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Great update..thanks for the PM!!!
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fabulous start..............plz also do add me in ur pm list.................
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Nice update devika😃 when is the next one
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lovely update yaar ....plz continue soon
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Part 14
DM House...Mehandi funtion...
Dadi: Radhika beti thum behuth sundar leg rehi ho.
Radhika with a smile...vo tho mein hum hi.....suddenly she bite her lowerlip realizing that she is talking to dadi..not to DM...she looked at DM with a sorry face..
DM: kyom...kya huva? thune esse bhi meri tharah mann liya he kya...you started showing her your naughtiness too.....
Rad: sorry dadima..mein tho yuhi....
Dadi: koi bath nahi beta..mujhe tho acha lega thumhari bath sunkar....esmei sorry bolne ki kya bath hai..
DM: oh ok..ab tho thum donom ek hogaye..aur hum hogaye mehman..
Dadi: Thum bhi na...still holding radh by her shoulder....
Dev was listening to all this and just smiling at them ..
DM: Dev beta thumhe koi thakleef nahi huva na ...
Dev: nahi tho...
Dadi: aise kyum pooch rehe ho...vo bhi ethni sundar ledki ko sath lane mei usse kya thakleef hoga..vo bhi tho javan hei....
dev: Dadima..aap bhi na....Just glanced at Radh to see her reaction...who was standing with shy smile on her face...
DM: acha ..Radh beta thum jakar Deepika se millo..kabse vo thumhari endazar kar rehe hei...
radh: theek hei..mei deepika ko dekhthi hum..with their permission she was about to leave...then
DM: thum kyum akele ja rehe ho..dev ko bhi sath leke jaa.
Radh: just looked surprisingly at DM with arched eyebrow with a question mark..
Dadi: chalna dev ..deepika just asked about you..i think she was looking for u too..
Dev took their permission and looked at Radh asking her to proceed..radh understood and walked with him towards Deepika.....
DM: kaise leg rahe ho mere selection?looking at dadi..
Dadi: achi leg reh hi..
DM: ha...sirf achi nahi ..bilkul achi leg rehi hi....
Radhika: deelika vaha khadi hei...and they just walked towards her..
Radh: deepika...
Deep: thank God..u r here, u really put me in tension...why u didn't come early..
Rad: vo tho mei....
DEv: so..u r thanking God now....Then why i am standing here..i am the one who brought her...
Deepik: ..so sorry Dev and went and gave him a hug by saying...thank u so much......
DEv huged her back and said..it's OK...i think i should thank u....
Deepi: Thank me?..for what?
DEv: ...kush khas tho nahi hei..yuhi lega ki..thumhe thank you bolne ki..
Deepika: Dev that's not funny....and looked at Radhika...u look beutiful in this dress...DM only selected this for u...u have to see ur dress for my marriage...that is my selection though/....
Radhika: ..deepika..i don't know how to thank u and Dm for doing all this for me and giving me so much love...
deepika: aise kyum kah rehe ho Radhika...thum tho DM ki pothi jaisa hi ho...tho esmei thank u bolne ki kya avasyaktha hei....and gave her ahug..OK Radh let's get everything ready....
raj saw Dev standing with Radh and Deepika and walked towards them..
Raj: can i join u guys too...giving a mischious look at Radhika.
Dev looked at Raj and so did Deepika..but Radh stood looking down and ready to move from there..
Raj: Ye Radhika...u r going..i just joined u guys..talk to me too...
Radhika didn't look at him , just glanced at deepika with a look for excuse...Dev noted Radh's reaction of kind of fear and strange.
Deepika: vo kya heina bhiya..hum tho Mehandi ki thaiyyariyam karne jarehe hei...u talk to Dev ok....and she walked with holding Radh's hands without waiting for any answer from Raj..
Raj:..par suno....but then Radhika and deepika already walked away....Radh just glanced at Dev while walking in front of him with a thanking face but looked down right away ,so that nobody notice her looking at him....but Dev was keeping her eyes on her walking away unknowingly...
Raj: ..tho Dev..tell me how come they are talking to you..what she was telling you or u were telling them..
Dev: no , i went to pick up Radhika..so actully Deepika was thanking me for that..
Raj: wait a minute..u went to pick up whom?
Dev: Radhika..
Raj: Radhika! ..when? why? and she came with u, in ur car ..who else was with u?
DEv: just went. DM sent me, and nobody else was with us.
raj: i don't believe this..she came with u al alone!
dev: ha..esme believe na karne ka vachah kya hei?
Raj: dev why u didn't call me?
Dev: jee?
Raj: if u had told me, i would have gone and picked her up..OMG! how long how i was waiting for such a good oppertunity..and u ruined that..OK next time tell me..ok..i will do anything for her..just need her alone and just her and me..
Dev: why u r saying so?....but then Birju interupted them saying...Dev bhaiya Purohith ji was looking for u..
Dev: Raj..mei abhi aya...and went along with Birju..
Dadi and DM were talking..then vaisali and Mrinu walked towards them..
vaisali: mom ..who was with Dev?
dadi: jee?
Mrinu: dadima..everybody is asking us whether we fixed Dev's marriage..?..that they saw a girl with him..and they look very cute together..she is very pretty and they saw them talking to u ...
dadi: kya hei beta..vo tho Radhika thi..Dev went to pick her up for Deepika..so when he came back , he just met us...that's all..
vaisali: oh..so it was Radhika..i was thinking why they are asking us this...got curious...anyway where is he now?
DM: he went along with radhika.
vaisali: jee..kya?
DM: mera mathlab hei..they went to see deepika....deepika was looking for Dev...so went to meet her..
Vaisali: oh ok....let's go..and took mrinu with her and walk away...
DM: dekhana..sab logoko jodi pasand aya hei
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dadi: mujhe bhi...lekin Dev ke mann mei kya hei..patha nahi heina.
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DM: jaldi patha chalegi..let's wait..
Amma walking towrds them hearing the jodi sabd..
amma: kya bath ho rehi hei yaha.?
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Dadi: hum tho Radhika ke bare mi keh rehi thi..she looks so beutiful in that white dress and open hair....u know..
DM just looked at dadi and tried to show her signs not to tell anything further..but then...
dadi: aur kya huva ki..vaisali abhi ayi ye poochne ki.........
DM: ha ha..amma..aap ne kuch khaya?
dadi looked at Dm why she didn't let het finish her sentence..but saw DM changed the topic..
Amma;Ha..kahloongi..lekin aap kya kah reh thi?
DM: she was telling that vishakha looks beutiful too..
dadi just looked surprisingly for change of name there..
Amma;ha ha..mere pothi hina...she is beutiful and intelligent..meine pehle bhi kaha na..she is the only one going to town college for studies...ha RAdhika tho sundar hei..lekin buddu hei..sirf pachvi class thak paddi hei vo...masterji ne usse class se nikala...thabse vo khar mein padi hei...lekin mori vishakha tho....
DM: ha ha..mujhe legtha hei ..sab thaiyarriyam hochuki hei..hamei vaha jana chahiye,,,chale ..looking at amma and dadi.
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Dadi was listening to amma and got surprised hear that radhika studied only till 5th..but then DM changed the subject and lead them to the funtion place...
Amma was not happy as she was just trying to impress dadi with her mori pothi kahani and DM didn't give her any chance....but walked with them...
Dadi saw Deepika sitting wearing a cute dress and was looking beutiful and mrinu was sitting and chit chatting with her.. and then her eyes caught Radhika who was arranging everything near for mehandi but now she tied her hair very neatly on back ,so that it won't come on her way...,..and a small smile appered on her face..but then the words of amma struck her ears..she studied only 5th and she is such a buddu...funtion started and Radh started drawing the design..mrinu and other friends of Deepika started singing and dancing around them...Raj and his friends Birju and Dev all were watching them from a short distance....
Dev's eyes were fixed on Radh..saw her tied hair..but didnot feel anything bad as he know he like her with open hair..but still she looks the most beutiful one for him....his inner voice was telling him to look away ..but his eyes were not listening to him....he admired her every bit of seconds he got..Radh was doing the design ,but in between she enjoyed watching others dancing and singing and as the lines go she smile to herslef..Dev caught her smile and smiled with her....In between she glanced at the group too..looking at DM and dadi..and all...one time she looked at Amma and met her angry face...suddenly her smile fade away and she looked back at Deepika's hands and started concentrating on her design..
Dev saw the change of facial expression and looked at the direction where she looked and saw Amma sitting with a angry gaze on Radh...his smile also faded but then he looked back at Radh...as if telling her not to worry..he is there with her....he smiled at his own thought thinking.....what is happening with me...Is Radh is the first girl that he is meeting in his whole life....No NO...i have seen girls of all kind..bUT BUT.....she is different , she is different from anybody that i met so far..her eyes are so beutiful that i cannot take my eyes off her...i love her long hair which waves with a blow of winds...and i like her voice so much ..want to hear her more...just talking to me...singing for me...Oh gosh....I think I JUST LOVE HER.......yes...I love her so much..that i don't want anybody around me.....just she and me...Kanha..help me in this struggle.....Hope she has the same feelings for me......His eyes were wandering thru all her actions..while Radh not knowing anything of his struggle was concentrating on her designs.....time just passed by...
Mrinalini: WOW! radhika ..it looks so marvelous..u need to put for me too..
radhika: thank you deedi...sorry ....bhabhi......i will do it for u too..
deepika: ha ha..but not this design OK..this is exclusively or me..u can try another one..
Mrinu: ha ha different design.....why should i have the same , i am not the dulhan...he he....he..
Radh: theek hei...Deepika..i hope u like it.
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deepika: i like it..no way...i love it darling...thank you so much...i think i should thank Dev again for brining u here..and was looking at the group around her for Dev..
Mrinu: ha ha..hum ne bhi suna ki Dev radhika ko lekar aya..aur Deepika thumhe patha hei...sab log hum se pooch rehe the ki..Dev ki saadi pakki hogayi ki nahi...Jab ee donom ne saath aya tho sab yehi socha ki She is Dev's would be.
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radhika felt strnage and she looked down at mehndi cones..
deepika: wow! Dev aur Radhika....jodi tho achi hei...then her eyes caught Dev standing and looking at them not too far away..she called him..DEv.....come here..
Dev: looked at deepika and waved his hands asking WHy?
Deepika: ajaana....
dev walked towards them with a happy mind,but didnot show up on his face...walked with a serious expression..
Dev: kya hei Deepika?
: Deepika: i called to say Thank you for brining Radhika..see ...look at this..do u like the design?
Dev: looked at radhika who was sitting near Deepika with her face down as if not listening to them...
dev: behuth achi leg rahe hei.....very beutiful..and looked at Radh....
Mrinu noticed his glance at Radh..suddenly to deepika...
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Mrinu: deepika ..now i am also in doubt ......showing his look at Radh.
Deepika: ha ha bhabhi...REB NE BENA DI JODI !!!!!!!!!!!...looking at Radhika teasingly...
dev: kya..aap log kya keh rehe hi?
Mrinu: hum tho kuch nahi kaha....kya thumne kuch suna?
dev: bhabhi..meine abhi abhi thum donom ki bathem sun rehe tha..lekin kya keh rehe tha,...mei kuch samjha nahi..
deepika: poor Dev...he herad us saying but he did not understad anything... tho esliye thum mujhse thank you kah rehe the pehle?
Dev: kya?
Mrinu: he told you thank you too.....
deepika: ha..bhabhi...now i understood why he said so..
Radhika's heart was ponding rapidly..she just wanted to run away from there...she felt her breathing stopped, to hear them teasing her along with Dev, that also he is almost sitting with them ...so near to hear them properly..
dev: aap log ye kya keh reha hei..
mrinu: kuch samjhi nahi...tho Radhika se hi pooch.
dev: Radhika se?......looked at Radhika but saw her face bent down further as if he cannot even see her eyes.
Deepika: dekho Bhabhi..radhika kaise bithe hei..Radhika.. Dev thumse kuch pooch rehe hei?
Radhika didn't even look up, she just acted as if she didn't hear anything and started picking up con for Mrinu and as if not finding the right one she about to leave to pick a diferent one..
Mrinu: ye..thu kaha ja rehe hei..radh u need to put design for me too...
radhika: jee..jee..vo ..mei..mei...deepika and Mrinu just looked at radh's face...Dev was looking at her strage expression, her eyes just glanced at Dev once and easily one could see her face gone pale ...and she felt dizzy and her whole body started shivering.......she thought she is going to fall...
Deepika: bhabhi mujhe legtha hei...hum kuch zyada hi bol diya..poor radhika..look at her..i don't want her to faint now ..i need her tomorrow too..
Mrinu: ha ha...radhika thum ethini bholi ho kya?...hum tho mazak kar rehe the....ab kuch nahi bolungi...suru karna...
dev didn't get anything but was looking at Radh and her frustration as if she is trying to hide something from him..?...or from them..?
deepika: dev...kuch nahi hei..hum tho sirf mazak kar rehe thi..
Mrinu: mazak kaun kiya..mai tho serious thi..
deepika: bhabhi..chodona..poor Radhika... look at her and now i feel bad for Dev too...may be next time if i ask him to help me..he may say no....So no more talk..
mrinu: ok ok..Radhika suru karona..
radhika: held Mrinu's hands.. with her trembling hands with cone..
mrinu: oh my God!..her hands are shivering....u r not going to spoil my design right?
Radhika: jee.....
deepika: she won't ///don't worry....
Even though amma couldn't hear anything what they are talking , still felt so bad and blood was rushing into her face with angry feeling and looked around for Vishaka...and saw her standing and talking with Raj's friends..and walked towards her ...
Amma; vishaka thu yeha kya kar rehe hei..go there and sit with deepika..
Viash: ha ..amma mei abhi ayi,,,,,and jsut winked at the guys and walked with amma.
DM saw amma walking towards them with Vish...she sudeenly called out for Dev...dev beta zara edhar ajavona....
dev listening to her call stood up ..but passed a boyish look at Radh who was drawing a design on Mrinu 's hands...he walked with a chirpy smile on his lips towards DM>
amma: deepika beta...Vish also would like to draw some design...
.Deepika: ha ha..kyom nahi..avo Vish..
vish sat with them..but then amma noticed dev already left the place....
Amma looked at Radhika and said...Radhika meet me after this ok......
Radhika just nodded her head........
part 15
Ok friends..signing off now...Hope u will like this part too....😉.
Thank you all for ur gr8 support....😃
will update soon...
Ta ta..and Take care
Devika😳
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😃 Thank you Chalhov, abhilasha, Maleena, Palak, Jyothika radev fan, Radev addict, sia , Billo, guraniti, bigfan and all the readers for the good comments and fantabulous support.........😆
Thanks from my herat...for tolerating me.......and my FF.....
Have a gr8 day....
Edited by DEVIKA8 - 15 years ago
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good update! As usual Amma is trying to make Radhika's life miserable. Can't wait for the next update!
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Originally posted by: *Maleena*

good update! As usual Amma is trying to make Radhika's life miserable. Can't wait for the next update!

Hi Maleena...ya i can't think of amma's charactor diferently😡..but don't worry Kanha is there😃...and i am not one from the CB creative team..i hate amma's charactorization..so i wil go accordingly..hi hi...atleast i will try.....😆
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Thanks for the quick and nice update .....hope rads also feel for dev as dev feels for her and plz iss amma ko zara door hi rakhna hamesha rads ke peeche hi padi rehthi hai....
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Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

Hi Maleena...ya i can't think of amma's charactor diferently😡..but don't worry Kanha is there😃...and i am not one from the CB creative team..i hate amma's charactorization..so i wil go accordingly..hi hi...atleast i will try.....😆

yaar we are not tolerating you ...but we are eagerly waiting for your nice update .... ...plz update soon as usual....

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