|Pieces of a Puzzle| MayUr FF Pt.2 Pg6. 29/3/10

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I was so irritated and annoyed. After waiting for three hours for my date, Chacko to arrive, who has obviously turned me up, I'm still outside my favourite discotheque, The Grungies. It had an old 70's look to it and was the only retro disco in the entire of Mumbai.

My so called best friends Dia, Suhaani and CJ were all out on dates with hot guys and I was stuck here with...well no one exactly. Chacko wasn't exactly my dream guy, but hey something is better than nothing. He was a working man, if being a waiter at a dingy bar counts, was kinda good looking. Well you can't expect someone like me to end up with Hrithik Roshan or Shahid Kapoor right?

I see a taxi wheeze by me. I tried to stop it but someone got in before me. I was so frustrated that I stomped my feet in a puddle.

Just then it started raining. Great. Perfect. Life really couldn't get any more perfect.

I saw one more taxi come near and I ran to it before another person could, skid on the ground and fell right onto the ground. I wonder how I was going to get out of this one.

This is just the prologue. It's based on the bestselling novel Remember Me by Sophie Kinsella.

Comments are appreciated,

Nidz

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Edited by NidzCole_ArTi - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG....

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Thanks!!! Will PM you for sure!!!

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Lovely Intro...:) Plz PM me when u update...:) Im sending u a buddy request...:)

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WOW......awesome intro..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 1

My head was throbbing really badly and I rubbed my forehad as I opened my eyes. The surrounding was very different and I couldn't recognize anything. I looked around and saw that I was lying down in a...HOSPITAL??

What was wrong with me? Why was I here? Wait...wait...it must have been that accident that occurred yesterday. I fumbled around for my cell so that I could call Dia. Maybe she knew what was happening.

Just then I saw a lady in her 50's enter the room. I recognized her. Hey wait! That is my mother. But she looked so older. Must be the tension.

"Ma," I croaked.

"Take rest Nupur," she said kindly.

Just then I remembered! Today was Bauji's funeral. Oh God! I can't believe she left all that to visit me. The pained look in her eyes said it all, and I decided not to dwell on the topic.

Just then the doctor came insite.

"Good morning Ms. Bhushan," he said. I smiled back at him.

"Good morning doctor," I said.

"I must say you are very popular," he said. I blinked my eyes in confusion. "From the past five days that you have been here you have been receiving endless gifts, flowers and cards."

"Me?" I asked, poiting to myself. That's when I noticed my nails.

They were well groomed and manicured. I had never had a sigle manicure in my life, then how did this happen? Perhaps the nurses to pity on me and did it.

"Can I have my phone?" I asked.

Ma gave the phone to me. There were 50 new messages!! Fifty!! I hardly get one in a week! Wow! My friends must have missed me dearly😊

The first message said:-

Don't forget to call me once you are okay.

I will come and visit you.-S

S? Must be Suhaani, I thought. I clicked the reply button and typed:-

Thanks a ton yaar! I'm glad to call you my friend! -N

"Ma how are you?" I asked. "How is Gunjan?"

"Both of us are fine Nupur, tell me how are you?" she asked.

"Same as four days ago," I said. But with better nails, I thought to myself.

"Roxy misses you, so does Timmy," she said.

I groaned. No, she couldn't be talking about her cats again. Ma had a serious for cats. I couldn't understand why.