small poem dedication for sanaya's expressions

meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#1
hello ppl....yest i was so moved by sanaya's expression that i literally lived hru all her sequences thru varied expression of just her eyes....i cudnt help but write this small poem which i consider as a dedication to her fab acting😊

anjane rah peh shuru hua hai yeh suhana safar
pyaar ki sapnon se saji thi har ek leher
dekh rahi thi nazren bichaye rah par
kab aayega pyar mera, mere dar par

dil purkare baar baar rooh ki parchayi ko
suhani shaam ke is pal ki, na kabhi bidaai ho

raah me lagi kis ghane badlon ki nazar
mano har khushi chin gayi is paher
kaisa hai yeh dard ka kahar
fail raha banke seene me zahar
chaaha tha pyar ka khoobsorat nagma
paaya magar dil ne undekha sadma
pyaar ki umagen hui chaknachur
dil ke tukde bhikre dur dur

kismat ne khela ummidon ka khel
milte milte reh gaya adhura yeh mel
na jaane dard ke kis aag ki zyada thi jalan
jab dil zakhmi hua ya ghayal hua ye badan

kahan ho aye pyar mere, doondh rahi hai har nazar tujhe
dekh lun jee bharke chehra tera, aa mil mujhe
na jaane aage taqdeer phir milayegi kab hume
bas, kayamat se phele yaad kar lun is pal tumhe


pls do let me know wat u pl think 😊

Created

Last reply

Replies

7

Views

876

Users

4

Likes

7

Frequent Posters

meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
wow 18 views n no reply 😛
wickedangel thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#3
sorry hon it took me so long to reply...but again i am seriously speechless!...this one is even better than the last one girl...wow!!!.👏...please keep writing these poems, especially when we get the sajan reunion scenes..ok?.. my fav lines are:
dekh lun jee bharke chehra tera, aa mil mujhe
na jaane aage taqdeer phir milayegi kab hume
bas, kayamat se phele yaad kar lun is pal tumhe


gosh these lines really touched my heart!
-Debo- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#4
this is a awesome poem. 👏 👏
really enjoyed reading your poem. keep writing please!!
meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: gina87

sorry hon it took me so long to reply...but again i am seriously speechless!...this one is even better than the last one girl...wow!!!.👏...please keep writing these poems, especially when we get the sajan reunion scenes..ok?.. my fav lines are:

dekh lun jee bharke chehra tera, aa mil mujhe
na jaane aage taqdeer phir milayegi kab hume
bas, kayamat se phele yaad kar lun is pal tumhe


gosh these lines really touched my heart!



i knew it swthrt....i cud count on ur comment....thank u so much dear....am glad u liked it...yep wil defntly write one during sajan reunion....jus for u babes......muah...🤗
meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sajanfan_09

this is a awesome poem. 👏 👏
really enjoyed reading your poem. keep writing please!!



hey thanks a lot dear....so glad u liked it...😃
ayesha_80 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#7
Beautiful poem dear... Its so emotional and describes Gunjan's state perfectly. I'm so glad to see how a whole lot of ppl are moved by Sanaya's performance.
Kudos to u... 😊
meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: ayesha_80

Beautiful poem dear... Its so emotional and describes Gunjan's state perfectly. I'm so glad to see how a whole lot of ppl are moved by Sanaya's performance.

Kudos to u... 😊



thanks a lot dear....so glad u like it....in many ways ur post 😊 drove d thots in my mind to try give feelings to the expressions sanaya portrayed yesterday

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".