!...
Deepika" ha bhabhi..uski Kanha..Radhika mehandi uski naam kiya tha na...ab adekhiye her color is better than all of us..
Mrniu: ha ha deepika thum theek kah rehe ho...and they all started laughing loud...
Then Radhika thought of Nandu's Bet and she thought, i need to keep away from Nandu and Dev today , then i will be ok tomorrow..and i need to be vary careful and be with DM all the time...she went into planning...
Dev met Vivek and told him to call Mrinu and tried to walk back to Deep's room ..but then Daksh called him arrange something, and he got busy with that..but his eyes were wandering everywhere for glance of his dreamgirl....his Radhika...ONLY HIS........
Time passed by..all were getting ready and satthriji bhi agayi...amma was looking around for Dadi and Dev to show mori pothi....
she saw Dadi amd Dm talking with guest..amma reached near them and asked...radhe radhe..
They gretted her back...
Amma..Vishakha betiya blessing lelona..she did..
Amma: behuth sundar leg rehe heina mori pothi....
DM: ha ha...bilkul apasara leg rehe ho......i think she lookes beutiful tha Deepika today....
amma: became so happy she thought let me look for dev ...Ha.ha..mei abi ayi and walked with Vish..
dadi: thune aisa kyum kaha..
DM: tharif karne mei kya galathi hei..i think she felt so happy..i don't mind to feel her happy..
dadi: but ..why did you tell her that she looks beutiful tha Deep..
DM: chodona..we need to keep them happy to be happy...Radhika kaha kei? i need her now..let me check o her..
Radhika was satnding next to Deepika and ws schitchatting...then DM called out for Radhika ..beta edhar ajavo..
Radhika: mei abhi ayi and went to DM
Dev just saw Radh standing near Deepika from a distance and was actuuly approaching them, but then DM called her out...he stood there for a second....
Siddenly...dev beta...dekho kaun ayahei...Vish was standing near with a shy smile ....wearing sarara , ready to tear off any minute...he just looked and said Radhe Radhe...
Amma: vishaka..kabse thumhe thooth rehe hei..
Dev: mujhe kyum?
Vish: bas...bathem karne keliye...bethavona..mie kaise leg rehe hum?
Dev: jee?..
Amma: saram aa rehe hei thumhe.....tho mei chaltha hum...thum donom bath karo..mei zara DM ko molkar aathi hum...and amma left..
Dev: was about to leave too but then Vish..Devji..kahiyene kaise leg rehe hum mein..
But then Mrniu..Dev thune vivek se mujhe phone karne keliye kaha na?
Dev: he felt relief..ha bhahi..he didn't call you...let go look for him and he ran away from there..
Mrniu didn't even noyive Vish standing there and went back to deepika...
Vish felt bad but then she saw Raj and his gang and went towrds them.......
Amma came back to Dma nd saw beutiful Radhika standing next to Dadi and DM with beutiful smile...she started fuming with angry...
DM saw amma and suddenly...vo Radhika Beta..mujhe kai bithna hei...Radhika lead her to near by chair..Dadi also went and sat with them...Dm saw amma approaching..she showed her face iin pain..
Amma: kya huva?
DM: i should thank you for sending Radhika..all this time she was doing the massage/...now my pain is coming back...radhika be with me,...we may need to go back to room soon if the pain started coming back like this ok...
Amma felt relief thinking she is going to take away Radhika....
Devki came and called amma saying some relatives were looking for her , so she went with her giving Radhika a bad look..
DM felt relieved..but then she saw Dev standing at distance looking Radh...
DEv was just looking at this beuty..her long hair..the flower on it..and then he was just admiring her from top to bottom as if his eyes are not satisfied seeing her beuty....he was standing at a corner so nobody noticed him except DM..
DM: Dev beta edhar ajavo...
Dadi looked at and saw him standing distance away..so she called out him too...This time Dev heard it and walked towrds them..
Dadi: thu vaha kya kar reha hai?
Dev: glanced at Radhika for once and then siad..Bas u hi..dadima..
DM: ok then sit here and tell me about the american girls...we stopped there ne..
Dadi: kya DM...you are teasing him again...then i may need to tease ur Rdhika too...
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DM: you can tease her , who said no?
Rad: felt starnge and she sat there as if not listening to them.....
DM: ok Dev..tell me about here now...did u meet any girl whom u think is beutiful?
Dev: just chuckled at that question and glanced at Radhika again and looked at Dadi...
Dadi:I don't think he met anybody...but only found special firnd...that's all.
DM: special friend?
Dadi: ha ha..Nandu...he is his special friend
DM: nandu..i was asking about girls....and u r talking about kids..
Dadi: i think he got his sister also as his special friend..
DM: nandy don't have any sis...then thought for min..and Is it Radhika?
and looked at Radh..she smiled back as if not let them so deep...
Dadi: ha ha..radhika...now we four are frineds..
DM: you are saying they are friends..but i am ot seeing them even talking to each other...why friends won't talk to each other.?
Dadi: that i don't know...but they are telling me they are friends.
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Dev: vo aise kuch nahi hei...Dm..We talk too..but when you all are sitting with us, how can we have a friendly talk..we are young you now...he took adavandage of the situation...
DM: radhika..kya thume hum bootha legtha hei...
Rad: nahi tho..vo tho Devbabu ne mazak kar rehe hei...
Dev: mei mazak kyum karum...Dadi..u r with me right?
dadi: do i need to side you?
Dev: dadi thum..bhi na..
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DM: ok ok..so what you want now..you want us to go or you want to take her with you....
Rad: jee...mei kahi nahi ja rehe hum..aapke pass baithhongi...
Dadi: where you want to take her Dev? I am also ur special friend..u need to take me too....
Dev: Dadima...samjho......ki..mei bas mazak kar rehe thi ..thhek hei..forget it..
Then suddenly...Dadi: Radhika...you put mehandi design on Mrinu's hand right? it looks so beutiful and the color came out so well too...you didn't put..shoiw us ur ..Mrinu put for u right?
Radhika was so hesistent to show her hand ....looked at Dev ...then DM and Dev
dev ok ok..show me,....let me see who won......he was looking at her hand impatiently, but she was trying to hide it further....
DM: show Radhika..why u r waiting....
Dadi: dikhana..
Radhika looked at Dev whose eyes were also requesting her to show her hand......
suddenly Birju came and told...Dev Bhiya thum yeha baithe ho....vivek bhiya thhonh rehe he? ajjavo?
Dev: just a min Birju.
and looked at Radh's hands which was still hiding...
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Dadi: thu jaana...dev..Vivek may be needing something urgently....go with Birju...
Dev know he cannot stay any further so he stood and walked with Birju ..he stopped for second and turned and looked back and saw DM and Dadi looking at her hand and smiling and talking something....he felt bad and looked up to see smiling radh looking at her hand..then suddenly she looked up and met Dev's eyes and found him looking at her...he saw her and gave an expression that...kab thak cupaker rekhongi mujhse....dekhthe hei....he sighed and walked with Birju......
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Ok Friends..hope you will like this part too......
Thanks for all the gr8 support..
will catch you soon..
Have a wonderful day.....
Signing off with love
Take care
Devika😃
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Interesting update devika Liked ur response to my post on ur research paper.When is the next one.

Next paper due for this thursday....not even started...but better than Research papers..so planning to work on it...now......😆😆😆
I hope you will like the updated part.......
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great update! really enjoyed it! loved how Dadi Ma cares for Radhika! and how Dev keeps staring at Radhika. Can't wait for the next update!
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hey devika loved it and thenway dev was staring at radhika too gd, and the last expression he was giving to radhika was 2 gd loved hope u update soon and see a d naughty dev teasing rradhika lol😆
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Another great update!! 👏 I don't know how you do it, but i'm not complaining 😃 i really like how DM takes care of radhika by lying to amma and all 😆 Hope there will be lots of radev moments in the next chapter.😳
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Thanks for the fast and lovely update DEVIKA8......eagerly waiting for next part....
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Part 17
Viviek:...Dev thu kaha the? camera lelo aur kuch photos khechlo...theek hei...i take few videos...
Dev: Good idea bhayya....i love to take pictures...
Vivek: Ok..ha aur mei mrinu's bath kiya hei...she wants to take few pictures with Deepika..so go and take that first, she wants to take few before funtions starts and deeepika get busy...ok.... otherwise i will tell her that it was ur problem....
DEv: no problem bhayya...i am going there only...
Dev approached Mrinu and said: Bhabhi camera ready, photographer ready...lekin location kuch alag hona chahiye...
Mrinu: ye thum kya kah rahe hei Devar?
Dev: ha...ye background acha nahi legtha..aap deepika ko lekar mere sath few minuts ayiye, i will take the best picture in your whole life...
Mrinu: ok ok...let me grab Deepika...wait for a sec...and she went to deepika and came back quickly.......Dev jaldi karna...she is busy...
Dev: ok ok..and he guided them to a quitter place where the background was so beutiful with flowers and small stary lights.....
He clicked few pictures ..then somebody came for deepika and took her away...
Mrinu: Dev..show me the pictures...
Dev: showed all the pictures and she was so happy...thank you devarji...can i ask you a secret...?
Dev: kya?
Mrinu looked around and slowly into his ears: who is looking beutiful..?
Dev: kya?
mrinu: ha ..tell me..Is it Deepika or me?
Dev: bhabhi aap na..
M: tell me ...i am serious..
Dev: he looked back at the pictures and said...sach mei...you are looking beutiful...
She became so happy and said: i know .i know..just checking with you...i think even my dress better than hers...
Dev: bhabhi...do you have to go that limit?
Mrinu: theek nahi heina...but i know that's the truth...keep this as a secret ok...and she was about to leave..
Dev: tho esliye ...you wanted to take these pictures.....hum..ab samjhi..
M: don't tell anybody..ok....
Dev: bhabhi..ab mei chalum ..aur photo lene hei kya...?
M: thought for a sec and then...oh ha...lekin..chod de..
Dev: kya betha tho de..
M: actully i want to take picture with Radhika..but i guess she is busy with DM..so i will take it later...i will call you ..ok..
Dev: ok Bhabhi...and he watched her going.
DM , Dadi and amma sitting at corner and were talking ..radhika was massaging DM's leg slowly....
DM: Radhika you are not able to enjoy the funtion because of me right?
Raadhika: i am happy that i got a chance to help you and i am sure that when funtions startes you will be very fine....you are going to dance in few hours....
Eventhough amma didn't like the comment of Radhika..she was happy that Radhika is stuck with DM and not roaming around..but she didn't like the part that she is wearing that nice dress..
Amma: DM..why you made her to wear such good dress, she will spoil it and see she don't know know how to manage it either..
Radhika looked down and was concentrating on massaging..
Dadi: aap aisa kyum kah rehe ho? it is a funtion and all the girls are dressed up..then why don't she..but then Mrinu came to get Dadi..so she went away with her...
Amma: mei tho..
DM interupted and said.: vo esliye kyom ki..saadi hei aur mei dulhan ki daadi humna..so many will come to me and who knows who is taking pictures..so i should keep up my dignity right...just for that...If she sit with me in that old churidar, deepika ke sasural vale humse poochengena....
esliye Deepika ke purane dress hei..but looks beutiful right....
Amma didn't like it but then as dadi left from the scene..she said...let me go and check whether they need anything...you caqn't do anything na...so i will go and help them..and she left....
Rad: DM...aap jhooth kyom bol rehe hei?
DM: jhooth?
RAd: ha ..i know this is a new dress..and you are say..........
DM didn't let her complete her sentence: kyom ki..mei thujhe es dress mei dekhna chahthi hum..I know ur amma, she will make you to take everything off..that is why i am telling you to be with me..and you can stop massaging now..i don't have any pain..i had pain earlier..but not now...if you see ur amma, start doing it..ok...come with me let me go and see my deepika..because of ur amma i am getting tied up...
rad: DM..these all jsut for me...saying this her eyes started watering...
DM: not for u..it's for me..Ok ok...no tears..only happiness for today..ok ok..
Rad: a beutiful small smile played on her lips with tear filled eyes.....
But then they felt a flash on their face and both of them got shocked and look at that side..
dev: sorry sorry DM..i took a picture without your permission...Is that OK?
DM: it is OK dear...come here..if you want to take more picture, you can take that too...
Dev: thanks ..i know you won't disgree with me....
DM: but i have doubt...whose picture did you take ..?
Dev: why?
DM: did you take mine or her...I am pretty old...and she is sitting next to me and looks beutiful ..so did you take picture of mine or hers?
Dev got embarassed and said: DM ..aap bhi na....i took both of your picture....you want to see...
DM: i don't believe you...
Dev: ok then..here you see and he showed the picture of both.
DM looked at that picture and said...it's not good...Radhika also in this..take one mine alone...
Dev: ok no problem..and he made her to sit in chair comfortably and took a nice picture..
DM: ok now me and Radhika...
Radhika hearing this: mei..nahi DM..you will be nice without me..
DM: no ..i want Dev to take a picture of me with you....come here...
Radhika looked at Dev..but saw him more into camera and workinng on it/ adjusting something ....so she relaxed and went and stood near DM>
DM: we are ready Dev.
Dev looked at them..ha ha..ek minute and he looked thru the lence and looked at the beuty standing looking nervously at the camera.......
DM: Ab kya huva..ethna der kyom ho rehe hei...
dev: ha ..vo ..i think Radhika needs to sit down too..otherwise it won't come nice..or you can stand..anything will do..
DM: ok..i will stand with her..but you need to take both of us Ok...
Dev: ha ha..aap aise kyum kah rehe hei..and again he tried to focus and clicked....
DM: thanks beta...ab ek kam karo..radhika ke akela picture kheechlo?
Radhika: kya...? no no ..i don't want to take any picture...
DM: Dev you take a picture and give a copy by tomorrow..can you do that...i need one...
Dev: kal? kyom..
DM: ab ledki javan hogayi na..ledka thoothna hei....
DEv: So you want a picture so that you can search for a dulha..
Rd: kya DM...mazak math karo..and she showed a unhappy face..
DM: sorry baba...mazak nahi ok..now give him a beutiful smile..i really need one .becuse you may leave this Vrindavan tomorrow..kaun jaane thumahare DUlha kaha ho..when he come and call you ,you need to go right...so then if i get pain, i will look at ur picture and call you thru that....you will here and come to me...
hearing this radh felt so sad and tears started rolling down....
DM: ye nahi nahi...ro nahi beta....mei tho mazak kar rehe thi na..
Rad: ab aur mazak nahi...i am not going to marry anyone if i need to leave Vrindavan.....i am fine all alone..
DM: no...no...we are not the planners..it is all in Gods hands..who knows what is His plan....so now realax and let Dev take smily picture of yours...ok..and she wiped off her tears...radh smiled slightly...
DM: Dev she is ready....and then she saw DW waving out ,calling her...and coming towards them.....
Dev was trying to focus on Radh..and radh was looking at the camera..
He took his eyes off and told Radh;; thodasa hasiyena...please..
Radh tried to smile..but it didn't complete...he tried to focus back..then DW..DM avona..funtion suru ho rehe hei...
DM: ha ha...Dev jeldi kheechlo..
Dev was ready tot ake one but then Radh turned to DW...he clicked..only the side profile showed up ....
Dev: Radhika u need to look at the camera..
Radhika turned back...but then she said..i think we need to move..they are waiting for DM..
DM; ha h a chale..dev beta..we will try later OK...don't forget i need one...
Radhika went along with DM....Dev stood there for a sec and followed them slowly..
Funtion started ..Radhika was standing near the front row..DM called her to sit with her...but she managed to stand at the corner and started watching the funtion...
Dev was also enjoying the funtion and he took few snaps in between....
dadi: Dev take our pictures too..ok...
dev: ha dadi..and he clicked Dm and dadi together......and looked for Vaisali and and all who were busy at the stage...
He slowly moved the direction to the opposit side...he saw Radh standing and enjoying.....he focused her thru the camera.....and found the beuty just near to him..he watched her so near...he forgot where he is standing , forgot to click the picture...then suddenly somebody from the group walked by giving a slight push and said sorry...Dev managed to stand on his foot..but then a boyish smile played on his lips..thinking what he wa doing.....
He focused his camera again and this time he started clicking it...focused her eyes only and then her lips and then her whole face and then a full picture of heres..he clicked right when Radh smile and then he smiled to himeself....but then somebody from behind came in front and stood in front of Radh and blocked his view...he felt bad..but then he tried to move back and forth to look at her but then vaisali called him and he went to meet her..
DM noticed Dev's frustration and she saw all his raction and was so happy in her mind..she felt like she is going to dance right then.....
Everything went on fine...suddenly somebody grabbed Dev's hands..Dev looked down and found Nandu....
Dev: hi friend..
Nandu: hi...how r u?
Dev: fine..why u came late?
Nandu: no i was here...was looking for you and deedi..deedi is busy with DM , so didn't go to her...and you are busy too.
Dev: no nadu , i am not busy..
nandu: really ..then come with me..lets play..
dev: play..? what?
Nandu: so u r busy?
Dev: no no..ok lets go ...and he went along with Nandu to a side..
Nandu: bhayya..kaun jeetha..?
Dev: jeetha ..kaun?
Nandu: aap bhool jaye? humne shakth lega tha na kal.. did you see deedi's hands? is it came out Dark?
Dev: ha ha..i don't know..she didn't show me..In fact i didn't see her either..she is busy..
Nandu: oh oh....that is not fair..let me look for her ok..
Dev: lekin nandu, if u call, do you think she will come..
Nandu: ha ha..sure..otherwise how do i know who win? You don't go anywhere else ok..i will get deedi.....
Dev was so happy to hear this and he waited with a happy smile...and he got his camera ready.....and he saw Nandu coming with Rad...he clicked right away without the flash this time.....
Nandu: dev bhayya..kaha ho aap? he looked around..
Rad: nandu ye..kya hei..thune mujhko kya kah kar lekar aya?
nandu: ha ha malum hei/... but let me see who win..
Rad: what?
then suddenly Dev appered and said..: ha ha..if you are part of bet , you need to be fair with it..otherwise it is not godd.
Rd: aap log bhi na..
nandu: ha ha..we two are ur special frinds..so u need to listen to us..Raad gave a look at Nandu
dev: esmei na dikhane ki kya bath hei...just show ur hands and it is done....
Nandu: ha ..bhayya theek kah rehe hei...
Dev: nandu i think ur you didn't win, that is why she is showing her hands..so u need to show me deedi's secret place...ok that is also tomorrow..
Rad: ha..no nandu...
nandu: please show deedi..i want to go for the ride...because i know ur secret place already...so i need to go for the ride...bhayya please....
dev: ok...let's change this way...i will take you to the secret place in my car...how is that? ha ..you want to see now...let's go..
rad: ...no no...i will show...don't take him now Nandu....please...
Nandu: ok..then show ur hands.....
Rad with much hesitation opened her hands in front of Dev and Nadu...eventhough it was very small flower design with Kanha 's name..but it was looking darker and beutiful on her whilte soft palm.....dev slowly held her hands by supporting it with his hand and looked at it...Radh felt his hands beneath hers...her hands trembled for a sec with the soft touch, but she managed to keep it streight......he touched the design with his other finger and admired it completely...looked at Radh's face..but she was looking at the design completely....he admired her beuty so close.....
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nandu: who win bhayya?
dev: came back to reality and looking at Raadh's face he said . beutiful.....and .you win....
radhika pulled her hands back and started to run away....but then Dev stopped her; suddely Nandu: deedi..ab aap kaha ja rehe ho..hame tho ride pe jana heina..
rad: ab..no Nandu..i am going to Dm , you 2 go ok...
Dev: nandu not today..i will take you day after tomorrow..i have some work tomorrow..but i will take you later...is that ok?
Nandu: ok..heina Deedi?
Rad: you go nandu.. i am busy..
dev: that is not fair..i told i will take both of you for the ride..
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Nandu: that is not fair deedi...see you are making my friend feel upset..u need to come..bhayya don't worry , i will bring her..ok we will meet near the ghat...is that OK..
Dev: ha Nadu...and thank you so much.
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Rad: no no nandu..i am not coming...ok..let me go now...DM may be looking for me..and she ran away...Dev just looked at her running away..and her hair was waving in the air ..and smiled to himeself...
nandu: bhayya..don't worry i will get deedi..she doesn't like to see me sad...so i trick her...we three will go for the ride...lekin bhayya..ek bath hei..
dev: kya?
nadu: aap e bath..kissi aur ko math bethana.....agar amma ko malum hogaya na, she won't let deedi come with me...so we will keep it a s a secret ok....
Dev: theek hei...lekin nandu mujhe legtha hei..hume ab vaps vaha jana hei...i don't want anybody to look for us..ok
nandu: ha ha ..let's go and they went to join the rest of the funtion...dev saw Radh near Dm and daadi...
people were dancing in front..it seemed like Dadi pushing radh too for dance...but she was refusing......amma was enjoying Vish's dance among the group and galnced at Dev and showed him to look at her...Dev just smiled and moved away from there and sat near Vivek...
Bidaii ki vakth hogayi.....Deepika came down....she had tears ...daksh and DW, Dm , Daadi everybody gave her all the blessings and she went away with Arjun to Delhi....before leaving Susheel remineded everybody to come for Arjun's sis Anjali's wedding funtion which was fixed one year back with an American settled family's son....
daksh told him that they will be there a week earlier for everything....
DW was crying and Vaisali gave all the support and they all had after talk about the funtion...Then Sathriji...
Daksh babu bhagavan ki kripa se sab kuch acha hogaya..ab humei agaya deejiye?
Daksh: bahuth sukriya sasthriji....and he lead them to the door...but then he said...Radhika beta...agar thum nahi athe tho..DM..
DM: nahi...you have to thank amma..she is the one who sent her and she knows how imporatnt for me to have to attend this marriage..
Amma felt happy to hear DM praising her, that also in front of Daadi and PB family... and she said: no no...just let me know when ever u need help....hum heina..next time i will sent Vishaka too..
DM: that is so nice of you...Vish was trying to flurt with Dev..but he was trying to escape with Birju's help...
He watched Radh leaing with her family...sighed and wished atleast she glance back once.....Vish was looking back and walking holding Amma's hands....smiling widely...
dev ...ek bar palak kar dekhlo Radhika...sirf ek bar....they were almost near the door,,,,,,Radhika turned back with a thanking face at DM as she was taking her eyes off , she met Dev's gaze...just gave small smile and walked away with sathriji.....
dev's herat missed a beat when she turned back ...and at her smile.....and now he is ready to leave...so that he can check on all those pictures...he don't want anybody else to see it before he could upload it into his laptop.......
Insdie the car...
Vivek: Dev you got all the photos ..right? give me i can take care of it..
dev: no bhayya....mei sabhaloongi...i need to take few prints of DM's photo..she want me to show it tomorrow itself..so i need to work on it..so i wll take care of it...
Vivek: ok..that is nice,,,,
Mrinu: ha ha..but don't play with mine ok..and take the prints of that too..
birju: but then bhayya..you may need to go to town for prints ..right?
DEv: ha ha..i will go no problem...
dadi: ha ha..theek hei.....DM will be very happy if you can get that for her...
Dev: jee dadima..and he went onto his dreamland...with smile....
They reached home....Dev freshed up quickly and took his laptop and started uploading the pictures.....he waited with having the payal in his hands.....he felt her hands o in his thought....that he didn't realize that the photos started showing up on the screen...
Suddenly.....Bhayya ye sab..radhika ji ki photos hei....Dm said to take this print out...
Dev came back to reality...hei..he..kya Birju?
Birju: you said u r taking print out for DM and i am seeing only Radh's picture..
dev looked at the screen and saw radh's eyes ..then next one her ..he knows it is going to be her smiling lips.....he clicked onto the esc button quickly ..and said..ha ha...
Dev: ha ha..Birju...vo i took her picture too..and she wanted Radh picture ..i don't know for what...but she asked me to..
BirjU; looked at him suspeciously...
dev realized his suspecian..so clarified...: i think vo ledka thooth reha hei Radhika keliye?
birju: vo kyum?..Sathriji heina..
Dev: ha ha ..hei..lekin i think she likes Radhika very much..na..esliye....
Birju: ok bhayya, do you need anything, i actully came to ask you that...i am tired , going to bed...if u need any help tomorrow...let me know..
Dev: no no Birju i am fine...u can go...i will be fine tomorrow too...so don't worry...goodnight..
Birju walked away saying good night..
Dev looked at the laptop screen and open the picture window..he saw Mrinu's photo.....then Dm with Raadh but he could sense a tear drop ready to fall from her eyes anytime..he extended his fingers to wipe away those tears from her eyes...
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.....and as it went on he saw her eyes only..he paused it and looked into her eyes....and staretd dreaming,...and thought i am going to take you away Radhika..and i know i am here just for you and you are mine and only mine.............he slowely fell asleep, dreaming of radhika............
The stars were shining up in the sky and moon was bright.....Radhika stood at the window watching the beuty of nature, the darkness....had a small smile on her face....went to her bed ..prayed to Kanha...she settled down in her bed brought her arms to rest her face..but then the Mehandi caught her attention.....she looked at it and thought of Nandu's camments....along with Dev's ...she thought never ever in her life anybody came so close to her.....he had the freedom to touch my hands...and i didn't feel like taking it back...i let him touch with hs fingers..she strocked thru the design.....and thought...WHY? kanha....vo kaun hei...jo kal thak ajnabee thi...ab mere ethne kareeb..aur mei unse door bhi nahi bhag sakthi...i feel comfortable to be with him.......i never had that feeling....reksha karna prabhu.......she prayed and went to sleep.......For a better beutiful morning.....
Ok friends..I hope you will like it.....
Signing off now with lots of love and gratutude...
Thanks you so much for the great support ..thanks for reading.....
Take care
devika.....
Edited by DEVIKA8 - 15 years ago
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Lovely wedding update 😃Cute meeting of Radev
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awwwwww too gd devika to gd just loved it cant wait 4 the next part update soon tc

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wonderful update! really enjoyed! can't wait for the next part!

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