MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 62

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo..nupur fainted??? oh GOD...
Posted: 15 years ago
loved it to core..

plzz do cont soonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, Daksha. Read ur whole FF today, only.

Loved it.

Please add me to ur PM list.

Nice promo. Pls update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
please continue soon and please pm me when u continue.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo dear.......................👏
welcome back.....................
waiting for update........................................
loved the promo...........
so new twist......................
do continue soon...............................
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UPDATED: Part 21
Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat's Room…….

Gunjan is sitting on the bed her veil covering her face…….. surroundings decorated in the shades of red pink and white……….She is anxious nervous and excited…….

Sound of opening the door comes……..Gunjan squeezed into herself more inside her dress……

Its Samrat…..he sees her…….not able to understand what to do further…… much confused anxious and nervous……

Samrat (to himself): Ab main kya karoon……its my first time yaar….usska ghooghat uthaaoon na……. aisa hi karte hain na……tu itna nervous kyun ho raha hai…..

He steps forward…….. and sits beside where Gunjan was sitting……he then unveils her…..the sparkling beauty mesmerized his senses……..Gunjan is looking down……her face turning red with shyness……

Samrat unable to understand what to do next…….

Before Samrat could speak up anything else…….Gunjan sneezed suddenly…….

She looks up to see Samrat's reaction……. Samrat looking at her innocently…….

S: Its OK…….hota hai cheenk to kabhi bhi aa sakti hai na……

G(smiled and then looks down): Par abhi…..aise samay pe…..

S: Kuch galti ho gayi kya……..galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai na (and he went into his thoughts)……..

G: Matlab……

S(coming back to his senses): Mera matlab……aap kyun pareshaan ho rahi ho……aap yahaan comfortable to ho na……ab se ye aap ka hi ghar hai……jaise rehna hai waise raho…….

Gunjan smiled seeing him and was admired by his sensibility and understanding…

Now there was a complete silenece…..a silence between two strangers who are now bonded together for life…….looking into each others eyes…….

Then Samrat gets distracted and looks at the wall clock……

S: Arre 3 baj gaye…..kal subah jaldi uthna hai mom ne kaha tha na……ab aap bhi so jao subah se shaadi ki rasmon ki wajah se main toh bohot thak gaya hoon…….

He goes to the washroom and comes after changing his clothes…….

In the meanwhile Gunjan was opening her suitcase…… lock was not opening it was jammed……she was pulling it with full force……and because of a sudden jerk her bangle broke and pierced into her wrist…….

Then only Samrat entered……..

G: Ouchh…….

Samrat sees her and comes towards her……

S: Kya hua…..

He holds her hand (for the first time)……his touch sent a spark into Gunjan's body she was looking at him as she has forgotten all the pain from which she was suffering and then Samrat slowly removes the broken bangle…….Gunjan comes back to her senses

G:Ouch

S: Zyada dard ho raha hai……

He then washes the wound with water and puts bandaid…….

S: Subah tak bilkul theek ho jaayega…..pata bhi nahin chalega ki kuch hua tha…..

G: Wo……aap ye khol denge……ye atak gayi hai……

Then Samrat pulls the suitcase and opens it…….

G: Thank you…..

S: Thank you kis baat ka……. Aapka haq tha mujhse kehne ka…..

They both smile seeing each other and then Samrat goes to sleep…….Gunjan too sleeps after changing her clothes……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Its morning time……..

Mayank is making his hairs in front of the mirror…….Nupur comes from behind and holds him by his waist……..

N: Patidev…….itna saj dhaj ke office kyun ja rahe ho……main toh ghar par hi rehti hoon….aakhir kaun mil gayi hai……..

M: Tumhein jalan kyun ho rahi hai……main milwaa doonga tumhein usse……don't worry tumhein bina bataye doosri shaadi nahin karunga…….

N (making a face): Sach mein koi hai…….

M: Haan hai…….thoda intezaar karo……

Then Mayank's cell rings and he goes away from Nupur to talk…….

M (on the phone): Accha to yahin ho……kahaan neeche…..aa gayin……accha mein aata hoon……haan bas paanch minute main……

Nupur trying to hear the conversation and is burning red with anger…….

M (to Nupur): Chalo…..tumhein milna than a usse…..neeche hai…..chalo milwaata hoon…

Then they both go downstairs…….in the parking lot……

N: Yahaan to koi nahin hai……tum mujhe usse milwaate ho ya…….

M: Dhyaan se dekho yahin hai wo……

N: Parking lot mein gaadiyon ke alaawa kuch nahin dikhaayi deta……..toh…….

M: Haan toh……

N: Toh……

M: Nupur….

N: Mayank…..

Then he turns her and shows her a brand new black car…..white ribbon was tied around it…….

Nupur could not control her laughter……

N: Toh ye hai……aur main soch rahi thi tum meri saut le aaye…….par ye toh usse bhi acchi hai

M: Pasand hai……

N: Bohot…….bohot sundar hai aakhir mere Mayank ki pasand hai……….theek hai tum isse shaadi kar sakte ho……waise bhi mujhe chod kar isske saath hi toh office jaate ho…..theek hai….main sah loongi……

M: Toh tumhein ye shikaayat hai……toh chalo mere saath…..

N: Kahaan……

M: Chalo na…..

N: Par Anjali…..upar akeli hai wo……

M: Theek hai usse le kar aate hain phir chalte hain…….

N: Par hum kahaan ja rahe hain…….

They both sit in the car with Anjali and leaves from there…….

Then Mayank stops the car in front of a bungalow……..

N: Ye toh city ka sabse posh area hai na……..

M: Haan……aur ab ek bungalow pasand kar lo……aakhir ek bada ghar hona chahiye na……a big one…..Sharma's

Nupur takes Mayank's hand in her hand………

N: Mayank ek baat kahun…….bura toh nahin maanoge…….

M: Kya Nupur bolo…….

N: Hum ussi ghar mein nahin reh sakte kya……..

M: Haan….haan Nupur par tum aise kyun keh rahi ho…….

N: Mayank shaadi kar ke sabse pehle main ussi ghar mein aayi thi……har ek chote chote pal……pyaari pyaari yaadein uss ghar se judi huyi hain…… mera mann nahin karega uss ghar ko chodne ka…….wohi jagah hai jahaan se maine apni zindagi ki nayi shuruaat ki thi…….tum samajh rahe ho na…….Angel ka pehli baar mamma papa bolna……apne chote chote pairon se pehli baar chalna…….

M: Itni sentimental kyun ho rahi ho……..jaisa tum chaho……meri khud uss ghar se ek nayi shuruat hui thi……..accha hai mere paise bach gayye……(and both smile seeing each other)….ab chalein…….

Then they both come back to their Flat……..

Scene: Sehgal House

During the same time early in the morning in Sehgal House……..

Samrat was sleeping…….looking very innocent….calm……

Gunjan came out of the bathroom……she was wearing a red saree……

G (to herself): Ye abhi tak so rahe hain…….inhein uthaaon na…..

She slowly forwards her hand to wake up Samrat…….

G: Uthiye…..neeche sab hamaara intezaar kar rahe hain……

The moment she touched Sam he woke up………DIA……(in a bit loud voice)

G: Ji…….

Samrat rubbed his eyes and sees Gunjan her wife is standing in front of him……

G: Diya…….

S: Wo mera matlab tha neeche pooja hai na……. diya, dhoop, phool…..sab ki zaroorat hogi……main abhi aata hoon……..

He removes the blanket and hurrily goes to the bathroom……

Gunjan was unable to understand his weird behaviour……

After few minutes…….both Samrat and Gunjan….went downstirs……They took aashirwaad of Samrat's mom and dad…….

SM: Khush raho……putrawati bhavo….

Gunjan blushed and was looking down while Samrat was astonished to hear such words from her mother's mouth…….

SM: Tu kya aise dekh raha hai……chal pooja ke liye…….

Then they sit for some pooja and rituals to be held after the marriage………

Scene: Mayank's Flat

In morning about 9 am

Nupur is in kitchen…...she is preparing the breakfast…….

N: Mayank jaldi karo……..naashta tayaar hai……..

M: Aa raha hoon…….

Nupur was holding the jug of juice and was coming towards the dining area……suddenly she saw everything moving in front if her and she fell on the floor and beacame unconscious……..sound of breaking the jug comes and Mayank comes towards the kitchen…….

Mayank puts Nupur's head in her lap…….

M: Nupur utho…… Nupur….

He then sprinkles water on her face…….after few seconds she gains consciosness…….

M: Nupur kya ho gaya tha tumhein……..

He then firmly clasps her and hugs her passionately…….

M: Tum theek toh ho na………

She breaks the hug and…….

N: Pata nahin Mayank ek dum se chakkar aa gayye the……aur phir pata nahin kya hua…….

They both stand up……

M: Chalo abhi doctor ke paas chalte hain…….mujhe tumhaari tabiyat theek nahin lag rahi…….

N: Nahin Mayank tum office ke liye late ho rahe ho……..

M: Doctor ke paas jaana iss samay zyaada zaroori hai……main kuch nahin sununga tum chalo…….

Then they leave for hospital……

Scene: Doctor's Cabin

D: Aaiye Mrs. Sharma bohot dinon baad…….

M: Doctor aaj subah ye ekdum se behosh ho gayi……..

D: Chaliye main aapka check up kar leti hoon……. koi good news hai kya……

After examining her……..

D: Mujhe to koi problem nahin lag rahi……lagta hai pichle dinon bohot zyaada load le liya hai aapne issliye thakaan ki wajah se chakkar aa gayye the……..baaki toh ye test karva lijiye…..unki reports dekhkar aur pata chal jaayega……aur haan zyaada work load mat liya kariye aap toh jaanti hain…..you are not so much strong internally………

Outside Doctor's cabin……

N: Dekha sirf thakaan ki wajah se chakkar aa gayye the……..

M: Sirf……maiine kahaa tha na….. Gunjan ki shaadi ka saara kam tumne apne apne sir par le liya tha…….

N: Gussa kyun ho rahe ho…….ab toh main theek hoon na……. chalo ab tum late ho rahe ho……yahin se office chale jaao…..main aur Anjali auto se ghar chale jaayenge……..

Thats it for now......... Maybe this part was not so much interesting.......but I hope you have read it carefully.....many small things were hidden......small at present but big one for future updates.......I hope you people will keep guessing..... I would love to read your comments and guesses.....so likhte rahiye.......I am waiting for your comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy!!! first one to coment!!!
cuteeee upd8!!!!
i likes sajan interaction!!
omg...diya...hope she creates no probs...
heyyyy...nups behosh ho gayi...
kuch gadbad hai...
hope shez fine...really fine..
hmm...plsss do cont asap!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

realy nice part!

i liked sajan's scene alot
nd i hope nupz is fine
cont. soon
thnx 4 the pm 😊
Edited by Favouriteofall - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
really awesum
keep it up
love maham :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update...thnxx 4 the pm...!!

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