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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
omg DEVIKA8 u jusr made me smile again just loved radev scenes 2dai amzing yaar i hope dev tells dadi and vashali that he like radhika and i would love to see radev romance 👏⭐️ atleast in ff they are togethere loved hope u update soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Oh just read a lot of parts.......and must say every part was awesome......and i am already hooked as u know 😉 😉 Great scene where Radhika was talking to her cow and Dev stood watching here.....Loved it! 😊

👏 👏 👏 Thats for your lovely work!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
I Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Devika ur story is progressing well keep it up😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Hi. a v nice update. loved it. plzz cont soon will wait eagerly for ur next part 👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
nice part devika pleas update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part devika please update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 13
RADEV to Daksh's house
Dev was walking two steps behind rad ...watching her going to the car and admiring her beauty of long hair which was open and waving with the slow blow of wind...Radhika stopped near the rear door of the car and turned to Dev as if asking for permission to get in.
dev: vaham nahi radhika..thume front seat par baithna hoga...
Rad: jee
Dev: kya thum mujhe thumhari driver bena rehe ho kya?
rad: jee..mei samjhi nahi..
dev: ab tho thum mujhe janthe ho..aur thum tho mere dosth bhi hogaya na...tho thume mere sath front seat par baidna hoga..
Rad: mei..nahi nahi..mei yeha theek hum.
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Dev: Nop..you need to sit in front..otherwise i am not going to drive..
Rad: mei..mei..kabhi....
Dev understood her frustration...and just guided her to the front door and opened it for her to sit
Rad still stood there with confusion,,...
dev with a smily face..radhika thum mere dosth ho..heina?
rad: jee..mei..dosth..
Dev: kya..nahi hei....
Rad: jee..ha ha..
Dev: tho avona..esmei khabrane ki kya bath hei..
Rad; jee..aisa kuch nahi//par agar kissi ne dekhliya tho..mujhe dad padega..theek nahi hei
dev: kya theek nahi hei..Radhika meine thumhe lene aya hay..aur thume mere sath baithna hei..varna mei yeh aise ruk javum, aur koi poochliya tho kahddongi ki thum mere sath nahi ana chahthi ho..
Rad felt bad for that ..nahi aisa kuch nahi hei..mei baithoongi..
Dev: teasingly tho thu mere sath ana chahthi ho...right?
Rad: jee..... and her eyebrows arched in question..
Dev: kuch nahi...and made her to sit in front and closed the door and with a mischious smile ran to the other side and seated himself in driver seat..
He started the car and looked at Rad and asked " kya thum mere sath safar keliye thayyar ho...chaleim"..as if asking her permission to move..
Rad just looked and nodded her head as if agreeing with everything and slowely moved to her head sideways to look outside.
dev was observing Rad and her awkedness sitting in front and her silence..
dev: I thought you can't sit silent ..what happened , is everything OK?
rad: jee..mei theek hum..
Dev: phir bhi..you r not the same who is sitting near to me.
rad: jee?
dev: whenever i met you , you are very talkative either to kids, elders or to the animals..
rad : why u r saying so?
dev: as if remebering something...ha ha..except one time..that was because of Birju and me.
rad: jee
dev: R u still mad at us for that day?Why i am asking now is, because i never got a chance to ask you...R u still....
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Rad: no no..i already forgot all those, why u r still thinking of that incident..
dev: how can i forget that, because of us u got in trouble ..right..v never thought anything that badly will happen...but ur amma behaved differently..she should know u..right?
Rad: please ...i totally forgot it and please don't feel resposble for that ...i am fine..it didn't hurt me at all..
dev: but the people, i still can't believe when they came to know it is you, they looked at us evilly..kyom?
Rad: aap..bas chodiyena...mein aapse ya Birju jise naraaz nahi hum..mein tho vo sab kab ka phool chuka hum aur aap bhi vo sab phool jayiye...she asked in pleading voice..and he could feel the honesty her tone
Dev: sorry sorry..ok then let's talk abt something else...
Rad: jee....
dev: kyom? thume kuch bath karne ki nahi hei kya? thum tho thumhari nandini se bhi bath karthi hei..phir mujhse kyom nahi..
Rad: hearing Nandini's name a small smile played on her lips and started....Nandini tho mere achi dosth hei..aapko patha hein, vo hamare khar mei paida hua tha...aur thabse vo mere sunthi hei..aur
Dev: thum unki...
rad: jee?
dev: ..jee..nahi vo thumhari sunthi hei aur thum unki..right?
radhika felt the teasing in his tone and just looked outside as if she doesn't want to continue...
Dev: ok ok..i am sorry...ok tell me about nandu..
Rad: nandu..nadu tho....she arched her brows and said... are you trying to tease me again?
Dev: no ofcourse not radhika..i like him..he is very talkative just like you and i see you both almost all the time together..that is why..
Rad: he is my best friend..ofcourse after kanha...but he plays with me and help me with doing stuff and you know what sometimes he gives me advice too.....while talking about nandu she was completely happy and smily and her eyes were smiling too...Dev just looked at her expressions and statred smiling himself..
Rad saw the smilyness in his face and thought she is talking too much ,,so kept quite..
Dev: ab kya huva...meine tho kuch nahi kaha...
rad: jee...kuch nahi..and looked outside..
dev looked at her in between his driving and saw Rad struggling to keep her hair in order as it was flying with the moving wind thru the door...Dev enjoyed her struggle but then slowly raised up the window glass...
Rad seeing this...looked at Dev..
dev: kya .hava thume thank kar rehi hei?
Rad: looked at him..
Dev: ab theek heina..
rad: just smiled and sat comfortably...but then she setteled her hair halfly to fall from the side....dev just looked at the beuty who is sitting next to him and thought ' no wonder, Raj is behind her, and whatever he said about her'.....
Dev: tell me about ur other friends..
rad: other friends..i don't have anybody...just Nandu and ..ha ha heina..
babuji..swamiji.....ramukaka....DM....nandu ka..
dev: hold on..u don't have any other frinds..
rad: that's what i am saying ..they all r my friend.
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dev: no radhika....i mean somebody of ur age..ur college mate or class mate
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Rad: thought for a sec and said..ha haina....Deepika..
dev: that's all?
Rad: ha....aur kaun chahiye?
Dev: somebody special..
rad: special?
dev: ha..whom you share everything with, you always want to be with...something like that...
rad: nahi tho....mujhe bas mere Kanha hei...vo hamesha mere sath detha hei aur hamesha mere suntha hei...aur hamesha mere reksha karthi hei..aur..
Dev: radhika.....lekin Kanha tho sabki hei..thumari apni koi nahi hei?
Rad: aap bhi na...meine kaha na..mere apne Kanha hei..aur vo sirf.....
Dev: vo sirf thumhari nahi hei Radhika...vo hum sabki hei..
radhika felt bad at this comment and just looked at him painfully..
dev: I didn't mean to hurt you ...phir bhi mein ye jana chahthi hum ki....
Rad: mujhe aisa koi doosara friend nahi hei....mei tho bas apane aapse aur kanha se khush hum... aur jo kuch mujhe mila hei ..un sabse khush hum..aur mujhe koi aur ji zaroorath hi nahi hei...
dev: Kya thumhari special dosth ben sakhe hei kya?
Rad: jee with a qouestionable way looked at Dev..
dev: thumtho abhi abhi kaha ki ..thume koi dosth nahi hei..tho mei pooch rehi hum ki..kya thum mujhse dosthi karogi..kya mei thumhari khas dosth ben saktha hei?
radhika: you have many friends..why you want to be my friend.....
dev: bas poochliya..may be kanha want me to be your best friend..
rad: aap tho mehman hei..aur do din bath chale jayenge..phir..
dev: tho kya huva....Even if i need to go , we can be friends and i can call you everyday and i can come and meet you everyday...and you ca call me and share everything with me..
rad: ye aap kya kah rehe hei.....
dev: dekhona thumhare Kanhako kithne friends the..and he was fine with everyone..and
rad: theek hei ..theek hei..
dev: so i am going to be your special friend...theek hei..
as they were talking ..they reached Daksh house..and Dev stopped car and looked at rad..
rad: she was still looking at Dev as if in disbelief and didn't realize that they reached the house..
dev: looked at rad and their eyes met..and he could read her eyes ..of disbelief and confusion. and moments passed by.....Dev broke the silence..and said..tho andar chaleim..?
Radhika came back to reality...and realized that they reached deepika's house..but she suddenly asked...lekin..aap kyum mujhe aapki khas dosth benana chahthi ho..mein tho....
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Dev: ab kuch nahi radhika..esliye radhika kyom ki...kyom ki...thum mujhe bahuth achi legthi ho...
Radika: jee...
dev: ha..thum kanha bhakth hei ..aur mein bhi...tho kya do kanha bhakth dosth nahi ben sakthi kya?
Radhika: ha...
dev: that's it...tho chalei...DM endazar kar rahe honge..
Radhika: jee....and she tried to open the door. but then looked at dev...he reached over and opened it for her...
radhika adjusted herself to come out and tried to tie her hair which was completely dried now ,with a hair lock..
dev came out and saw this and involentarily held back her arm saying.'.Esse khule rehne deejiyena...aapki dosth ko achi legtha hei....
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radhika: jee..
dev: abhi abhi thum mere dosth ben gaye ho..tho thumhe mere ye bath mann a padega..
radhika: lekin mei...aise kaise jaavum..
dev: aise he javoge aur vo bhi mere sath
rad: jee...?
Dev: kuch nahi..c'mon..deepika will get angry with me and they started walking into the house together...
DM and Dadi was standing together and talking to Daksh...all of a sudden their eyes looked at the front door...and saw Dev and Radhika coming together...Dev was walking like a pride man and Radh with a embarassing face , looking around .........
The look of this couple together made DM' feel very happy and told Dadi..
Look yehi tho the mere sapna ...aur aaj vo poora hogaya...
dadi:..just looked at her potha and the girl walking with him....prettiest girl she ever saw, walking gracefully and the color of that churidar was reflecting on her face which gave a special glow to her face......and as they walked together most of the people around and near just looked at them..as if they are seeing the bride and the groom walking in a special way.......
Dev saw DM and dadi and walked towards them..radh just accompanied him..
As she reached near DM, radhika had a beutiful smile on her face, that added to her beauty and Dadi jsut stood there amazingly looking at her, as she reached near them..she was looking prettier as her features stood up with her dress..
radhika bow down to take the blessings of DM, but DM stopped her and said.... sath aya hei..tho sath mein aswirwad bhi milna chahiye na? looked at Dadi..who was standing speechless....
dev undestood what DM said and joined Rad to get the blessings.....DM just held Radh so tight and said..mere asirwad sada thumhare pass hei mere bachi and she held Dev too with her shivering arms.....and tears rolled up in her eyes..
radh felt strange and asked ..Kya huva...aap theek hei?
DM: controlling herself...Mein theek hum..pehle dadi ki ashirwad lo..phir bathem karange..
Rad took blessings from Dadi and she also gave her a hug lovingly...
dev just stood there smilingly.....
Part 14
OK..friends..Hope u will enjoy this part too...
Let me sign off....
Thanks for all the Gr8 support.....
Love and Take care
Devika😃
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Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Omg DEVIKA8 that was great LOL I was waiting 4 someone to update and u did this was really great hope u update next part soon and hope radhika starts to have feeling for dev and I wish if they confess to eachother soon hope u update soon take care 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic update!!👍🏼

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