One shot:When the truth is out.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ONE SHOT

When the truth is out

Note:

Sorry guys kind of long one shot so i have divided it into two parts.If u like it plzz do comment so that i will update.The next which is last part.

The truth has revealed by ayesha that avinash is behind the incident of confidential file stealing.He is the one who wants to sell hotel's confidential file and also that he is behind every bad incident happened in vardhan mansion from jai and divya's death to the recent confidential file issue .He has sent to jail.Everyone in vardhan mansion is still in the state of shock and also ashame that they didn't believe ayesha and always misunderstood her.Ayesha has taken her decision that now she is going to leave vardhan mansion and also find job for herself outside this city.All the vardhan family members did their best to change her decision but she has already made her mind.In the drawing room,Veer,Kamini and Nandini are sitting when ayesha also comes there.

Kamini:

Ayesha,Aak bar per soch lo tum mat jao.

Ayesha:

Ma'am main aap logon per aur burden nahi banna chate.Iss liye main ne subhash se kha kar shimla main aak job dhund li hai.

Veer remembers subhash and feels jeolous in his heart.

Kamini:

Ayesha tum hum logon per burden nahi ho.Main ne tumhi har dafa galat samijha.Iss ka liye i'm sorry again.

Ayesha:

Nahi ma'am plzz app bari hain.App ke iss mein koi galti nahi hai.Iss waqt halat he kucch aisay tha.

Nandini:

I'm also very sorry ayesha main ne bhi tumhi humasha galat samjha.Main ne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ka avi aisa bhi kar sakta hai.Thank you ayesha tum ne meri family ko aur mosibat se bacha liya.Plzz tum na jao.

Ayesha:

Sorry ma'am main decision le chuke hoon.Main do dino baad yaha se ja rahi hoon.Main ne nihal ko bhi samjha diya hai.Acha main zara nihal ka pas ja rahi hoon.

When she is going to nihal's room,She looks at veer.He is looking at her with pleading eyes.Her heart tells her to stop but then she remembers veer didn't trust her and also his words starts to come in her mind so she just ignores him.Since the truth has revealed everyday veer comes to her and asks for forgiveness but she always ignores him.At that night,Veer is in his room thinking about the time he had spend with ayesha and scolding himself for not trusting her at the time she needed him the most.Nihal comes to his room and looks at veer who is very sad.

Nihal:

Chachu.

Veer:

Nihal beta tum yaha??Tum ab tak soye nahi??

Nihal:

Chachu bas nend nahi aa rahe thi aur mujhe pata hai ab ko kyu nahi nend aa rahi hai.Kyuki maasi do din baad ja rahi hai iss liye na??

Veer:

Woh nihal ......

Nihal:

Meray pas aak idea hai jis se maasi nahi jaye ge.

Veer:

Aur woh kya hai????

Nihal tells plan to veer.

Veer:

R u sure ayesha iss ne maan jaye ge???

Nihal:

Chachu try to kar ka dhako.

After two hours,Nihal goes to ayesha's room and takes her to his room and makes a excuse and leaves.Lights are off in his room.When ayesha comes in the room the light turns on and she sees that the room is full of i'm sorry cards.On one wall,There is one red heart on which it is written I'M REALLY VERY SORRY PLZZ FORGIVE ME.Then there starts music.She sees veer is standing there and he starts to sing.

I'm sorry mere pyaare,jaane do

Hota hai,Chhodo bhi jaane do,

Ayesha wants to leave ,He goes to the door of the room and give her flower.

I'm sorry mere pyaare,jaane do

Hota hai,Chhodo bhi jaane do,

Ayesha throws the flower away and turns away.Veer holds his both ears.

I'm sorry mere pyaare,jaane do

Hota hai,Chhodo bhi jaane do,

Veer does sit stand.

Ho gaye galti,chhodo bhi yaaron,

Koi jo reh jaaye,

jaldi se mil jaaye,

Yeh na hoke peeche pachtayee,Jaane bhi do

Veer holds ayesha's hand and sings

I'm sorry mere pyaare,jaane do

Hota hai,Chhodo bhi jaane do,

Veer:Main jaata hoon ayesha ka main ne tumhi bohat hurt kiya hai laykin plzz tum mujhe iss cheez ki jo chahe punishment do magar mujhe se naraz mat ho.plzz ayesha mujhe maaf kar do.

(I will write next part soon plzz guys give your comments)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Fatima- kash Veer ko show me bhi aisi akal aajaye! Also like Ayesha showing attitude and finding a new job! Pls update soon, am waiting hon xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fatima 🤗
too good👍🏼👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey fatima, that was a fabulous shot.. great to read it.. haven't seen yesterday's episode.. lol... so, got an extra dose now... but a great one indeed.. please do not let ayesha forgive him.. please show something like, ayesha leaving and veer in shimla.. lol.. that would be more than fantabulous.. when are you continuing your other fan fiction ? waiting for a part.. LOL.. do write a lengthier one in that ff.. please...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fatima, superb👍🏼 I hope veer ko bhi jald akal aaye show mein...I liked it that ayesha is ignoring veer...good, he deserves it........waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fatima....its fabulous !!!! please continue.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi fatima di tht was really a nice shot 👏👏👏. I wish veer does it in the serial too.good song huh😉. will wait eagerly for ur next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was awesome.Can't wait for the next half!!! 👍🏼
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Haan yaar Fatima...mast tha 👍🏼 Loved the os....why not make it a ff....it has great scopes. As deepu said...let Ayu throw some tantrums...n don't let her forgive him in one go. Well I can imagive Veer singing the song..😆😆 Ayesha shudn't also forgive him for bursting her eardrums...😳😛😉

But loved it..waiting for the next part..🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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When the truth is out

Last part

Note:

Sorry guys kind of very long part.

Veer:

Main jaata hoon ayesha ka main ne tumhi bohat hurt kiya hai laykin plzz tum mujhe iss cheez ki jo chahe punishment do magar mujhe se naraz mat ho.plzz ayesha mujhe maaf kar do.Aur plzz yaha se mat jao.

Ayesha:

Sorry sir main decision le choke hoon.Main ab yaha nahi rah sakti mana ka main aap bara logon jaise nahi hoon per meri bhi self respect hai.Iss liye aap plzz mujh se mafi na mange kyuki per main guilty feel karti hoon.

After saying this ayesha leave and goes to her room.Veer is controlling his tears.He knows that he hurted ayesha but after this incident he comes to know that how much he loves her and now she is leaving just b/c of his stupid deed.Nihal comes back to the room.

Nihal:

Chachu kya hoa maasi nahi maani kya???

Veer noddes his head b/c he is not in a state to reply nihal and goes back to his room.Next day,He goes to the hotel without eating his lunch.He had not slept last night and today he is not feeling well but still he attend every meeting.After his last meeting on 8:00 pm.He spots rajdeep with parmainder in the hotel.

Rajdeep:

Veer nihal ka phone aaya tha per tum meeting main busy tha.

Veer:

Acha kya kha raha tha nihal??

Parmainder:

Pata nahi kha raha tha bohat important hai aap se baat karna iss liye woh hotel hi aa raha hai.

Veer:

Ok.Main iss ka wait karta hoon.

Rajdeep,veer and parmainder starts to chat with eachother.When there was misunderstanding of confidential file going on,Rajdeep came back to hotel and while solving the misunderstanding.Rajdeep and pammi get interested in eachother and they had engaged.Nihal and his friend saila come to the hotel.Nihal quickly goes to his chachu.

Nihal:

Chachu main ne aap ko batana tha ka maasi aaj raat ke flight se hi shimla ja rahe hain.

Veer/raj/pammi:

Kya?????

Rajdeep:

Chal veer ab tu hi ayesha ko rok sakta hai.Tu apna dil ke baat isse kha di.

Veer(in sad tone):

Koi faida nahi woh ab nahi roka ge.

Nihal:

Chachu plzz maasi ko roko.Agar hum abhi airport ka liye na nakla tu aap aur main maasi ko kho dain ga.

Saila:

Agar uncle aap dil se in se pyar karta ho tu inhe roko ge tu woh rok jaye ge.

Veer(determined):

Ok then what r we waiting for lets go.This time i will stop her at any cost.

Raj/pammi/nihal/saila:

That's spirit lets go.

Ayesha doesn't want to leave b/c of nihal and veer.She doesn't get it that after that much insult she still thinks abt veer.She is right now in the airport.She has seen some newscaster roaming in the airport.At that time veer and the company also come to the airport and looking around for ayesha.Veer gets irritated b/c he can't see ayesha.So he shouts.

Veer(shouts):

AYESHA.

Everyone stops and turns around.Ayesha also stops and turns around to find veer shouting her name.Veer sees ayesha who is in state of shock.Meanwhile at vardhan mansion,Kamini on the t.v and on every news channel the headline about veer shouting a girl's name is coming and they r doing the live coverage.Kamini and nandini r in the state of shock.Veer goes to ayesha and sits on his knee while his head is also down.

Veer(in tears):

Plzzz mujhe maaf kar do main jaanta hoon ka main ne jo kiya ha woh maafi ka liyik nahi per ayesha tum plzz mujhe maaf kar do.Jis din se mujhe iss cheez ka pata chala hai ka tum sahi kha rahe thi aur main ne tumhara trust nahi kiya main bohat regret kar raha hoon.Ayesha plzz mujhe chor kar mat jao.Main tumhari bana nahi rah sakta b/c i love u.Mujhe tumse kab pyar hoa main nahi janta.Tum mujhe plzz chor kar na jao.Tum chahe mujhe koi bhi saza do magar mujh apnay aap se joda na karo.I promise main tumhara humasha sath doon ga aur tum per humasha trust karoon ga afterall pyar main trust hona zaruri hai.Plzz ayesha mat jao.

Veer looks at her then he asks her that he wants to marry her.Ayesha is in tears and also everyone who r at the airport and also who r seeing news channel.Even the reporters r in tears.

Reporter:iss city ka sab se bari hotel ka Md VEER VARDHAN SINGH ne apna pyar ka izhar tu sab ka samnay kar diya ab kya Ayesha jis se woh bohat pyar karta hai woh inhe maaf kar paye ge aur kya woh bhi in se pyar karti hain??Lets wait and watch.

Ayesha(while controlling herself and pulling veer to stand up):

Utthain sir.Sab dhak rahi hain.

Veer:

Ayesha jab tak tum yeh nahi kha dite ka tum mujhe chor kar nahi jao ge main nahi utto ga and i don't care about the world.

Ayesha:

Aap bohat zidi hain.Ok baba main nahi ja rahe (blushing).Main bhi aap se pyar karti hoon aur aap se shadi karna ka liye tayar hoon per agar per kabhi aap ne mujh per trust nahi kiya tu main app ke in he logon ka samne pitaye karoon ge.

Veer can't believe it and tightly hugs her with love.Ayesha hugs him back.Everyone starts to clap.Ayesha comes back to her senses and while blushing tells veer that everyone is watching them but he says that he doesn't care about the world.

Reporter:I loveeee happy endings but this is the starting of a story. Lets give them some lonely moments and keep watching the news.

Kamini and nandini also see this.Both of them r happy b/c now they know that ayesha is very nice girl.Atlast veer stops hugging ayesha.Ayesha sees that nihal and saila also standing there.She blushes and goes to them along with veer.

Nihal:

So chachu aap ne maasi i mean soon to be chachi ko jaane se rok diya.

Veer:

Haan per raj aur paami kaha gaye.

Saila:

Pammi maasi and raj uncle tu app logon ki happy ending dhak kar jale gaye b/c inhe koi kam yaad aa gaya tha.Chalo nihal hum bhi chalte hain.

Nihal and saila hold eachother hands and go to the car.Veer is gigling and says

Veer:

Ayesha tumne nihal ko achi training di hai.Agar tumne mujhe training di hote tu aaj main tumhi propose nahi balke dosri shadi kar raha hota.

Ayesha(controlling her anger):

Nihal aisa aap ke sobat main hoa hai aur aaj se aap dosri ladkiyon ko bhool jayein.

Veer(teasingly):

Acha per main natasha ko nahi bhool sakta.

Ayesha(Angrily):

KON NATASHA????

Veer:

Woh hi jo housekeeper thi per per guest ban gaye.

Ayesha remembers and blushes.She starts to move towards car,when veer comes to her and holds her hands while moving.

Veer:

I promise main ab tumhara sath nahi choroon ga b/c i love u more than my life.

Ayesha

(blushes):I love u too.

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