a FAN FICTION..kabhi ye na puchna

kasturika ghosh

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krishna listened to his father quietly. then he scrqatched his head and said--bauji aapko ja samajhna hain samajh lijiye bas humko jo thk laga humne kiya aur ha shaadi wali bat lekar itna pareshan mat hoiye..hum itni jaldi shaadi waadi nhi karenge par haan agar karenge to apni pasand ki laundiya ke saath hi karenge..chahe apko pasand ho ya na ho. he left. sajjan singh shouted behind him--- tevar to dekho maharaja ka? ka be? khud ko kiya samajhta hain? kan kholkar sunle is ghar mein hamari marzi chalti hain sirf hamari,samjhe ki nayi? just then ammaji entered. she was doing her usual pujas wen her son's voice disturbed her.. seeing her at once her son stopped. ammaji--kyu? kya hua? itna shor kyu macha rakhe ho? jante nhi iswaqat hum puja karte hain? she moved closer. sajjan singh looked tensed. evn he was quite afraid of her. she said-- aur kya keh rahe the/ tum is ghar ke malik ho? sirf tumhri marzi chalti hain yaha? to mai tumko yaad dila du ki tumhri amma abhi zinda hain..

sajjan singh---amma woh to main sirf krishna ko sunane ke liye.....

ammji---suna maine krishna ne kya kiya? to? ka galat kar diya? apana har hi to pehnaye hain na?? shaadi to nhi ki?

sajjan singh--par amma aap in chote logo ko nahi jante. agar is baat ko kuch aur samajh lio to? agar jhute sapne dekhna shuru kar diya ho to? apni beti ko humre ladke ke saath bihane ki? to ka karenge hum?

ammji--khuli aakhon se dekhe hue sapne kabhi sach nhi hote samjhe? aur us do take ki ladki ko ye sapna dekhne ka bhi haq nhi hain....hum usko is ghar ki bahu to kya,dasi bhi banane ki layak nahi samajhte...sajjan singh looked a little relieved.

meanwhile,at home pratigya's family was worried too. krishna's actiuvities had become a big reason to worry... shyam ji and ksitij wer discussing among themselves to get pratigya married as soon as possible.

on the other hand pratigya ws sitting quitely in her room,tears flowing down her cheeks..she had nvr wanted to do sumthng that wud worry her parents bt t she cud nt help it..she felt she had many reasons to hate krishna,bt she cudnt hate him,each time she wanted to hate him,an unknown power seemed to make her much more attracted towards him. she was heplless,she was helpless becoz the more she tried the more she was falling for him...

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on 1 hand her family was discussing about this matter and dadi1 was like, 'kya zamana aa gaya hai, maine to pehle hi kaha tha Shyamu ki ladkio ko itni choot mat do, ab dekh liya... sab kaisi-2 baatein kar rahe hain'
normally, Prats hated it when Dadi1 used to say such things, like girls should be married off early, they shouldn't go out of the house much...' and her younger sis would also react to such things... but today Prats was not listening to what Dadi was blabbering, she couldn't stop her thoughts from going to the scene where Krishna was putting his chain in her neck 😍
Suddenly, Prats came back to reality as some1 knocked on the door...

who was knocking, 'Kaash' ? 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: hardy_boy
you both are riting so good 😊

Thank you! but Kaash is the one writing the main things... 😊

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on 1 hand her family was discussing about this matter and dadi1 was like, 'kya zamana aa gaya hai, maine to pehle hi kaha tha Shyamu ki ladkio ko itni choot mat do, ab dekh liya... sab kaisi-2 baatein kar rahe hain'
normally, Prats hated it when Dadi1 used to say such things, like girls should be married off early, they shouldn't go out of the house much...' and her younger sis would also react to such things... but today Prats was not listening to what Dadi was blabbering, she couldn't stop her thoughts from going to the scene where Krishna was putting his chain in her neck 😍
Suddenly, Prats came back to reality as some1 knocked on the door...

shyam ji and others were quite surprised as it was nearly 10. and at this time noone used to visit a gentleman's house. shyamji--mai dekhta hun ruko. he opened the door.. a guy was standing on the doorway,his back turned. the sound of the door made him turn around and he smiled. it was romeo,krishna's frnd. he smiled a wide smile. romeo--namastey saxena ji. shaym ji---kaun ho aap,aur yahan kya karne aye ho itni raat ko?

romeo--kachu nahi..hum to bas ye chitti dene aye the,krishna bhaiya ka chitti,pratigya ji ke liye.. he handed him the letter, folded his hands in another namastey and then left.

shyam ji opened the letter,disgusted. kshitij and heer came behind him to read it. it was written:

"agar humse koi galati hui ho to humko maf kar dijie ga.."

shyamji came inside with the letter,furious. he went to pratigya's room and pulled her by her hand and dragged her to the common room. evryone was totally taken aback at his behavior.. antara ji tried to cool him down bt in vain.. pratigya started to weep. shyam ji(in a furious tone)--kya ho raha hai ye sab? sach sach batao pratigya...kya tum us ladke ko jante ho? kya sambandh hai tumhari uske saath? kahin tum..........????"

pratigya shouted out--papa!!!! please.! heer came in between them---bauji isme pratigya ki koi galati nhi. ye ladke hote hi aise hai. please papa ise kuch mat kahie...." pratigya released her hand with a jerk and ran to her room and locked it. her father had nvr talked to her like that.. she felt hurt,terribly hurt.. she did nt eat that day and noone cud cnvince her to hve her dinner and in the next morning she went to work without evn having her breakfast.. apart frm being a dancer she used to work in a sophisticated parlour in the posh area of her town.

it was almost evening wen she finished her work and came out to find that is was raining. she had no umbrella as it was quite sunny before with nt a speck of cloud. she waited for a rickshaw,fully drenched by then bt nt evn a single rickshaw was there becoz of the downpour. pratigya realised that she wont get one before the rains stopped. she felt cold and embraced herself to keep her teeth frm chattering. this was the situation wen suddenly a motorbike came and halted beside her. she looked at it,it looked familiar. with a speck of lighting and a roaring thunder she recognized it at once. it was krishna's motorbike...

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Krishna was staring at her with his soft eyes through his helmet and could she the poor girl shivering...
now Prats had enough common sense to understand that Krishna wanted to give her a lift and she knew that she won't get any rickshaw in such a weather, and if she went home walking, she would definitely catch cold, but then how could she go with him?! She could already hear her parents reacting to her taking lift from him...

but on the other hand, she thought that it was nothing wrong to go with him, after all he had done nothing wrong with her till now... he could have held her back when she had stopped him from beating that boy, or could have said something wrong on the stage... but no, instead he had sent a sorry letter... well of course, he didn't know that he shouldn't have sent it that way. Infact, he didn't need to say sorry to her!

What will Krishna say now? What should Prats do?

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Posted: 15 years ago

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sorry girls that i've been M.I.A in this topic, i need to catch up and i swear i will do that tonite and if i come up with anything i will add, but good job both of you

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Krishna was staring at her with his soft eyes through his helmet and could she the poor girl shivering...
now Prats had enough common sense to understand that Krishna wanted to give her a lift and she knew that she won't get any rickshaw in such a weather, and if she went home walking, she would definitely catch cold, but then how could she go with him?! She could already hear her parents reacting to her taking lift from him...

but on the other hand, she thought that it was nothing wrong to go with him, after all he had done nothing wrong with her till now... he could have held her back when she had stopped him from beating that boy, or could have said something wrong on the stage... but no, instead he had sent a sorry letter... well of course, he didn't know that he shouldn't have sent it that way. Infact, he didn't need to say sorry to her!

krishna--abhi rickshaw nhi milegi..chaliye main aapko ghar chod deta hun. pratigya--pagal ho? itni baarish mein bike chala rahe ho? amin nhi baithungi. waise mujhe bike kuch khaas pasand bhi nhi hain..aur barish mein ye skid bhi kar sakta hain. krishna smiled strangely. he got up and stood in frnt of the shivering grl. krishna--jabtak main aapke saath hun aapko kuch nhi hoga. kabtak khadi rahenge? chaliye. his voice was so full of concern and so confident that pratigya felt powerless to argue.. she just managed to say-- please dhire chalana. she got up at his back and fumbled with her hands.. he didnt say anythng. she was cnfused whether to hold on to him or nt bt her cnfusion soon fled away wen the bike started with a jerk and she felt herself collapsed at his back and she clutched him tightly to prevent herself frm losing her balance. with one hand she clutched his shoulder and she put her other hand around his waist. she kept her eyes closed as she was terribly afraid of speed and heights frm her childhood. the journey was of few minutes only. wen the bike halted she opened her eyes to see that he had stopped a little away frm her house. she got down. krishna looked at her and said-- maine socha ki aapke gharwale khamkha pareshan ho jayenge isiliye yahan rok diya. kya aap.....?

pratigya(quickly)--nhi nhi thk hain..yahan se chali jaungi main. she walked towqards her home wen suddenly she felt that she had nt evn thanked him. she turned back to thank him only to fing the fading figure of her man,slowly disappearing frm her sight. she left a small lump near her throat as if she expected him to wait for her to turn back..

pratigya thot--usne mere thanks ke liye bhi wait nhi kiya. par kyu?

she knocked on the door of her house. her mom opened the door and was really worried to see her cndition. she made her come inside quickly and dried her hair with a towel ..antara ji--kya halat bana diya hai apni tumne haa? aur khana kyu nhi khaya tumne? kyu kar rahe ho apne saath aisa? pratigya tum to itni na samajh nhi thi pehle?

pratigya--mummy please mujhe akela chod dijiye. mai bht thak gayi hun.

she went to the bathroom to get fresh. wen she came out she noticed her father sitting in her room,waiting for her. seeing her he came forward. shyam ji---pratigya bete,kya abhitak naraz ho mujhse?

pratigya kept her eyes low becoz she did nt want to shed her tears in frnt of her father. he lifted her face up. shyamji--beta tum apne papa se apni aansu kabhi nhi chupa sakti. main tumhre papa hun. aur jab ek bap apne beti ko dant te hain to usme uski bhalai hoti hain beta.. phir bhi agar tumhe meri kal ki baat se buri lagi ho to please beta mujhe maaf kar do. par mujhse istarah naraz mat raho. please beta.. her father's voice weakened due to choking tears. pratigya--papa aap kyu ro rahe ho.. papa please mat roiye.. thk hai papa mai apse naraz nhi hun papa please. haan mujhe bura to laga tha par mai aapko kabhi hurt nhi karna chahti please papa.. she hugged her father and he hugged her back, tightly. he did love her daughter vry much.. this was the emotional scene going on wen suddenly pratigya's mom's voice was heard --kyu? bap beti ke narazgi dur ho gayi hain to kya aab beti kuch khana pasand karengi?

pratigya smiled--haan mummy mujhe bht zor se bhuk lagi hain. mujhse ye sab natak zyaada der tak nhi sehan hoti hain.

shyamji hit her head,slowly. antara ji--suna apne? ye sab serials aur filmein dekhkar sikh rahi hain. ek din bhukha nhi reh sakti, shaadi ke baad karwachaut kaise karogi?

pratigya--hum thodi na karenge? hamara pati hamare liye karwachaut ka brat rakhenge. her mom and dad laughed out loudly..

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Originally posted by: mima190587
sorry girls that i've been M.I.A in this topic, i need to catch up and i swear i will do that tonite and if i come up with anything i will add, but good job both of you

sure sure 😊 n thx for the compliment...

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Now, the saxena family was not very rich in terms of wealth but they considered themselves richer coz of the love they had for each other.
Food had been served and all were eating together, laughing n joking, sharing the day's experience with each other...
n Prats was wondering what would happen if she would tell them 'her' experience!

Instead of getting scared at that thought, she actually stopped herself from laughing... she could see the horrified faces of her family, dadi n papa shouting as to how she could take lift from a boy, mom sobbing, small sis thinking of ways to defend her act!!! It would be better not to tell any1 what had happened, EVER.

That night, for the 2nd time in these 2 days, she found herself thinking about Krishna. Yes, she was scared of him, a bit, but more than that she was wondering, how could such a boy have these curtsies? Prats fell asleep thinking about him, wondering what lay in the future and why fate had made her meet Krishna!

On the other side of the city, sleep was miles away from Krishna...

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Originally posted by: dkmystery
Now, the saxena family was not very rich in terms of wealth but they considered themselves richer coz of the love they had for each other.
Food had been served and all were eating together, laughing n joking, sharing the day's experience with each other...
n Prats was wondering what would happen if she would tell them 'her' experience!

Instead of getting scared at that thought, she actually stopped herself from laughing... she could see the horrified faces of her family, dadi n papa shouting as to how she could take lift from a boy, mom sobbing, small sis thinking of ways to defend her act!!! It would be better not to tell any1 what had happened, EVER.

That night, for the 2nd time in these 2 days, she found herself thinking about Krishna. Yes, she was scared of him, a bit, but more than that she was wondering, how could such a boy have these curtsies? Prats fell asleep thinking about him, wondering what lay in the future and why fate had made her meet Krishna!

On the other side of the city, sleep was miles away from Krishna...

Krishna also kept imaging the bike ride over and over again. he still saw her beautiful dripping wet face and her mesmerising eyes, as Pratigya held onto the necklace Krishna put on her and tried to sleep, Krishna held onto his jacket Pratigya touched and tried to also sleep, both unaware of how the other is feeling

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