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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello friends, i am back with another part, here it goes,
Recap - Tonight, meeting her at the party, and going so close to her, it reminded me why i missed her so much. She was outstanding among the other people, and so different in this changed attire. She had gone away with that cricketer, what was his name, yes, Abhimanyu Modi. 'Honey', 'Sweety', what was all that crap, is she dating him, no cudnt be, she's not the dating types, but she's changed, so maybe...... And maybe she's come to the party with him, as his date. So Riddhima the gold digger again, u always befriend people with loads of money, dont u? Well, u need to be taught a lesson, and, i'll be ur teacher. This time, u'll fall for me, and i'll make u experience the worst part of cheating someone. It shouldn't be difficult, seeing that u did fall for me in school, right? Just wait for me and watch out!
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PART 9(b)
AUTHOR'S NOTE - While Armaan was busy working out the plan in his mind, his heart had something else to feel, but his denied it. So here is a conversation between his heart and mind, when someone interrupts them:
Heart - Well, i know u've started to work out this plan, but u are in quite a hurry to start off. You will be kind enough to tell me, i am hoping.
Mind - Yeah, i'll tell you. I wanna get over her soon, i cant let other people fall her fake nature. I am doing a task for the good of the world, and that mindcricketer Modi.
Heart - Wow, i must congratulate you on your wit. Nice reason, i am impressed. Now, tell me the truth.
Mind - Wht..... i mean what do u mean, i just spoke the truth.
Heart - Dont try fooling me, coz i know every thing abt u, and u are aware of that.
Mind - I...i dont get wht do u wanna say? Spare me the torcher.
Heart - Ok, if u dont know, then i'll tell you. You hate to admit the reason even to yourself. The biggest reason why u wanna teach her a lesson is not that she deserves it, but u want her to deserve it.
Mind - What?
Heart - Yes Mr Mind, i am saying that Armaan has fallen for Miss Riddhima, from the days when he didnt even know her. His feelings for her are very strong, and you know tht, dont u? His plan to destroy her is only coz he hopes in the deepest corner of him that one day she will be his and he will be hers. He wants to be an important part of her life coz she is most important in his life. He wants their lives to be so intermixed that they are never separated again. He wants so much out of his life for her. But the only problem is your best friend Miss Ego, and, You. Although, your impulsiveness has led him to believe that she is not a nice person, but i know, she's his soulmate.
Mind - Soulmate, what utter rubbish?
Soul - Did someone just call me?
Heart - Hello Miss Soul, we were just talking about Miss Riddhima.
Soul - And......
Heart - And.. what?
Soul - What what guys, u cudnt be talking abt Riddhima without Armaan. I mean, do u know, whenever he sees her, i feel different, i feel so special. Riddhima has a pure soul, and i've asked Cupid to partner me only with that one.
Heart - I know, i can feel it too, whenever she is near him, i am full of beautiful emotions, feels like i am in heaven. And Mr Mind, its just because of u that he is trying to suppress his feelings for her, but i wont let it happen. I want the souls of these both people to become one, with two bodies, but one soul, as pure as God, actually since that cant be possible, i'll make sure it is pure as closer to God as it can be possible.
Soul - Yes Mr Heart, i also want their hearts to meet, to unite and set an example of love for everyone. And i'll do every possible thing to win over this cruel Mind, what say?
Heart - Miss Soul, important thing is not that Mr Mind is defeated, but it is that we have to win, so that love can win. And i promise we'll make a good team.
Mind - Hey guys, dont count the chickens until they hatch. You both can pair up, but trust me, i'll win this bet on Armaan and Riddhima.
(Saying this, he went off to work on the new plan)
Soul - He knows it!
Heart - Yes, he knows that we'll win, and he too wants it, but cant let it happen. If he allows us to win easily, wont this violate the rules of nature? Its an unwritten rule, that Mind and Heart can never be together when it comes to love.
Soul - I know, but i miss him on our team, he's actually not that bad, i wish we finish off soon.
(With this, she also leaves)
Heart - I want it too, but reality is that we can never be in one team in the case of love. Now, buck up dude, another couple is on its way.
CONVERSATION ENDS


I immediately got out all the information, well, my secretary is a real help. So Ragz is actually Riddhima, the budding star of today, and Abhimanyu Modi is her key to her sponsorship. Nikki, u still hang around with her, i wonder how patient u r? And, so, Ragz is in search of number 1 position, sorry honey, u'll have to beat me, and this time it wont happen.

In the party i saw tht Modi wasnt leaving her alone even for a second, well, i had to take my chance. As soon as he left, i immediately asked the DJ to start the music for dancing. I pulled her, she had closed her eyes again, wow, if i hadnt known her better, i wud have fallen for these innocent acts, but i was ME, so i started my acting. I tried to look like a guy who had fallen in love at 1st sight. She was uncomfortable while dancing, i guessed she didnt know how to dance, so i said,

"Dont worry if u dont know how to dance. I'll manage, just follow me"

But then what happened shocked me, she took the lead, and i had to follow her. She looked like an inborn dancer, so graceful. But i had a rep to save, so i pretended like we both were dancing with synchronisation, and i wasnt following her. It was the best dance of my life. Suddenly music changed and she was snatched away. I noticed it was Modi again. After this, he did not leave her again and she seemed to enjoy with him. So much for her acting. Anyways, i saw them both leaving, and followed them. I noticed another car following them, so i drove rather carefully. Both the cars ahead of me stopped by an apartment. Modi and Riddhima went inside, followed by two big men from the 2nd car. So, they were with her. I waited for Modi to come out, but he never did. Images of her with Modi flashed in my mind, i tried throwing them away, coz my heart felt hurt, but i failed. After waiting for an hour or so, i finally decided to go home.

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Guys, this was part 9(b),it is quite short, i know, but i wanted to finish the past off, it'll only be present now, although there can be some traces of past, as per the requirement, but i promise, just traces. Nothing much has happened in this part, but plz bear with it. Plz do leave ur criticism, comments and compliments, also, u can press the like button.

love

Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
YAAR ARMAAN KI SOCH KO KYA HOGAYA HAI
I MEAN IS HE MAD OR HE HAD BLIND HIMSELF FROM THE TRUTH

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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part dear. So we gotta wait to see if the mind wins or the heart rite ? Well do continue soon. :D
Love.
~ALsha~
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi pooji!
what's up?
the part was creative and funny
mainly the conversation between heart, mind and soul was funny.
and when the heart says miss soul and the soul says Mr. heart,
it was really sweet...
will be waiting for the next part..
do upload soon
thanks for the pm
tc

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Posted: 15 years ago
heya pooja di....!!
grt part...!!
it as interestin rather....!!
yaar wat has happenend to armaan...!!??
usse theek karo aap jaldi se oderwise....
kuch nahi...!!! rehne do..!!
do cont soon...!!
waitin eagerly for d part...!!

wid loads of luv
radhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey good but so short????????

Anyway thx for pm and update sooooon


Love Aisha
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey pooja grtt part

but so short?? i want more hun!

i realli like ur ff

anyway cont soonn

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was rreally good
loved it
contd soon
waiting to know what happens next
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi pooja........

awesum part......

mind, heart and soul at war................ was awesum.........

lets see what mind does, then how heart owerpowers it for the soul to win.........

do continue oon......

thanks for the pm

bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Pooja,
I've been reading this ff but haven't ever commented. This beautiful conversation between Armaan's heart , mind and soul forced me to do so today. Very cute and different. Loved it. tc. ssh57

Edited by ssh57 - 15 years ago

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