AR FF 'TALAASH' new Part 20 on Page 123 (26/02/2015) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
NOTE
sorry guys i m soo sorry
jia mere jaan , ronna band kar de naa
listen i m writting the part ahead , per kya karuu , i need to attend a function tommorow and then even omn sunday i have a family get together , and then monday gonna be Holi
so guys , i don't think i will be able to updatew till monday soo sorry
i promise i will update a part after holi
pakka promise , here now a days i m kind of really busy
hope you guys can wait till that
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Simi!!!
thanx alot 4 replying sweetheart!!!
n its ok i understand Holi is cummin up ...
sooo u must be really busy...its ok dear...i'll wait..
jahan itna intezaar kia...wahan thoda aur sahi...
but...u better update on Monday....warna!!!!😈
ok ok...jus kiddin....
well den....HAPPY HOLI ....in advance...😆😆😆
n dun stress ur self ...tc
lots n lots of love
JIA!!!❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
jiaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
mere maa
main naa tujhe baad mein araam se reply karungee , as for now sweety main sirf aapko correct karungee
sorry monday ko nahi update , monday ke baad hooga , you see , monday ko to holi hai , and i m going on a picnic to a water park , soo main to late evening se pehle nahi aa paaonge that day , soo not on monday , ok
will try for tuesday
love you lots
and will reply you later and haa HAPPY HOLI to you too in advance
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey simi dear!!!
i thaught u were updating dis FF 2 days ago...
where is da update yar..????😔
fine i guess i'll jus hav 2 wait again....😔
plz cont. if possible...
tc lots of love
JIA!!!!❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkss

hey simi dear!!!

i thaught u were updating dis FF 2 days ago...
where is da update yar..????😔
fine i guess i'll jus hav 2 wait again....😔
plz cont. if possible...
tc lots of love
JIA!!!!❤️

ops soo sorry
patta hai main apne doosre ff's update karne lagg gaye , that's why this got delayed ,
well right now i m working on this ff only ,
i m writting that only , lets se it will take another few hours in completing , but as you knew its allready late night here , soo i will update it tommorow for sure pakka
and don't worry next part i will add on a bit relief and a sort of happy note ok
love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arluver15

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OMG poor ridhima
no one bare the pain of what she is going thru right now
i know armaan is only angree at her and not thiking stright but still i hate him right now...
i hope ridhima gets krish back...
coz naina or maya wont be doing anything nice to krish
they wud make him cry more and also armaan coz krish cant leve without ridhima....
just hope that rahul and mushkan atul and anjali be able to knok some sense in him
cont soon
thanks for the pm
lods of luve
nruti
this was the sades part every simi

hehehe 😆😆😆😆
nruti roo rahhe hai, kya yaar main sabko kitna rulaate hu hai naa 😆
achaa achaa mere maa ronna band kar ab ,ab ye kaam krish ka hai 😆
will update shortly
love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

P.S :PLEASEE UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOOON YAAR

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Not like previous week ohk😆 !!!


Well very emotional update yaar.Cant see Riddima like that.Y cant he understand Riddhima's situation.He atleast have his family .. wife n mom...but Riddhima !!how can she even live a min without her son!!


Wish he will understand her b4 the loss!!


Update next part sooon Sweetheart



Takecare ...

hey himaa
thanks a lot for your reply hmm , and haa as per all that armaan understanding her and all , hopefully main bhi chahate hu aisaa h hoo , per naina mallik zindabaad aisaa honne dengee kya hehe
achaa one correction , armaan has his family but only mom , he don't have a wife , he allready divorced her long back
will update shortly
love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravie101

great story hun... =D
feel soooo sorry for poor ridzi :'(
why did armaan have to listen to his stooopid mom :@
ahh well hope everything gets better with time.

do continue our story loved reading it.
and add me to your PM list pleaaassseee (:

will be waiting for your next update.

Ravviie.x ;D

hey thanks a lot for your reply hmm
and as per armaan listenning to his mom , well i think every child does that hai naa 😉 , soo armaan is no exception 😆
well i m glad you liked my story ,
will update shortly
love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkss

Hey Simi.....
thank you soooooo much 4 updating MAM......you r welcome sweety
da update was soooooooooo gud.......i mean it was full of emotions yar...
seriously ....i got teary while reading it ...... ohh hoo , really , you want me to send you a tissue box in that case hmm
i can understand wat Armaan went thru ...but how can he take away such a small baby away frm his mother....😭 sweety now i think i should send you a box 😆
dat was quite painful u know......plzzzzzzzzzzzzz simi.....dun make Ridz cry soooo much..
poor soul's been thru alot.......u better get AR 2gether in da next update or else......😡 or else what , haa , kya kar lengee hmm , jaa nahi laate ar ko together , Angry
jus kiddin....😆 soo was i 😆😉
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooon dis time........em eagerly waiting 4 da next update....
luv dis story soooooo much......plz plz plz cont. sooon... aree pakaa yaar donig it shortly just for you hmm
n thanx alot 4 da PM sweetheart....😊😊
TC...lots n lots of luv
JIA!!!!❤️

love you lots sweety
take care
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 10
HEY FRIENDS
AS I HAVE GOT MANY TREATNING MESSEGES TO KILL MEE , AND ADI YOUR NAME IS ON TOP AS PER THE PEOPLE , AND OTHER NAMES LIST INCLUDE , JIA , NRUTI , RADHIKA , AIMME DI AND MANY MORE , ..........KYA HAI NAA , YE SAB MUJHE MAARNA CHAHATE HAI , FOR MAKING THEM CRY BADLY IN LAST PART ,
LAST PART MEIN TO SIRF DHAMKEE DEE THE , I M SURE THEY ALL WILL SURELY KILL ME AFTER READING THIS PART ,SO BEING ON SAFER SIDE
now i have registerred a note with police you knew , i said them that my life is in danger 😆😆😆😉😉
OK NOW WITHOUT WASTING MORE TIME , HERE YOU HAVE HALF OF NEXT PART
FROM WHERE WE LEFT PART 9

Armaan didn't listened to her single pleading and went away from there

Riddhima cried loud , she followed the car for a long time , but after that she fall on the ground and cried loud , but nothing worked ,armaan was already gone , gone away , taking her life along with him ,

And here it was time for sunset and the dawn took over the sky and her life

While on one side , armaan was moving towards his house by his car , and having sleeping krish with him [I knew maine bechaare krish ko kuch jyada hi sulla diyya hai hehe just consider him sleeping all that time ok]

On the other hand , riddhima was sitting in the middle of the road and cried her heart out , she was really in a bad state with crying , when she felt a hand on her shoulder ,

She looked towards it ,it was bii , she was feeling really sad for poor riddhima right now

And riddhima was completely broken , she hugged bii tightly and cried loud

"bii meraa beta ,…… meraa krish , …… vo…. Vo… usse .., ..main… kya.. karru bii ,main …..krish ke binna… nahi reh sakte" , she said between her hiccups

"sab theek hooga beta , tum aise haar nahi maan sakte beta , sab theek hoo jaayenga" , bii tried to calm riddhima a bit , she also knew that it was useless, rightnow they were completely helpless and can't do anything

After sometime of crying riddhima finally got up ,

"bii mujhe jaana hooga , main mere bete ko is tarah nahi khoo sakte , mujhe jaana hooga , mere krish ko mere jaroorat hooge bii , usse mere jaroorat hooge , mujhe jaana hogga" , she said all this really fast , more like talking to herself in hurry ,and with that she rushed towards armaan house as well , and bii was left there itself

Ok coming to armaan part ,

Here armaan parked his car outside his house there ,he was still in an angry mood , but with that he was far too happy , to have his son near him to even thing about anything right now

And the first thing he saw there entering his house was , his mother naina ,waiting impatiently for him , and yes how to forget , His EX-WIFE Maya was also there sitting with naina ,

Armaan was far to overwhelmed with his emotions of having his child with him ,that he didn't not cared for all that , he completely ignored that , as he was in noo mood , to have any other argument with his mom over why maya is here and all

As soon as armaan entered , Naina mallik , came towards him , really excited ,[yaa for a change happy to] , she at once saw his grandson , with armaan and got really happy , [you can guess that , she was more happy with the fact that now there properties will not get transferred to trust ,as they finally got there legal heir]

"Oh armaan I m soo happy son , finally your wish came true beta , I m soo happy for you" , she said while hugging armaan , and then she again got back "what about that riddhima" , she said with a hatred in her voice

"don't worry mom , I brought my son from her , and she can't do anything for that, as legally he is mine and only mine son" said armaan normally

"good beta , very nice ,she deserved that, she had kept you away from your son from last one and a half year , now she will also understand how it feels to be away from your dear ones" , said naina , again lighting the anger against riddhima in armaan again , as she can see that the anger was eventually subsided and a bit of guilt was there in armaan now

Yes now as with passing time , armaan anger had subsided and thinking about the whole think he did , with riddhima few minutes ago , he was feeling a bit guilty , but all thanks to naina mallik again , she lighten that anger in him ,

[I knew you all r not happy with armaan this behavior but guys at present armaan mental stage is soo much preoccupied that he cant think properly that what he was doing , and it was damm easy to influence him , he was like an easy target right now , to be brought under influence ,and here naina mallik was using her for wrong she very well knew that armaan was mentally and emotionally torn right now ,and she was fully taking advantage of him current stage for his own use]

Now finally , krish wake up , yes the prince wake up from his deep beauty sleep , from his beautiful dream world to that real world where he was taken far away from his angel , whom he badly needed right now around him

Krish was still in armaan's arms , when he opened his tiny eyes , to found himself in a complete different place , and surrounding ,

He looked here and there , just to have a glimpse of some familiar face , and mostly his mother ,

But he found nothing , moreover he found himself in arms of that big bunny , whom he is scared off , [remember guys krish is still scared of armaan , and moreover he get really scared in between unknown peoples , all thanks to riddhima as she had always kept him in her protection and right now , he was forcibly snatched out of his protective shell]

Armaan found him stirring a bit in his arms ,and saw that he was getting up , and here armaan's heartbeat became fast , with the fact that his son eyes were there on him , it was a completely new feeling for him ,

He was soo damm excited, he now just wanted to listen his voice , talk with him , laugh with him , love him , cherish him , , armaan was soo much lost in his beautiful dreams for his future ahead with his son

When all his dream broke up , with loud crying , which was becoming more louder with each passing second ,

Yes here krish after looking aroung and not finding his mother or bii , finally started crying , crying loud and then louder

Armaan tired to make him quite , but in result he started crying more

"mom , mom ye isse kya hua , mom ye itana roo rahha hai" , said armaan to naina having hard time in handling krish

"I think he need something , don't worry beta I think you don't knew how to handle him properly , that's it , he will be fine , give him to me , I will take him inside and try to calm him ok" , said naina , and then took krish from armaan arms, but he was just too difficult to be handled , as he was trying his best to get out of there hold at any cost and soo was constantly moving his hands and legs in air , as a result , he even hurt himself a bit , as well as naina mallik hehe

Krish was getting more and more impatient and restless now , naina mallik brought him in the room and called for all there servants , in the room , there were few lady servants as well soo she said them all to take care of him

"mammaa , maaa , mumm paas , muma paas " ,was all krish was saying in between his hiccups

While all that servants tried there best to make him calm , but it was getting all in vein , after around half hour , krish finally stopped struglling crying , as he was too tired to doo that anymore , soo he was just having silent weeping and nothing , his condition was like getting pathetic nothing was working on him , noo food , no chocolate, no toy nothing

One side inside the room , all servants were having there hard time in handling that poor soul , while here outside we see , naina and armaan , sitting in the living room , while maya was back to guest room , as naina though that it is not right time for her to be there near armaan

Armaan had already called rahul informing that he got his child , but yes he didn't gave him the full information that his child was none other than krish , he wanted to tell him all the truth personally soo , rahul was also coming there

After calling rahul armaan went inside the room , to check over krish

Here krish was just lying over the bed , and weeping silently , he surely looked weak

Armaan felt a strong pain in his heart seeing his son like that he just wished to doo anything to get him normal

He went near the bed and kept his hand on krish head ,

While krish at once became more conscious over that tere was someone near him , he got really scared ,and tried his best to get away from him , and his hold , which hurt armaan more

"mamma paas , maama paas jaan" , said krish in a pleading voice , and tears coming out of his eyes

"main tumhaare paas hu beta" , said armaan was heavy heart , as he too was crying seeing his son like this, but he can also not let his wish been fulfilled now , he don't want to loose his child now

"naii mumma chaiyye , krish mama paa , bunny paas nahi" said krish in between his hiccups

"bunny nahi , papa , papa beta , main papa , krish ka papa , krish ab apne papa ke saath rahengaa" , said armaan calmly , and tears were there in his eyes as well

"naiii mummmaa paas muumm" , said krish and started crying again loudly ,

And armaan left that room with a heavy heart , he was dying to be with his son ,and here his son don't even want to see his face , he was scared of him ,and don't want to even come close to him, he was torn completely now ,

"and all this was because of you riddhima , main tumhee kabhi maaf nahi karunga" , said armaan to himself

On the other hand , riddhima , reached armaan house but the guard were not allowing her in

"please mujhe jaane dijiyee , mujhe armaan se milna hai , meraa beta hai yahaa" , she said pleading with the guards there

While the other one called inside , and informed that there was one lady outside want to come in and meet armaan , but again bad luck , this message was taken by naina , as at that time armaan was inside with krish

She without informing armaan went out herself

"ab kya karne aaye hoo yahaa" , she said in angry tone to riddhima , coming outside there house

"dekhiyee , mam please , main armaan , see , vo meraa beta" , said riddhima in pleding tone , but before she can say anything further , naina interrupted her in between

"tumhaara nahi , armaan ka , vo sirf armaan ka beta hai , tum to fraud hoo , you just used krish for your selfish use ,and nothing" , said naina angrily

"nahi mam , aap galat samajh rahhe hai , main main sirf krish koo , mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiyee" said riddhima

"dekho mujhe tumhaare kisse bhi baat ko sunne mein koi interest nahi hai samjhee tum , mere baat dhayaan se sunno , krish hamaare khaandaan ka waaris hai , humaare parivaar ka hissa hai , armaan ka beta hai , pehle hi tumne usse hum sab se door rakha tha , per ab nahi , vo hamaare saath yahee rahengaa , aur tum , tumhaare liyye behtar yahhe hooga kit um usse bhool jaao , aur chale jaao yahaa se , just get out of here before I call police" said naina in warning tone

"aap jo karma chahate hai kar lijiyee , main yahaa se aopne bete ko liyee binaa kahhe nahi jaaongee" said determined riddhima

"tum aise nahi maanonge , yahaaa se chale jaao , warna dhakke maarke tunhe yahaa se nikaalna padengaa" , said naina is warning when they hear a voice from back

"ye kya hoo rahha hai yahaa ,aur riddhima is time tum yahaa kya kar rahe hoo"

Both ladies looked back and the source of the voice was none other then RAHUL

Hehe , I m stopping this ff here as for now ,

This is only for you jia , I m updating this, actually this is just half , I was supposed to write more , per ab I think I already have delayed with the update , will update next part soon as well , may be by tomorrow , will surely try hmm

Till then take care and enjoy reading it till this AND HAA PLEASE JITNE LOG MUIJHE MAARNA CHAHATE HAI , CAN TELL ME I WILL ADD YOU NAME AS WELL IN MY LIST ABOVE AND SEND IT TO POLICE 😆

Lots of love

simi

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