Dhoka - A story;new link-pg147;pts 1-22 pg-148&149 - Page 94

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Yeti where are you....????? Or have you been abducted by aliens again....!!!!😲😲

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

yeahhh Yeti..where r u dear???
we r desperately waiting for the next update... 😔

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

hello Yeti, how r u dear?
hi shona... I am doing pretty good 😃 hope you are fine too.....

woww.....fantastic update ..
aww.. thanks a lot yaar....

So Shalini did what she wanted to do... she emberrased both Raj Naina...heheheh..its her birthright 🤣
nobody but Shal has the exclusive rights to pull Raj and Naina's legs.... 😆😆😆

but she definitely put an effort to change the whole home... what a romantic decoration.... 😳
although she didnt do the decorations personally, the idea was definitely hers....... 😉😉

she knew Raj will definitely yell at her..as Raj knew its her did..so she ran out of there..saying .."happy suhaag raat"....🤣.. she never leave a single chance of pulling Raj's legs..but this time it ws necessary..🤣..afterall it ws RajNaina's officially suhaagraat..hehehehe....
they do need to experience those moments too right.... 😉😉 their life and the unusual bond between them has been nothing but abnormal till now... kuch tho normal hona chahiye ab... 😆😆😆
and Raj ofcourse knows his friend too well..... 😆😆😆

the awekardness betwn newlly wed couple....poor souls... n Raj's slip of tongue...🤣🤣🤣..it ws hillarious...
hehhe... my tiny effort for humor.... 😆 I am glad though that you liked it.... bechara Raj... kya kya muh se aaraha hai.... 😆

Naina cudnt sleep for half an hour...she wanted to go to in Raj's arms...but the awkardness betwn them..n finally Raj gave up n pulled her in his arms... so sweet...n so romantic... Naina cant sleep without him... 😳
wel... neither could he.... Raj was simply pretending to be asleep when Naina was tossing about restlessly.... but soon his heart won the fight over his brain and he took her in his arms.. 😳😳

So Raj made cofee for her bride.... n so Naina also wants to do something for him...
give and take policy.... 😆😆

loved the scene betwn Sherry n Naina...lovely bond betwn them... so the gang ws teasing Naina...poor girl.. 😆
use tho aadat daalni padegi... 😉😉

Alekh said bad words to neelu... poor girl..she loves him so much but he also hs his reasons to do that....!!!
but soon we ll see if Neelu's love wins or Alekh's stubbornness 😛😛😛

So Raj likes gajar ka halwaa n now naina is going to make it for him...
at least that was the plan... 😆😆

So Raj told naina abt Nair...
finally raj told her abt his navin's last mission n nair's ws also with them n all..
naina ko pata chal gaya who is the culrit n who is trying to steal the triggers... n Raj also understood the same ...that Nair is doing everything...maybe from last 7 yrs..!!!!!
I will clarify this in next update too but Raj has only realized that Nair might be involved with Navin's mission... he does not know about the threat to the triggers.... only Naina knows about it and she could make the connection between Nair, the triggers and Navin's last mission.....
Awesome update dear...... it is definitely upto the mark... 😛
aww.. thanks a lot for the encouragement.... 😃
waiting for the next part... 😛

Originally posted by: himalayanyeti

Here I am😆

Will post the next update by this weekend surely yaar...... but caution... its gonna be a long update this time too..... (but how come I dont hear any complaints about that???? 😆😆😆)

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey

The update was brilliant as always, You need not have worried about it not being perfect.😉
hello....... thanks for your comments... 😃 I am glad you liked it..... I guess I was just not having a good day and it showed in my work..... 😛

I wanted to thank Shalini for doing this for Raj and Naina otherwise these two would have never done it😳. The way you have described all the decorations...it seemed like a perfect dream....flawless.😍
aww.. thanks a lot.... Shal will keep pushing them until they decide to take the plunge.... but ofcourse even after that will she be silent?? 😆

And as her signature mark, how could shalini stop herself from playing a trick and so leaves on one pillow on the bed. Not to forget her best wishes for their Suhagraat. 😆
What is Shalini without some mischief??? 😉😉😉 and Raj knows that too well... now Naina will also get to know Shal's pranks... 😆😆😆

Seeing all the beautiful flowers in the room naina thinks of the time that she has spent with Navin and her grandfather,
her heart at peace, she has memories of all the good times with Navin.... when she was in a turmoil, she had nightmares... 😕

Both of them feel very embarassed😳...not knowing what to do. Raj lets his imagination run wild and ends up blabbering what he should not have. 😆
or maybe it was his deepest desire taking the form of words?? 😆

Both of them cannot slep without holding each other...and it is good that Raj finally decided to leave back his hesitation and takes naina in her arms, She is shocked by his move but than relaxes when she understands that it is just ment to comfort her.😛
who are they fooling? they just cant be at peace without being in the other's arms.... they have started to depend on the other so much that they can not even sleep without each other....

Raj wakes up remebering his childhood days...when he would get up early and do surya namaskar with his father😊. He even makes coffee for naina before he wakes her up. Naina is touched by the small things that he does for her...showinf his care and love for her.
Raj is not an expressive guy... he would never do lavish or gregarious arrangements to show his care for her... and Naina knows that it's these small small things that he does that show how much he looks out for her and cares for her... this is what makes these small things very precious for her 😳😳😳

And so she wants to make him his favourite sweet dish. she decides to ask Sherry about it..and ends up being teased by sherry and the gang.😳
well she should have accosted Sherry alone to ask her about her husband's likes and dislikes... if she does it infront of a crowd, ofcourse she will be teased.... 😉😉😉

Everyone is happy by neelu's suggestion of having a reception party for RN on the night of Fresher's Ball. Naina experiences whata newly wed bride goes through when she is teased by her friends. ☺️
when Raj filled Naina's maang, it was more out of circumstances then... and even the court marriage was kind of brought on to keep everyone's mouth shut (well atleast according to Shal's story 😆😆) so now is the time that Naina gets to experience the jitters of a new bride... 😳😳

But feels sad when she sees Neelu and Alekh fighting....wishing that she could do something for them. Alekh is being to rude with Neelu...he feels that he will never be able to live up to her expectations.😭
he has too many insecurities and inferiority complex within him to extend his hand towards Neelu... 😕

Bunty Chaube has shown his jaado...he manages to get Major Nair's file for Raj.👍🏼
Jo bhi kaam ho, Bunty kar payega 😆😆

Raj is studying it with great concentration for he is sure that Nair is behind all of this. Naina is shocked😲 to know that Navin's last mission had been to save the nuclear triggers. And to their horror both RN realise that Nair must have been behind Navin's dishonour. 😡
and now starts Mission-Trap-Nair.... how could he escape with the smartest husband-wife pair on to his tail.... 😉

I hope that I have not bored you by my reply. oh not at all! I enjoyed a lot reading it... but sorry fr the delay in replying!

please continue soon

Originally posted by: esha143

don't worry Shilpa you will never ever get to hear any complaints about your looooooooooong updates because we,your readers are so considerate,u see😆

so,waiting impatiently to read ur long update(patiently😉😃)

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

hey yeti am ammu am new to this fourm i read your ff in two days i loved it plzzzz update it and add me to your friends list and pm me when you update it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

wow!!!wat an updt...truely amazing....👏👏
aww... thanks a lot yaar.... I am glad you liked it... 😃😃

loved d way u started dis part wid shal's naughtiness and den d awkwardness of rn was beautifully portrayed...😉😳
loved dat part ...👏
oooooooooooh.... itwas my favorite part too.... 😉😉😉 but no awkwardness can come in between Raj and Naina here after.... 😃😃

and den comes cafeteria part was again superb1......loved d cuteness of d part...😉😳
thank you 😃

and den comes to the thrilling1 ...wer in now nair is the guy who will ve to face music of both rn in diff ways ....👏👏
woh tho gaya kaam se.... the smartest pair is on to him now.... 😉😉

loved d convo betwn raj and d dialogue der was soo romantic in diff way though but i loved dat "Naina yeh bohuth sensitive information hai. Very very few people know about this.. Lekin tumse keh raha hoon kyunki mein tumse jhoot nahi bol sakta. Please tum kisiko bhi mat batao'" 😳😊

amazing......👏
thank you once again.... their trust and faith in each other comes out through simple words.......... 😃

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was sooooooooooo lovely. Their nuptial night....hehe. Raj was blushing n Naian was going sooooo red that Raj cudnt even detect the colour of her cheeks....haha. I loved that portion Yeti....specially the way u described it....just wonderful!!!
hi sumaiya... I am so glad you liked it... 😃😃 both Raj and Naina competing on who could blush more.... 😉😉😉 slowly but surely feelings that are different from mere concern are taking root in their hearts... to start with is this awareness of each other and the relationship between them.... 😉

The way u portrayed their thoughts differentlyit was just awesum!! And out of nervousness Raj's saying 'Kapre utaro'....lolz....damm....that was soooo funny!!!
thanks a lot.... Raj knew what was going on and was so nervous... Naina didnt know initially what the matter was and was simply enjoying the decorations... but once she caught on to Shalini's prank, she just couldnt help herself from blushing deeply.... 😳 Raj nervousness mein kya kya bolta hai... 😆

And both cudnt sleep without each other....ye sach me bahut maze ki baat hai....but cant deny it can be problem-able sumtyms....haha.
inn donon ke beech it can never be a problem.... they need not look for reasons to be in each other's arms now you see... 😉😉😉

And then u described Raj n Bunty's portion too....that was very nice...and then the teasing at the mess was also cool. But here Aalekh hurt Neelu trying to keep here away....and guess...Huda is so much into Sameera....ahemz!!
one love story budding.... one love story heading towards confession... and one love story waiting for an explosive realization..... now guess which is whose story.... 😉

And then....Raj n Naina both came into the same conclusion regarding Nair n the triggers....well that was kinda inevitable...now w8ing to knw how they both handle this. Pls continue soon. will do... soon Nair will have nowhere to run and hide...