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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey friends,

im a team member of veesha fanatics n thought of sharing our team's fan fiction here. i hope u all will like it. plzz comment..


As the sun rose higher, she twisted and turned in her bed. Nihal, who witnesses his massi's strange behaviour towards him since a long time, decides to confront her today.

Therefore, he goes up to the room, in which she stayed. He looked at her smiling face and touched her soft cheeks and whispered - "jaldi ut jaayiye na massi"

As Ayesha found sweet tiny little palms on her cheeks, she wakes up in an instant, and will be surprised to find Nihal there...
Ayesha: Nihal, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ? School nahi jaana kya ?

Nihal: Nahi massi.. Aaj toh mujhe kissi bhi tarah aap ke saath waqt bitana hai. Aur aap mujhe mana bhi nahi kar sakte, kyunki,
chachu ne mujhe chutti lene ke liye permission diya hai..

Ayesha: Par nihal, mein tumhare saath waqt nahi bita sakti.. Aaj mujhe interview pe jaana hai and it is very imporant for me.. Mein nahaane jaa rahi hoon.. Tum apne room mein jaa ke, please apne joh bhi pending notes hai, unhe complete karna. Phir tumhare tuition sir aa ke check karenge. Okay !!

Nihal: Okay massi.. Par aap jab interview se wapas aayenge, aap mere saath waqt bitayenge na ? 6 din hogaye hai.. aap ne mujh se ek baar bhi pyaar se baat nahi ki hai..

Ayesha: Haan nihal. we will definitely spend some time together. Aur dill mein aise waise baat mat rakhna.. Bass thoda sa busy hoon...

The queer and uncanny thoughts in Veer's mind, raise into yet another level.. He was very confused with ayesha's behaviour with Nihal since quite a long time.

He can not talk to her about what problems she has with Nihal, since she broke the friendship with him and he also acted as if he was angry with her, just to make her realize.

As nihal went back to his room, making an unsuccessful face, he hides himself from nihal and peeps into ayesha's room, only to get shocked.

He stands rooted on his spot, when he finds her depositing a few tablets into the dustbin.

He really did not understand, what exactly those medicines are for.

He kept observing all her actions, and soon, she receives a call...

She takes a long sigh and answers the call.
Veer makes himself alert, thinking that, he might get some clues out of her conversation.

Ayesha: Good Morning Doctor !!

Doctor: Ayesha, how are you doing ? Tum theek toh ho na ? You did not get any kind of head ache again right ?

Ayesha: No doctor.. Not at all.. I am fit and fine now..

Doctor: So, Ayesha, you are taking all the medicines right ?

Ayesha: Yeah doc.. Maine morning dose abhi abhi liya hai.. There are no side effects also.. I am absolutely fine..

and.. doctor, one more thing.. mein aaj se check up ke liye nahi aaongi.. because, mein shimla wapas jaa rahi hoon.. so, i will find another doctor there, who can continue my treatment. i just hope that, you suggest some one there.
a good reference will be really helpful...

Doctor: Sure Ayesha.. Mein ab apne doosre clinic mein hoon.. So, please take that address and please visit mein.. Mein tumhe saare details de doongi..

Ayesha: ji batayiye...

Doctor: 104, Care Hospitals,
Juhu, Mumbai..

Ayesha: Thanks Doctor. Will visit you around 10.. bye..

Doctor: Bye...

Ayesha takes a glance at her watch and rushes into the washroom, since she predicted that, she might be late in her meeting with the doctor. A sheer race of unpleasentness passes over veer's face..

He had seen with his eyes, that, ayesha threw all the tablets into the bin.. He also heard her talking to a doctor and, her answering that, she has taken all the medicines perfectly.

He wondered, what her problem is and why on the earth does she require some treatment...

He immediately took the chance and copied the address of the doctor.. He followed ayesha and got another shock in his life.. It was the address of a neurologist..

Ayesha entered the doctor's room and it took quite long for her.

Veer ensured that, Ayesha does not find him out.
As soon as she comes out, he enters in to the doctor's cabin.
He explains the situation and begs the doctor to reveal about what ayesha is suffering from..

He gets shocked to hear that, Ayesha just has a couple of months time to live and has some tumour in her brain... and if she takes the medicine regularly, there are chances of the expectancy increasing.. He also comes to know that, there is an option of surgery, but if the surgery remains unsuccessful, the patient might go into the coma and he also gets acknowledged with a fact that, ayesha denied the idea of surgery...

He thanks the doctor and runs back, to find Ayesha at the airport with her bag.. He gets shell shocked all over again.. He finds her talking to Pammi there.. He overhears the conversation..

Pammi: Ayesha, tum bohot galat kar rahi ho. Aur mein tumhe aise jaan nahi doongi... Samjhi ?

Ayesha: Mein bohot sahi kar rahi hoon pammi. Please dont stop me. I am leaving forever and forever. That's it. Aaj jab Nihal mera letter padhega, uss waqt se, Nihal ke zindgi mein Ayesha naam ki massi ke khayal khatam hojayenge.. He will find his new family in between Vardhan's only... Aur mein jaanti hoon.. Veer sir Nihal ko kuch nahi hone denge...

Pammi: Ayesha.. Tumne Nihal ke liye letter choda.. Ayesha.. kya tum usse pyaar nahi karti ? Tum aakhir usse kya expect kar rahi ho ?

Ayesha: Mein usse bohot pyaar karti hoon pammi.. That is the reason why i am doing all this.. Please Pammi.. It is my flight time.. Let me go.. And good bye forever...

Pammi: Ayesha.. Contact toh de do !! Ayesha !!

Pammi shouts and runs behind Ayesha but there will be no use. Ayesha will cross the point where visitors are not allowed. Veer, who will be running to catch Ayesha will also remain unsuccessful...


Precap: A month later.. VeeSha confession..

this is originally posted on www.veeshafanatics.blogspot.com

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi veeshafanatics, welcome to the forum😊 Cool ff, different concept...liked it...keep it up👍🏼 and please continue soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice FF .. i liked it ..quite different stuff to read ..so please carry on and please post the next part soon
Also don't worry for late comments as we have members from different parts of the world mainly from US who are under snow spell so due to different timings people reply late (i m also one of them 😃)..Chill and welcome to the forum 😊 members will reply u and definitely encourage u to give more better parts of ur FF ..Good luck 👍🏼 ..ALso ur name please.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Veeshafanatics! I like this too. It is a different concept and it seems that Veer is going to be so overcome, we will get a confession?!! 👍🏼. Please update the next part soon.
Thanks!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg.. that ws amazing.. can u pm when u next update pleasE?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...the ff has a completely new concept n idea...nam thrilled at the idea of the precap.
Nahhh..plz don't let anything happen to Ayesha. I hope the doc gives a wrong diagnosis.

Looking 4ward to ur next update. Sorry for the late reply...was out for shopping
Great going..n welcum to the forum.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr888 ff dear kinda new concept.Looking forward for your next part and welcome to the forum.

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