AR FF 'TALAASH' new Part 20 on Page 123 (26/02/2015)

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Radhika

@Contradiction01

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

hey simi di...!!
so finally i'm up wid all d parts...!!!
it's so senti one....!!
in luv wid dis...!! :))
nw cumin to d recent part...!!
kya main armaan ko slap kar sakti hoon ya aako karoon...!!
well i think i shuld slap u...!! 🤢
kya kar rahe ho yaar....!! 😡😡
krish hi le liya ridzi se...!!
hatin armaan right nw like nythin....!!
selfish...huh...!!
nyways....i noe it's jus a story but it has really a deep impact one me nw...!!
do updt soon...!!

PS- sorry as i couldn't edit d previous part as i couldn't read any part then,..!! hope u don't mind...!!

luv ya
radz

Edited by kash_sajan - 15 years ago

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Hey Simi.....

thank you soooooo much 4 updating MAM......

da update was soooooooooo gud.......i mean it was full of emotions yar...

seriously ....i got teary while reading it ......

i can understand wat Armaan went thru ...but how can he take away such a small baby away frm his mother

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Hammi

@koolgurl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

thanxs for PM n dnt leave it in the n cont ur old FF plz

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

ok....
i'm ready to kill arman & u....
but at 1 point even he is right.... but then he is acting in anger...
good going
continue soon

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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

hey AWESOME FF!

i'm loving it so far.

awwww feel so sorry for ridhima😭.. n armaan was really mean

urghhh hate naina malik! all her fualt.😡

anyways please do add me to your pm list and continue soon!😊

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Hi Simi...

Waise to tum darne walon mein lagti nahi ho, but lagta hai is baar mere daraane ka thoda asar hua hai tumpe… you updated sooner... Good girl.

Pehle to meri jaan, I am not one of those who thought Armaan is wrong... I just thought that he got convinced quite sooner. Aur tumne aur koi dusra reason bhi to clear nahi kiya tha. Chalo, ab aage badhte hain...

This time you cleared the confusion. Armaan was bound to get angry with Riddhima. Whatever he heard about her (when he didn't know her), it was only negative. And of course his craving for his child made him loose all his patience and compassion. That was only a father's heart that pushed him to jump over the conclusion without knowing the other side of the story.

You explained his feelings and struggle in a very good way... it was beautiful.

In a way Armaan's anger and frustration towards the girl (Riddhima), is not allowing him to see the other side of the coin. He is not ready to think that if the she was really selfish and fraud, then she had tried to contact him blackmail for returning his child, maybe she had tried even to allure him seeing his bank-balance.

I guess the little one kind of sensed that something wrong is to happen, coz of which he glued to his mother. It's a belief that infants can also sense tensions of their closer ones, sometimes even better than elders.

I quite enjoyed reading the confrontation scene between Armaan-Riddhima. The pain, anguish, the fear of both of them was emoted in a very good way. It was quite emotional and touching to see the flooding feelings of two parents craving for their child. One who waited for see his kid for 2 years and other who lost hers finally.

Waise Simi, agar tumne next part jaldi nahi post kiya na, to dekhna, abhi tak to joote-chappal nahi pade, but I am sure, mujhe tumhaare kaan khinchne mein bhot mazza aane wala hai... So you better update next part ASAP.

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Zahra

@Xiahtic-5

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Hey Simi,

ooh sorry for the late comment but waow yaar this update really was mind blowing one amazing,

aww poor Riddhima she is gonna have a hard tym now Krrish was scared of dis poor child,

special moments between Armaan n Krrish,

arey Armaan love Riddhima where is his mind he should say u r his mother i am his father thn whtz d problem lets get married but uff Armaan's mum is villan seriously thes kinda women ruin everything,

do continue soon plz thanx for the pm.