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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha_harshad

Oyee maneesha i gave that name *arnav to sandy di !! kyun Sandi di!! ehehe ..... damn i miss yuh guys... i'll be online from 28th jan k?? till then i'll be done with my final!!! .. and we'll talk a lot.. or if i don't meet yuh guys online then i'll mail yuh guys!!

Sandi di wish me luck in my Math test its tomorrow.. Hope i pass that .. eheh byee love ya guys!!


Achcha yeh arnav kaun hai btw??😆Mujhe bataya nahi uske baren me hehe
😆Ya hope to see yuh then so much..
All the best to ur math paper...its ur fav subject na i know😉😉😉
So have fun with paper.
Good luck again😳😳
Edited by nuptalie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Hey sandy 😛

First of all thanks for the long update. Realy enjoyed it .oh thanks!!😊..
Shiv hahah u always include iqbal in every ff who write na?? This time as Shiv 😆😆😆dont yuh know how much i love him?!!...harshad and iqbal.. noth are my sweethearts.. and iq is my first love..pehle pyaar .. no one can forget it easily..😳..
I didnt know that u liked Shiv Gauri pair😉 Kind of nice to hear that name after a long time...I realy miss KAA days.😊yea..i loved it..and uh know what .. manmeet was there in KAA..a cameo.. he he..i was watching the show from beginning to see iqbal and saw avinash ther!..
I must telll u that Arnav is such a cute name😳😳 Glad u use it for the little kid.alisha sugested it..😊..now am so in love with the name.. we wil put that for yr baby in future😆..
Shiv and Prem were friends hmm 😉what were yuh doing when reading the updates before that..i had said thatt before itself..!!..
I liked the part where shiv tells gauri that its impossible that prem will hurt heer and his chahat and heer is his life. Feels so good to listen to these kinda dialogues 😳😳 It shows how much other people have appreciate and admire their bond, love, relationship and family. Totally loved it .lol..if it were the show then we could have had a chain of misunderstandings following this!!hehe.. but i hate such stuff!..
Love the way heer looked so calm atleast to the outer world * not in inner world* and the way she ask about shreya and where is she and all was nicely protrayed. Its hard to believe that she could ask him about shreya since she already know the relationship which prem and she had but beyond asking the details were very brave i think.hehe.. yuh see she is perfect wife material..so understanding..if it had been me i would be screaming!!😆..
The most shocking dialogue is Shreya the prem's wife.......that was a twist yuh didnt expect ryt?!😉.. dude i can imagine how she felt when saying those lines coz before 1 day she was the only woman in her husbands life and now he has another woman which is his past but connected to the present and future.... I can imagine how heart broken she is.yea..life changes in matter of seconds!..
Its realy sad to reading all but i loved it.hmm..
But im glad Shiv explained to her correctly and clearly what happened and now only heer and chahat his life not shreya. But in this update the shining star is Heer im telling u. The way she handled the situation was strange, brave and very innocent . She still had faith in him , and she still believed him and understood that there might be or was a reason behind unrevealing the truth. As gauri said it was realy not normal for a lady or a woman to react like heer did, that doo very calmly .i know.. cant just believe am writing an ff from heers POV!..
But more than any thing the best and the most lovable part is where prem remembering his past.i knw..that was the only part that gave me satisfaction!..
How heer came to his life slowly , how did chahat came and made their bond so strong .
And i also said that i noticed some thing after reading ur whole ff again. That is u mentioned i think on the first update too that chahat was the angel who brought heer to prems life, and it was the best gife he has ever recieved and it made him love heer more. I loved this ff even more after reading this update.he he.. thanks..so much observational power..huh?!!😊..
Waiting to see what will happen and how will heer react towards prem, or whether she will say to him that she knows about his past or whether she will wait until he tells or whether they will forget all or whether shreya comes back to his life. Waiting for the next one eagerly .yuh know i always think differently!!lets see what happens!!..

PS- Sorry for the late comment 😉hmm..not forgiven!..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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he he maneesha... dont make yr baby call me aunty..it looks so old..!! am nt that old..haha.. atleast doesnt look that old.. !!😃..

and avinash was playing a small role.. a guy who is gonna marry shivs sister in that..

i know...i am a complete Prem fan..and this stry ...i am totaly from heers POV...so for achange have Prems POV too in the next part....heheh..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: stunninstar

he he maneesha... dont make yr baby call me aunty..it looks so old..!! am nt that old..haha.. atleast doesnt look that old.. !!😃..

and avinash was playing a small role.. a guy who is gonna marry shivs sister in that..

i know...i am a complete Prem fan..and this stry ...i am totaly from heers POV...so for achange have Prems POV too in the next part....heheh..


I knew that u will write prem's pov this time haha
I know u well sandy hahha
but this story is unpredictable, thats why i love this😃
Shiv has a sis in that?? Seems like a negative role. Anyz im not a fan of his lol.
he is dating the gal in CB it seems na..kinda started watching to see their chemistry but felt bored in between lol😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
Okk…I know ..u all didn't expect me to update so fast,,.. well..i was so in love with this one.. wanna finish this off soon.. two more parts I guess..😊 .. this is a very very long part…longest I have written I guess..
And oh my God..i cant believe I am writing almost al the parts in heers point of view… in all my others fics and one shots its normally from prems point of view.. it was only when someone pointed out It clicked to me..
I had thought of including some nice romantic n hot scenes here.. but then… I am nt meant fr such writings..so just cut them down.. will put them up in my other story..it goes better there..

Neways..not wasting yr time.. here goes next part..i hope yuh like it..

With love….sandy…


PART – 7

On the way the flight had two landings. It was a long flight and by the time they landed Prem was airsick. After the clearance Prem collected the bags and walked out. He was not expecting Heer to be there at the airport waiting for him. He had told her in the mail about his arrival and also told her he would come there to pick her and chahat. He walked outside and to his surprise heer was there waiting for him.

Prem hurried up and was near her in the next second. He flung his arms around her and hugged her tight.

"oh Heer.. I am so happy to see you..i missed you so much.." he openly expressed his love.

She pulled away from his hug with a slight awkwardness and said, "yes..its nice that you are finally home.." Prem noticed that she sounded different. There was some kind of strange stiffness in her behaviour.

"Is something wrong?" Prem took her arms in his.

Heer looked at him for a moment, then shrugged her shoulders and said with a smile, "nothing Prem.. Just that its not so welcome to hug a man in public.."

Prem laughed a little louder at her answer, "oh cmon.. am your husband!.. and…look around..no one is even bothered about whats happening around them.."

Prem bent down and took the bag and said "neways..lets go.."

In the car driving back to the apartment Prem looked at heer and saw that she was tired, "heer..are you sure you are alright?? You look so weak.."

"may be due to travelling!
" Heer smiled.

"okay..and how is my baby??" Prem was not convinced by her reply but stil avoided it.

"she was playing with arnav.." heer replied.

"arnav??" Prem was confused.

"well.. chahat and I had gone to shivs place on the way.. and then they came with us home.." Heer concentrated back on driving.

Prem found that weird. Shiv's home was not on the way to heers dads place. Both the places were on different paths and miles apart. He didn't get how heer said that she had gone there on her way back. But he didn't ask anything more. He didn't want to push her more.
But something was definitely wrong. Heer was behaving different, answering him with very little words and the look on her face. she was lost in some other world.

But what was making it more confirmed was that Heer didn't ask him anything about his trip yet. She didn't even ask him anything about his flight or the conference he had went to attend. Prem was sure that there were some thoughts worrying her. He knew she would share them with him and he decided to wait for that.

When Prem entered his home he felt like he had been away from home for centuries. The door was left open and they walked inside to see chahat and arnav playing some game on chahats land station. She had seen the door open and saw her father at the door. Chahat was besides Prem in a jump.

Prem took her in his arms and kissed her cheeks. Chahat was too happy to see him back. Prem kept chahat back on her feet and when he stood straight he saw shiv and gauri. He went and hugged them both.

"oh my God.. this is a big surprise.. finally you got time to come here.." Prem hit on shivs arm playfully. Prem was about to say more when his mobile started ringing. He attended the call.

"I need to go to the office right now.. but I will be back in a couple of hours and we will have our lunch together.. in Pizza hut..where we used to go when in college.." Prem said, but he didn't notice the change of colour in others faces as he mentioned college.

Prem excused himself from the room to freshen up and was back in half an hour. Chahat saw him dressed up to go somewhere. "Papa..you are going away again??" she looked worried.

"no baby.. I am just going to office.." and then gave her the packet he had with him. "here..there is your new doll.. and then there is hot wheels too..i think you can gift them to arnav.." chahat gave his a kiss for getting her a new doll. She took the other packet and gave to arnav who thanked Prem in return.

"okay guyz.. I will be right back.." Prem was about to leave when Shiv called up.

"Prem.. we need to leave in an hour.. we just came to drop heer and chahat back.." Prem face fell on that. He was looking forward to spend a nice evening with his family and friends.

"cant you stay for a day?" Prem asked.

"no Prem..we will come back next week or so.. there is an important meeting at the office tomorrow and since dad is not there I am in charge.. we just came.." shiv stopped half way without completing what he was to say.

Shiv didn't want to say to Prem that they came along with heer to make sure heer was alright. To make sure all that had happened a week back was finally settled and she had truly forgiven Prem.

Shiv wanted to tell Prem that Heer had come to know about shreya, but Heer had taken a promise from him and gauri that they wouldn't tell Prem anything. So he was tight lipped.

Prem gave shiv a hug. "next week.. okay..or else I will reach there..".

"yes dude.. that's my word.. I will always keep my promise.." saying that he looked at Heer.

Prem left for office soon. After some time shiv and gauri also decided to take the leave with arnav. Chahat was sad that her play mate was going back home. She had enjoyed very much with arnav the past week.

"we will send him here next vacation.." Gauri tried to cheer up chahat.

Meanwhile shiv was talking to heer. "Heer…I have kept my promise.. now you have to keep yours too.." he continued. "I have always seen you as my sister.. and.. a brother will only look for his sisters happiness.."

"I know.." heer said. "shreya was Prems past.. and I also know that prem just have me and chahat.. I will never do something that will hurt Prem.. that's my promise.. like you even I don't break promises.. i don't want Prem to be hurt to know that I came to know it all.. that's why.." she said.

Still a doubt left behind in shivs heart. "but you were behaving strangely today..and I had seen that Prem was disturbed..it was so visible in his eyes.."

"hmm.. everything just flashed out in front of me when I saw him.. I just felt that he wasn't my Prem.. again it wont happen.." she smiled at him. and that did the assurance. Heers smile was back and that meant she was tryng to cope up with everything and there was not much to worry about. They went back home after some time.

The morning went by swiftly and Prem felt happy to be back home, to his love and baby, back to his office, back driving his black Mercedes. When Prem returned home he was welcomed at the door by heer, his cheerful pretty wife. She looked happy and smiling. The sad and thoughtful face looked like a bad dream for him.

Prem looked at her for a moment, saw that chahat was not anywhere near, then leaned forward and kissed her on her cheeks.
"I missed all of this.." he whispered in her ears. He saw her blushing slightly as he said this. She soon covered it up taking the suitcase from his hands and dragging him inside.

"you look tired..come.. freshen up..i have made all your favourite dishes.."

"hmm.. I look tired?? Huh??.. cmon..i think I have gained a pound atleast.." Prem said showing his biceps,
"and look at you.. where is chahat?? Lemme ask her.. whether you were starving all these days when I were away!"

A smile formed on her lips again. "okay.. you win… anyways..lemme get your food ready.." saying this she went to the kitchen.

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Heer was putting chahat to sleep when Prem appeared at the door. She said through actions that chahat was sleeping. Prem looked at his baby for a moment. She was holding her new doll close to her heart. Then he looked at heer and actioned that he was going upstairs to the roof and asking her to come there. Heer nodded in a yes.

When heer reached the roof top she saw that Prem was lying down on a blanket he had probably taken with him. He was looking dashing as always and a li'l more now in the moonlight.

He saw her approaching and so moved a little to his right to make space for her. She lied down besides him and suddenly felt secure. As they lay down there looking at the moon 😛 heer asked him about his trip and work. He told her everything in detail and then asked her about her days.

Heer said him everything omitting that one week of misery. Not because she wanted to hide things from him, but as she had decided to forget that incident. She had decided to think about that six years she had spend with Prem, the endless number of times Prem had made her smile with tears of joy in her eyes, and forget about one bad incident he had kept hidden from her, which he himself had forgotten.

"I was dying every second I was away from you" he said her.

"me too.." she said softly. "I didn't think it would be like this.. I felt lonely .. I felt so unprotected.." they were now standing at the sides of the roof.

"no my love.. you are safe as far as am there.." Prem was behind her.

"hmm…" heer didn't know what to say. she could feel the sincerity in his words.

"I love you heer.." he whispered in dark. "I love you so much.." and slowly he turned her to face him and kissed her lips softly. After sometime she also responded him and started kissing him back.

Suddenly out of nowhere he asked, "what was that heer??"

She raised her eyebrows and looked at him. she didn't quite understand what he was asking.

"why were you upset?" he made it clear for her.

"nothing Prem.. I was .." she searched for a reason. Now when she herself had found a solution she didn't want Prem to know that at any cost. "it was just..just a fortune teller…she predicted something bad.."

Prem felt a calmness at heart. 'that was it..i just was worrying too much!' his said to himself. And then asked, "from when on did you start believing in such things?" He grinned.

"Prem.
." she called him and then started hitting his chest. He laughed out again and pulled her in another hug.

He looked at the beautiful lady in front of him. He was so much in love with her. He could do anything she would ask him to, even give away his life for her sake. He knew that without heer there was no meaning for Prem.

He bend forward and tasted her lips again. They stood there in the dark, kissing, as his body touched hers, sending shivers up her spine.

Prem was gently stroking her hair and kissing her at times. As he kissed her and held her close she felt the hard knot inside her dissolving and a feeling of relaxation filling her and she was content.

Aa tujhe in bahon mein bharke
Aur bhi kar loon main kareeb
Tu juda ho to lage hai
Aata jata har pal ajeeb

Is jahan hai aur na hoga
Mujhsa koi bhi kushnaseeb
Tune mujhko dil diya hai
Mein hoon tere sabse kareeb
Mein hi to tere dil main hoon
Mein hi to saason mein basu
Tere dil ki dhadkano mein
Mein hi hoon Mein hi hoon..!!!!!!


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Next two weeks whizzed by pleasantly. Prem and heer was adjusting back to their usual routine of home and office. Prem and heer had reported to office and even chahats school had re-opened. Shiv and Gauri had visited them along with arnav as promised. Shiv was happy seeing that everything was just like before and they were really happy.

The clock showed that it was eight thirty in the morning. Heer was doing the dishes and singing a song for herself. Prem had gone to drop chahat at school as she was going for a one day picnic from school.

Heer heard the main door opening and she found herself smiling.

"hey sweetheat..
" he was standing at the kitchen door. Heer didn't reply and just continued with her song and work.

"cmon darling.. its an off day and you are in the kitchen.. just leave them.." Heer understood prem was in a very romantic mood that day. She finished the dishes and then cleaned her hands. When she turned she saw that Prem was still there at the door, keaning on to it and looking at her.

He was in a black tees and a blue jeans looking like a college going guy. Heer couldn't believe that he was the father of a five year old. As she stood there lost in his looks he came forward. He kneeled in front of her and then she saw, he was having an armful of flowers in his right hand that was hiding at his back.

She took the flowers from him. he took her hands and kissed them. He was the most romantic man she had seen and the most loving husband any woman can ever get.

"I hope you reached the school on time.." Heer asked remembering how late they were in the morning.

"yes.. right on time.. the bus was about to leave.." He said.

"okay.. so lets have our breakfast then.." But they never made it to the table. he started kissing her and they lost track of time. later they had their breakfast together and again heer was back to kitchen.

It was eleven o clock and Prem was doing some office work on his laptop when the door bell rang. Heer was already at the door when Prem reached there.

"prem..its a registered letter for you.. you need to sign.." Heer called out. Prem came forward and signed the paper and got the letter. He looked and saw that it was from his advocate.

"what is it?" Heer was also curious. Prem opened the letter and read through it. It was one from his advocate asking Prem to be present at his office to sign some documents.

"documents?
?" Heer looked confused.

"haan.. that's for the property in moms name.. near to our old house
.." Prem said casually.

"old house??.." Heer didn't understand which house Prem was mentioning. She just knew about the home that his uncle had given to him in his will. But another house?!!

"its moms house… she got from her dad…" Prem explained.

"but we never went there.." Heer said.

"well.." he was speechless. "after moms death.. you see.. I never.." Prem searched for words.

"hey.. its fine.. i can understand..it reminds you of ma ryt?!.. its fine" she consoled him. she gave him a hug.

Prem was back in his room in front of his laptop, but still lost in his thoughts. The house.. the last time he had gone there.. all flashed before him.. He had lost something very dear to him last time he had gone there. It all came back to his thoughts.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 6 to 7 years back~~~~~~~~~~~~

Prem looked at his love sitting next to him. Prem looked at the black beaded chain around her neck and the sindoor on her parting. She was his wife now. Prem smiled thinking.

"what is it??! Why is this smile now??" Shreya asked him.

"just like that.. come with me.." saying this he took her to the garden outside. He showed her where his mom and dad rested.

"ma..papa.. here is your bahu.. I know you will be happy now.. bless us.." they prayed.

"
I don't come here.. I get depressed when I come here.. it reminds me am an orphan.. but today.. I wanted to show you to ma and papa.."

"I know Prem…how it is to feel.. I had felt the same way when mom and dad had been dead in that plane crash..but then I had nihaal bhaiyya with me.." She stopped whatever she was telling then.

"shreya… its okay.. we will go and talk to nihaal bhaiyya once everything is settled.. I don't want to separate you from him.." he wiped the tears coming out of her eyes.

They spend the rest of the evening there itself. It was around nine when Prem finally decided to take the leave. They both had gone to the near by restaurant had a quite dinner.

"this must not have been the marriage you always have thought about.. I am sorry.." he said her.

"No Prem.. nothing matters more to me than having you with me.. yes..i always had dreamed about a huge wedding..but its not necessary that you get all that you dream.. now you are my husband and am your wife.. that is the biggest truth!!" she said. Prem was happy that she was not regretting marrying him.

It was around eleven and the restaurant was almost empty. They stood up to leave and ambled back to the car.

He was driving slowly, and smoothly. There was a soft song playing in the radio and both were quiet. It was a beautiful night. The air was gentle and warm, and every star in the sky seemed to be sparkling. It was the loveliest night Prem ever had, or could remember. After all it was his wedding night.

His car pulled over the bridge. It was a beautiful sight outside. The water was shimmering in the moon light and all the lights on the bridge was on giving it a very nice view.

"its beautiful.." she said as in a whisper. They were half way across the bridge. He looked on the road and saw it empty. he pulled her upto him. She took off the seat belt and leaned to his side. He took his eyes off the road and looked at her face, for a few seconds, but by the time he glanced back to the road it was late.

There was a flash of light, a crashing thunder and glass all over them. Another car had just hit their car and it was twirling around. There was a sound of explosion and then silence. He saw her face soaked in blood the last time before his eyes closed.

~~~~~~~~~~~ Back to Present~~~~~~~~~~~

Prem opened his eyes. He saw that he was sitting in his room in front of his laptop and could hear the cookers whistle from the kitchen. Prem saw that it was around one. He went to the washroom and placed his head under the tap. He felt better now.

Prem couldn't believe all that. He was thinking about all those things that was no longer a part of his life. Prem sat on the bathroom floor trying to erase away all that he was thinking a few minutes back, the water soaking him.
"Prem.. this is not right.. shreya was your past.. what is the use thinking about all those things.. forget it.." his inner soul was telling him. Prem was back to normal after a few minutes.

Prem heard heer calling him. He quickly changed his wet clothes into another dress and returned to the dining hall where he saw heer had already kept his lunch.

"you were sleeping when I came before.. thought not to disturb you.." she saw that he had changed his clothes and his wet hair. "you took a shower?? Neways..come soon..or else this will all become cold.." she pointed to the food.

Prem nodded and took his seat and started having the lunch. He was having a guilty feeling inside him that he never told heer about shreya. 'why to worry her?!' he kept aside his thoughts. What he didn't know was heer already knew all of it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Heer looked at the file in front of her. It was the details of some new assignment for her office. "Heer.. be careful.. it is really important.." this was what Maya had said when she had given the work to her.

Heer opened the file and started going through it and it was then she saw the name of the client. "Nihaal Mehta, Mehta group of Companies" Heer read it aloud.

She didn't have to think twice before remembering who the person was. Heer read the address given and saw the contact numbers too. The residential number was also there.

Heer herself didn't know why she was doing this, she was dialling the number given in it. She heard the ringing bell at the other side. And finally some one picked up the call. She heard a male voice at the other end.

Heer was speechless. What was she to ask. "sh.. shreya.." heer just said that name.

"oh.. just a minute ma'm.." she heard the voice at the other end say.

"connect the call to Mrs. Juneja's room…" she heard the voice saying at the other end.

'Mrs Juneja' Heer just couldn't believe what she heard. Her whole body went numb and the receiver fell from her hands disconnecting the call!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Koi na sune sisakti aahon ko,
Koi na dharre tadapti baahon ko,
Aadhi aadhi poori khwahishein,
Tooti phooti sab farmaishein,
Kahin shak hai kahin nafrat ki deewar hai,
Kahin jeet mein bhi shaamil pal pal haar hai,
Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,
Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,
Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,
Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,..!!!
!

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That's it guys.. hope yuh all enjoyed…please press the like button and leave your comments..:)




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Posted: 15 years ago

WOW............... once again i am the first one......................

but i think i am the last one to comment 😆 😆 😆

sorry dear.......... i have some problem of Alzheimers( sorry i dont know the spelling properly)..............so plz...........( u under stood right)

and yaaa................ it was a very update as usual............👏 👏 👏 👏 especially their romance...........😳 😳

so the other mrs juneja is still waiting for prem............😕 😕 😕

waiting 4 your twist...................

love
greeshma
Edited by p.ggreeshma - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 update. Shreya still alive. Plz continue soon
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
im speechless what to tell and to think??
What r u upto sandy anyz?

will edit later
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I quoted my own post instead of editing 😆😆 my comment on page 36 😆
Edited by alisha_harshad - 15 years ago

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